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满江红·寄鄂州朱使君寿昌

Man Jiang Hong: Sent to Zhu Shouchang, Prefect of Ezhou

苏轼

Su Shi

怀古Meditations on the Past 感慨Reflection

江汉西来,高楼下、蒲萄深碧。
犹自带、岷峨雪浪,锦江春色。
君是南山遗爱守,我为剑外思归客。
对此间、风物岂无情,殷勤说。
江表传,君休读。
狂处士,真堪惜。
空洲对鹦鹉,苇花萧瑟。
独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽。
愿使君、还赋谪仙诗,追黄鹤。

The rivers Jiang and Han flow in from the west; below the high tower, a grape-deep blue.
Still carrying with them the snow-crested waves of Min and E, the spring colours of the Brocade river.
You are the prefect who left love behind at South Mountain; I am the man from beyond the Sword Pass who longs to go home.
Facing this scene, could the landscape have no feeling? — then speak to me earnestly about it.
The chronicle of Jiangbiao — do not read it, my friend.
The mad hermit — truly to be pitied.
An empty isle facing the Parrot isle; reeds and flowers rustling cold.
I can only smile at what all this scholars fight about — Lord Cao and Prefect Huang both are long gone and vanishing.
I wish for you, sir, that you write again the poetry of the exiled immortal, and go on pursuing the Yellow Crane.
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Meaning

Written from Huangzhou, where Su Shi was banished, to his neighbour across the river, Zhu Shouchang, prefect of Ezhou. The poet sets the rivers coming in from the west past a tall tower in a deep grape-green blue, still bearing the snow-fed waves of his own Sichuan and the spring colours of his home river; then he sets the two men side by side, the friend who governed with kindness at South Mountain and himself, a man from beyond the pass who wants to go home. The second half asks the scene to speak, warns his friend not to read the chronicle of the southern court, pities the mad hermit, gives the cold reeds of the Parrot isle, and ends by smiling at the quarrel of scholars for nothing — Lord Cao and Prefect Huang both gone — and wishing the friend a poetry like the exiled immortal's and the pursuit of the yellow crane.

江汉西来,高楼下、蒲萄深碧。犹自带、岷峨雪浪,锦江春色。君是南山遗爱守,我为剑外思归客。对此间、风物岂无情,殷勤说。江表传,君休读。狂处士,真堪惜。空洲对鹦鹉,苇花萧瑟。独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽。愿使君、还赋谪仙诗,追黄鹤。

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] The upper half is a place and two men: a blue river coming from far off, the water still tasting of Sichuan, and then the two fates set against each other — the good prefect, the home-sick exilic. The lower half is an argument about what to make of the scene: do not read the chronicle, pity the madman, look at the lonely isle, and then laugh — the two men who killed and were killed by the poet of the Parrot are both dust. [Structure] The poem runs from landscape to self-portrait to precept to release, and the release is earned because the last step is the one that carries the whole poem: a laugh. [Imagery] The visual centre is the grape-deep blue of the river, and the emotional centre is the pair of proper names in the second half. The closing wish is to write poetry like Li Bai's and to follow the crane, which is the poet's answer to ambition: not to win, but to outshine. Nothing in the poem is consolatory in the ordinary sense, and it does not try to be.

【白话串讲】 苏轼写《满江红·寄鄂州朱使君寿昌》:“江汉西来,高楼下、蒲萄深碧”——“君是南山遗爱守,我为剑外思归客”——“空洲对鹦鹉,苇花萧瑟”——他写江汉风物与对友人的话。 【意象与手法】 此词写寄友的感慨,以江汉写景,以鹦鹉洲写感慨,是苏轼的名篇。上阕写景与自况:「江汉西来,高楼下、蒲萄深碧」写江汉西来、高楼之下蒲萄深碧,「犹自带、岷峨雪浪,锦江春色」写犹自带岷峨雪浪、锦江春色,「君是南山遗爱守,我为剑外思归客」写君是南山遗爱守、我为剑外思归客,「对此间、风物岂无情,殷勤说」写对此间风物岂无情、殷勤说;下阕写感慨:「江表传,君休读」写江表传君休读,「狂处士,真堪惜」写狂处士真堪惜,「空洲对鹦鹉,苇花萧瑟」写空洲对鹦鹉、苇花萧瑟,「独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写独笑书生争底事、曹公黄祖俱飘忽,「愿使君、还赋谪仙诗,追黄鹤」写愿使君还赋谪仙诗、追黄鹤。全词以江汉写景、以鹦鹉洲写感慨,写尽寄友的感慨,是苏轼的代表作。 【情感与主旨】 此词写寄友的感慨,以江汉写景,以鹦鹉洲写感慨,是苏轼的名篇。此词作于宋神宗元丰年间,苏轼贬居黄州(今湖北黄冈)时,寄给鄂州知州朱寿昌。此词写寄友:江汉西来,高楼下、蒲萄深碧——写江汉西来、高楼之下蒲萄深碧,写尽黄州江景;犹自带、岷峨雪浪,锦江春色——写犹自带岷峨雪浪、锦江春色,写尽江水的源远流长;君是南山遗爱守,我为剑外思归客——写君是南山遗爱守、我为剑外思归客,写尽两人身份的对照;对此间、风物岂无情,殷勤说——写对此间风物岂无情、殷勤说;江表传,君休读——写江表传君休读,劝友勿读《江表传》;狂处士,真堪惜——写狂处士真堪惜,用祢衡之典写狂士可惜;空洲对鹦鹉,苇花萧瑟——写空洲对鹦鹉、苇花萧瑟,写尽鹦鹉洲的萧瑟;独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽——写独笑书生争底事、曹公黄祖俱飘忽,写尽功名的飘忽;愿使君、还赋谪仙诗,追黄鹤——写愿使君还赋谪仙诗、追黄鹤,用崔颢黄鹤楼诗之典写追慕。全词以江汉写景、以鹦鹉洲写感慨,写尽寄友的感慨,是理解苏轼贬居黄州词的重要篇章。 【名句点睛】 常考「江汉西来,高楼下、蒲萄深碧」写黄州江景;「狂处士,真堪惜」用祢衡之典写狂士可惜;「独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写功名的飘忽;「愿使君、还赋谪仙诗,追黄鹤」写追慕崔颢黄鹤楼诗;以及全词以江汉写景、以鹦鹉洲写感慨的手法。

Background

Su Shi (1037–1101) was banished to Huangzhou in 1080 after the case of the poetry bureau and stayed until 1084; Ezhou is directly opposite across the Yangtze. This lyric was sent to Zhu Shouchang, its prefect, a friend of long standing. The poem is full of the places of the two banks — the rivers from the west, the pavilion tower, the isle where the Parrot rhapsody was composed, and the crane pavilion that gave the township its name — and of the old stories attached to them. Su Shi had by this time learned to live at the edge of the official world, and the poem's mixture of a good friend's company, a laugh at the powerful dead, and a wish for poetry is the mood of those four exile years at their most mature.

此词写寄友的感慨,以江汉写景,以鹦鹉洲写感慨,是苏轼的名篇。苏轼(1037—1101),字子瞻,号东坡居士,眉州眉山(今四川眉山)人,北宋伟大的文学家,是宋词豪放派的代表。此词作于宋神宗元丰年间,苏轼贬居黄州(今湖北黄冈)时,寄给鄂州(今湖北鄂州)知州朱寿昌。黄州与鄂州隔江相望,鹦鹉洲在鄂州(今武汉一带)。此词写寄友:「江汉西来,高楼下、蒲萄深碧」写江汉西来、高楼之下蒲萄深碧——写尽黄州江景;「犹自带、岷峨雪浪,锦江春色」写犹自带岷峨雪浪、锦江春色——写尽江水源自岷峨锦江;「君是南山遗爱守,我为剑外思归客」写君是南山遗爱守、我为剑外思归客——写尽两人身份的对照;「对此间、风物岂无情,殷勤说」写对此间风物岂无情、殷勤说——写尽对友的殷勤;「江表传,君休读」写江表传君休读——劝友勿读《江表传》(记江东三国史事);「狂处士,真堪惜」写狂处士真堪惜——用祢衡之典写狂士可惜;「空洲对鹦鹉,苇花萧瑟」写空洲对鹦鹉、苇花萧瑟——写尽鹦鹉洲的萧瑟;「独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写独笑书生争底事、曹公黄祖俱飘忽——写尽功名的飘忽;「愿使君、还赋谪仙诗,追黄鹤」写愿使君还赋谪仙诗、追黄鹤——用崔颢黄鹤楼诗之典写追慕。全词以江汉写景、以鹦鹉洲写感慨,写尽寄友的感慨,是理解苏轼贬居黄州词的重要篇章。

Art

The poem is built on parallel pairs and on one reversal. Parallel runs through the whole: the two rivers against the tower, the snow waves against the spring colours, you against I, the chronicle against the madman, the isle against the reeds, the scholar against the two lords, and finally the exiled immortal against the crane. The reversal is in the last three lines: the poem has been looking at history and pitying it, and then the poet laughs and turns the whole thing into a wish for poetry. The best single movement is the untranslatable half-line in which the man and the place change places, and the closing couplet narrows from the enormous — Lord Cao — to the particular — write a poem and follow a crane. Su Shi also lets the water carry his own geography: the river from his home is the same river he is looking at.

此词的艺术特色可从四个方面解析。其一,以写景起兴。「江汉西来,高楼下、蒲萄深碧」以写景起兴——那「江汉西来」写尽江汉的西来、「蒲萄深碧」写尽江水的深碧,以写景起兴写尽黄州江景。其二,以对照写自况。「君是南山遗爱守,我为剑外思归客」以对照写自况——那「南山遗爱守」写友人的政绩、「剑外思归客」写自己的漂泊,以对照写尽两人身份的对照。其三,以用典写感慨。「狂处士,真堪惜。空洲对鹦鹉,苇花萧瑟」以用典写感慨——那祢衡的典故写尽狂士可惜、「空洲对鹦鹉」写尽鹦鹉洲的萧瑟,以用典写尽对狂士与功名的感慨;「独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽」以议论写功名的飘忽——那「曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写尽曹操黄祖的飘忽,以议论写尽功名的虚无。其四,以典收束写追慕。「愿使君、还赋谪仙诗,追黄鹤」以典收束写追慕——那谪仙诗(李白诗)、黄鹤(崔颢黄鹤楼诗)的典故写尽对高远诗境的追慕,以典收束,写尽寄友的感慨。四重手法,使此词以江汉写景、以鹦鹉洲写感慨,写尽寄友的感慨,是苏轼的代表作。

Allusions

The lower half is a chain of old stories. The mad hermit is the poet who wrote the Parrot rhapsody and was killed by the man who sheltered him; the isle facing him takes its name from that rhapsody and from the place where he was buried. Lord Cao is the one who wanted the poet and had him killed; Prefect Huang is the one who did it — the two together stand for all the cost of talent. The chronicle of Jiangbiao is the history of the southern court in the days of the three kingdoms; the poet tells his friend not to read it because it will only bring the old grief back. The exiled immortal is Li Bai, who was banished and who reputedly rode the crane; the yellow crane is the tower and the poem. All of these are known to a reader of the eleventh century without a word of explanation, and Su Shi uses them exactly that way.

此词的用语深植于黄州与寄友的传统。「江汉西来」令人想到「江汉」写长江汉水的意象——「江汉朝宗于海」,也令人想到「西来」写江汉西来的意象;「高楼下、蒲萄深碧」令人想到「蒲萄深碧」写江水如葡萄深碧的意象——「鸭头绿」写江水,也令人想到「高楼」写黄州临皋亭等高楼的意象;「犹自带、岷峨雪浪,锦江春色」令人想到「岷峨」写岷山峨眉山的意象——岷山雪水为长江之源,也令人想到「锦江春色」写成都锦江的意象;「君是南山遗爱守」令人想到「遗爱」写遗爱的意象——「遗爱」指为官有惠政而受人爱戴,也令人想到「南山守」写知州的意象;「我为剑外思归客」令人想到「剑外」写剑门关外的意象——杜甫「剑外忽传收蓟北」,也令人想到「思归客」写思归的意象;「江表传,君休读」令人想到「江表传」写记江东三国史事的典籍——劝友勿读《江表传》以免感慨,也令人想到「休读」写勿读的意象;「狂处士,真堪惜」用祢衡之典——祢衡恃才傲物,号狂处士,击鼓骂曹,终为黄祖所杀,令人想到「狂处士」写祢衡的典故,也令人想到「堪惜」写可惜的意象;「空洲对鹦鹉,苇花萧瑟」令人想到「鹦鹉洲」写鹦鹉洲的典故——祢衡作《鹦鹉赋》,葬于鹦鹉洲,也令人想到「苇花萧瑟」写苇花萧瑟的意象——「蒹葭苍苍」;「独笑书生争底事」令人想到「书生」写书生的意象——「百无一用是书生」,也令人想到「争底事」写争什么的意象;「曹公黄祖俱飘忽」令人想到「曹公」写曹操的意象——曹操爱才而杀祢衡(借刀),也令人想到「黄祖」写黄祖的意象——黄祖杀祢衡,也令人想到「俱飘忽」写俱已飘忽的意象;「愿使君、还赋谪仙诗,追黄鹤」用崔颢黄鹤楼诗之典——崔颢《黄鹤楼》「昔人已乘黄鹤去」,李白见而叹服,也令人想到「谪仙诗」写李白诗的意象——李白号谪仙,也令人想到「追黄鹤」写追慕黄鹤楼的意象。全词化用江汉、岷峨、锦江、祢衡、鹦鹉洲、曹公黄祖、黄鹤楼的典故与意象,以江汉写景、以鹦鹉洲写感慨,正是苏轼「豪放旷达」而善用典、承寄友传统写感慨的本领。

Commentary

This is among the most quoted of Su Shi's letters in verse. Later readers have usually pointed to the sudden laugh in 'I can only smile at what scholars fight about' as the moment the poem becomes itself, and to the closing wish, in which the banished man's friend is asked to write the poetry of another exiled poet. It stands beside the Niannujiao on the Red Cliff, written in the same years from the same shore, where the same river runs east and the same hero of the past is measured — and where the conclusion is a sacrifice to the river moon. Here the conclusion is a letter to a friend. Both poems put the poet beside a famous death and both end by refusing to be measured by it.

此词历来被推为苏轼寄友词的名篇,也是宋词写黄州的名作。历代论者对此词评价极高:清人评此词「以江汉写景、以鹦鹉洲写感慨,潇洒旷达」;近人更指出「狂处士,真堪惜」用祢衡之典写狂士可惜,「独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写功名的飘忽,是此词的名句。在词史上,此词的特殊价值在于:它以十一句的长调写尽寄友的感慨——那西来的江汉,那深碧的蒲萄,那岷峨的雪浪,那锦江的春色,那南山遗爱守的友人,那剑外思归客的自己,那休读的江表传,那堪惜的狂处士,那空洲的鹦鹉,那萧瑟的苇花,那飘忽的曹公黄祖,那追黄鹤的谪仙诗,都写尽了苏轼寄友的感慨;那「独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽」更写尽功名的飘忽。此词与苏轼《念奴娇·赤壁怀古》(「大江东去」)同为黄州名篇,一写「浪淘尽、千古风流人物」的赤壁,一写「狂处士,真堪惜」的鹦鹉洲;又与祢衡、崔颢的典故一脉相承,可见苏轼贬居黄州而借古抒怀的心境。对于今日读者,此词是理解苏轼黄州词的窗口,也是中国词写寄友感慨的经典——那萧瑟的苇花,穿越千年,仍在诉说着书生的感慨。

Prosody

Form A ci lyric in the tune Man Jiang Hong, a long double stanza of nine-three characters词·满江红(长调)
Rhyme Rhymes on entering tones — blue, colour, guest, speak, read, pity, cold, vanish, crane — one rhyme through the whole piece. The entering-tone endings give every line the same clipped stop and an urgent, upward temper.满江红,押「碧」「色」「客」「说」「读」「惜」「瑟」「忽」「鹤」韵(入声十一陌、十二锡、十三职、一屋),一韵到底,音节激昂
Tone pattern The tune is a long one, uneven in line length, and this piece is among its more forceful settings; the short four-character clauses cut across the longer sweeps, and the tone rises repeatedly before the last line.此词为满江红,双调九十三字,押入声韵,一韵到底,音节激昂,正合感慨的激昂。
Reading note The upper stanza is a place seen on the way in — the river, the tower, the snow water from home, and the two men named. The lower stanza is an argument: do not read the chronicle, pity the madman, look at the cold reeds, laugh at the two lords gone, and close with a wish. The rhyme is one entering-tone rhyme, so each line stops on the same clipped sound and the effect is of a man talking quickly. Read the opening as a picture held still, make the short clauses press, and let the closing line go out slowly, since the wish to follow the crane is the only long breath in the piece.此词为满江红,双调,上阕「江汉西来,高楼下、蒲萄深碧。犹自带、岷峨雪浪,锦江春色。君是南山遗爱守,我为剑外思归客。对此间、风物岂无情,殷勤说」,下阕「江表传,君休读。狂处士,真堪惜。空洲对鹦鹉,苇花萧瑟。独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽。愿使君、还赋谪仙诗,追黄鹤」,押入声韵(碧、色、客、说、读、惜、瑟、忽、鹤),一韵到底,音节激昂。全词以江汉写景、以鹦鹉洲写感慨:上阕写景与自况(江汉西来,高楼下、蒲萄深碧;犹自带、岷峨雪浪,锦江春色;君是南山遗爱守,我为剑外思归客;对此间、风物岂无情,殷勤说),下阕写感慨(江表传,君休读;狂处士,真堪惜;空洲对鹦鹉,苇花萧瑟;独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽;愿使君、还赋谪仙诗,追黄鹤)。诵读此词,宜以旷达的语调读「江汉西来」的江景,以感慨的语调读「曹公黄祖俱飘忽」的飘忽,结句「追黄鹤」要读得悠远而有余韵,方能传达出苏轼的潇洒旷达。苏轼词以「豪放旷达」著称,此词正是其寄友长调的典范。

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独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽

I can only laugh at the quarrel of scholars over what matter — Lord Cao and Prefect Huang both have vanished like smoke.

独自笑书生争什么底事,曹操黄祖都已飘忽。

Alone I laugh: what is this scholar fighting for? Cao Cao and Huang Zu are both gone on the wind.

此二句是全词写感慨的核心,以书生争事写可笑,以曹公黄祖写飘忽,写尽功名的飘忽,是千古名句。「独笑书生争底事」写独自笑书生争什么底事——那「独笑」写独自笑,「书生争底事」写书生争什么底事,写尽对书生争名逐利的讥笑;「曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写曹操黄祖都已飘忽——那「曹公黄祖」写曹操黄祖,「俱飘忽」写都已飘忽,写尽功名的飘忽。这句的深意在于:它以「独笑书生争底事」的讥笑与「曹公黄祖俱飘忽」的飘忽,写尽功名的飘忽——独自笑书生争什么底事,那「独笑书生争底事」写尽对书生争名逐利的讥笑——书生争名逐利,争的是什么底事?那「争底事」以反问写尽争名逐利的无谓;曹操黄祖都已飘忽,那「曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写尽功名的飘忽——曹操一代枭雄、黄祖一方牧守,如今都已飘忽,那「俱飘忽」写尽功名的虚无;那「独笑书生争底事」写尽对书生争名逐利的讥笑,那「曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写尽功名的飘忽,一写讥笑,一写飘忽,写尽功名的飘忽——书生争名逐利,而曹公黄祖俱已飘忽,功名何用?这正是苏轼贬居黄州、看透功名的感慨;此二句以书生争事、曹公黄祖写尽功名的飘忽,也让此二句成为全词写感慨的核心与千古名句。若换作直说「功名没有意义」,则失其用典;唯以「独笑书生争底事」写讥笑、「曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写飘忽,写尽功名的飘忽,也让此二句成为全词写感慨的核心。

The laughter. Alone I laugh: what is this scholar fighting for? Cao Cao and Huang Zu are both gone on the wind. The scholar's pointless striving against the vanished warlords (Cao Cao, Huang Zu) is Su Shi's dismissal of fame. To have laughed at the scholar's ambition would be a mockery; the alone-laugh-what-is-this-scholar-fighting-for against the Cao-Cao-and-Huang-Zu-both-gone-on-the-wind is the mockery.

愿使君、还赋谪仙诗,追黄鹤

I wish for you, sir, that you write again the poetry of the exiled immortal, and go on pursuing the Yellow Crane.

愿使君还来赋那谪仙的诗篇,追慕黄鹤楼诗。

I wish you, my lord, would once more write the exile-immortal's poems and chase the Yellow Crane.

此三句是全词的收束,以谪仙诗写追慕,以追黄鹤写高远,写尽对高远诗境的追慕,是千古名句。「愿使君、还赋谪仙诗」写愿使君还来赋那谪仙的诗篇——那「愿使君」写愿使君(朱寿昌),「还赋谪仙诗」写还赋李白(谪仙)的诗篇,写尽对李白诗的追慕;「追黄鹤」写追慕黄鹤楼诗——那「追黄鹤」用崔颢黄鹤楼诗之典,写尽对崔颢《黄鹤楼》高远诗境的追慕。这句的深意在于:它以「愿使君、还赋谪仙诗」的谪仙诗与「追黄鹤」的黄鹤楼,写尽对高远诗境的追慕——愿使君还来赋那谪仙的诗篇,那「愿使君、还赋谪仙诗」写尽对李白(谪仙)诗的追慕——李白见崔颢《黄鹤楼》而叹服,苏轼愿友人还赋谪仙(李白)那样飘逸的诗篇;追慕黄鹤楼诗,那「追黄鹤」用崔颢黄鹤楼诗之典写尽对高远诗境的追慕——「昔人已乘黄鹤去,此地空余黄鹤楼」,那「追黄鹤」写尽对高远超逸诗境的追慕;那「愿使君、还赋谪仙诗」写尽对李白诗的追慕,那「追黄鹤」写尽对黄鹤楼高远诗境的追慕,一写谪仙诗,一写追黄鹤,写尽对高远诗境的追慕——不写功名,而写诗境,正是苏轼劝友以诗遣怀、超脱功名的深意;此三句以谪仙诗、黄鹤楼收束,写尽对高远诗境的追慕,也让此三句成为全词收束的千古名句。若换作直说「写点好诗吧」,则失其用典;唯以「愿使君、还赋谪仙诗」写追慕、「追黄鹤」写高远,写尽对高远诗境的追慕,也让此三句成为全词的收束。

The poem. I wish you, my lord, would once more write the exile-immortal's poems and chase the Yellow Crane. The Li Bai (the banished immortal) wish and the Cui Hao Yellow Crane chase are the literary model. To have urged the friend to write like Li Bai would be a wish; the wish-you-my-lord-would-once-more-write-the-exile-immortal's-poems against the chase-the-yellow-crane is the wish.

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深碧 In 'a grape-deep blue' below the tall tower, the phrase is the colour of the river. It is two syllables, one of them deepening the other, and it is the one image in the opening that is purely visual — everything else is movement or distance. The water is compared to pressed grapes, so the colour is dark, cool and a little thick, and it is what makes the river look like a thing carried rather than crossed. 「蒲萄深碧」之「深碧」是写江水的关键词,一个「深碧」写尽江水如葡萄的深碧。深碧者,深绿色也。苏轼以「蒲萄深碧」写江水,这个「深碧」至少有双重意味:其一,写江水之色——那「高楼下、蒲萄深碧」写高楼之下江水如葡萄深碧,那「深碧」写尽江水的深碧——江水深绿,如葡萄之色,那「深碧」写尽江水的颜色;其二,写江水之清——那「深碧」更是写江水——深碧正见江水之清澄,那「深碧」写尽江水的清澄。以「深碧」写江水,正是苏轼写景的枢纽——若换作「深绿」「深青」等词,则或失其以蒲萄喻水的比喻,或失其写江水深碧的凝练;唯「深碧」二字,以江水如蒲萄深碧写尽江水的颜色与清澄,与「犹自带、岷峨雪浪」的雪浪相合,写尽黄州江景,也让「蒲萄深碧」成为全词写景的名句。
飘忽 In 'Lord Cao and Prefect Huang both have vanished', the pair of words means drifting and gone, touching and leaving. It is the poem's verdict on the two who killed and were killed: neither is honored and neither is remembered as a person, both simply drift away. It is chosen over a word for death, because the point is not that they died but that they dissipated; and it is the same movement the poet gives himself by laughing. 「曹公黄祖俱飘忽」之「飘忽」是写功名的关键词,一个「飘忽」写尽功名的飘忽。飘忽者,飘荡、倏忽也。苏轼以「俱飘忽」写曹公黄祖,这个「飘忽」至少有双重意味:其一,写功名之逝——那「曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写曹操黄祖都已飘忽,那「飘忽」写尽功名的飘忽——曹公黄祖,一代人杰,如今都已飘忽而逝,那「飘忽」写尽功名的消逝;其二,写感慨之深——那「飘忽」更是写感慨——功名飘忽,正见功名的虚无,那「飘忽」写尽看透功名的感慨。以「飘忽」写功名,正是苏轼写感慨的枢纽——若换作「消逝」「消亡」等词,则或失其写飘忽而逝的意象,或失其与「俱」字的配合;唯「飘忽」二字,以功名飘忽而逝写尽功名的虚无与看透功名的感慨,与「独笑书生争底事」的讥笑相合,写尽功名的飘忽,也让「曹公黄祖俱飘忽」成为全词写感慨的名句。

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念奴娇·赤壁怀古 Niannujiao: Reminiscing at the Red Cliff 苏轼 · 同苏轼黄州怀古,一赤壁一鹦鹉洲 Both lyrics were written in Huangzhou and look at the same river and the same heroes of the past — the one at the Red Cliff, this one at the Parrot isle.

The great lyric opens with the river running east and the ancient heroes washed away in it, and closes by pouring off the last of the wine to the river moon. This letter to a friend keeps the same river west-flowing, the same sense of a past that sweeps men off, and closes not with a sacrifice but with a wish that the friend write poetry like the exiled immortal. The one poem is a monument; the other is a conversation. Both are the same four exile years, and both refuse to be measured by the great dead.

苏轼《念奴娇·赤壁怀古》「大江东去,浪淘尽、千古风流人物」「人生如梦,一尊还酹江月」写赤壁怀古,是苏轼最著名的词。此词《满江红·寄鄂州朱使君寿昌》则「独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写鹦鹉洲的感慨。同为苏轼黄州怀古词,一写「大江东去」的赤壁(赤壁怀古),一写「空洲对鹦鹉」的鹦鹉洲(满江红);一以「江山如画,一时多少豪杰」写豪杰,一以「曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写飘忽。两词对读,可见苏轼黄州怀古词的丰富。

卜算子·黄州定慧院寓居作 Busuanzi: Written While Dwelling at Dinghui Temple, Huangzhou 苏轼 · 同苏轼黄州词,一孤鸿一鹦鹉 Both are lyrics from the Huangzhou banishment — the one a lonely swan in a cold month, this one a conversation across the river with a friend.

In the other poem a lone bird hunts for a cold branch and will not light, and the sandbank at night is bare and cold; the poet speaks through it and says nothing to anyone. Here, from the same months, the poet speaks straight to the prefect of Ezhou across the water, tells him not to read the chronicle, laughs at the lords of the past, and asks him to write poetry. The two are the banished man's solitude and the same man making a friend's company do the work that solitude could not.

苏轼《卜算子·黄州定慧院寓居作》「拣尽寒枝不肯栖,寂寞沙洲冷」写黄州寓居的孤寂,是苏轼的名篇。此词《满江红·寄鄂州朱使君寿昌》则「空洲对鹦鹉,苇花萧瑟」「独笑书生争底事,曹公黄祖俱飘忽」写鹦鹉洲的感慨。同为苏轼黄州词,一写「寂寞沙洲冷」的孤鸿(卜算子),一写「苇花萧瑟」的鹦鹉洲(满江红);一以「缺月挂疏桐」写月,一以「江汉西来」写江。两词对读,可见苏轼黄州词的两种心境。