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太阳吟
Song of the Sun
太阳啊,火一样烧着的太阳!
烘干了小草尖头的露水,可烘得干游子的冷泪盈眶?
太阳啊,火一样烧着的太阳!
楼角新升的太阳,照见我的楼头吧,可照得见我家园?
太阳啊,我家乡来的太阳!
北京城里的宫柳裹上一身秋了罢?
唉!
我也憔悴的同深秋一样!
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太阳啊,火一样烧着的太阳!
烘干了小草尖头的露水,可烘得干游子的冷泪盈眶?
太阳啊,火一样烧着的太阳!
楼角新升的太阳,照见我的楼头吧,可照得见我家园?
太阳啊,我家乡来的太阳!
北京城里的宫柳裹上一身秋了罢?
唉!
我也憔悴的同深秋一样!
太阳啊,奔波不息的太阳!
你也好像无家可归似的呢。
啊!
你我的身世一样地不堪设想!
太阳啊,自强不息的太阳!
大宇宙许就是你的家乡罢。
可能指示我我底家乡的方向?
太阳啊,这不像我的山川,太阳!
这里的风云另带一般颜色,这里鸟儿唱的调子格外凄凉。
太阳啊,生命之火的太阳!
但是谁不知你是球东半的情热,同时又是球西半的智光?
太阳啊,也是我家乡的太阳!
此刻我回不了我往日的家乡,便认你为家乡也还得失相偿。
太阳啊,慈光普照的太阳!
往后我看见你时,就当回家一次;
我的家乡不在地下乃在天上!
What dried the dew on the tip of the little grass,
can it dry the cold tears welling in a wanderer's eyes?
O Sun, a sun burning like fire!
The sun new-risen above the tower's corner,
shine upon my tower-top, I pray—
can you shine upon my homeland?
O Sun, the sun come from my homeland!
The palace willows in Beijing must have cloaked themselves in autumn by now?
Alas! I too am withered, like deep autumn!
O Sun, the sun that never ceases to roam!
You too seem as if you had no home to return to.
Ah! Your fate and mine are alike, beyond imagining!
O Sun, the sun that strengthens itself without rest!
The great universe may be your homeland, perhaps.
Can you point out to me the direction of my homeland?
O Sun, this is not like my mountains and rivers, O Sun!
The winds and clouds here wear another kind of color,
the birds here sing tunes especially desolate.
O Sun, the sun that is the fire of life!
Yet who does not know you are the passion of the eastern hemisphere,
and at the same time the wisdom-light of the western hemisphere?
O Sun, also the sun of my homeland!
This moment I cannot return to my former homeland,
so to take you as homeland still balances loss and gain.
O Sun, the sun of mercy shining everywhere!
Henceforth when I see you, I shall count it as returning home once;
my homeland is not beneath the earth but in the heavens!
Meaning
Written while studying in the United States, 'Song of the Sun' is an impassioned lyric of homesickness in which the poet addresses the sun as a shared presence linking him to his distant homeland. Through repeated apostrophe, the wandering student's grief, weariness, and sense of rootlessness are transformed into a spiritual belonging—his true home, he concludes, lies not on earth but in heaven.
太阳啊,火一样烧着的太阳!你烘干了小草尖头的露水,可烘得干我游子盈眶的冷泪吗?太阳啊,火一样烧着的太阳!楼角新升的太阳,请照见我的楼头吧,可照得见我的家园吗?太阳啊,我家乡来的太阳!北京城里的宫柳该裹上一身秋色了吧?唉!我也憔悴得同深秋一样了!太阳啊,奔波不息的太阳!你也好像无家可归似的呢。啊!你我的身世一样地不堪设想!太阳啊,自强不息的太阳!大宇宙许就是你的家乡吧,可能指示我我家乡的方向?太阳啊,这不像我的山川,太阳!这里的风云另带一种颜色,这里鸟儿唱的调子格外凄凉。太阳啊,生命之火的太阳!可是谁不知道你是球东半的情热,同时又是球西半的智光?太阳啊,也是我家乡的太阳!此刻我回不了我往日的家乡,便认你为家乡也还得失相偿。太阳啊,慈光普照的太阳!往后我看见你时,就当回家一次;我的家乡不在地下,乃在天上!
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] The poet repeatedly cries 'O Sun' and asks whether the sun that dries dew can dry a wanderer's tears, whether it can show him his homeland, and finally declares his homeland is in heaven. [Structure] Built on a refrain of 'O Sun' openings, the poem spirals from personal grief to cosmic identification to spiritual transcendence. [Imagery] The sun as 'fire,' as 'wandering,' as 'self-strengthening,' and as 'eastern passion / western wisdom-light' expands a natural body into a symbol of both personal and civilizational meaning. [Tone] The emotional arc moves from anguish ('cold tears') through solidarity with the sun's rootlessness to a defiant, uplifting close. Fiery and musical, the poem is a landmark of modern Chinese lyric romanticism.
【白话串讲】 闻一多写《太阳吟》:“太阳啊,火一样烧着的太阳!烘干了小草尖头的露水,可烘得干游子的冷泪盈眶”——“太阳啊,我家乡来的太阳!”——他望太阳想家——可烘得干游子的冷泪盈眶。 【意象与手法】 以太阳为倾诉对象,“太阳啊,火一样烧着的太阳”以呼告起笔;“烘干了小草尖头的露水,可烘得干游子的冷泪盈眶”以对比写思乡;“太阳啊,我家乡来的太阳”以太阳联系家乡;把“家乡”升华为天上的精神故乡。情感炽烈、想象奇崛,复沓句式层层推进。 【情感与主旨】 闻一多留学美国时的思乡名篇,以太阳为枢纽由望日而念家、由念家而及身世,写尽游子的冷泪、憔悴与身世之感,是闻一多前期诗作中“爱国主义”与“浪漫主义”交融的代表。 【名句点睛】 常考“太阳啊,我家乡来的太阳”以太阳联系家乡写思乡;“烘干了小草尖头的露水,可烘得干游子的冷泪盈眶”以冷泪盈眶写游子之悲。
Background
Wen Yiduo (1899–1946), from Xishui, Hubei, was a major modern Chinese poet and scholar, a leading figure of the Crescent Society known for imaginative brilliance, emotional intensity, and rigorous form. 'Song of the Sun' was written between 1922 and 1923 during his studies at the Art Institute of Chicago, and was included in his first collection Red Candle. Living abroad, he experienced racism and the coldness of Western society; his homesickness intertwined with national dignity, producing this poem. The 'sun' is both a literal celestial body and a symbol of his lost country and home, and the work marks the fusion of patriotism and romanticism in his early poetry.
此诗作于1922年至1923年间闻一多留学美国芝加哥艺术学院时期,收入其第一部诗集《红烛》。闻一多(1899—1946),湖北浠水人,现代著名诗人、学者,新月派代表诗人,其诗以想象奇丽、情感炽烈、格律严谨著称。留美期间,诗人身处异邦,亲历种族歧视与西方文明的冷漠,思乡之情与民族自尊交织,遂成此诗。诗中的「太阳」,既是天文学意义上普照东西两半球的天体,更是诗人心中故国与家的象征:「太阳啊,我家乡来的太阳」「太阳啊,也是我家乡的太阳」,一声声呼唤,把个人对家园的思念放大为对祖国的眷恋。值得注意的是,此诗虽写思乡,却不止于个人的小哀怨——「谁不知你是球东半的情热,同时又是球西半的智光」,在太阳的东西对望中,暗含诗人对东西方文明的思考与对祖国的深情期许;而「我的家乡不在地下乃在天上」的升华,更把具体的乡土之思提炼为一种超越时空的精神归依。作为《红烛》中的代表作,《太阳吟》既见闻一多前期诗作浪漫主义的炽烈,又已露出其后转向关注民族命运、追求「东方文明」的思想端倪,在中国现代新诗史上有其重要地位。
Art
The poem's art centers on refrain and apostrophe as structural and emotional engines. [Refrain] The recurring 'O Sun' openings organize the lyric into a great cyclical chant; each stanza begins with an invocation, then branches into a different thought—from dew to tears, from tower-top to homeland, from the sun's wandering to the speaker's own fate—so that homesickness is unspooled layer by layer, deeper with each turn. [Imagery] The metaphors are bold: the sun 'burning like fire,' the sun as a fellow wanderer, the sun's 'homeland' pushed to the cosmos, and the 'passion of the eastern hemisphere / wisdom-light of the western hemisphere' that elevates personal longing into a meditation on East and West. [Climax] The closing 'my homeland is not beneath the earth but in the heavens' lifts concrete nostalgia into a metaphysical refuge. The swelling, wave-like rhythm enacts feeling through form.
此诗艺术上以「复沓」与「召唤」为骨,在反复的呼唤中层层推进情感。全诗以「太阳啊」领起多段,构成了一个巨大的复沓结构,每一段都以对太阳的呼唤开篇,再引出不同的思绪——从「烘干了小草尖头的露水」想到「游子的冷泪」,从「照见我的楼头」想到「家园」,从太阳的「奔波不息」想到自身的「身世」,从太阳的「自强不息」想到「家乡的方向」,思乡之情如抽丝剥茧,愈抽愈深。诗中的比喻与想象尤为奇崛:「太阳啊,火一样烧着的太阳」以火写光,炽烈灼人;「你我也好像无家可归似的」以太阳的无家反照游子的无归,物我同悲;「大宇宙许就是你的家乡罢」把太阳的家园推至宇宙,境界陡然开阔;「球东半的情热」「球西半的智光」更以天文学的视野,写出太阳横贯东西的象征意义,把个人的乡愁升华为对东西文明的观照。结句「我的家乡不在地下乃在天上」,是全部思念的归宿——当现实中的家乡回不去时,诗人便把这乡愁安放在精神的天空,以「天上」的家园来安顿「地下」的漂泊。全诗情感炽热而结构谨严,复沓的节奏如浪潮一般一波一波推向高潮,是闻一多「带着镣铐跳舞」的格律理想在自由诗中的一次成功实践。
Allusions
Though a modern free-verse poem, it carries the residue of classical tradition. The sun motif reaches back to the 'Lord of the East' (Dongjun) hymn in the Chu Ci and to Qu Yuan's exile melancholy; the wanderer chasing the sun echoes the myth of Kuafu. 'Palace willows' invokes the old parting tradition of 'breaking the willow' and Tang poems of longing from afar; 'withered' (憔悴) echoes the Shi Jing's lovesick aging and Qu Yuan's exiled haggardness. The sense of 'fate' (身世) connects to the southern dynastic plaint of 'mourning the south.' Wen, a scholar steeped in the classics, dissolves these allusions into modern syntax like salt in water—evidence of his deep old-learning even as he wrote new poetry.
此诗为现代自由诗,用典不着痕迹,而传统意象的余韵自在其中。「太阳」这一意象,在中国古典诗歌中源远流长:《楚辞·九歌·东君》有「暾将出兮东方,照吾槛兮扶桑」的太阳神赞歌,陶渊明《读山海经》亦有「夸父诞宏志,乃与日竞走」的逐日精神,曹植《与杨德祖书》更有「夸父逐日,而竟不反」的悲壮寓言。闻一多此诗中的太阳,既有《九歌·东君》那样对光明与温暖的礼赞,又暗含夸父逐日般「逐之而不及」的执拗与悲慨——游子逐日,正如夸父逐日,追的是光明,也是家乡。「宫柳」一词,暗合古乐府「折杨柳」的离别传统与唐人「一上高城万里愁,蒹葭杨柳似汀洲」的登高怀远之意,北京城里的宫柳,正是故国风物的象征;「憔悴」一词,则暗用《诗经·小雅》「行行重行行」之「思君令人老,岁月忽已晚」的相思迟暮之意,亦承屈原《渔父》「颜色憔悴,形容枯槁」的流放憔悴之象。「身世」之感,又遥接庾信「哀江南」的飘零传统。全诗虽为新诗,而古典的意象、典故的余韵如盐着水,融入现代诗的句式中,正见闻一多这位「中西艺术结婚后产生的宁馨儿」的深厚旧学根柢。
Commentary
Readers are most moved by the poem's near-pleading invocations: the sun becomes a substitute for home because it is the one thing shared between Chicago and Beijing. This 'taking the sun as homeland's stand-in' writes homesickness as both fervent and helpless—not that he will not return, but that he cannot; since he cannot, he adopts the sun as home and counts each sight of it as a return. The deepest turn is the ending's ascent: when the real homeland grows remote, the poet finds a metaphysical refuge in the sky. Wen later gave his life for that land, proving 'my homeland is in the heavens' was no empty phrase but his heaviest, never-abandoned love. The poem thus transcends ordinary wanderer verse into something near-religious in solemnity.
读此诗,最令人动容的是那一声声近乎哀求的呼唤。太阳啊,火一样烧着的太阳;太阳啊,我家乡来的太阳;太阳啊,也是我家乡的太阳——诗人一遍遍地唤着太阳,其实是在一遍遍地唤着自己的家。在异国的天空下,太阳是唯一与家乡共有的东西:它照过北京的宫柳,也照着芝加哥的楼角;它烘干了小草的露水,却烘不干游子的冷泪。这种「以太阳为家乡的替身」的写法,把思乡之情写得既炽烈又无告:不是不想回家,而是回不去;既然回不去,便只能认这普照两地的太阳为家乡,往后看见它,就当回家一次。而全诗最深刻处,在于结尾的升腾:「我的家乡不在地下乃在天上」——当现实的故园变得遥远而模糊,诗人便为乡愁找到了一个形而上的归宿,把对故土的爱升华为一种超越地理的精神信仰。这种由「地下」到「天上」的飞跃,使此诗超越了普通游子诗的格局,带有了一种近乎宗教般的庄严。闻一多后来果然为这片土地献出了生命,他用行动证明了「我的家乡乃在天上」不是一句空话,而是他一生未曾放下的、最沉重的爱。
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可烘得干游子的冷泪盈眶?
can it dry the cold tears welling in a wanderer's eyes?
你烘干了小草尖头的露水,可烘得干我这位游子盈眶的冷泪吗?
Can you also dry the wanderer's cold, brimming tears?
这一句是全诗由景入情的第一次转折,也是游子形象第一次清晰的显现。「烘干了小草尖头的露水」写太阳之力,何等温暖有力,连草尖的露水都能烘干;「可烘得干游子的冷泪盈眶」却以反问出之,写太阳之力亦有不及——露水易干,而游子的冷泪却烘不干。这「冷泪」与「露水」的对照极有深意:露水是自然之物,朝阳一照便干;冷泪是心头之物,含着多少思乡的酸楚与委屈,岂是阳光所能烘干?「冷泪盈眶」四字,写泪在眼眶中打着转而不落,比泪流满面更见强忍之痛。以太阳之力反衬乡愁之深,以自然之易干反衬情感之难愈,一句反问,把游子的孤寂与乡思写得既具体又深沉。
The question. Can you also dry the wanderer's cold, brimming tears? The dew dried by the sun against the wanderer's tears that the sun cannot dry is the first turn. To have asked the sun if it can dry homesick tears would be a question; the can-you-also-dry-the-wanderer's-cold-brimming-tears is the question.
可能指示我我底家乡的方向?
Can you point out to me the direction of my homeland?
大宇宙许就是你的家乡吧,你可能指示我,我的家乡所在的方向?
Can you show me the direction of my home?
这一句是全诗由望日到问乡的关键,写尽游子欲归无路的怅惘。「大宇宙许就是你的家乡罢」先为太阳设想了一个无限辽阔的家乡,再以此为铺垫发问——太阳的家乡既在宇宙,它该知道天下的方向;那么,请它指示我,我的家乡在何方。一个「我我底家乡」的叠用(「我底」即「我的」,为五四初期白话的写法),把「我」与「家乡」的关系强调到极致,仿佛那家乡不是一般的家乡,而是只属于「我」的、独一无二的家乡。然而太阳无言,宇宙无言,这一问注定没有回答,正是游子思乡而不得其径的茫然。以问句写乡愁,比直说更见无力与无奈,是全诗情感由炽热转向怅惘的枢纽。
The direction. Can you show me the direction of my home? The sun's own home in the cosmos against the question (show me my home's direction) is the next turn. To have asked the sun for the direction home would be a question; the can-you-show-me-the-direction-of-my-home is the question.
我的家乡不在地下乃在天上!
my homeland is not beneath the earth but in the heavens!
我的家乡不在这地下的现实之中,而是在那高远的天上!
My home is not below on the earth, but up in the sky!
结句是全诗思想的升华,也是乡愁的最终归宿。「不在地下乃在天上」以「不……乃……」的句式斩钉截铁,把家乡从地理的坐标中抽离出来,安放到精神的天空——现实中的家乡回不去,便只好让它在天上永存;地下的家乡是有限的、可望不可即的,天上的家乡却是无限的、永远属于我的。这一句的力量,在于它完成了从「具体的思乡」到「形而上的归依」的飞跃:当游子把家乡托付给天空,他便不再是一个无家可归的飘零者,而成了一个心中自有故国的人。它让人想起「此心安处是吾乡」的旷达,却又比苏轼更多一分执着与炽烈——不是「心安处即家乡」的自我安慰,而是「家乡在别处、在天上」的执拗认定。以此收束,全诗的乡愁由凄楚升华为庄严,余韵悠长,正是闻一多式的爱国主义最动人的表达。
The heaven. My home is not below on the earth, but up in the sky! The not-below-but-in-the-sky home is the poem's transfiguration. To have said his home was in the sky would be a leap; the my-home-not-below-on-earth-but-up-in-the-sky is the leap.
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Wen's 'Recalling Chrysanthemums' links foreign chrysanthemums to homeland through apostrophe ('I shall praise my flower-like country'), while 'Song of the Sun' takes the sun as homeland's stand-in. Both use an object to bear national longing; together they show his early fusion of patriotism and romanticism.
《忆菊》为闻一多留美期间咏菊思乡之作,以「习习的秋风啊!吹着,吹着!我要赞美我祖国底花!我要赞美我如花的祖国」的呼告,把异国的菊花与故国的风物相连,借菊花的清香与风姿寄托对祖国的思念;《太阳吟》则借太阳这一普照两地的天体,写「太阳啊,也是我家乡的太阳」的思乡深情。一以菊花为媒,一以太阳为象,而「睹物思乡、托物寄怀」的构思则一脉相通,都可见闻一多身处异邦而心怀故国的炽烈情感。并读两诗,可见其前期诗歌中爱国主义与浪漫主义交融的鲜明特色,也可体会这位诗人「中西艺术结婚」后的独特诗风。
太阳 The Sun 艾青 · 同为咏太阳之作,一寄个人乡愁一寄民族希望,可见太阳意象的两种写法 Both sing the sun, one personal homesickness, one national hope—two ways of using the sun image.Ai Qing's 'The Sun' portrays the sun as light, rebirth, and the nation's hope—a prophecy for suffering China; Wen's 'Song of the Sun' makes it a stand-in for home and the wanderer's grief. One is national allegory, one personal lyric; read together they show the sun image's multiple meanings in modern poetry.
艾青《太阳》写「从远古的墓茔/从黑暗的年代/从人类死亡之流的那边/震惊沉睡的山脉/若火轮飞旋于沙丘之上/太阳向我滚来」,以太阳象征光明、新生与民族的希望,是艾青献给苦难中国的预言诗;闻一多《太阳吟》则把太阳当作家乡的替身,寄托游子的乡愁与对故国的眷恋。一为民族的寓言,一为个人的乡音;一以太阳写时代的觉醒,一以太阳写家园的思念。两诗同咏太阳而旨趣迥异,恰可见现代新诗中同一意象的多重意蕴,也可见闻一多的个人抒情与艾青的时代预言在现代诗坛的双峰并峙。
静夜思 Quiet Night Thoughts 李白 · 同为望月望日而思乡,一含蓄隽永一炽烈奔放,古今乡愁一脉相通 Both look to a heavenly body for homesickness—one moon, one sun; one reserved, one fervent—ancient and modern nostalgia share one vein.Li Bai's 'Quiet Night Thoughts' ('I lift my head to the bright moon, lower it and think of home') uses the moon as the classical symbol of homesickness; Wen abandons the moon for the sun with fervent apostrophe. One looks to the moon, one to the sun; both 'borrow a heavenly body for homesickness,' linking Tang and modern longing.
李白《静夜思》「举头望明月,低头思故乡」,以极简的语言写望月思乡的含蓄情致,月光成为古今游子共同的乡愁符号,是古典思乡诗的最高典范;闻一多《太阳吟》则弃月取日,以「太阳啊,我家乡来的太阳」的炽烈呼告写思乡,情感奔放外露,想象奇崛开阔。一望月、一望日,一含蓄、一奔放,一古典、一现代,而「借天体以寄乡思」的构思则一脉相承。并读两诗,可见从盛唐到晚近,中国诗人借日月写乡愁的千年传统,也可体会闻一多在承继古典意象的同时,如何以现代诗的语言与节奏,写出了与李白截然不同而同样动人的乡愁。