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就是那一只蟋蟀
That Very Cricket
就是那一只蟋蟀钢翅响拍着金风一跳跳过了海峡从台北上空悄悄降落落在你的院子里夜夜唱歌就是那一只蟋蟀在《豳风·七月》里唱过在《唐风·蟋蟀》里唱过在《古诗十九首》里唱过在花木兰的织机旁唱过在姜夔的词里唱过劳人听过思妇听过就是那一只蟋蟀在深山的驿道边唱过在长城的烽台上唱过在旅馆的天井中唱过在战场的野草间唱过孤客听过伤兵听过就是那一只蟋蟀在你的记忆里唱歌在我的记忆里唱歌唱童年的惊喜唱中年的寂寞想起雕竹做笼想起呼灯篱落想起月饼想起桂花想起满腹珍珠的石榴果想起故园飞黄叶想起野塘剩残荷想起雁南飞想起田间一堆堆的草垛想起妈妈唤我们回去加衣裳想起岁月偷偷流去许多许多就是那一只蟋蟀在海峡那边唱歌在海峡这边唱歌在台北的一条巷子里唱歌在四川的一个乡村里唱歌在每个中国人脚迹所到之处处处唱歌比最单调的乐曲更单调比最谐和的音响更谐和凝成水是露珠燃成光是萤火变成鸟是鹧鸪啼叫在乡愁者的心窝就是那一只蟋蟀在你的窗外唱歌在我的窗外唱歌你在倾听你在想念我在倾听我在吟哦你该猜到我在吟些什么我会猜到你在想些什么中国人有中国人的心态中国人有中国人的耳朵
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就是那一只蟋蟀钢翅响拍着金风一跳跳过了海峡从台北上空悄悄降落落在你的院子里夜夜唱歌就是那一只蟋蟀在《豳风·七月》里唱过在《唐风·蟋蟀》里唱过在《古诗十九首》里唱过在花木兰的织机旁唱过在姜夔的词里唱过劳人听过思妇听过就是那一只蟋蟀在深山的驿道边唱过在长城的烽台上唱过在旅馆的天井中唱过在战场的野草间唱过孤客听过伤兵听过就是那一只蟋蟀在你的记忆里唱歌在我的记忆里唱歌唱童年的惊喜唱中年的寂寞想起雕竹做笼想起呼灯篱落想起月饼想起桂花想起满腹珍珠的石榴果想起故园飞黄叶想起野塘剩残荷想起雁南飞想起田间一堆堆的草垛想起妈妈唤我们回去加衣裳想起岁月偷偷流去许多许多就是那一只蟋蟀在海峡那边唱歌在海峡这边唱歌在台北的一条巷子里唱歌在四川的一个乡村里唱歌在每个中国人脚迹所到之处处处唱歌比最单调的乐曲更单调比最谐和的音响更谐和凝成水是露珠燃成光是萤火变成鸟是鹧鸪啼叫在乡愁者的心窝就是那一只蟋蟀在你的窗外唱歌在我的窗外唱歌你在倾听你在想念我在倾听我在吟哦你该猜到我在吟些什么我会猜到你在想些什么中国人有中国人的心态中国人有中国人的耳朵
Its steel wings beating the golden wind.
One leap, and it has leapt the strait;
Quietly it comes down over Taipei,
And lights in your courtyard,
Singing night after night.
It is that very cricket,
It sang in the 'Bin Feng: Seventh Month',
It sang in the 'Tang Feng: Cricket',
It sang in the Nineteen Old Poems,
It sang beside the loom of Hua Mulan,
It sang in Jiang Kui's ci.
Toilers have heard it,
Women waiting for their men have heard it.
It is that very cricket,
It sang beside the post road in the deep hills,
It sang on the beacon tower of the Great Wall,
It sang in the courtyard of an inn,
It sang among the wild grass of a battlefield.
Solitary travelers have heard it,
Wounded soldiers have heard it.
It is that very cricket,
It sings in your memory,
It sings in my memory,
Singing the wonder of childhood,
Singing the loneliness of middle age.
I think of slotted bamboo cages,
I think of a lamp called out at the fence,
I think of mooncakes,
I think of osmanthus,
I think of the pomegranate fruit full of pearls,
I think of yellow leaves flying over the old garden,
I think of the wild pond with its broken lotus,
I think of wild geese flying south,
I think of heaps and heaps of straw in the fields,
I think of mother calling us back to add our clothes,
I think of the years stealing away,
Stealing away so much.
It is that very cricket,
It sings on that side of the strait,
It sings on this side of the strait,
It sings in an alley in Taipei,
It sings in a village in Sichuan,
It sings everywhere that the footprint of a Chinese person has reached,
Sings everywhere.
More monotonous than the most monotonous air,
More harmonious than the most harmonious sound.
Congealed into water, it is a dewdrop;
Burned into light, it is a firefly;
Become a bird, it is a partridge;
And it cries in the heart-cavity of the homesick.
It is that very cricket,
It sings outside your window,
It sings outside my window.
You are listening,
You are thinking of her;
I am listening,
I am intoning.
You can guess what I am intoning,
I can guess what you are thinking.
Chinese have Chinese feelings,
Chinese have Chinese ears.
Meaning
A long lyric built on one repeated line. A single cricket, described as having beaten its steel wings against the autumn wind and leapt the strait from Taiwan to the mainland, sings in the same voice in every place a Chinese person has been: in the ancient odes, on the Great Wall, in a battlefield, in a childhood courtyard. The poem's argument is that this insect carries a shared memory — of lanterns and mooncakes and a mother calling children in to add clothes — and that because both sides of the strait hear the same sound, the bond between them is as natural as their shared language.
就是那一只蟋蟀钢翅响拍着金风一跳跳过了海峡从台北上空悄悄降落落在你的院子里夜夜唱歌就是那一只蟋蟀在《豳风·七月》里唱过在《唐风·蟋蟀》里唱过在《古诗十九首》里唱过在花木兰的织机旁唱过在姜夔的词里唱过劳人听过思妇听过就是那一只蟋蟀在深山的驿道边唱过在长城的烽台上唱过在旅馆的天井中唱过在战场的野草间唱过孤客听过伤兵听过就是那一只蟋蟀在你的记忆里唱歌在我的记忆里唱歌唱童年的惊喜唱中年的寂寞想起雕竹做笼想起呼灯篱落想起月饼想起桂花想起满腹珍珠的石榴果想起故园飞黄叶想起野塘剩残荷想起雁南飞想起田间一堆堆的草垛想起妈妈唤我们回去加衣裳想起岁月偷偷流去许多许多就是那一只蟋蟀在海峡那边唱歌在海峡这边唱歌在台北的一条巷子里唱歌在四川的一个乡村里唱歌在每个中国人脚迹所到之处处处唱歌比最单调的乐曲更单调比最谐和的音响更谐和凝成水是露珠燃成光是萤火变成鸟是鹧鸪啼叫在乡愁者的心窝就是那一只蟋蟀在你的窗外唱歌在我的窗外唱歌你在倾听你在想念我在倾听我在吟哦你该猜到我在吟些什么我会猜到你在想些什么中国人有中国人的心态中国人有中国人的耳朵
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] One cricket, its steel wings beating the autumn wind, leaps the strait and comes down over Taipei to sing in a courtyard night after night; the poem then runs through the places it has always sung — the 'Bin Feng' and 'Tang Feng' odes, the Nineteen Old Poems, Hua Mulan's loom, Jiang Kui's ci, the post roads, the beacon towers, battlefields — and finally lists what it makes anyone remember. [Structure] The refrain 'It is that very cricket' returns five times, dividing the poem into movements, and each return adds a place or a memory rather than repeating the same statement. [Imagery] The cricket is at once physical and purely a voice; the poem's most effective image is the transformation sequence near the end — congealed into water a dewdrop, burned into light a firefly, become a bird a partridge — which turns a small sound into the four elements of Chinese experience. [Rhetoric] The accumulation of 'I think of...' clauses is the poem's engine, and they are deliberately ordinary: mooncakes, pomegranates, straw stacks, mother's call. [Effect] The poem's rhetorical target is the hardness of the political division, and its argument is that a shared folk memory of childhood makes that division an accident. Whether or not the reader accepts the argument, the craft is beyond dispute: the restraint of the last stanza, in which each side guesses what the other is thinking, is the most tender passage in modern Chinese poetry of the period.
【白话串讲】 流沙河写《就是那一只蟋蟀》:“就是那一只蟋蟀,钢翅响拍着金风,一跳跳过了海峡”——“在《豳风·七月》里唱过,在《唐风·蟋蟀》里唱过”——他写蟋蟀——从古诗唱到海峡两岸。 【意象与手法】 以“就是那一只蟋蟀”的复沓起笔;“钢翅响拍着金风,一跳跳过了海峡”以蟋蟀写两岸相连;“在《豳风·七月》里唱过,在《唐风·蟋蟀》里唱过”以典籍串联历史;结以“啼叫在乡愁者的心窝”。咏物而寄乡愁,古今勾连。 【情感与主旨】 借蟋蟀这一贯穿中华诗歌的意象,写两岸同胞共同的乡愁与文化认同,将古典意象与现代乡愁结合,是流沙河乡愁诗代表作。 【名句点睛】 常考“就是那一只蟋蟀,钢翅响拍着金风,一跳跳过了海峡”以蟋蟀写两岸相连;“在《豳风·七月》里唱过,在《唐风·蟋蟀》里唱过”以典籍写文化认同。
Background
Liu Shahe (1931–2021) was born in Chengdu, Sichuan, and after the 1949 revolution was sent to prison for years and then to labor in a rural 'cadre school' in the mountains of Liangshan. He returned to Chengdu in 1980 and published a volume of poems the same year. 'Jiu Shi Na Yi Zhi Xi Shuai' (1981) was written shortly after and became one of the most widely read poems of the reform era, circulated in photocopies and quoted in letters on both sides of the Taiwan Strait; it is still frequently cited in discussions of Chinese-language poetry across the strait.
《就是那一只蟋蟀》为当代诗人流沙河所作诗。流沙河(1931—2019),原名余勋坦,四川金堂人,当代诗人。此诗写乡愁咏物,为咏蟋蟀之作。诗中「就是那一只蟋蟀,钢翅响拍着金风」写就是那一只蟋蟀,钢翅响拍着金风;「一跳跳过了海峡,从台北上空悄悄降落」写一跳跳过了海峡,从台北上空悄悄降落;「在《豳风·七月》里唱过,在花木兰的织机旁唱过」写在《豳风·七月》里唱过,在花木兰的织机旁唱过;「啼叫在乡愁者的心窝」写啼叫在乡愁者的心窝。流沙河此诗以乡愁咏物、啼叫在乡愁者的心窝写其咏物之情,深情咏物,是流沙河诗中的名篇。此篇《就是那一只蟋蟀》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《就是那一只蟋蟀》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。
Art
The poem is a demonstration of the anaphora: a single six-character line is repeated five times, and because each return is followed by a different sequence of places, the repetitions register as variation rather than as insistence. The second technique is accumulation by nominal phrase — 'mooncakes', 'osmanthus', 'pomegranate fruit full of pearls', 'heaps of straw', 'mother calling us back to add clothes' — with no verbs to connect them, which produces the effect of memory surfacing faster than it can be arranged. The closing movement converts the whole poem into a series of conditional transformations ('congealed into water... burned into light... become a bird'), so that the cricket is no longer an insect but a law of matter. Finally, the last stanza quietly drops the argument and addresses the reader directly, ending with a definition — 'Chinese have Chinese feelings, / Chinese have Chinese ears' — so that the poem's庞大的 emotion is delivered in a flat, almost juridical sentence.
此诗艺术上以「深情咏物、以声写情」见长。全诗由就是那一只蟋蟀而钢翅响拍着金风而一跳跳过了海峡。起「就是那一只蟋蟀,钢翅响拍着金风」写就是那一只蟋蟀:就是那一只蟋蟀,钢翅响拍着金风;「一跳跳过了海峡,从台北上空悄悄降落」写一跳跳过了海峡:一跳跳过了海峡,从台北上空悄悄降落;「在《豳风·七月》里唱过,在花木兰的织机旁唱过」写在《豳风·七月》里唱过:在《豳风·七月》里唱过,在花木兰的织机旁唱过;结「啼叫在乡愁者的心窝」写啼叫在乡愁者的心窝:啼叫在乡愁者的心窝。全诗以声写情,由就是那一只蟋蟀而啼叫在乡愁者的心窝,深情咏物,是流沙河诗中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。
Allusions
The cricket is not an invented image. It appears in the 'Bin Feng: Seventh Month' of the 'Book of Songs' — where the insect is one of eight month-markers of the farming calendar — and again in the 'Tang Feng: Cricket', the rustic song of a woman reminding her husband of the season. It is one of the 'Nineteen Old Poems', where it is a symbol of domestic time, and it recurs in Jiang Kui's songs. Hua Mulan, who drops her loom to enlist, supplies a female voice from the ballads, and the 'partridge' at the close is the bird of the 'Bin Feng'. By touching all of these at once, the poem claims that its cricket is not a modern figure of speech but the same creature that has been sung for three thousand years.
诗中「就是那一只蟋蟀钢翅响拍着金风」「一跳跳过了海峡从台北上空悄悄降落」「在豳风七月里唱过在花木兰的织机旁唱过」「啼叫在乡愁者的心窝」等语,皆含典故故实。「就是那一只蟋蟀钢翅响拍着金风」写就是那一只蟋蟀钢翅响拍着金风;「一跳跳过了海峡从台北上空悄悄降落」写一跳跳过了海峡从台北上空悄悄降落;「在豳风七月里唱过在花木兰的织机旁唱过」用豳风、花木兰之典(豳风写诗经豳风七月,花木兰写木兰从军),写在豳风七月里唱过在花木兰的织机旁唱过;「啼叫在乡愁者的心窝」写啼叫在乡愁者的心窝。诗人用豳风、花木兰之典入诗,不着痕迹,而把乡愁咏物之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。
Commentary
The poem's reception has been as political as its literary quality. In mainland China it was read as a work of national reunification sympathetic to Taiwan, and in Taiwan some readers found the final stanzas too overtly directed; both readings have kept it in circulation. Critics have also noted its debt to the Mao-era rhetorical poem — the lists, the parallelism, the closing definition — and have argued whether the hard work of the 'I think of' accumulations is lyrical or merely propagandistic. The near-universal praise in anthologies suggests that the poem succeeds in part because its emotion is carried by details that no argument could make moving.
这首《就是那一只蟋蟀》,是流沙河写乡愁咏物之作,写就是那一只蟋蟀、一跳跳过了海峡、在豳风七月里唱过、啼叫在乡愁者的心窝之情,深情咏物。起「就是那一只蟋蟀,钢翅响拍着金风」——就是那一只蟋蟀,钢翅响拍着金风。写就是那一只蟋蟀:就是那一只蟋蟀、钢翅响拍着金风——那一只蟋蟀、响拍着金风;「一跳跳过了海峡,从台北上空悄悄降落」——一跳跳过了海峡,从台北上空悄悄降落。写一跳跳过了海峡:一跳跳过了海峡、从台北上空悄悄降落——跳过了海峡、悄悄降落;「在《豳风·七月》里唱过,在花木兰的织机旁唱过」——在《豳风·七月》里唱过,在花木兰的织机旁唱过。写在《豳风·七月》里唱过:在《豳风·七月》里唱过、在花木兰的织机旁唱过——七月里唱过、织机旁唱过;结「啼叫在乡愁者的心窝」——啼叫在乡愁者的心窝。写啼叫在乡愁者的心窝:啼叫在、乡愁者的心窝——啼叫在、心窝。这「啼叫在乡愁者的心窝」,是全诗之结:以啼叫在乡愁者的心窝写其咏物。全诗深情咏物,以声写情,正是流沙河诗中的名篇。
Prosody
Line by line
就是那一只蟋蟀
It is that very cricket,
就是那一只蟋蟀
That very same cricket,
起句写就是那一只蟋蟀,起笔即见其蟋蟀。「就是那一只蟋蟀」写就是那一只蟋蟀,「就是那一只」写就是那一只、「蟋蟀」写蟋蟀。一句写就是那一只蟋蟀,以就是那一只写那一只、以蟋蟀写蟋蟀,写尽就是那一只蟋蟀之情。以蟋蟀起兴,深情而咏物,是「以蟋蟀起兴」的妙笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。
The poem insists on identity. That very same cricket—the demonstrative that very is the whole argument: the cricket a Taiwanese poet hears and the one a mainland poet hears are the same insect. The poem is about the cultural continuity across the Taiwan Strait, and the cricket is the carrier. To have said the cricket is a common symbol would be an essay; that very same is the insistence.
钢翅响拍着金风
Its steel wings beating the golden wind.
钢翅响拍着金风
its steel wings beating the golden autumn wind,
此句写钢翅响拍着金风,是全诗写钢翅之态的关键。「钢翅响拍着金风」写钢翅响拍着金风,「钢翅」写钢翅、「响拍着金风」写响拍着金风。一句写钢翅响拍着金风,以钢翅写钢翅、以响拍着金风写金风,写尽钢翅响拍着金风之情。以声写景,深情而咏物,是「以声写景」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。
The cricket is given metal wings. Its steel wings beat the golden autumn wind—steel for the tiny, brittle insect, golden for the bright autumn air. The incongruous strength of steel makes the small creature loud and enduring, fit to carry a thousand years. To have said the cricket chirped in autumn would be natural observation; the steel wings beating the golden wind are the symbol's force.
一跳跳过了海峡
One leap, and it has leapt the strait;
一跳跳过了海峡
leaping with one bound across the strait,
此句写一跳跳过了海峡,是全诗写海峡之态的关键。「一跳跳过了海峡」写一跳跳过了海峡,「一跳」写一跳、「跳过了海峡」写跳过了海峡。一句写一跳跳过了海峡,以一跳写一跳、以跳过了海峡写跳过了海峡,写尽一跳跳过了海峡之情。以跳写景,深情而咏物,是「以跳写景」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。
The cricket leaps with one bound across the strait. The strait is the literal political gap; the single bound is the imagination's refusal of it. One hop, absurd for an insect, covers the whole division. The line is the poem's central fantasy—nature's small creature ignoring a frontier that divides nations. To have said the cricket connected the two shores would be a statement; the one bound across the strait is the connection.
在《豳风·七月》里唱过
It sang in the 'Bin Feng: Seventh Month'.
在《豳风·七月》里唱过
once it sang in the Seventh Month of the Bin Airs,
此句写在《豳风·七月》里唱过,是全诗写豳风之态的关键。「在《豳风·七月》里」用豳风之典写在《豳风·七月》里,「在《豳风·七月》里」写在《豳风·七月》里;「唱过」写唱过,「唱过」写唱过。一句写在《豳风·七月》里唱过,以在《豳风·七月》里写豳风七月、以唱过写唱过,写尽在《豳风·七月》里唱过之情。以经写景,深情而咏物,是「以经写景」的点睛之笔。
It once sang in the Seventh Month of the Bin Airs—the poem in the Book of Songs that, three millennia ago, already heard a cricket in the grass and by the door. The allusion anchors the insect in the very origin of Chinese poetry: both sides share this oldest of songs. To have said people have heard crickets since ancient times would be a fact; the named Ode is the shared ancestry.
想起妈妈唤我们回去加衣裳
I think of mother calling us back to add our clothes
想起妈妈唤我们回去加衣裳
and remembering Mother calling us home to put on more clothes,
此句写想起妈妈唤我们回去加衣裳,是全诗写想起之态的关键。「想起妈妈」写想起妈妈,「想起」写想起、「妈妈」写妈妈;「唤我们回去加衣裳」写唤我们回去加衣裳,「唤我们回去」写唤我们回去、「加衣裳」写加衣裳。一句写想起妈妈唤我们回去加衣裳,以想起妈妈写妈妈、以唤我们回去加衣裳写加衣裳,写尽想起妈妈唤我们回去加衣裳之情。以家写情,深情而咏物,是「以家写情」的点睛之笔。
The cricket's song reminds the listener of Mother calling us home to put on more clothes. The personal memory is domestic rather than national—the autumn chill, the mother's voice—and it is precisely this shared childhood that the strait cannot cut. The poem's patriotism works through the smallest family moment. To have said I remembered my childhood would be private; the mother calling us home against the cold is the common childhood.
啼叫在乡愁者的心窝
It cries in the heart-cavity of the homesick.
啼叫在乡愁者的心窝
it chirps in the very breast of the homesick.
结句写啼叫在乡愁者的心窝,是全诗立意的落点。「啼叫在」写啼叫在,「啼叫」写啼叫、「在」写在;「乡愁者的心窝」写乡愁者的心窝,「乡愁者的」写乡愁者的、「心窝」写心窝。一句写啼叫在乡愁者的心窝,以啼叫在写啼叫在、以乡愁者的心窝写心窝,写尽啼叫在乡愁者的心窝之情。以窝写情,深情而咏物,是全诗最动人处,也是「以窝写情」的点睛之笔。
The closing locates the sound. It chirps in the very breast of the homesick. The cricket is no longer in the grass but inside the chest of anyone who longs for home, on either shore. The word breast makes the homesickness physical. To have said the cricket expressed nostalgia would be an interpretation; the chirping in the breast of the homesick is the nostalgia.
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Su Shi's 'Diao Toupai' was written on Mid-Autumn night in 1076 and closes with the wish that men may live long and share one brightness 'though a thousand miles apart'. Its logic is that separation is the condition of human life and shared light is its remedy. Liu Shahe's poem accepts the premise of a divided Chinese world and answers it with a shared sound instead of a shared light: the cricket sings on both sides of the strait, as it always has. The symmetrical structure is striking — Su Shi's moon is only a moon, but it is enough; Liu's cricket is only an insect, and it has to be made to suffice.
苏轼《水调歌头·明月几时有》「但愿人长久,千里共婵娟」,写乡愁感怀、深情旷达,是宋词长调的名篇;流沙河《就是那一只蟋蟀》则以「就是那一只蟋蟀,钢翅响拍着金风」「啼叫在乡愁者的心窝」写响拍着金风、乡愁者的心窝。两诗同写乡愁感怀、深情旷达:一写但愿人长久、以千里共婵娟写思亲,一写就是那一只蟋蟀啼叫在乡愁者的心窝、以蟋蟀写乡愁;一为苏轼之旷达、一为流沙河之深情,并读正可见诗写「乡愁感怀」的两种笔法,皆于乡愁之中见深情。
八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天 Ba Sheng Gan Zhou: 'In the Autumn Rain That Streaming Down the Sky' 柳永 · 同写故园凝望、深情清丽,一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、一写想起故园飞黄叶想起野塘剩残荷,皆于故园之中见凝望 Both are autumn lyrics of the widest possible reach — Liu Yong's covering a whole journey with a woman waiting at the end of it, Liu Shahe's covering a whole culture with one insect singing everywhere — and both treat the far distance as the true subject.Liu Yong opens with rain over the sky and, over more than a hundred lines, gathers mountains, rivers, the painter's towers, the returning sails and finally 'the thought of his love on the painted tower, gazing out again and again'. The poem's scale is achieved by accumulation across a long journey and a long time. Liu Shahe's poem has the same appetite for accumulation but compresses it into a few hundred lines and dispenses with the journey: the cricket is already everywhere. In Liu Yong's poem the watcher is alone; in Liu Shahe's the watcher is duplicated on both sides of the water, which is the poem's quiet modification of the older image.
柳永《八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天》「对潇潇暮雨洒江天,一番洗清秋」,写故园凝望、深情清丽,是宋词写羁旅的名篇;流沙河《就是那一只蟋蟀》则以「想起故园飞黄叶,想起野塘剩残荷」「想起雁南飞」写故园飞黄叶、想起雁南飞。两诗同写故园凝望、深情清丽:一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、以暮雨写清秋,一写想起故园飞黄叶想起野塘剩残荷、以故园写乡愁;一为柳永之清丽、一为流沙河之深情,并读正可见诗写「故园凝望」的两种笔法,皆于故园之中见凝望。