汉 Han · 诗 Poem
迢迢牵牛星
Far Away, the Cowherd Star (迢迢牵牛星)
迢迢牵牛星,杳在河之阳。
粲粲黄姑女,耿耿遥相望。
鸎狂应有恨,蝶舞已无多。
揖让月在手,动摇风满怀。
病态如衰弱,厌厌向五年。
衰颜一病难牵复,晓殿君临颇自羞。
冷笑秦皇经远略,静怜姬满苦时巡。
鬓从今日添新白,菊是去年依旧黄。
万古到头归一死,醉乡葬地有高原。
人生不满百,刚作千年画。
日暎仙云薄,秋高天碧深。
乌照始潜辉,龙烛便争秉。
凝珠满露枝,游飏日已西。
肃穆寒初至,九重开扇鹄。
四牖炳灯鱼,羽觞无算酌。
倾盌更为寿,深卮递酬宾。
hidden away on the north bank of the river.
Bright, bright, the weaving girl,
staring across the distance, unable to reach.
The oriole is mad, and should surely have resentment;
the butterflies that dance are already few.
The moon is held in the hands as one makes salute and yields;
the wind stirs and the breast is full.
Sickly, as if growing weaker,
listless now for five years.
A faded face, one illness not yet lifted;
at dawn the hall, and I am ashamed before my lord.
I scorn the far-reaching plans of the First Emperor;
I quietly pity King Mu of Zhou, so weary with his progresses.
My temples take on new white this morning;
the chrysanthemum is the same yellow as last year.
To the end of all ages there comes one death;
the burial ground of the drunken land has high plains.
A man's life does not reach a hundred years,
yet he paints a picture for a thousand.
The sun lights the thin clouds of the immortals;
autumn is high and the sky is deep blue.
The crow begins to hide its light;
the dragon candles vie in brightness.
Dew bullets hang full on the branches;
drifting, drifting, the sun already in the west.
Austere and cold has just arrived;
the ninefold gates open and the swan is let out.
Four windows lit with fish-lamps;
the feathered cup is poured without count.
Tilting the bowl to drink a further health;
the deep cup passes from guest to guest.
Meaning
This poem of the anonymous Nineteen Old Poems begins with the Cowherd Star on the far bank of the celestial river and the bright weaving girl gazing across at him, unable to come near. It then moves through scenes of declining health, of the distress of appearing before the ruler, of scorn for the far-projects of the First Emperor and for the weary progresses of King Mu of Zhou, of the new white in the temples against the chrysanthemum that is the same yellow as last year, and of the certainty that all ages end in death. It closes with the image of a long night in which cups are passed from guest to guest.
迢迢牵牛星,杳在河之阳。粲粲黄姑女,耿耿遥相望。鸎狂应有恨,蝶舞已无多。揖让月在手,动摇风满怀。病态如衰弱,厌厌向五年。衰颜一病难牵复,晓殿君临颇自羞。冷笑秦皇经远略,静怜姬满苦时巡。鬓从今日添新白,菊是去年依旧黄。万古到头归一死,醉乡葬地有高原。人生不满百,刚作千年画。日暎仙云薄,秋高天碧深。乌照始潜辉,龙烛便争秉。凝珠满露枝,游飏日已西。肃穆寒初至,九重开扇鹄。四牖炳灯鱼,羽觞无算酌。倾盌更为寿,深卮递酬宾。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] The poem opens with the far-off Cowherd Star hidden on the northern bank of the river, and the bright weaving girl on the other side, looking across at him from a distance that cannot be crossed. From there the poem moves through many scenes — the oriole's anger, the fading illness, the shame of the morning hall, the scorn for the First Emperor's campaigns, the white temples against the old yellow chrysanthemum, and the certainty that every age must die — until it closes with cups passed from guest to guest. [Structure] The poem is built as a chain of coupled lines rather than as a single argument. Each couplet is complete in itself and then is succeeded by another, and the only thing that holds them together is the movement of feeling from looking across to drinking away. [Imagery] The controlling image is distance: the far star, the river between, the wind filled in the breast, the light of the sun hidden, dew on the branches, the sun already in the west. Nothing is brought closer. What the poem adds at the end is the cup, which is the one object that can be passed from hand to hand. [Diction] The reduplicated words are the poem's principal tool: 迢迢 for distance, 粲粲 for brightness, 耿耿 for the fixed look of staring. 耿耿 especially means both bright and absorbed, so that the looking and the light are one thing. In the last line 递, to pass along, is what makes the drinking a mutual act rather than a solitary one.
【白话串讲】 古诗十九首《迢迢牵牛星》:“迢迢牵牛星,皎皎河汉女”——“纤纤擢素手,札札弄机杼”——“终日不成章,泣涕零如雨”——“河汉清且浅,相去复几许”——“盈盈一水间,脉脉不得语”——他写牛郎织女——脉脉不得语。 【意象与手法】 以“迢迢牵牛星,皎皎河汉女”对举起兴;“纤纤擢素手,札札弄机杼”以叠字写织女劳作;“终日不成章,泣涕零如雨”写哀伤;“河汉清且浅,相去复几许”以“清且浅”写阻隔之近却难渡;结以“盈盈一水间,脉脉不得语”。大量叠字,情景交融。 【情感与主旨】 借牛郎织女传说写人间男女相思而不得相会的悲苦,以“盈盈一水间”写咫尺天涯的无奈,是《古诗十九首》中咏叹离别相思的名篇。 【名句点睛】 常考“盈盈一水间,脉脉不得语”以盈盈脉脉写咫尺天涯;“纤纤擢素手,札札弄机杼”以叠字写织女之态。
Background
The Nineteen Old Poems are a group of anonymous five-character poems of the late Han, from roughly the second century, the earliest mature Chinese verse in the five-character line. They are thought to have been written by the literary-circle writers of the capital who chose not to hold office, or by others who imitated them, and their authorship remains unknown. This poem is one of the group, and is a poem of writing on the occasion, in which feeling is set beside scenery. It belongs to the tradition of the old verse of the Han and the poetry of the Six Dynasties, and has been an object of study ever since; its language of the star and the river, of the passing years and the passing cup, runs through all later Chinese poetry.
《迢迢牵牛星》为一首五言诗,author 记古诗十九首,kind 记诗。全诗写景感怀:起「迢迢牵牛星,杳在河之阳。粲粲黄姑女,耿耿遥相望」写迢迢牵牛星,杳在河之阳,粲粲黄姑女,耿耿遥相望;中「鸎狂应有恨,蝶舞已无多。揖让月在手,动摇风满怀」写鸎狂应有恨,蝶舞已无多,揖让月在手,动摇风满怀;「病态如衰弱,厌厌向五年。衰颜一病难牵复,晓殿君临颇自羞」写病态如衰弱,厌厌向五年,衰颜一病难牵复,晓殿君临颇自羞;「冷笑秦皇经远略,静怜姬满苦时巡。鬓从今日添新白,菊是去年依旧黄」写冷笑秦皇经远略,静怜姬满苦时巡,鬓从今日添新白,菊是去年依旧黄;「万古到头归一死,醉乡葬地有高原。人生不满百,刚作千年画」写万古到头归一死,醉乡葬地有高原,人生不满百,刚作千年画;「日暎仙云薄,秋高天碧深。乌照始潜辉,龙烛便争秉」写日暎仙云薄,秋高天碧深,乌照始潜辉,龙烛便争秉;「凝珠满露枝,游飏日已西。肃穆寒初至,九重开扇鹄」写凝珠满露枝,游飏日已西,肃穆寒初至,九重开扇鹄;「四牖炳灯鱼,羽觞无算酌。倾盌更为寿,深卮递酬宾」写四牖炳灯鱼,羽觞无算酌,倾盌更为寿,深卮递酬宾。全诗以写景感怀、深卮递酬宾写其感怀之情,含蓄深婉,是古诗中的名篇。
Art
The poem is valued for restraint and for the way feeling is carried by scenery rather than stated. Its most characteristic device is the reduplicated word: 迢迢 for the far star, 粲粲 for the bright girl, 耿耿 for the fixedness of the look. These are ordinary words doubled, and the doubling is what gives them their weight. The composition is accumulative. There is no plot and no argument; the couplets follow one another as scenes follow one another, and the reader is asked to supply the connection. This is known in the old verse as the way of linking by impression rather than by grammar, and it is one of the reasons the poem has been imitated so often. The last couplet is the pivot. All that has gone before has been a series of separations — the star and the girl, the failing body and the court, the seasons and the self — and the poem closes with the one image of something being handed on, the cup passing from guest to guest. The feeling of the whole poem is therefore not sadness ending in resignation but sadness that is kept in check by a ritual, and the ritual is exactly the point.
此诗艺术上以「含蓄深婉、以景写情」见长。全诗多联,由迢迢牵牛星、粲粲黄姑女而鸎狂蝶舞、深卮递酬宾。起「迢迢牵牛星,杳在河之阳。粲粲黄姑女,耿耿遥相望」写迢迢牵牛星:迢迢牵牛星,杳在河之阳,粲粲黄姑女,耿耿遥相望;「鸎狂应有恨,蝶舞已无多」写鸎狂应有恨:鸎狂应有恨,蝶舞已无多;「揖让月在手,动摇风满怀」写揖让月在手:揖让月在手,动摇风满怀;「病态如衰弱,厌厌向五年」写病态如衰弱:病态如衰弱,厌厌向五年;「衰颜一病难牵复,晓殿君临颇自羞」写衰颜一病难牵复:衰颜一病难牵复,晓殿君临颇自羞;「冷笑秦皇经远略,静怜姬满苦时巡」写冷笑秦皇经远略:冷笑秦皇经远略,静怜姬满苦时巡;「鬓从今日添新白,菊是去年依旧黄」写鬓从今日添新白:鬓从今日添新白,菊是去年依旧黄;「万古到头归一死,醉乡葬地有高原」写万古到头归一死:万古到头归一死,醉乡葬地有高原;「人生不满百,刚作千年画」写人生不满百:人生不满百,刚作千年画;「日暎仙云薄,秋高天碧深」写日暎仙云薄:日暎仙云薄,秋高天碧深;「乌照始潜辉,龙烛便争秉」写乌照始潜辉:乌照始潜辉,龙烛便争秉;「凝珠满露枝,游飏日已西」写凝珠满露枝:凝珠满露枝,游飏日已西;「肃穆寒初至,九重开扇鹄」写肃穆寒初至:肃穆寒初至,九重开扇鹄;「四牖炳灯鱼,羽觞无算酌。倾盌更为寿,深卮递酬宾」写深卮递酬宾:四牖炳灯鱼,羽觞无算酌,倾盌更为寿,深卮递酬宾。全诗以景写情,由迢迢牵牛星而深卮递酬宾,含蓄深婉,是古诗中的名篇。
Allusions
Almost every line carries an allusion. 牵牛星, the Cowherd star, is the star of the Herdboy of the folk legend, whose wife the Weaving Girl, that is 黄姑, waited for him on the other side of the river; this poem uses the legend to begin with a separation that no one can cross. 鸎狂, the oriole's madness, and 蝶舞, the butterflies that dance, are images of impulses that cannot be satisfied. 秦皇, the First Emperor, is the builder of the great empire, and his 经远略, his far-reaching plans, are the ambition that the poem mocks. 姬满, King Mu of Zhou, is the ruler who drove his horses westward in search of the source of life, and the poem pities him for the trouble of his progresses. 人生不满百 is a line of the old verse, and its meaning here is that a hundred years is the limit and there is no point in painting for a thousand. 羽觞, the feathered cup, comes from the custom of the winding-stream poetry parties, where cups were set floating on the water; 倾盌 and 深卮 are the same custom in its more intense form. The chrysanthemum that is the same yellow as last year is the comparison that the years do not really pass, only the self does.
诗中「迢迢牵牛星」「杳在河之阳」「粲粲黄姑女」「耿耿遥相望」「鸎狂应有恨」「蝶舞已无多」「揖让月在手」「动摇风满怀」「病态如衰弱」「厌厌向五年」「衰颜一病难牵复」「晓殿君临颇自羞」「冷笑秦皇经远略」「静怜姬满苦时巡」「鬓从今日添新白」「菊是去年依旧黄」「万古到头归一死」「醉乡葬地有高原」「人生不满百」「刚作千年画」「日暎仙云薄」「秋高天碧深」「乌照始潜辉」「龙烛便争秉」「凝珠满露枝」「游飏日已西」「肃穆寒初至」「九重开扇鹄」「四牖炳灯鱼」「羽觞无算酌」「倾盌更为寿」「深卮递酬宾」等语,皆含典故故实。「迢迢牵牛星」用牵牛星之典,写迢迢牵牛星;「杳在河之阳」写杳在河之阳;「粲粲黄姑女」写粲粲黄姑女(黄姑写织女);「耿耿遥相望」写耿耿遥相望;「鸎狂应有恨」写鸎狂应有恨;「蝶舞已无多」写蝶舞已无多;「揖让月在手」写揖让月在手;「动摇风满怀」写动摇风满怀;「病态如衰弱」写病态如衰弱;「厌厌向五年」写厌厌向五年;「衰颜一病难牵复」写衰颜一病难牵复;「晓殿君临颇自羞」写晓殿君临颇自羞;「冷笑秦皇经远略」写冷笑秦皇经远略;「静怜姬满苦时巡」用周穆王姬满西巡之典,写静怜姬满苦时巡;「鬓从今日添新白」写鬓从今日添新白;「菊是去年依旧黄」写菊是去年依旧黄;「万古到头归一死」写万古到头归一死;「醉乡葬地有高原」写醉乡葬地有高原;「人生不满百」用古诗人生不满百之意,写人生不满百;「刚作千年画」写刚作千年画;「日暎仙云薄」写日暎仙云薄;「秋高天碧深」写秋高天碧深;「乌照始潜辉」写乌照始潜辉;「龙烛便争秉」写龙烛便争秉;「凝珠满露枝」写凝珠满露枝;「游飏日已西」写游飏日已西;「肃穆寒初至」写肃穆寒初至;「九重开扇鹄」写九重开扇鹄;「四牖炳灯鱼」写四牖炳灯鱼;「羽觞无算酌」用羽觞之典(曲水流觞),写羽觞无算酌;「倾盌更为寿」写倾盌更为寿;「深卮递酬宾」写深卮递酬宾。诗人以牵牛织女、周穆王西巡、人生不满百、羽觞等语入诗,不着痕迹,而把写景感怀之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。
Commentary
This poem of the Nineteen Old Poems is a work of writing on the occasion, and has been among the most reprinted of the collection since ancient anthologies began to select the old verse. Later readers have valued it for its plainness and for the way the feeling is left in the scenery. Its standing rests on three things. In theme, the poem joins the long line of Chinese verse that sets the star and the river, or the passing of the years, or a single illness against the certainty of death, and does so without ever arguing the case. In language, the reduplicated words and the accumulation of scenes are the manner of the anonymous verse of the Han, and later imitations of it, from the poetry of the Six Dynasties down to the songs of the Tang, are variants on this manner. In feeling, the ending on the passing of cups is what gives the poem its peculiar calm; the poem is about death and ends with a drink, and the two facts are left side by side without comment. For a modern reader this is one of the most accessible of the old poems, because its way of feeling is our own.
这首《迢迢牵牛星》,是写景感怀之作,写迢迢牵牛星、粲粲黄姑女、耿耿遥相望之情,含蓄深婉。起「迢迢牵牛星,杳在河之阳。粲粲黄姑女,耿耿遥相望」——迢迢牵牛星(用牵牛星之典),杳在河之阳,粲粲黄姑女,耿耿遥相望。写迢迢牵牛星:迢迢牵牛星、杳在河之阳,粲粲黄姑女、耿耿遥相望——牵牛星杳在河阳、黄姑女遥相望;「鸎狂应有恨,蝶舞已无多。揖让月在手,动摇风满怀」——鸎狂应有恨,蝶舞已无多,揖让月在手,动摇风满怀。写鸎狂应有恨:鸎狂应有恨、蝶舞已无多,揖让月在手、动摇风满怀——鸎狂蝶舞、月在手风满怀;「病态如衰弱,厌厌向五年。衰颜一病难牵复,晓殿君临颇自羞」——病态如衰弱,厌厌向五年,衰颜一病难牵复,晓殿君临颇自羞。写病态如衰弱:病态如衰弱、厌厌向五年,衰颜一病难牵复、晓殿君临颇自羞——病态衰弱、厌厌五年、衰颜难牵复;「冷笑秦皇经远略,静怜姬满苦时巡」——冷笑秦皇经远略,静怜姬满(用周穆王姬满之典)苦时巡。写冷笑秦皇经远略:冷笑秦皇经远略、静怜姬满苦时巡——秦皇经远略、姬满苦时巡;「鬓从今日添新白,菊是去年依旧黄。万古到头归一死,醉乡葬地有高原」——鬓从今日添新白,菊是去年依旧黄,万古到头归一死,醉乡葬地有高原。写鬓从今日添新白:鬓从今日添新白、菊是去年依旧黄,万古到头归一死、醉乡葬地有高原——鬓添新白、菊依旧黄、万古归一死;「人生不满百,刚作千年画」——人生不满百(用古诗人生不满百之意),刚作千年画。写人生不满百:人生不满百、刚作千年画——人生不满百、刚作千年画;「日暎仙云薄,秋高天碧深。乌照始潜辉,龙烛便争秉」——日暎仙云薄,秋高天碧深,乌照始潜辉,龙烛便争秉。写日暎仙云薄:日暎仙云薄、秋高天碧深,乌照始潜辉、龙烛便争秉——仙云薄天碧深、乌照潜辉龙烛争秉;「凝珠满露枝,游飏日已西。肃穆寒初至,九重开扇鹄」——凝珠满露枝,游飏日已西,肃穆寒初至,九重开扇鹄。写凝珠满露枝:凝珠满露枝、游飏日已西,肃穆寒初至、九重开扇鹄——凝珠露枝、游飏日西、肃穆寒初至;「四牖炳灯鱼,羽觞无算酌。倾盌更为寿,深卮递酬宾」——四牖炳灯鱼,羽觞(用羽觞之典)无算酌,倾盌更为寿,深卮递酬宾。写深卮递酬宾:四牖炳灯鱼、羽觞无算酌,倾盌更为寿、深卮递酬宾——灯鱼羽觞、倾盌更寿、深卮递酬宾。这「倾盌更为寿,深卮递酬宾」,是全诗之结:以深卮递酬宾写其感怀。全诗含蓄深婉,以景写情,正是古诗中的名篇。
Prosody
Line by line
迢迢牵牛星,杳在河之阳。
Far away the Cowherd Star, hidden away on the north bank of the river.
迢迢牵牛星,杳在河之阳。
Far, far, the Herdsman star, dim on the far side of the River.
首二句写迢迢牵牛星,起笔即见其星。「迢迢牵牛星」写迢迢牵牛星,用牵牛星之典写迢迢牵牛星;「杳在河之阳」写杳在河之阳,「杳」写遥远、「在河之阳」写天河之北。两句一写迢迢牵牛星、一写杳在河之阳,以迢迢牵牛星写牵牛星远、以杳在河之阳写其在天河,写尽迢迢牵牛星、杳在河之阳之情。以星起兴,含蓄而清远,是「以星起兴」的妙笔。
The star. Far, far, the Herdsman star, dim on the far side of the River. The doubled far and the dim distance set the separation. To have named the distant star would be a naming; the far Herdsman dim on the far bank is the naming.
粲粲黄姑女,耿耿遥相望。
Bright, bright, the Weaving Girl, staring across the distance, unable to reach.
粲粲黄姑女,耿耿遥相望。
Bright, bright, the Yellow Maid; brightly, from afar, they gaze at each other.
此二句写粲粲黄姑女,是全诗写织女的关键。「粲粲黄姑女」写粲粲黄姑女,「粲粲」写明亮、「黄姑女」写织女;「耿耿遥相望」写耿耿遥相望,「耿耿」写明亮、「遥相望」写远远相望。两句一写粲粲黄姑女、一写耿耿遥相望,以粲粲黄姑女写织女粲粲、以耿耿遥相望写遥望,写尽粲粲黄姑女、耿耿遥相望之情。以女写望,含蓄而深婉,是「以女写望」的点睛之笔。
The maid. Bright, bright, the Yellow Maid; brightly, from afar, they gaze at each other. The bright maid against the distant mutual gaze is the mirrored pair. To have described the bright goddess gazing would be a picture; the dazzling Yellow Maid and the bright distant gazing are the picture.
鸎狂应有恨,蝶舞已无多。
The oriole is mad, and should surely have resentment; the butterflies that dance are already few.
鸎狂应有恨,蝶舞已无多。
The maddened oriole must hold grief; the butterfly's dancing days are few.
此二句写鸎狂应有恨,是全诗写其怅恨的关键。「鸎狂应有恨」写鸎狂应有恨,「鸎狂」写莺狂、「应有恨」写应有恨;「蝶舞已无多」写蝶舞已无多,「蝶舞」写蝶舞、「已无多」写已无多。两句一写鸎狂应有恨、一写蝶舞已无多,以鸎狂应有恨写莺应有恨、以蝶舞已无多写蝶无多,写尽鸎狂应有恨、蝶舞已无多之情。以物写怅,含蓄而深婉,是「以物写怅」的点睛之笔。
The birds and butterflies. The maddened oriole must hold grief; the butterfly's dancing days are few. The frantic bird's grief and the butterfly's brief dance are spring's short-lived pleasures. To have described the oriole and butterfly would be nature; the grief-maddened oriole and the few remaining butterflies are the nature.
万古到头归一死,醉乡葬地有高原。
To the end of all ages there comes one death; the burial ground of the drunkard's land has high plains.
万古到头归一死,醉乡葬地有高原。
Through all the ages, the end is one death; in the land of wine, burial ground has high plains.
此二句写万古到头归一死,是全诗写其感慨的关键。「万古到头归一死」写万古到头归一死,「万古到头」写万古到头、「归一死」写终归一死;「醉乡葬地有高原」写醉乡葬地有高原,「醉乡」写醉乡、「葬地有高原」写葬地有高原。两句一写万古到头归一死、一写醉乡葬地有高原,以万古到头归一死写终归一死、以醉乡葬地有高原写醉乡高原,写尽万古到头归一死、醉乡葬地有高原之情。以死写慨,含蓄而旷达,是「以死写慨」的点睛之笔。
The death. Through all the ages, the end is one death; in the land of wine, burial ground has high plains. The long view (all ages end in death) turns to the wine country's high burial ground. To have said all men die and drunks are buried on high ground would be a saying; the one death at the end of the ages and the high plains of the wine-land graveyard are the saying.
人生不满百,刚作千年画。
A man's life does not reach a hundred years, yet he paints a picture for a thousand.
人生不满百,刚作千年画。
Life does not last a hundred years, yet we make plans for a thousand.
此二句写人生不满百,是全诗以典写慨的关键。「人生不满百」写人生不满百,用古诗人生不满百之意写人生不满百;「刚作千年画」写刚作千年画,「刚作」写才作、「千年画」写千年之画。两句一写人生不满百、一写刚作千年画,以人生不满百写人寿不满百、以刚作千年画写刚作千年画,写尽人生不满百、刚作千年画之情。以典写慨,含蓄而旷达,是「以典写慨」的点睛之笔。
The plans. Life does not last a hundred years, yet we make plans for a thousand. The hundred-year life against the thousand-year plans is the poem's absurdity. To have said we overplan would be a saying; the under-a-hundred life against the just-made-thousand-year plan is the saying.
倾盌更为寿,深卮递酬宾。
Tilting the bowl to drink a further health; the deep cup passes from guest to guest.
倾盌更为寿,深卮递酬宾。
Tip the cup again for a toast to long life; deep goblets pass around the guests.
尾二句写深卮递酬宾,是全诗立意的落点。「倾盌更为寿」写倾盌更为寿,「倾盌」写倾杯、「更为寿」写更为寿;「深卮递酬宾」写深卮递酬宾,「深卮」写深杯、「递酬宾」写依次酬宾。两句一写倾盌更为寿、一写深卮递酬宾,以倾盌更为寿写举杯祝寿、以深卮递酬宾写酬宾,写尽倾盌更为寿、深卮递酬宾之情。以酒写慨,含蓄而旷达,是全诗最动人处,也是「以酒写慨」的点睛之笔。
The toast. Tip the cup again for a toast to long life; deep goblets pass around the guests. The drinking closes the poem: the guests toast one another. To have described a toast would be a toast; the tipped cup for long life and the deep goblets passed among the guests are the toast.
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Yan Shu's《Xiao Huan Sha》is famous for the line "The flowers fall as they will, and there is nothing to be done; the swallows return as though they had known me," which is song-writing about the passing of time and the comfort of an almost-return. This old poem says instead that a hundred years is a man's limit and yet he paints for a thousand, and that all ages end in the same death. The two write of the same helplessness from opposite directions: Yan Shu finds a small consolation in what repeats, the old poem finds none. Read together, the two show both hands of Chinese poetry at the same problem.
晏殊《浣溪沙·一曲新词酒一杯》「无可奈何花落去,似曾相识燕归来」,写感怀写景,是宋词小令的名篇;《迢迢牵牛星》则以「人生不满百,刚作千年画」「万古到头归一死,醉乡葬地有高原」写人生不满百、万古归一死。两诗同写感怀写景、无可奈何:一写无可奈何花落去、以花落燕归写惜时,一写人生不满百刚作千年画、以不满百写人生;一为晏殊之温润、一为古诗之深婉,并读正可见诗写「感怀无可奈何」的两种笔法,皆于感怀之中见无可奈何。
虞美人·春花秋月何时了 The Beautiful Lady Yu · When will spring flowers and autumn moon be over (虞美人·春花秋月何时了) 李煜 · 同写遥望感怀、此恨难消,一写问君能有几多愁恰似一江春水向东流、一写粲粲黄姑女耿耿遥相望,皆于遥望之中见此恨难消 Both write of looking across and of a regret that cannot be dispelled; one answers the question of how much愁 there is with the river of spring water, the other with a look across the river.Li Yu's《Beautiful Lady Yu》asks "Once you asked me how much sorrow there is; I answer, it is like a river of spring water flowing east," and the whole song is a regret that a nation was lost and that the past will not return. This old poem has the same unresolvable grief, though its image of looking is the fixed stare across the celestial river rather than a flood of water. Where Li Yu's song is passionate and his own, the old poem's is plain; where Li Yu's regret is for a country, the old poem's is for a life. Read together, the two show both ways of writing a regret that will not end.
李煜《虞美人·春花秋月何时了》「问君能有几多愁,恰似一江春水向东流」,写遥望感怀、此恨难消,是写愁的千古名篇;《迢迢牵牛星》则以「粲粲黄姑女,耿耿遥相望」「鸎狂应有恨,蝶舞已无多」写黄姑女遥相望、鸎狂应有恨。两诗同写遥望感怀、此恨难消:一写问君能有几多愁恰似一江春水向东流、以春水写愁,一写粲粲黄姑女耿耿遥相望、以遥望写恨;一为李煜之悲、一为古诗之深婉,并读正可见诗写「遥望此恨」的两种笔法,皆于遥望之中见此恨难消。