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桂林山水歌

Song of Guilin's Hills and Waters

贺敬之

He Jingzhi

云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山!
情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水!
水几重啊,山几重?
水绕山环桂林城……是山城啊,是水城?
都在青山绿水中……啊!
此山此水入胸怀,此时此身何处来?
……黄河的浪塞外的风,此来关山千万重。
马鞍上梦见沙盘上画:"桂林山水甲天下"……啊!

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云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山!
情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水!
水几重啊,山几重?
水绕山环桂林城……是山城啊,是水城?
都在青山绿水中……啊!
此山此水入胸怀,此时此身何处来?
……黄河的浪塞外的风,此来关山千万重。
马鞍上梦见沙盘上画:"桂林山水甲天下"……啊!
是梦境啊,是仙境?
此时身在独秀峰!
心是醉啊,还是醒?
水迎山接入画屏!
画中画——漓江照我身千影,歌中歌——山山应我响回声……招手相问老人山,云罩江山几万年?
——伏波山下还珠洞,室珠久等叩门声……鸡笼山一唱屏风开,绿水白帆红旗来!
大地的愁容春雨洗,请看穿山明镜里——啊!
桂林的山来漓江的水——祖国的笑容这样美!
桂林山水入胸襟,此景此情战士的心——是诗情啊,是爱情,都在漓江春水中!
三花酒兑一滴滴滴,三杯酒笑三江……百年情,千年爱,青春如酒百样香……江山多娇人多情,使我白发永不生!
对此江山人自豪,使我青春永不老!
七星岩去赴神仙会,招呼刘三姐啊打从天上回……人间天上大路开,要唱新歌随我来!
三姐的山歌十万八千箩,战士啊,指点江山唱祖国……红旗万梭织锦绣,海北天南一望收!
塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪,春光万里到故乡。
红旗下:少年故乡遍地锦,蘸水漓山皆华章……

Gods in the clouds, immortals in the mist—
mountains of Guilin, divine in bearing, immortal in grace!
Deep as love, beautiful as a dream,
the waters of the Lijiang, like love, like dream!
How many folds of water, how many ranges of hills?
Waters wind and hills embrace the city of Guilin…
Is it a city of hills, a city of waters?
All lies within green hills and lucent waters…
Ah! These hills, these waters, enter my breast;
this moment, this body—from whence have I come?
…The waves of the Yellow River, the winds beyond the pass,
a thousand ranges lie between here and home.
Dreamt on the saddle, sketched on the sand-table:
'Guilin's hills and waters are the finest under heaven'…
Ah! Is it a dream, is it a fairy realm?
This moment I stand on Duxiu Peak!
Is the heart drunk, or is it awake?
Waters welcome, hills receive me into a painted screen!
A painting within a painting—the Lijiang mirrors my form in a thousand reflections,
a song within a song—every hill echoes my voice in response…
I beckon and ask Old Man Mountain,
how many ten-thousand years has cloud shrouded this land?
—Beneath Fubo Hill, the Cave of the Returned Pearl,
where the stranded pearl long awaits a knocking at the door…
Cockerel-Cage Hill sings and the screen opens,
green water, white sail, red flag approach!
The earth's sorrowful face is washed by spring rain,
behold it in the bright mirror of Through-Hill…
Ah! The hills of Guilin, the waters of the Lijiang—
the motherland's smile is this beautiful!
Guilin's hills and waters fill my bosom,
this scene, this feeling, a soldier's heart—
is poetic passion, is love,
all within the spring waters of the Lijiang!
Three-Flower wine poured drop by drop,
three cups of wine laugh at the three rivers…
love of a hundred years, affection of a thousand,
youth like wine, fragrant in a hundred ways…
beautiful the land, passionate its people,
keeping my white hair from ever growing!
Before such a land one is filled with pride,
keeping my youth from ever aging!
To Seven-Star Cave I go to an immortals' gathering,
calling Sister Liu San to return from the heavens…
A great road opens between earth and heaven,
come sing new songs and follow me!
Sister Liu's folk songs, a hundred eight thousand baskets,
soldier, point to the land and sing of the motherland…
Red flags, ten-thousand shuttles, weave brocade,
north of seas and south of skies all gathered in one view!
The sands of the frontier, the waves of the Yellow River,
spring light reaches my homeland ten-thousand li away.
Beneath red flags: the youthful homeland, brocade everywhere,
Guilin's waters and hills dipped in ink, all become glorious chapters…
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Meaning

He Jingzhi celebrates the sublime hills and waters of Guilin, then lets the landscape enter his breast as personal and patriotic feeling. From mythic peaks and the Lijiang's dreamlike beauty the poem expands into a soldier's love of the motherland and a call to sing new songs. It fuses folk-ballad form with socialist lyric to make nature itself an ode to the new era.

云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山!情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水!水几重啊,山几重?水绕山环桂林城……是山城啊,是水城?都在青山绿水中……啊!此山此水入胸怀,此时此身何处来?……黄河的浪塞外的风,此来关山千万重。马鞍上梦见沙盘上画:「桂林山水甲天下」……啊!是梦境啊,是仙境?此时身在独秀峰!心是醉啊,还是醒?水迎山接入画屏!画中画——漓江照我身千影,歌中歌——山山应我响回声……招手相问老人山,云罩江山几万年?——伏波山下还珠洞,室珠久等叩门声……鸡笼山一唱屏风开,绿水白帆红旗来!大地的愁容春雨洗,请看穿山明镜里——啊!桂林的山来漓江的水——祖国的笑容这样美!桂林山水入胸襟,此景此情战士的心——是诗情啊,是爱情,都在漓江春水中!三花酒兑一滴滴滴,三杯酒笑三江……百年情,千年爱,青春如酒百样香……江山多娇人多情,使我白发永不生!对此江山人自豪,使我青春永不老!七星岩去赴神仙会,招呼刘三姐啊打从天上回……人间天上大路开,要唱新歌随我来!三姐的山歌十万八千箩,战士啊,指点江山唱祖国……红旗万梭织锦绣,海北天南一望收!塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪,春光万里到故乡。红旗下:少年故乡遍地锦,蘸水漓山皆华章……

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] He Jingzhi sings Guilin: hills divine as gods in clouds, waters deep as love and beautiful as dream. He asks how many folds of water and hill embrace the city, whether it is a city of hills or waters. The landscape enters his breast; he stands on Duxiu Peak, doubting dream or fairyland. Waters and hills receive him like a painted screen; the Lijiang mirrors him a thousand times. He greets Old Man Mountain, sees the frontier's wind and the Yellow River's waves, and ends by merging the soldier's heart, the motherland's smile, and a call to sing new songs. [Structure] The poem proceeds from natural praise (hills, waters) to personal fusion ('these hills enter my breast'), then to historical-political expansion (Liu Sanjie, red flags, the motherland), closing on a summons to sing. Folk repetition ('啊', '是…是…') drives the rise. [Imagery] 'Gods in clouds, immortals in mist' and 'like love, like dream' give the scenery mythic, emotional weight; 'red flag, ten-thousand shuttles, weave brocade' transposes landscape into the new era's collective labor.

【白话串讲】 贺敬之写《桂林山水歌》:“云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山”——“情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水”——他唱桂林山水——神姿仙态桂林的山。 【意象与手法】 以“云中的神啊,雾中的仙”写山,“情一样深啊,梦一样美”写水,运用民歌式复沓与比喻;“红旗万梭织锦绣,海北天南一望收”由山水转入时代抒情。句式回环、音节铿锵,熔民歌与政治抒情于一炉。 【情感与主旨】 歌唱桂林山水之美,由自然之美升华为对新时代的赞颂。以浪漫主义笔法将山水与时代精神结合,是贺敬之政治抒情诗名篇,体现十七年诗歌“抒情与写景交融”的特色。 【名句点睛】 常考“云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山”以神姿仙态写桂林之山;“情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水”以如情似梦写漓江之水。

Background

He Jingzhi (b. 1924), from Yixian (now Zaozhuang), Shandong, is a contemporary Chinese poet and playwright who served as acting Minister of Culture. A leading voice of the 'Seventeen Years' (1949–1966) political lyric, he is known for fusing folk forms with socialist sentiment. 'Song of Guilin's Hills and Waters' is a celebratory landscape poem written after his southern travels. Through the lens of Guilin's famed karst scenery—Duxiu Peak, the Lijiang River, Seven-Star Cave, the legend of Sister Liu San—He praises natural beauty and lifts it into an ode to the new motherland. The poem exemplifies the period's ideal of 'blending lyric feeling with scene-painting' and remains a frequently anthologized set-piece of modern Chinese topographical poetry.

《桂林山水歌》为当代诗人贺敬之所作诗。贺敬之(1924—),山东峄县(今枣庄)人,当代诗人、剧作家,曾任文化部代部长。此诗写景山水,为咏桂林山水之作。诗中「云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山」写云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山;「情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水」写情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水;「啊!此山此水入胸怀,此时此身何处来」写啊!此山此水入胸怀,此时此身何处来;「塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪,春光万里到故乡」写塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪,春光万里到故乡;「红旗万梭织锦绣,海北天南一望收」写红旗万梭织锦绣,海北天南一望收。贺敬之此诗以写景山水、蘸水漓山皆华章写其山水之情,清丽壮阔,是贺敬之诗中的名篇。此篇《桂林山水歌》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。

Art

The poem's art lies in 'limpid grandeur, scene painting emotion.' Across its forty-one lines it moves from 'gods in clouds' to 'like love, like dream' to 'how many folds of water' to 'these hills enter my breast,' closing on 'red flags, ten-thousand shuttles, weave brocade; north of seas and south of skies all in one view.' Its devices are fourfold: (1) folk ballad repetition—'ah,' 'is it… is it…,' 'a painting within a painting, a song within a song'—gives it the cadence of 信天游 (sky-roaming) song; (2) simile and metaphor fuse feeling and scene ('deep as love, beautiful as a dream'); (3) the shift from nature to era ('red flag… weave brocade') turns landscape into political lyric without breaking tone; (4) allusion to Duxiu Peak and Sister Liu San roots the mythic in local place. The result is a clear, grand fusion of folk song and civic ode.

此诗艺术上以「清丽壮阔、以景写情」见长。全诗共四十一行,由云中的神啊而情一样深啊而水几重啊。起「云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山」写云中的神啊:云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山;「情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水」写情一样深啊:情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水;「水几重啊,山几重?水绕山环桂林城」写水几重啊:水几重啊,山几重?水绕山环桂林城;「啊!此山此水入胸怀,此时此身何处来」写啊此山此水入胸怀:啊!此山此水入胸怀,此时此身何处来;结「红旗万梭织锦绣,海北天南一望收。塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪,春光万里到故乡」写塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪:红旗万梭织锦绣,海北天南一望收,塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪,春光万里到故乡。全诗以景写情,由云中的神啊而蘸水漓山皆华章,清丽壮阔,是贺敬之诗中的名篇。

Allusions

The poem's phrases carry local and civic reference. 'Gods in clouds, immortals in mist, mountains of Guilin, divine in bearing' mythologizes the karst peaks. 'Like love, like dream, the waters of the Lijiang' lends the river emotional personification. 'How many folds of water, how many ranges of hill; waters wind and hills embrace the city of Guilin' maps the actual geography. 'Guilin's hills and waters are the finest under heaven' cites the famous old saying 桂林山水甲天下. 'Duxiu Peak' (独秀峰, the solitary-splendor peak) and 'Sister Liu San' (刘三姐, the Zhuang singing immortal) are real Guilin place and folklore; 'Seven-Star Cave' and 'Fubo Hill, the Cave of the Returned Pearl' are local sites. He Jingzhi folds these topographical and folk allusions into the verse so the civic celebration feels rooted in place.

诗中「云中的神啊雾中的仙神姿仙态桂林的山」「情一样深啊梦一样美如情似梦漓江的水」「水几重啊山几重水绕山环桂林城」「是山城啊是水城都在青山绿水中」「啊此山此水入胸怀此时此身何处来」「黄河的浪塞外的风此来关山千万重」「马鞍上梦见沙盘上画桂林山水甲天下」「啊是梦境啊是仙境此时身在独秀峰」「心是醉啊还是醒水迎山接入画屏」「画中画漓江照我身千影歌中歌山山应我响回声」「招手相问老人山云罩江山几万年」「伏波山下还珠洞室珠久等叩门声」「鸡笼山一唱屏风开绿水白帆红旗来」「大地的愁容春雨洗请看穿山明镜里」「啊桂林的山来漓江的水祖国的笑容这样美」「桂林山水入胸襟此景此情战士的心」「是诗情啊是爱情都在漓江春水中」「三花酒兑一滴滴滴三杯酒笑三江」「百年情千年爱青春如酒百样香」「江山多娇人多情使我白发永不生」「对此江山人自豪使我青春永不老」「七星岩去赴神仙会招呼刘三姐啊打从天上回」「人间天上大路开要唱新歌随我来」「三姐的山歌十万八千箩战士啊指点江山唱祖国」「红旗万梭织锦绣海北天南一望收」「塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪春光万里到故乡」「红旗下少年故乡遍地锦蘸水漓山皆华章」等语,皆含典故故实。「云中的神啊雾中的仙神姿仙态桂林的山」写云中的神啊雾中的仙神姿仙态桂林的山;「情一样深啊梦一样美如情似梦漓江的水」写情一样深啊梦一样美如情似梦漓江的水;「水几重啊山几重水绕山环桂林城」写水几重啊山几重水绕山环桂林城;「马鞍上梦见沙盘上画桂林山水甲天下」写马鞍上梦见沙盘上画桂林山水甲天下;「此时身在独秀峰」用独秀峰之典(独秀峰为桂林名峰),写此时身在独秀峰;「七星岩去赴神仙会招呼刘三姐啊打从天上回」用刘三姐之典(刘三姐为壮族歌仙),写七星岩去赴神仙会招呼刘三姐啊打从天上回;「红旗万梭织锦绣海北天南一望收」写红旗万梭织锦绣海北天南一望收。诗人以独秀峰、刘三姐等典入诗,不着痕迹,而把写景山水之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。

Commentary

'Song of Guilin's Hills and Waters' is a celebrated set-piece of He Jingzhi's landscape-political lyric and a representative modern topographical poem. Critics praise its 'limpid grandeur' and its seamless marriage of folk song and civic feeling. Its special value is lifting a tourist's landscape into a soldier's and a nation's emotion—'these hills enter my breast… a soldier's heart… all within the spring waters of the Lijiang,' then 'red flags, ten-thousand shuttles, weave brocade.' Read beside Su Shi's 'Shuidiao' (one 'I would ride the wind and go' vs. this 'gods in clouds') and Liu Yong's 'Basheng Gan Zhou' (one 'on the misty rain falling on river and sky' vs. this 'like love, like dream, the Lijiang'), the poem shows how modern verse reclaims the landscape-lyric for collective, patriotic feeling. For readers it remains a vivid entry into mid-century Chinese landscape song.

这首《桂林山水歌》,是贺敬之写写景山水之作,写云中的神啊、情一样深啊、水几重啊、啊此山此水入胸怀、塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪之情,清丽壮阔。起「云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山」——云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山。写云中的神啊:云中的神啊、雾中的仙、神姿仙态桂林的山——神、仙、桂林的山;「情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水」——情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水。写情一样深啊:情一样深啊、梦一样美、如情似梦漓江的水——情一样深、如情似梦漓江的水;「水几重啊,山几重?水绕山环桂林城」——水几重啊,山几重?水绕山环桂林城。写水几重啊:水几重啊、山几重、水绕山环桂林城——水几重、山几重、桂林城;「啊!此山此水入胸怀,此时此身何处来」——啊!此山此水入胸怀,此时此身何处来。写啊此山此水入胸怀:此山此水入胸怀、此时此身何处来——入胸怀、何处来;结「红旗万梭织锦绣,海北天南一望收。塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪,春光万里到故乡」——红旗万梭织锦绣,海北天南一望收,塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪,春光万里到故乡。写塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪:红旗万梭织锦绣、海北天南一望收、塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪、春光万里到故乡——织锦绣、一望收、风沙黄河浪、春光到故乡。这「塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪,春光万里到故乡」,是全诗之结:以春光万里到故乡写其山水。全诗清丽壮阔,以景写情,正是贺敬之诗中的名篇。

Prosody

Form Modern poetry — Xin tiansyou (信天游) style诗(新诗·信天游体)
Rhyme A new-style free poem in the xintianyou manner, forty-one lines, rhyming on 山, 水, 城, 中, 来, 重, 画, 峰, 屏, 声, 年, 来, 美, 心, 中, 江, 香, 生, 老, 回, 来, 祖, 收, 乡, 章 (a broad 庚/青/阳-class resonance); line lengths vary with feeling.此诗为新诗信天游体,共四十一行。押韵:「山」「水」「城」「中」「来」「重」「画」「峰」「屏」「声」「年」「声」「来」「镜」「美」「心」「中」「江」「香」「生」「老」「回」「来」「祖」「收」「乡」「章」押庚青阳部韵。诗体依信天游体而定,句式长短错落,音节随情起伏,正与写写景山水的清丽壮阔相称,也见其以信天游写山水的大气。
Tone pattern Lines like 'gods in the clouds' are lucid; 'like love, like dream' are lilting; 'how many folds of water' are light; 'these hills enter my breast' are bold; the close 'red flags… spring light reaches my homeland' is grand—the music rises from lucid to grand, matching the xintianyou 'grand' spirit.句式上,「云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山」写云中的神啊,音节清丽;「情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水」写情一样深啊,音节悠扬;「水几重啊,山几重?水绕山环桂林城」写水几重啊,音节轻快;「啊!此山此水入胸怀,此时此身何处来」写啊此山此水入胸怀,音节豪迈;结「红旗万梭织锦绣,海北天南一望收。塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪,春光万里到故乡」写塞外的风沙呵黄河的浪,音节壮阔。全诗音节随情起伏,由清丽而悠扬、由轻快而豪迈、由豪迈而壮阔,正合信天游「大气」之妙,读来如写景山水、蘸水漓山皆华章之音,清丽而动人。
Reading note A modern xintianyou-style poem, a famous landscape piece by He Jingzhi. Its art is 'limpid grandeur, scene painting emotion': 'gods in the clouds…' for the hills, 'like love, like dream…' for the waters, 'how many folds of water…' for the city, 'these hills enter my breast…' for fusion, 'red flags… weave brocade' for the era. Especially fine are the allusions to Duxiu Peak and Sister Liu San, the model of He Jingzhi's 'limpid grandeur,' often anthologized.此诗为新诗信天游体,是贺敬之写写景山水之作,也是其诗中的名篇。全诗的艺术特色在于「清丽壮阔、以景写情」:「云中的神啊,雾中的仙,神姿仙态桂林的山」写云中的神啊、「情一样深啊,梦一样美,如情似梦漓江的水」写情一样深啊、「水几重啊,山几重?水绕山环桂林城」写水几重啊、「啊!此山此水入胸怀,此时此身何处来」写啊此山此水入胸怀、「红旗万梭织锦绣,海北天南一望收」写红旗万梭织锦绣。全诗清丽壮阔,以景写情。尤为精妙者,是「此时身在独秀峰」用独秀峰之典;而「招呼刘三姐啊打从天上回」用刘三姐之典,正是贺敬之诗「清丽壮阔」的典范,为历代选本所常收。

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云中的神啊,雾中的仙,

Gods in the clouds, immortals in the mist—

云中的神啊,雾中的仙,

Oh, a goddess in the clouds, an immortal in the mist,

起句写云中的神啊,起笔即见其神。「云中的神啊」写云中的神啊,「云中的神」写云中的神、「啊」写啊;「雾中的仙」写雾中的仙,「雾中的」写雾中的、「仙」写仙。一句写云中的神啊雾中的仙,以云中的神啊写云中之神、以雾中的仙写雾中之仙,写尽云中的神啊、雾中的仙之情。以神起兴,清丽而壮阔,是「以神起兴」的妙笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。

The poem opens by refusing to describe Guilin's mountains as scenery: they are a goddess in the clouds, an immortal in the mist. The two exclamatory addresses set a mythic register before the name Guilin is ever spoken—the peaks are not rock but presences half-seen through weather. The repeated particle is the folk-song manner, the voice rising in wonder. To have said the Guilin peaks look like goddesses would be a simile; the direct invocation of the divinities is the rapture.

神姿仙态桂林的山!

mountains of Guilin, divine in bearing, immortal in grace!

神姿仙态桂林的山!

Divine in bearing, immortal in form—the mountains of Guilin!

此句写神姿仙态桂林的山,是全诗写桂林之态的关键。「神姿仙态」写神姿仙态,「神姿」写神姿、「仙态」写仙态;「桂林的山」写桂林的山,「桂林」写桂林、「的山」写山。一句写神姿仙态桂林的山,以神姿仙态写神姿仙态、以桂林的山写桂林之山,写尽神姿仙态桂林的山之情。以山写景,清丽而壮阔,是「以山写景」的点睛之笔。

Now the name is spoken. Divine in bearing, immortal in form—the mountains of Guilin. The four adjectives of godliness and immortality merely unpack the opening image; what the line adds is the proper noun, fixing the myth in a real place. The exclamation is the poet's answer to his own invocation: yes, it is here, in Guilin. To have named the mountains directly would be plain; the delayed name after the divine titles is the recognition.

如情似梦漓江的水!

the waters of the Lijiang, like love, like dream!

如情似梦漓江的水!

Like love, like a dream—the waters of the Li River!

此句写如情似梦漓江的水,是全诗写漓江之态的关键。「如情似梦」写如情似梦,「如情」写如情、「似梦」写似梦;「漓江的水」写漓江的水,「漓江」写漓江、「的水」写水。一句写如情似梦漓江的水,以如情似梦写如情似梦、以漓江的水写漓江之水,写尽如情似梦漓江的水之情。以水写景,清丽而壮阔,是「以水写景」的点睛之笔。

The mountains were divine; the waters are dreamlike. Like love, like a dream—the waters of the Li River. Where the peaks were goddesses, the river is an inward thing, feeling and dream rather than shape. The poem balances the two: rock made numinous, water made visionary. To have said the Li River is dreamy would be a travel note; the pairing with love and dream is the rapture.

啊!此山此水入胸怀,

Ah! These hills, these waters, enter my breast,

啊!此山此水入胸怀,

Ah, these mountains, these waters, enter my breast,

此句写啊此山此水入胸怀,是全诗写胸怀之态的关键。「啊!此山此水」写啊此山此水,「啊」写啊、「此山此水」写此山此水;「入胸怀」写入胸怀,「入」写入、「胸怀」写胸怀。一句写啊此山此水入胸怀,以啊此山此水写此山此水、以入胸怀写入胸怀,写尽啊此山此水入胸怀之情。以山写情,清丽而壮阔,是「以山写情」的点睛之笔。

The exclamation turns outward inward: these mountains, these waters, enter my breast. The poet does not merely look at the landscape; it comes inside him, a claim of union between scenery and self that is characteristic of He Jingzhi's romantic mode. The demonstrative this and this gathers the whole place into a single embrace. To have said I felt one with the landscape would be abstract; the waters and mountains entering the breast is the union.

此时身在独秀峰!

this moment I stand on Duxiu Peak!

此时身在独秀峰!

At this moment I stand on Solitary Beauty Peak!

结句写此时身在独秀峰,是全诗立意的落点。「此时身在」写此时身在,「此时」写此时、「身在」写身在;「独秀峰」用独秀峰之典写独秀峰,「独秀」写独秀、「峰」写峰。一句写此时身在独秀峰,以此时身在与独秀峰写身在独秀峰,写尽此时身在独秀峰之情。以峰写情,清丽而壮阔,是全诗最动人处,也是「以峰写情」的点睛之笔。

The closing locates the rapture on Solitary Beauty Peak, the isolated limestone tower that is Guilin's signature. At this moment I stand on it—the present is sharp, the body is on the peak, and all the prior wonder collapses into a single here. The peak's very name, Solitary Beauty, echoes the divine beauty of the opening. To have said I stood on a famous peak would be a postcard; the dropped you-are-here in the middle of the rapture is the poem's landing.

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Word focus

神姿仙态 神姿仙态 (shén zī xiān tài): 'divine bearing, immortal grace.' Used of Guilin's peaks, it mythologizes the karst mountains as gods and immortals, conveying their uncanny sublimity in the poem's opening, folk-ballad praise. 「神姿仙态」写神姿仙态桂林的山,是写神姿之态的关键。「神姿仙态」着一「神姿仙态」,写神姿仙态——着一「神姿仙态」,写神姿仙态桂林的山,见其姿之神。四字写尽神姿仙态之态,是「以词写姿」的妙笔。「神姿仙态」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
漓江 漓江 (Lí jiāng): 'the Lijiang River' of Guilin, the poetic heart of the scenery. Called 'deep as love, beautiful as a dream,' it personifies the water as feeling itself, central to the poem's nature-to-sentiment turn. 「漓江」写如情似梦漓江的水,是写漓江之态的关键。「如情似梦漓江的水」着一「漓江」,写漓江——着一「漓江」,写如情似梦漓江的水,见其江之漓。两字写尽漓江之态,是「以词写江」的点睛之词。「漓江」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
画屏 画屏 (huà píng): 'painted screen.' In 'waters welcome, hills receive me into a painted screen' it images the landscape as a living picture that encloses the speaker—blending scene and the poet's transported emotion. 「画屏」写水迎山接入画屏,是写画屏之态的关键。「水迎山接入画屏」着一「画屏」,写画屏——着一「画屏」,写水迎山接入画屏,见其屏之画。两字写尽画屏之态,是「以词写屏」的点睛之词。「画屏」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
华章 华章 (huá zhāng): 'glorious chapter / fine writing.' In 'Guilin's waters and hills dipped in ink, all become glorious chapters' it figures the scenery itself as inspired text, the landscape turned into the motherland's praiseworthy song. 「华章」写蘸水漓山皆华章,是写华章之态的关键。「蘸水漓山皆华章」着一「华章」,写华章——着一「华章」,写蘸水漓山皆华章,见其章之华。两字写尽华章之态,是「以词写章」的点睛之词。「华章」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。

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Liu Yong's 'Basheng Gan Zhou' ('on the misty rain falling on river and sky, washing clear the autumn') writes riverside gazing with limpid distance, a famous Song lyric of travel; He Jingzhi's 'Song of Guilin' writes 'like love, like dream, the waters of the Lijiang' and 'waters wind and hills embrace the city.' Both write riverside gazing with limpid distance—one the misty rain on river and sky, one the Lijiang in feeling; one Liu Yong's lucidity, one He Jingzhi's grandeur. Read together they show two ways of gazing on the river.

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