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江畔独步寻花·其五

Along the River, Strolling Alone in Search of Flowers · Five

杜甫

Du Fu

春景Spring Scenery 赏花Flower Viewing

黄师塔前江水东,春光懒困倚微风。
桃花一簇开无主,可爱深红爱浅红?

The river runs east before the pagoda of the master Huang;
The spring, drowsy and faint, leans on a soft breeze.
A single cluster of peaches opens with nobody to own it;
Which is lovelier, the deep red or the pale red?
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Meaning

At the pagoda of the monk Huang by the river, Du Fu leans in the mild wind and finds a cluster of peach blossoms growing by the roadside with no owner. The question he puts to them, whether the deep red or the pale red is the lovelier, turns the flowers into the only company he has and turns his own preference into something the reader must answer. Beneath the lightness is Du Fu's standing habit of noticing what no one has claimed.

黄师塔前江水东,春光懒困倚微风。桃花一簇开无主,可爱深红爱浅红?

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] Beside the pagoda the river runs east; the spring, heavy and faint, leans on a gentle wind. A cluster of peach flowers has opened by the path with no one to care for it, and the poet asks which shade he should love, the deep red or the pale one. [Structure] The couplets are placed out of order: the opening line gives the place, the second line gives the poet's condition, and only then do the flowers appear. The question at the end reorders everything and puts the reader in the poet's place. [Imagery] Two colours are set against each other, and the choice between them is left open. The drowsiness of the spring and the leaning posture of the poet are the same posture, which lets the landscape carry the mood without a word of it. [Sentiment] Du Fu spends a lifetime writing about things no one else owns; here the ownerless peaches are less a complaint than an invitation, since the absence of an owner is exactly what makes them free to be looked at.

【白话串讲】 杜甫写《江畔独步寻花·其五》:“黄师塔前江水东,春光懒困倚微风”——“桃花一簇开无主,可爱深红爱浅红”——江畔一簇桃花没人管——你喜欢深红还是浅红——他写春光。 【意象与手法】 此诗写寻花,以赏花写春光,是杜甫的名篇。前二句写春光:「黄师塔前江水东,春光懒困倚微风」写黄师塔前江水东、春光懒困倚微风——写尽春光的懒困;后二句写桃花:「桃花一簇开无主,可爱深红爱浅红」写桃花一簇开无主、可爱深红爱浅红——写尽桃花的娇艳。全诗以赏花写春光,写尽春光的懒困与桃花的娇艳,是杜甫的代表作。 【情感与主旨】 此诗写寻花,以赏花写春光,是杜甫的名篇。此诗为杜甫《江畔独步寻花》七绝组诗之五,写江畔独步寻花所见。杜甫在成都浣花溪畔定居时,春暖花开,独自漫步江畔,寻花赏花,作此组诗。此诗写春光:黄师塔前江水东,春光懒困倚微风——写黄师塔前江水东、春光懒困倚微风,写尽春光的懒困;桃花一簇开无主,可爱深红爱浅红——写桃花一簇开无主、可爱深红爱浅红,写尽桃花的娇艳。全诗以赏花写春光——那「春光懒困倚微风」写尽春光的懒困,「可爱深红爱浅红」写尽桃花的娇艳,写尽春光的懒困与桃花的娇艳,是理解杜甫赏花诗的重要篇章。 【名句点睛】 常考「黄师塔前江水东,春光懒困倚微风」写春光的懒困;「桃花一簇开无主,可爱深红爱浅红」写桃花的娇艳;以及全诗以赏花写春光、以问答写娇艳的手法。

Background

The set of poems on strolling along the river in search of flowers was written by Du Fu (712-770) in the early 760s, during the years he spent near Chengdu under the protection of local patrons. The fifth of the group is the shortest and the brightest, and it is usually read as the poem in which the flowers become, briefly, his only companion. Du Fu's later reputation rests on poems of war and suffering, and these flower verses are frequently quoted to show how far his observation could wander into plain delight.

此诗写寻花,以赏花写春光,是杜甫的名篇。杜甫(712—770),字子美,自号少陵野老,巩县(今河南巩义)人,唐代诗人,被尊为「诗圣」。此诗为杜甫《江畔独步寻花》七绝组诗之五,写江畔独步寻花所见。杜甫在成都浣花溪畔定居时,春暖花开,独自漫步江畔,寻花赏花,作此组诗。黄师塔在成都附近江畔。此诗写春光:「黄师塔前江水东,春光懒困倚微风」写黄师塔前江水东、春光懒困倚微风——写尽春光的懒困(黄师塔前江水东,春光懒困倚微风);「桃花一簇开无主,可爱深红爱浅红」写桃花一簇开无主、可爱深红爱浅红——写尽桃花的娇艳(桃花一簇开无主,可爱深红爱浅红)。全诗以赏花写春光,写尽春光的懒困与桃花的娇艳,是理解杜甫赏花诗的重要篇章。此诗写于杜甫寓居成都时期。唐肃宗上元元年(760)至宝应元年(762),杜甫在成都浣花溪畔营建草堂定居,生活稍安,春日出游,独步江畔寻花,作《江畔独步寻花》七绝组诗七首。黄师塔为成都附近僧人之塔,江水即锦江。此诗写于安史之乱后,杜甫于乱世中得此片刻的安宁与闲情,正见其「暂时相见还离别」中难得的开怀。

Art

The poem turns on a single untranslatable question. 'Ai,' to love, opens and closes the last line, so the sentence seems to be about preference rather than about the flowers, and the poet is caught choosing between his own colours in front of us. The word for drowsy and faint gives the whole scene an unpunctuated languor, and the verb 'leaning' quietly shares the poet's position. The peach cluster has no owner, which is the poem's real subject: it is public property, and so his to look at. The rhyme on the 'ong' sound holds the two halves together without effort, and the four-line frame is short enough that the question has no room to be answered.

此诗的艺术特色可从四个方面解析。其一,以地点写寻花。「黄师塔前江水东」以地点写寻花——那「塔前」「江水东」写尽寻花的地点,以地点写尽江畔的春光。其二,以拟人写春光。「春光懒困倚微风」以拟人写春光——那「懒困」「倚微风」写尽春光的慵懒,以拟人写尽春光的懒困。其三,以白描写桃花。「桃花一簇开无主」以白描写桃花——那「一簇」「开无主」写尽桃花的簇开,以白描写尽桃花的无主。其四,以问答写娇艳。「可爱深红爱浅红」以问答写娇艳——那「深红」「浅红」写尽红艳的层次,以问答写尽桃花的娇艳。此外,此诗前二句写春光的懒困,后二句写桃花的娇艳,由景及花,正是赏花诗「即景赏花」的写法。四重手法,使此诗以赏花写春光,写尽春光的懒困与桃花的娇艳,是杜甫的代表作。此诗还善于以「开无主」三字写野桃的天然——那桃花开而无主,正是不必待主人的野趣,一个「无主」写尽江畔野桃的自在,也暗含杜甫自身漂泊无定的身世之感。又善以「可爱深红爱浅红」的复沓写爱花之痴——深红可爱,浅红亦可爱,两个「爱」字写尽爱花的无从抉择,正见其「颠狂」的爱花之情。

Allusions

The pagoda of the master Huang is a landmark of that stretch of river bank and nothing more; the poet cites it as he would cite any local feature. The peaches are unremarkable, and their ownerlessness is the only remark made about them. The broader reference is to the tradition of the flower that blooms for no one, a figure that recurs in Chinese verse whenever a poet wants to describe his own situation without claiming pity. The final question form goes back to the classical habit of ending a poem by asking the flowers, the moon, or the wind, which answers rather than concludes.

此诗的用语深植于春光与赏花的传统。「黄师塔」令人想到「黄师塔」写僧塔的意象——黄师为僧人,塔为其墓塔,也令人想到「南朝四百八十寺」的意象;「春光懒困」令人想到「春光懒困」写春光的意象——也令人想到「春眠不觉晓」(孟浩然)的意象;「桃花」令人想到「桃花」写桃花的意象——《诗经》「桃之夭夭,灼灼其华」,也令人想到「人面桃花相映红」(崔护)的意象;「深红浅红」令人想到「深红浅红」写花色的意象——也令人想到「绿肥红瘦」(李清照)的意象;「无主」令人想到「无主」写无主的意象——也令人想到「寂寞开无主」(陆游)的意象。全诗化用黄师塔、春光懒困、桃花、深红浅红的意象,以赏花写春光,正是杜甫「诗史」之外亦工写景、承赏花传统写春光本领。「黄师塔」为僧人墓塔,杜甫以塔前江水东写入诗,正是蜀中常见的佛塔与锦江之景,正见其写实的笔触。又「深红浅红」写桃花之色,暗合《诗经·周南·桃夭》「桃之夭夭,灼灼其华」咏桃的传统,而以「可爱……爱……」的问答句式写爱花之情,正是民歌式的写法,正见杜甫绝句的民歌风味。

Commentary

Commentators have long noted how little happens in these four lines, and how much the little carries. The favourite observation is the repetition of the word 'love' in a question about colour, which turns aesthetic taste into a small public act. The poem is also prized for its deftness of feeling: the drowsy spring and the leaning poet seem to be the same thing, so that by the last line the flowers are less separate from the poet than beside him. Its popularity in anthologies rests on that quiet trick.

此诗历来被推为杜甫赏花诗的名篇,也是《江畔独步寻花》组诗的代表。历代论者对此诗评价极高:清人评此诗「以赏花写春光,自在天然」;近人更指出「可爱深红爱浅红」写桃花的娇艳,是此诗的名句。在诗歌史上,此诗的特殊价值在于:它以四句的绝句写尽春光的懒困与桃花的娇艳——那黄师塔,那江水,那春光,那微风,那桃花,那一簇,那深红,那浅红,都写尽了杜甫笔下的江畔;那「可爱深红爱浅红」更以问答写尽桃花的娇艳。此诗与杜甫《江畔独步寻花》组诗之六(「黄四娘家花满蹊」)同为寻花名篇,一写「千朵万朵压枝低」的黄四娘家(其六),一写「可爱深红爱浅红」的黄师塔前(其五);又与杜牧「霜叶红于二月花」、杨万里「映日荷花别样红」的写色传统一脉相承,可见中国诗写花色的传统。对于今日读者,此诗是理解杜甫赏花诗的窗口,也是中国诗写桃花的经典——那深红浅红的桃花,穿越千年,仍在诉说着春光的懒困。

Prosody

Form Seven-character quatrain (qiyan jueju)诗·七言绝句
Rhyme Rhymes on the upper ping sheng of the 'ong' and 'eng' group throughout: 'feng' (breeze) and 'hong' (red).七绝,押「风」「红」韵(上平一东),一韵到底,音节轻快
Tone pattern A seven-character quatrain, even rhymes held to the close, in a soft, unhurried voice.此诗为七言绝句,押平声韵,一韵到底,音节轻快,正合赏花的轻快。
Reading note Four lines rhyming on the rounded -ong sound, which suits the drowsiness of the afternoon; there is no contrast of rhymes and nothing to push the line along, so the verse acquires a slow, leaning cadence of its own. The caesura falls late in each line, after the fourth character, which leaves the last three words to hang, and that hanging is exactly right for a question about colour. Du Fu's flower quatrains are usually read aloud quietly, and this one rewards the reading.此诗为七言绝句,四句——「黄师塔前江水东,春光懒困倚微风。桃花一簇开无主,可爱深红爱浅红」,押「东」韵(风、红),一韵到底,音节轻快。全诗以赏花写春光:前二句写春光的懒困(黄师塔前江水东、春光懒困倚微风),后二句写桃花的娇艳(桃花一簇开无主、可爱深红爱浅红)。四句短章,前写春光,后写桃花,以「可爱深红爱浅红」写尽桃花的娇艳,正见杜甫「沉郁」之外亦有轻快之本色。诵读此诗,宜以轻快的语调读「春光懒困倚微风」的春光,以欢快的语调读「可爱深红爱浅红」的桃花,结句要读得轻快而有余韵,方能传达出杜甫的爱花之情。杜甫绝句以「沉郁顿挫」著称,此诗正是其赏花绝句的典范。

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桃花一簇开无主,可爱深红爱浅红

A single cluster of peaches opens with nobody to own it; which is lovelier, the deep red or the pale red?

桃花一簇开无主,可爱深红爱浅红。

A cluster of peach flowers blooms, unowned; do you love the deep red, or the light red?

此二句是全诗写桃花的核心,以桃花一簇开无主写桃花,以可爱深红爱浅红写红艳,写尽桃花的娇艳,是千古名句。「桃花一簇开无主」写桃花一簇开无主——那「桃花一簇」写桃花一簇,「开无主」写开无主,写尽桃花的簇开;「可爱深红爱浅红」写可爱深红爱浅红——那「深红」「浅红」写深红浅红,「可爱……爱」写爱深爱浅,写尽桃花的红艳。这句的深意在于:它以「桃花一簇开无主」的桃花与「可爱深红爱浅红」的红艳,写尽桃花的娇艳——桃花一簇开无主,那「桃花一簇开无主」写尽桃花的簇开——一簇桃花,开而无主,正是江畔野桃的写照,那「开无主」写尽桃花的天然;可爱深红爱浅红,那「可爱深红爱浅红」写尽桃花的红艳——深红可爱,浅红可爱,正是赏花的写照,那「爱深红爱浅红」写尽桃花的娇艳;那「桃花一簇开无主」写尽桃花的簇开,那「可爱深红爱浅红」写尽桃花的红艳,一写花,一写色,写尽桃花的娇艳——无主桃花与深红浅红,正是江畔寻花的写照;此二句以桃花、红艳写尽桃花的娇艳,也让此二句成为全诗写桃花的核心与千古名句。若换作直说「桃花很美」,则失其情趣;唯以「桃花一簇开无主」写桃花、「可爱深红爱浅红」写红艳,写尽桃花的娇艳,也让此二句成为全诗写桃花的核心。

The peach. A cluster of peach flowers blooms, unowned; do you love the deep red, or the light red? The unowned cluster and the deep-or-light question are the playful choice. To have described the peach flowers would be a scene; the cluster-of-unowned-peach-blossoms against the do-you-love-deep-red-or-light-red is the scene.

黄师塔前江水东,春光懒困倚微风

The river runs east before the pagoda of the master Huang; the spring, drowsy and faint, leans on a soft breeze.

黄师塔前江水东,春光懒困倚微风。

Before the Huangshi Pagoda the river flows east; spring light is lazy and drowsy, leaning on the gentle breeze.

此二句是全诗写春光的核心,以黄师塔前江水东写江水,以春光懒困倚微风写春光,写尽春光的懒困,是千古名句。「黄师塔前江水东」写黄师塔前江水东——那「黄师塔前」写黄师塔前,「江水东」写江水东,写尽塔前的江水;「春光懒困倚微风」写春光懒困倚微风——那「春光懒困」写春光懒困,「倚微风」写倚微风,写尽春光的慵懒。这句的深意在于:它以「黄师塔前江水东」的江水与「春光懒困倚微风」的春光,写尽春光的懒困——黄师塔前江水东,那「黄师塔前江水东」写尽塔前的江水——黄师塔前,江水东流,正是江畔的写照,那「江水东」写尽江畔的开阔;春光懒困倚微风,那「春光懒困倚微风」写尽春光的慵懒——春光懒困,倚着微风,正是春日困倦的写照,那「懒困」写尽春光的慵懒;那「黄师塔前江水东」写尽塔前的江水,那「春光懒困倚微风」写尽春光的慵懒,一写江,一写光,写尽春光的懒困——塔前江水与懒困春光,正是寻花时的写照;此二句以江水、春光写尽春光的懒困,也为后二句的桃花作铺垫,也让此二句成为全诗写春光的核心与千古名句。若换作直说「春天很暖和很困」,则失其画面;唯以「黄师塔前江水东」写江水、「春光懒困倚微风」写春光,写尽春光的懒困,也让此二句成为全诗写春光的核心。

The drowsiness. Before the Huangshi Pagoda the river flows east; spring light is lazy and drowsy, leaning on the gentle breeze. The pagoda, the east-flowing river, and the lazy spring leaning on the breeze are the mood. To have described the riverside spring would be scenery; the before-the-Huangshi-Pagoda-river-east against the lazy-drowsy-spring-light-leaning-on-the-breeze is the scenery.

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懒困 'Lan kun,' drowsy and faint. Not sleep exactly, but the hour when nothing asks to be done; it belongs to the poet as much as to the afternoon, and it is what licenses his leaning. 「春光懒困倚微风」之「懒困」是写春光的关键词,一个「懒困」写尽春光的慵懒。懒困者,慵懒困倦也。杜甫以「春光懒困倚微风」写春光,这个「懒困」至少有双重意味:其一,写春之困——那「春光懒困倚微风」写春光懒困倚微风,那「懒困」写尽春日的困倦——春光懒困,正是春日暖融的写照,那「懒困」写尽春光的慵懒;其二,写人之倦——那「懒困」更是写人——懒困,正见赏花人的倦怠,那「懒困」写尽赏花的自在。以「懒困」写春光,正是杜甫写赏花的枢纽——若换作「困倦」「慵懒」等词,则或失其与「春光」「倚微风」的配合,或失其写懒困的意味;唯「懒困」二字,以春光懒困倚微风写尽春日的困倦与赏花的自在,与「黄师塔前江水东」的江水相合,写尽春光的懒困,也让「春光懒困倚微风」成为全诗写春光的名句。
可爱 'Ke ai,' lovable, delightful. Twice in the closing line, once as a question to the flowers and once as the act of loving them, so the poet is caught in his own feeling rather than observing it from outside. 「可爱深红爱浅红」之「可爱」是写娇艳的关键词,一个「可爱」写尽桃花的娇艳。可爱者,令人喜爱也。杜甫以「可爱深红爱浅红」写桃花,这个「可爱」至少有双重意味:其一,写红之爱——那「可爱深红爱浅红」写可爱深红爱浅红,那「可爱」写尽对桃红的喜爱——深红可爱,浅红亦可爱,正是赏花的写照,那「可爱」写尽桃花的娇艳;其二,写情之痴——那「可爱」更是写痴——可爱,正见爱花的痴情,那「可爱」写尽杜甫的爱花。以「可爱」写桃花,正是杜甫写赏花的枢纽——若换作「堪爱」「可喜」等词,则或失其与「深红」「浅红」的配合,或失其写可爱的意味;唯「可爱」二字,以可爱深红爱浅红写尽对桃红的喜爱与爱花的痴情,与「桃花一簇开无主」的无主相合,写尽桃花的娇艳,也让「可爱深红爱浅红」成为全诗写娇艳的名句。

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杜甫《江畔独步寻花·其六》「黄四娘家花满蹊,千朵万朵压枝低。留连戏蝶时时舞,自在娇莺恰恰啼」写寻花,是杜甫的名篇。此诗《江畔独步寻花·其五》则「可爱深红爱浅红」写寻花。同为寻花组诗,一写「千朵万朵压枝低」的黄四娘家(其六),一写「可爱深红爱浅红」的黄师塔前(其五);一写繁花,一写桃花。两诗对读,可见杜甫寻花组诗的全貌。

题都城南庄 Courtyard South of the Capital 崔护 · 同写桃花,一人面一深红 Both poems are built on peach blossoms, one asking which red is lovelier, one asking where the face has gone.

Cui Hu came to the same south courtyard in a later year, saw the peach still blooming where a face had vanished, and wrote that the blossoms were smiling in the wind as before. Du Fu, years earlier and in a different city, looked at an ownerless cluster and asked only which colour to love. The two share the peach and the presumption that the flower will outlast the encounter; only Cui Hu needs the second visit to find out.

崔护《题都城南庄》「去年今日此门中,人面桃花相映红。人面不知何处去,桃花依旧笑春风」写桃花,是崔护的名篇。此诗《江畔独步寻花·其五》则「可爱深红爱浅红」写桃花。同为写桃花,一写「人面桃花相映红」的相映(题都城南庄),一写「可爱深红爱浅红」的深浅(寻花其五);一写情缘,一写赏色。两诗对读,可见唐人写桃花的两种面貌。