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钓台题壁

Inscribed on the Wall at the Angler's Terrace

郁达夫

Yu Dafu

不是尊前爱惜身,佯狂难免假成真。
曾因酒醉鞭名马,生怕情多累美人。
劫数东南天作孽,鸡鸣风雨海扬尘。
悲歌痛哭终何补,义士纷纷说帝秦。

It is not that I treasure my life before the wine cup;
but feigned madness, hard to avoid, turns false into true.
Once, drunk, I whipped a famous steed; I dreaded lest too much passion weary my beauty.
A calamity besets the southeast—Heaven itself works the evil;
in cock-crow wind and rain the sea raises its dust.
What use in the end are sad songs and bitter weeping?
The righteous gentlemen buzz, one and all, of submitting to Qin.
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Meaning

Written on the wall of Yan Ziling's Angler's Terrace, the poem is Yu Dafu's self-mocking confession of a dissolute, 'feigned-mad' life, which darkens into national grief as Japan's threat looms. It moves from personal indulgence to angry satire of intellectuals who debate capitulating to the enemy, blending the bohemian's recklessness with the patriot's despair.

我并非在酒樽之前爱惜此身,佯狂之态久了,难免假戏成真。曾因酒醉而鞭打名马,又生怕用情太深而牵累了美人。劫数降临东南,真是天降大祸;鸡鸣风雨之中,四海掀起烟尘。悲歌痛哭,到头来又有什么补救?只见义士们纷纷谈论着「帝秦」之事。

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] The poet says he is not protecting himself at the wine table; his pretended madness has become real. Drunk, he once whipped a fine horse and feared his passion would burden his lover. Then the southeast faces catastrophe, wind and rain at cock-crow stir the sea's dust; song and tears help nothing, while 'righteous men' talk of bowing to Qin. [Structure] A seven-character regulated octave: couplets one–two are personal self-mockery, three turns to the national crisis, four delivers satirical outrage. [Imagery] 'Whip the famous steed' and 'weary my beauty' crystallize the romantic bohemian; 'cock-crow wind and rain' and 'sea raising dust' paint a stricken land. [Tone] Shifts from wry self-deprecation to cold fury, the signature arc of Yu Dafu's verse.

【白话串讲】 郁达夫写《钓台题壁》:“不是尊前爱惜身,佯狂难免假成真”——“曾因酒醉鞭名马,生怕情多累美人”——“劫数东南天作孽,鸡鸣风雨海扬尘”——“悲歌痛哭终何补,义士纷纷说帝秦”——他题于钓台——曾因酒醉鞭名马。 【意象与手法】 “曾因酒醉鞭名马,生怕情多累美人”以自嘲写放浪生涯;“劫数东南天作孽,鸡鸣风雨海扬尘”以风雨扬尘写时局;“悲歌痛哭终何补,义士纷纷说帝秦”以“说帝秦”典刺时人趋附。以自嘲之笔写名士的佯狂、多情与国难当前的悲愤。 【情感与主旨】 郁达夫游严子陵钓台题壁之作,自嘲之中见忧国、放浪之中藏深悲,是郁达夫诗中最见性情的一首,体现其多情与爱国交织的名士气质。 【名句点睛】 常考“曾因酒醉鞭名马,生怕情多累美人”以鞭名马累美人写自嘲放浪;“悲歌痛哭终何补,义士纷纷说帝秦”以说帝秦刺时人趋附。

Background

Yu Dafu (1896–1945), from Fuyang, Zhejiang, was a prominent modern novelist, essayist, and poet, and a leading member of the Creation Society. His style is limpid yet melancholy, blending late-Tang delicacy with the defiant ease of a literary bohemian. This poem was inscribed around 1931 during a visit to Yan Ziling's Angler's Terrace on the Fuchun River near Hangzhou. Yan Ziling, a sage of the Eastern Han, had refused office to fish in retirement, making the terrace a symbol of lofty withdrawal. Yu Dafu, however, wrote not of retirement but of personal dissolution and national crisis on the eve of the September 18th Incident, as Japanese encroachment intensified.

此诗为郁达夫于1931年前后游杭州富春江严子陵钓台时题壁之作。郁达夫(1896—1945),浙江富阳人,现代著名小说家、散文家、诗人,创造社主要成员。其诗清丽沉郁,兼有晚唐的悱恻与名士的疏狂。此诗写于日本侵华加剧、「九一八」事变前夕,国家危亡之秋,诗人游钓台而触景生情。钓台为东汉严子陵隐居垂钓之处,严光不慕富贵、辞官归隐,历来是高士风范的象征。郁达夫题壁于此,却并不写隐逸之乐,而以自嘲的口吻写自己「不是尊前爱惜身」的放浪、「佯狂难免假成真」的沉沦,又于「劫数东南天作孽,鸡鸣风雨海扬尘」中见出国难日亟的忧愤,末句「义士纷纷说帝秦」更直刺时局,暗讽当时一部分士人屈膝事敌、为虎作伥的丑态。全诗由个人之自嘲转入国家之悲愤,放浪形骸与忧国忧民交织,正是郁达夫那一代知识分子「生于忧患」的精神写照,也是其在民族危亡之际思想趋于激进的先声。

Art

The poem weaves two strands—self-mockery and satirical indictment—so that dissipation and despair amplify each other. The opening couplet defends and mocks at once: 'not that I treasure my life' is a disclaimer, 'feigned madness turns false to true' a self-lacerating confession that performance has become reality. The famous second couplet, 'drunk I whipped a famous steed; I dreaded lest too much passion weary my beauty,' pairs reckless virility with tender anxiety in a flawless antithesis. The third couplet pivots sharply from self to state: 'calamity in the southeast, Heaven works the evil' and 'cock-crow wind and rain, the sea raises dust' adapt the Shi Jing mood of 'wind and rain at cock-crow' to a vision of a toppling world, the tone turning from playful to desolate. The closing couplet lands the blade—'sad songs and tears, what use in the end?'—then 'the righteous gentlemen buzz of submitting to Qin,' coldly mocking those who theorize surrender. The whole advances from person to nation, from jest to verdict.

此诗艺术上以「自嘲」与「讽世」双线交织,于放浪之中见沉痛,于谐谑之中见锋芒。首联「不是尊前爱惜身,佯狂难免假成真」,以辩白起笔——「不是爱惜身」是自辩,「佯狂难免假成真」是自嘲,把放浪形骸的生涯说成是「佯狂」的表演,而表演久了竟至于弄假成真,语含自伤,颇为复杂。颔联「曾因酒醉鞭名马,生怕情多累美人」,是流传甚广的名句,「鞭名马」「累美人」写尽名士的狂放与多情,对仗工整,风流自赏,而「生怕」二字又透出几分真情的顾惜与无奈。颈联笔锋陡转,由个人切入国难:「劫数东南天作孽,鸡鸣风雨海扬尘」,以「劫数」「作孽」写东南时局之危,以「鸡鸣风雨」化用《诗经》「风雨如晦,鸡鸣不已」与「风潇潇兮易水寒」的意境,写尽山河板荡、风云变色的景象,气象由婉转转苍凉。尾联「悲歌痛哭终何补,义士纷纷说帝秦」,以「终何补」的疑问写尽无力回天的悲愤,又以「说帝秦」的典故冷嘲那些摇唇鼓舌、议论附敌的「义士」,讥刺入骨。全诗由个人到国家、由自嘲到讽世,层层推进,放浪之笔与沉痛之情相激相荡,是郁达夫诗风最典型的呈现。

Allusions

Several allusions deepen the satire. 'Feigned madness' (yang kuang) recalls the Chu madman Jie Yu who sang past Confucius to avoid the world—Yu Dafu casts himself as a madman whose madness is half-acted, half-real. 'Whip a famous steed' echoes the bravado of the martial boast 'better be a captain of a hundred than a mere scholar.' 'Cock-crow wind and rain' adapts the Shi Jing line 'wind and rain, dark at cock-crow,' originally steadfastness in turmoil, here the nation's upheaval; 'sea raising dust' invokes the Liexian Zhuan image of the sea thrice becoming mulberry fields, signalling vast change. The climactic 'submitting to Qin' reverses the Warring-States tale of Lu Zhonglian, who argued Zhao should never bow to Qin—Yu Dafu inverts that noble refusal, using 'the righteous gentlemen talk of submitting to Qin' to flay those who now counsel capitulation. The classical loftiness thus throws the present degradation into harsh relief.

此诗用典精切而含意深远。「佯狂」暗用《论语》所载楚狂接舆「凤兮凤兮」歌而过孔子之典,接舆佯狂避世,历来是狂士的象征,郁达夫以之自况,写其以狂态避世、实则心有所忧的处境;「鞭名马」暗含「名马」之典与「宁为百夫长,胜作一书生」一类豪语的反衬,以鞭打名马写狂士的放诞不羁;「累美人」则暗合「红颜祸水」的反语与李商隐「任是无情也动人」一类怜香惜玉的情怀,写其多情而自伤。「鸡鸣风雨」化用《诗经·郑风·风雨》「风雨如晦,鸡鸣不已」之句,本写乱世中君子不改其操,此处却用以写时局的动荡与士人的坚持,恰与「海扬尘」相配——「扬尘」暗用《神仙传》「东海三为桑田」的沧海桑田之变,写世事变幻如海尘飞扬。「说帝秦」用战国鲁仲连义不帝秦之典——鲁仲连游说赵国,力主抗秦而不向强秦称臣,义不帝秦传为千古美谈;郁达夫此处反其意而用之,以「义士纷纷说帝秦」冷讽当时那些高谈阔论、却纷纷准备屈膝事敌的「义士」,以古人之高义反照今人之卑污,讽刺之意,辛辣入骨。全诗用典皆切合题旨与身世,古典的高义与近世的沉沦相映成趣,正是郁达夫腹笥渊博、善用典故的体现。

Commentary

The poem's power is the mask it slowly removes. On the surface it is a bohemian's self-mockery—wasting the body, drinking, whipping steeds, wearying beauties, playing the madman. Yet beneath lies an anxious, aching heart. 'Not that I treasure my life' clears him of hedonism; 'feigned madness turns false to true' confesses a man no longer sure whether he acts or merely performs. Only at the third couplet does the national storm break, revealing that this 'madman' never stopped fearing for his crumbling country. The last couplet is the bitterest: song and tears cannot save the state, and the very 'righteous men' debate submission. Yu Dafu here captures his generation's paralysis—unable to be wholly wild, unable to save the world, condemned to watch between feigned madness and helpless tears. This 'warm heart, cold eye' complexity is why the poem endures.

读此诗,最值得注意的是它层层剥开的「面具」。表面上是名士的自嘲——不珍惜身体,纵酒狂歌,鞭名马,累美人,佯狂度日;但细读之下,这放浪形骸的背后,是一颗怎样焦灼而痛苦的心!「不是尊前爱惜身」,先把自己撇清:我的放纵不是贪图享乐;「佯狂难免假成真」,再自剖一层:狂是装的,可装久了连自己也信了。这两句的自嘲,其实是一个清醒者的自我怀疑——他在问自己,这佯狂的生活,究竟是避世的姿态,还是真的沉沦?到了颈联,「劫数东南天作孽,鸡鸣风雨海扬尘」,国家危亡的阴云忽然罩下,我们才明白这位「名士」的心里,从来就没有放下过这个风雨飘摇的国。而尾联「悲歌痛哭终何补,义士纷纷说帝秦」最是沉痛:悲歌痛哭救不了国,而那些口口声声的「义士」,竟在纷纷议论着向强敌俯首称臣。这一句,既是讥刺,也是悲凉——当国土将沉之时,连「义」都被拿来作附敌的谈资,一个清醒者又能做什么呢?郁达夫此诗,写尽了那一代知识分子在国难面前的矛盾与无力:既不能真的狂放,又不能真的救世,只能在「佯狂」与「痛哭」之间,做一个清醒而痛苦的旁观者。这种「热肠冷眼」的复杂情味,正是此诗历久弥新的原因。

Prosody

Form Seven-character regulated octave (qilü), oblique-register opening七言律诗(仄起式)
Rhyme Level-tone rhyme throughout on 'shen' (身), 'zhen' (真), 'ren' (人), 'chen' (尘), 'qin' (秦), in the Zhen/Wen classes, a single sustained rhyme whose clarity gradually darkens from personal confession to national satire.此诗押平声韵,韵脚为「身」「真」「人」「尘」「秦」,属下平十一真、十二文韵部,一韵到底,声调清朗低回。「身」「真」写自辩与自嘲,「人」写美人,「尘」写海扬尘,「秦」写帝秦之讽,五韵由个人写到国家、由自嘲写到讽世,声调在清朗中渐趋沉郁,正合全诗由放浪转忧愤的情绪轨迹。平韵的一韵到底,使全诗在声音上首尾相贯、一气流转,恰宜承载这种「一吐为快」的复杂心绪。
Tone pattern The first couplet's balanced oblique-level rhythm gives a measured, self-mocking cadence; the second's tight antithesis flows with rueful elegance; the third breaks into grander, desolate music; the fourth closes in somber, questioning tones. The regulated form's disciplined surface holds the turbulent feeling in tension.句式上,首联「不是尊前爱惜身,佯狂难免假成真」平仄相间、对仗工整,声调平稳中见顿挫;颔联「曾因酒醉鞭名马,生怕情多累美人」复以工对推进,音节流转,风流自赏;颈联「劫数东南天作孽,鸡鸣风雨海扬尘」忽转雄放,声调由低回转苍凉;尾联「悲歌痛哭终何补,义士纷纷说帝秦」以问句与讽语收束,声调复归沉郁。全诗对句工整、气势跌宕,仄平交替与情绪的起伏相谐,是律诗中声情并茂之作。
Reading note A seven-character octave risks stiffness, yet here the strict metre carries both bohemian abandon and patriotic grief with ease. Success lies in: flawless antithesis that never feels brittle ('whip the steed' / 'weary the beauty'); the double movement of self-mockery and satire; and the living reuse of 'submit to Qin' against its noble original. The result is quintessential Yu Dafu—limpid yet melancholy, dissolute yet deeply sorrowful.七言律诗,最忌堆砌与板滞,而此诗却以律体的整饬承载名士的狂放与忧国的沉痛,游刃有余。其成功之处有三:一是对仗的工整与情感的放纵并行不悖——「鞭名马」「累美人」等联,对得极工,却毫不板滞,反以工对衬托出性情的放逸,可见郁达夫驾驭格律的功力;二是「自嘲—讽世」的双线结构,使全诗在放浪与沉痛之间往复,既有名士的风流,又有志士的悲愤,层次丰富;三是典故的活用,「说帝秦」一反鲁仲连义不帝秦的本意,以古喻今、以正衬邪,使讽刺更有力度。就整体而言,此诗是郁达夫诗风的集中体现:清丽中见沉郁,放浪中见深悲,既有晚唐诗的悱恻,又有近代知识分子的忧患意识,在二十世纪三十年代的中国诗坛独标一格,也是其人格与时代交战的珍贵记录。

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不是尊前爱惜身,佯狂难免假成真。

It is not that I treasure my life before the wine cup; but feigned madness, hard to avoid, turns false into true.

我并非在酒樽之前爱惜自己的身子;佯装狂放的日子久了,难免弄假成真。

It is not that I spare myself at the wine cup; but the feigned madness, long kept, is bound to turn real.

起联两句自辩兼自嘲,是全诗立意的关键。「不是尊前爱惜身」先作辩解——我的纵酒放浪,并非贪生惜命、贪图享乐,言外之意,是有不得已的苦衷;「佯狂难免假成真」再自剖一层——狂是装出来的姿态,可装得久了,连自己也分不清是真是假,渐渐弄假成真。这两句把一个「醒着的狂士」的形象写得入木三分:他不是真的想狂,而是这个时代逼得他只能以狂自处;他不是真的沉沦,而是沉沦久了便难辨真假。其间的自伤、自嘲与自省,层层交织,为全诗定下了「放浪其外、沉痛其中」的基调。以此起笔,既见诗人的坦率,又见其深藏的忧愤,是理解全诗情感的钥匙。

The pose. It is not that I spare myself at the wine cup; but the feigned madness, long kept, is bound to turn real. The denial (I do not spare myself) and the feigned-madness-becoming-real are the self-diagnosis. To have said his madness was partly a pose would be a confession; the not-sparing-myself-at-the-cup against the long-feigned-madness-turning-real is the confession.

曾因酒醉鞭名马,生怕情多累美人。

Once, drunk, I whipped a famous steed; I dreaded lest too much passion weary my beauty.

曾因酒醉而鞭打名马,又总担心用情太深,会连累那些美人。

Drunk, I have lashed a famous horse; yet I always fear that too much love will burden the beauty.

颔联两句是传诵一时的名句,写尽名士的狂放与多情。「鞭名马」以酒醉鞭马写其狂放不羁,看似放诞,实则暗含对「名马」这类美好事物的不自觉的破坏与辜负——醉中鞭马,正如醉中挥霍自己的才情与生命;「生怕情多累美人」则笔锋一转,由狂放转入温柔,写其多情而自惧——不是怕用情,而是怕情多反倒「累」了对方,一个「生怕」,写尽深情者的患得患失。两句一狂一柔、一放一收,工对之中见出性格的两面:既能纵酒狂歌、鞭马长啸,又能低回温柔、怜惜伊人。而「鞭名马」与「累美人」的并置,也暗含一种自省——放纵与多情,最终累的既是马、是美人,也是自己,为后文「悲歌痛哭终何补」的无力感埋下了伏笔。

The two faces. Drunk, I have lashed a famous horse; yet I always fear that too much love will burden the beauty. The drunk horse-lashing against the fear of burdening the beauty is the wild yet tender man. To have described his wildness and tenderness would be a character sketch; the drunk-lashing-the-famous-horse against the fearing-too-much-love-will-burden-the-beauty is the sketch.

悲歌痛哭终何补,义士纷纷说帝秦。

What use in the end are sad songs and bitter weeping? The righteous gentlemen buzz, one and all, of submitting to Qin.

悲歌痛哭,到头来又有什么补救?只见那些义士们纷纷谈论着向强秦称臣的事。

What do laments and weeping finally avail? The so-called righteous men are busy debating how to submit to Qin.

尾联两句由个人之悲转入国家之愤,是全诗锋芒最锐之处。「悲歌痛哭终何补」以反问出之,写尽一个清醒者面对国难时的无力感——悲歌也好,痛哭也罢,都救不了这风雨飘摇的江山;「义士纷纷说帝秦」则更进一层,以冷峻的讽刺收束——最可悲的不是救不了国,而是那些号称「义士」的人,竟纷纷在议论着向强敌俯首称臣。「说帝秦」用鲁仲连义不帝秦的典故,反其意而用之,以古人的高义反照今人的卑怯,讥刺之意,辛辣入骨。这一句把全诗的自嘲升华为对时代与世风的批判:当「义」都可以被拿来作附敌的谈资,个人的佯狂与痛哭,便显得既悲且讽。以此收束,余味辛辣而苍凉,是郁达夫诗中批判性最强、也最见骨气的结尾。

The satire. What do laments and weeping finally avail? The so-called righteous men are busy debating how to submit to Qin. The useless lament against the righteous men debating submission (the Lu Zhonglian allusion reversed) is the sharp close. To have said his weeping was useless and the patriots were submitting would be a satire; the laments-and-weeping-what-avail against the righteous-men-busy-debating-submission-to-Qin is the satire.

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佯狂 Feigned madness; 'yang kuang' alludes to the Chu madman Jie Yu and names the poet's pose of insanity. The phrase 'turns false to true' reveals its tragedy: the act, kept up too long, became real, showing both his bohemian front and his deep self-doubt. 「佯狂」即假装癫狂,语本楚狂接舆佯狂避世之典,是此诗立骨的核心词。郁达夫以「佯狂」自况,写其以狂态处世的外表,而「难免假成真」四字,则点破这佯狂的悲剧性——狂是装的,可装久了,连自己也分不清真假,甚至真的沉沦其中。此词既见其狂士姿态,又含深沉的自我怀疑:佯狂是避世的手段,也是逃避的借口,当假狂成真、真狂难辨之时,人便陷在放浪与清醒之间,无法自拔。以「佯狂」领起,再以「假成真」点破,一层层剥开名士的面具,正是此诗自嘲深度的所在,也是理解郁达夫性格矛盾的关键词。
鞭名马 To whip a famous steed; the striking image of a drunk man striking a fine horse captures reckless abandon and, by implication, the wasteful squandering of his own talent and life, paired with 'weary my beauty' to show the two faces of his character. 「曾因酒醉鞭名马」之「鞭名马」,是传诵一时的奇语,写醉中鞭打名马之狂态。「名马」本为良驹,是贵重美好的事物,诗人醉后竟以鞭相加,其狂放不羁、恣意挥霍的情态如在目前。此词妙在一「鞭」字——不是乘马、不是系马,而是「鞭」马,愈见其醉态的狂乱与对美好事物的不经意伤害。细味之下,「鞭名马」暗含两层深意:一是狂士的自我放纵,二是对自身才情与生命的挥霍——鞭打名马,正如辜负自己的才华与时光。以此写放浪生涯,既形象又含自省,与下句「累美人」对举,一狂一柔,共同构成郁达夫名士人格的两个侧面。
说帝秦 To speak of submitting to Qin; reversing Lu Zhonglian's noble refusal to bow to Qin, this phrase satirizes those 'righteous gentlemen' who instead debate capitulating to the enemy, the poem's sharpest blade of political mockery. 「义士纷纷说帝秦」之「说帝秦」,用战国鲁仲连义不帝秦之典,反其意而用之,是此诗讽刺锋芒的落点。「帝秦」者,尊秦为帝、向秦称臣也;鲁仲连以「义不帝秦」名垂千古,宁蹈东海而死,不肯向强秦俯首。郁达夫却写「义士纷纷说帝秦」——那些号称「义士」的人,非但不学鲁仲连的高义,反而纷纷议论着向强敌称臣,以古之高义反照今之卑怯,讥刺之意,入骨三分。「纷纷」二字尤妙,写附敌之论的嚣然四起,与鲁仲连的孤标高义形成刺目的对照。此词以典刺世,既见其用典之活,又见其批判之烈,是近代诗中讽世的名笔。

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自嘲 Self-Mockery 鲁迅 · 同为近现代名士自嘲,一冷峻一放浪,时代之痛各有其声 Both are modern men of letters mocking themselves—one cold and firm, one dissolute and sorrowful—each a voice of their troubled age.

Lu Xun's 'Self-Mockery' ('my fortune meets the ill star, what more to seek; before I dare turn, I've knocked my head') uses cold self-mockery to show the intellectual's predicament, ending in the resolute 'I frown on a thousand fingers, bow my head to be an ox for the child'—a清醒 fighter's self-portrait. Yu Dafu's poem mocks himself through dissipation and closes by satirizing capitulators. One is cold and firm, the other dissolute and sorrowful, yet both are that generation's confession before a dark reality.

鲁迅《自嘲》「运交华盖欲何求,未敢翻身已碰头」,以冷峻的自嘲写知识分子的困境,而「横眉冷对千夫指,俯首甘为孺子牛」的自白,终归于清醒的战斗,自嘲之中有坚定的风骨;郁达夫此诗「佯狂难免假成真」的自嘲,则以放浪之笔写名士的沉沦,又以「义士纷纷说帝秦」的讽世收束,自嘲之中有深沉的忧愤。一冷峻一放浪、一以理节情、一以情写痛,却同是那一代知识分子面对黑暗现实的自我剖白。并读两诗,可见二十世纪三十年代中国文人在「自嘲」这一姿态下的不同归宿——鲁迅以自嘲砥砺前行,郁达夫以自嘲宣泄沉痛,皆是时代在个体心灵上刻下的印记。

狱中题壁 Inscribed on the Wall in Prison 谭嗣同 · 同为近代志士面对国难,一慷慨赴死一放浪自伤,忧国之心一脉相通 Both are modern patriots facing national crisis—one dies defiant, one laments powerless—yet the loyal heart is the same.

Tan Sitong's 'Inscribed on the Wall in Prison' ('I draw my sword and laugh toward heaven; alive or gone, my liver and gallant heart are two Kunluns') is a defiant last poem before execution after the failed 1898 reform. Yu Dafu's poem laments helplessness before the approaching catastrophe, mocking collaborators while grieving that 'song and tears help nothing.' One meets death resolutely, the other aches in powerlessness; different eras, same loyal heart, showing two postures of the modern patriot.

谭嗣同《狱中题壁》「我自横刀向天笑,去留肝胆两昆仑」,是戊戌变法失败后身陷囹圄、从容待死时的绝命之作,以向天一笑写视死如归的凛然,是志士以死报国的极致;郁达夫此诗「悲歌痛哭终何补,义士纷纷说帝秦」,则写国难当前而无力回天的悲愤,既讥刺附敌者,也自伤于「悲歌痛哭终何补」的无奈。一为以身殉国的决绝,一为清醒无力的悲慨;一个在戊戌,一个在九一八前夕,时代不同而忧国之心一脉相通。并读之下,可见中国近代志士在民族危亡关头的两种姿态,也可体味郁达夫诗中那种「恨不能横刀向天笑」而只能「悲歌痛哭」的深沉痛苦。

本事诗·乌舍凌波肌似雪 Poems of True Events — 'Wu she, wave-like, skin like snow' 苏曼殊 · 同为近代文人的多情与无奈,一缠绵一放浪,情与痛同根而生 Both show the modern literatus's passion and helplessness—one lingering, one dissolute—feeling and pain of one root.

Su Manshu's 'Poems of True Events' ('I return to you a bowl of heartless tears; regret we met before my tonsure') writes intertwined love and regret from a lover-monk's voice. Yu Dafu's 'drunk I whipped a famous steed; I dreaded lest passion weary my beauty' writes the anxious fear of one who loves too much. Both modern men of letters are passionate and self-wounding: Su Manshu escapes into a bowl of heartless tears, Yu Dafu into whipping steeds and wearying beauties—monk and layman, cold and warm, yet sharing the insight that deep feeling turns to burden.

苏曼殊《本事诗》「还卿一钵无情泪,恨不相逢未剃时」,以情僧的笔触写深情与悔恨的交织,多情而不能相守的无奈缠绵悱恻;郁达夫此诗「曾因酒醉鞭名马,生怕情多累美人」,则以名士的笔触写多情而自惧的患得患失——不是怕用情,而是怕情多累人。同为近代文人的多情与自伤,苏曼殊归于一钵无情泪的出离,郁达夫归于鞭马累美人的放浪;一僧一俗、一冷一热,而其「情到深处反成累」的体认则一脉相通。并读两诗,可见二十世纪初中国文人在情与世、情与身之间的两难,也可见旧体诗在表达近代人复杂情感时的独特魅力。