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纸船

Paper Boats

冰心

Bing Xin

母爱motherly love 乡愁homesickness 童趣childlike innocence

我从不肯妄弃了一张纸，总是留着——留着，叠成一只一只很小的船儿，从舟上抛下在海里。

I have never been willing to carelessly cast away a sheet of paper, always keeping it — keeping it, folding it into one small boat after another, and tossing them from the boat down into the sea.
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Meaning

On her voyage to study in America, the poet, far from home and mother, refuses to waste a single sheet of paper, folding each into a tiny boat and casting them into the sea. The paper boats, small and fragile, carry her deepest longing for her mother. The poem wraps profound homesickness in the guise of childlike play.

我从来不肯随意丢弃一张纸，总是小心地留着——留着，叠成一只一只很小的船儿，从船上抛下到海里。

Appreciation

The poem uses the 'paper boat' as an objective correlative, conveying feeling through repetition ('keeping — keeping') and reduplication ('one after another'), and moving through concrete detail. The smaller the boats, the heavier the longing they bear; the act of tossing them into the vast sea sets innocence against impossibility. In pure, nursery-like language it achieves the modern mini-poem's ideal of 'much in little.'

【白话串讲】 冰心写《纸船》：“我从不肯妄弃了一张纸，总是留着——留着，叠成一只一只很小的船儿，从舟上抛下在海里”——“有的被天风吹卷到舟中的窗里，有的被海浪打湿，沾在船头上”——她写纸船与思念。 【意象与手法】本诗以「纸船」为意象，托物言志：「留着——留着」的复沓，写出珍惜之情；「一只一只很小」的叠词，写纸船之小与数量之多，以「小」衬「大」——船越小，思念越重；「从舟上抛下在海里」以动作收束，画面如在目前，含蓄而隽永。 【情感与主旨】此诗写于冰心赴美留学途中，诗人漂泊海上，思念母亲，遂以叠纸船寄托乡思。纸船是童心的象征，也是深挚母爱的寄托，全诗在童趣的外衣下藏着最浓的思亲之情。 【名句点睛】「我从不肯妄弃了一张纸，总是留着——留着」以复沓起笔，把珍惜纸、珍惜情的心事写得缠绵往复。

Background

Bing Xin (1900-1999), originally Xie Wanying, from Changle, Fujian, a major modern writer and poet, representative of May Fourth 'problem fiction' and the 'mini-poem' form. In 1923 she graduated top of Yanjing University and won a scholarship to Wellesley College in America. On the voyage across the Pacific, far from homeland and mother, her longing surged and she wrote 'Paper Boats — To Mother,' alongside her prose 'Letters to Young Readers,' both on 'motherly love,' 'childlike heart,' and 'nature.' Deeply bonded with her mother since childhood, her 'philosophy of love' centers on motherly love; crossing the ocean, she used the childlike act of folding paper boats to lodge her homesickness — the paper boat is a childhood memory (her mother taught her to fold them), a symbol of the child's heart, and a bearer of longing. This excerpt is the poem's opening, writing the cherishing before folding — her 'not willing to carelessly cast away a sheet of paper' prepares for the solemn folding later. The whole poem uses the purest language for the deepest homesickness, a classic where 'motherly love' and 'homesickness' themes meet in modern Chinese literature.

冰心（1900—1999），原名谢婉莹，福建长乐人，现代著名作家、诗人，「五四」时期「问题小说」与「小诗体」的代表。1923年，冰心以优异成绩毕业于燕京大学，获美国威尔斯利女子大学奖学金，赴美留学。乘船赴美途中，她漂泊于浩瀚的太平洋上，远离故土与母亲，思亲之情油然而生，遂写下《纸船——寄母亲》一诗，与她的散文集《寄小读者》同写于赴美途中，皆以「母爱」「童心」「自然」为主题。冰心自幼受母亲熏陶，与母亲感情极深，其「爱的哲学」以母爱为核心；漂洋过海之际，她以「叠纸船」这一童趣盎然的行为寄托乡思——纸船是童年的记忆（小时候母亲教她叠纸船），是童心的象征，更是思念的载体。本版本节选的是全诗开头两句，写叠船之前的珍惜：诗人「不肯妄弃一张纸」，正是为后文「叠成一只一只很小的船儿」的郑重其事作铺垫。全诗以最纯净的语言写最深的乡思，是中国现代文学中「母爱主题」与「乡愁主题」交汇的经典。

Art

As free verse, the poem uses 'paper boat' as an objective-correlative image, conveying feeling through repetition, meaning through reduplication, and moving through detail. First, the structure of lodging feeling in objects: the paper boat — folded from a sheet, small and fragile — bears the heaviest longing; the poet does not say 'I miss mother' but 'fold paper boats' and 'toss into the sea,' turning abstract feeling into concrete act and image, implicit and lasting. Second, the repetition: 'always keeping — keeping' repeats like a chant, deepening the 'cherishing'; 'one after another' writes the boats small yet many, small setting off great — the smaller the boat, the heavier the longing; 'from the boat down into the sea' sets 'boat' against 'sea,' a paper boat into vast waves, where the stubbornness and hopelessness of longing faintly show. Third, the purity of language: 'not willing to carelessly cast away,' 'always keeping' write deep heart in plain words, like a nursery rhyme's clarity — Bing Xin's 'philosophy of love' and 'childlike heart' in language. The whole uses the paper boat as vessel and longing as sail, hiding the deepest homesickness under a childlike guise — a model of the modern mini-poem's 'much in little.'

从文体看，本诗是自由诗，以「纸船」为托物言志的意象，以「复沓」传情、以「叠词」见意、以「细节」动人。其一，托物言志的结构：「纸船」是全诗的核心意象——它由「一张纸」叠成，小而脆弱，却承载着诗人最重的思念；诗人不直说「想母亲」，而说「叠纸船」「抛下海」，把抽象的情感化为具体的动作与物象，含蓄而隽永。其二，复沓的手法：「总是留着——留着」的复沓，如吟哦之声缠绵往复，把「珍惜」之情写得层层加深；「一只一只」的叠词，写船之小而多，以小衬大——船越小，思念越沉；「从舟上抛下在海里」以「舟」「海」对举，一叶纸船抛入万顷碧波，渺小与浩瀚的对照中，思念的执拗与无望隐约可见。其三，语言的纯净：「不肯妄弃」「总是留着」以浅语写深心，如童谣之清纯，正是冰心「爱的哲学」与「童心」在语言上的体现。全诗以纸船为舟、以思念为帆，在童趣的外衣下藏着最浓的乡思，是现代小诗「以少总多」的典范。

Allusions

Though without explicit allusion, the 'paper boat' image and 'send feeling through objects' root in Chinese lyric tradition. First, 'paper boat' traces to the folk custom of 'floating lamps' on the Zhongyuan festival to lodge grief; a boat entering water is exactly this custom's poetic form; folk also 'burn paper boats and bright candles to the sky,' the boat always a bearer of 'entrustment.' Second, 'send feeling through objects' inherits the classical 'lodging feeling in objects' — Wang Wei's 'red beans grow in the south... this is most the thing of longing' sends longing by red beans; Bing Xin sends homesickness by paper boat, a modern version of the 'red bean' tradition, only the addressee changed from friend to mother. Third, 'boat' and 'sea' echo the classical 'returning sail' and 'gazing at sea' homesickness — Meng Haoran's 'homesick tears spent among guests, lone sail seen at the sky's edge,' Li Bai's 'lone sail's far shadow into the blue void' write parting by sail; Bing Xin shrinks the classical 'lone sail' to a 'paper boat,' the smaller the more the longing has nowhere to rest. Fourth, Bing Xin's 'motherly love' theme inherits the May Fourth 'discovery of the individual,' her 'philosophy of love' rooted in motherly love — this poem its poetic expression. At the crossing of childlike play, folk custom, and classical lyric tradition, it writes the purest yet deepest love for kin.

本诗虽无显性用典，其「纸船」意象与「寄物传情」的手法却深植于中国文学的抒情传统。其一，「纸船」可上溯中国古代的「放灯」「放河灯」民俗——中元节放河灯以寄托哀思，纸船入水，正是这一民俗的诗化表达；民间又有「纸船明烛照天烧」之俗，船之为物，自来是「寄托」的载体。其二，「寄物传情」的手法承中国古典诗歌「托物言志」传统——王维「红豆生南国，春来发几枝。愿君多采撷，此物最相思」，以红豆寄相思；冰心以纸船寄乡思，正是「红豆」传统的现代演绎，只是所寄由「友人」变为「母亲」。其三，「舟」与「海」的意象暗合古典「归帆」「望海」的乡愁传统——孟浩然「乡泪客中尽，孤帆天际看」，李白「孤帆远影碧空尽」，皆以舟帆写离思；冰心以「纸船」入海，把古典的「孤帆」缩小为「纸船」，愈见其小，愈见思念之无处安放。其四，冰心的「母爱」主题承五四「人的发现」的思潮，其「爱的哲学」以母爱为根基，此诗正是这一哲学的诗化表达。全诗在童趣、民俗、古典抒情传统的交汇中，写出了最纯净也最深厚的思亲之情。

Commentary

'Paper Boats' is a classic of the 'motherly love and homesickness' theme in modern Chinese literature, its influence enduring. In poetry history it represents the maturity of Bing Xin's mini-poem — minimal length, purest language, deepest feeling; its 'small-seeing-great, object-bearing-feeling' technique echoes Tagore's philosophical mini-poems, establishing the modern mini-poem's 'pure, implicit' aesthetic. In intellectual history it embodies Bing Xin's 'philosophy of love': motherly love is the core of her faith, the paper boat its material symbol; this philosophy of 'dissolving suffering by love, guarding warmth by childlike truth' comforted countless readers in the turbulent post-May-Fourth years, its influence reaching overseas Chinese literature. In transmission history the poem long enters anthologies and textbooks; 'paper boat' has become a cultural sign of 'longing for mother,' paired with Meng Jiao's 'Wanderer's Song' as the twin gems of the motherly-love theme. In art history, writing cherishing by the detail 'not willing to carelessly cast away a sheet of paper' and longing's weight by the reduplication 'one small after another,' it proves true deep feeling need not be grand — one sheet, one paper boat suffices to bear the heaviest homesickness, exactly Bing Xin's eternal charm of 'much in little.'

《纸船》是中国现代文学中「母爱与乡愁」主题的经典诗篇，其影响历久弥新。从诗歌史看，本诗代表了冰心「小诗体」的成熟——以极短的篇幅、极纯的语言，承载极深的情感，其「以小见大、以物传情」的手法，与泰戈尔《飞鸟集》的哲理小诗相呼应，确立了现代小诗「清纯含蓄」的美学风范。从思想史看，此诗是冰心「爱的哲学」的集中体现：母爱是她信仰的核心，纸船是她寄予母爱的物化象征，这种「以爱化解苦难、以童真守护温情」的哲学，在五四之后的动荡岁月里给了无数读者以慰藉，其影响远及海外华文文学。从传播史看，此诗长期入选各种诗歌选本与语文教材，「纸船」已成为「思念母亲」的文化符号，与孟郊《游子吟》「谁言寸草心，报得三春晖」并列为母爱主题的双璧。从艺术史看，本诗以「不肯妄弃一张纸」的细节写珍惜，以「一只一只很小」的叠词写思念之重，证明真正的深情不必宏大——一张纸、一只纸船，足以承载最重的乡愁，这正是冰心艺术「以小见大」的永恒魅力。

Prosody

Form Modern free verse (lyrical mini-poem, colloquial syntax, nursery-rhyme rhythm).现代自由诗（抒情小诗，口语化句式，童谣式节奏）
Rhyme No rhyme; rhythm comes from repetition and reduplication: 'keeping — keeping' repeats like a chant; 'one after another' ticks like counting; 'down into the sea' closes on 'sea' with a drawn sound like a boat entering water, lingering.本诗不押韵，节奏来自「复沓」与「叠词」：「留着——留着」的复沓如吟哦之声缠绵往复；「一只一只」的叠词如数点之音绵密轻快；「从舟上抛下在海里」以「里」字拖音收束，如纸船入水之声，余韵悠长。
Tone pattern Mostly colloquial long sentences with pauses and dash: 'I have never been willing...' begins steady, like stating a mind; 'always keeping — keeping' uses the dash to delay, like a sigh of cherishing; 'folding one small boat after another' slows with reduplication, like folding slowly; 'tossing from the boat down into the sea' closes on 'in,' like the light fall of tossing.句式以口语长句为主，间以停顿与破折号：「我从不肯妄弃了一张纸」平稳起势，如陈述心事；「总是留着——留着」以破折号制造延宕，如珍惜之叹；「叠成一只一只很小的船儿」以叠词放慢节奏，如叠船之缓；「从舟上抛下在海里」以「在」字收束，如抛船之轻落，四句由平而缓、由缓而落。
Reading note This poem is a model of free verse 'conveying feeling through repetition and reduplication'; though short, its rhythmic layers are exquisite. The beauty first comes from repetition: in 'always keeping — keeping,' 'keeping' repeats twice with a dash between, like a chant drawn out and delayed — the first 'keeping' is statement, the second a low return, the repetition ripples the 'cherishing' outward; this 'repetitive lyric' inherits the Shijing's repeated-stanza tradition (e.g. 'reeds lush, white dew frost'), Bing Xin speaking it in colloquial form, more pure. Next is the reduplication: 'one after another' makes the rhythm fine and light, like counting paper boats, paired with the light 'small,' reading with nursery innocence. Again, the dash and function words control breath: 'keeping — keeping' makes a pause like cherishing in concentration; 'from the boat down into the sea' uses the prepositions 'from' and 'in' to draw a long breath, like the gaze following the boat slowly into the sea. The whole writes lingering by repetition, innocence by reduplication, length by function words — pure yet lingering, exactly Bing Xin's mini-poem sound-beauty; recite gently and slowly, drawing out the repetitions, to gain the childlike-and-deep feeling.本诗是自由诗「以复沓与叠词传情」的典范，全诗虽短，节奏层次却极为细腻。其节奏之美首先来自「复沓」：「总是留着——留着」一句中「留着」重复两次，中间以破折号隔开，如吟哦之声被拉长、被延宕——第一个「留着」是陈述，第二个「留着」是低回，复沓使「珍惜」之情如涟漪层层荡开；这种「复沓抒情」的手法承《诗经》重章叠句的传统（如「蒹葭苍苍，白露为霜」），冰心以口语出之，更显清纯。其次是「叠词」的调度：「一只一只」的叠词使节奏细密轻快，如数点纸船之声，与「很小」的轻细相配，读来有童谣般的天真韵律。再次是「破折号与虚词」的呼吸控制：「留着——留着」的破折号制造停顿，如珍惜之凝神；「从舟上抛下在海里」以「从」「在」两个介词牵引，气息绵长，如目光随纸船缓缓落入海中。全诗以复沓写缠绵、以叠词写天真、以虚词写绵长，声调清纯而余韵隽永，正体现冰心「小诗体」的声韵之美，诵读时宜轻柔舒缓、复沓处拖音，方得童趣与深情交织之神。

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我从不肯妄弃了一张纸，总是留着——留着

I have never been willing to carelessly cast away a sheet of paper, always keeping it — keeping it.

我从来不肯随意丢弃一张纸，总是小心地留着——留着。

I never willingly throw away a single sheet of paper; I always keep it—keep it

开篇即写「叠船」前的珍惜，是全诗情感的起点。「我从不肯妄弃了一张纸」以「不肯妄弃」四字写对纸的珍惜——「不肯」见其执着，「妄弃」见其郑重，一张普通的纸，在诗人手中竟如此珍贵，这份珍惜已暗示：纸将承载不寻常的寄托。「总是留着——留着」的复沓是全句的点睛之笔：一个「留着」意犹未尽，破折号后复加一个「留着」，如吟哦之声缠绵往复，把「珍惜」之情推向深长——不是留一次，而是每次如此；不是为留纸，而是为留情。此句以「纸」起兴，以「留着」传情，为下文「叠船」「抛海」的举动蓄足情势，也是全诗「童趣」与「深情」交汇的第一层。

The paper. I never willingly throw away a single sheet of paper; I always keep it—keep it. The never-willingly-thrown-away paper and the always-keeping-keeping are the opening. To have kept it would be a keeping; the i-never-willingly-throw-away-a-single-sheet-of-paper-i-always-keep-it-keep-it is the keeping.

叠成一只一只很小的船儿，从舟上抛下在海里。

Folding it into one small boat after another, and tossing them from the boat down into the sea.

叠成一只一只很小的船儿，从船上抛下到海里。

folding it into tiny boats, one by one, and casting them from the boat into the sea.

此句写「叠船」「抛船」的动作，是全诗情感的落点。「一只一只」的叠词写船之小而多——诗人不肯丢弃的每一张纸，都叠成一只小纸船，数量之多正是思念之深；「很小」二字以「小」写船，更以「小」衬「大」——船越小，越经不起风浪，越显出思念的执拗与无望。「从舟上抛下在海里」以「舟」「海」对举：一叶纸船抛入万顷碧波，渺小与浩瀚的对照惊心动魄——明知纸船入海即沉，诗人仍一只一只地抛，这种「知其不可而为之」的执拗，正是思念的极致。「舟」是漂泊的象征，「海」是阻隔的象征，纸船入海，是思念跨越阻隔的唯一尝试，虽无望而不断，童趣的动作里藏着最深的乡愁。

The boats. folding it into tiny boats, one by one, and casting them from the boat into the sea. The folded tiny boats one by one and the cast-into-the-sea are the close. To have folded the boats would be a folding; the folding-it-into-tiny-boats-one-by-one-and-casting-them-from-the-boat-into-the-sea is the folding.

Study

Word focus

妄弃 To carelessly cast away; in 'I have never been willing to carelessly cast away a sheet of paper,' it shows the poet's solemn cherishing — a plain sheet is precious because it will bear her longing; the negative phrasing already hints the paper is no ordinary thing. 「我从不肯妄弃了一张纸」中的「妄弃」意为「随意丢弃」，是全诗情感的第一个支点。「妄」本义为胡乱、随意，与「弃」连用，写「丢弃」之轻率；而诗人以「不肯妄弃」的否定句式，把「不随意丢弃」作为自己的准则——一张纸尚且不肯妄弃，何况纸中所寄之情？「不肯」二字见其执着，「妄弃」二字见其郑重，一个短语已暗示：在诗人眼中，纸不是寻常之物，而是可承载寄托的载体。此词的选择，把「珍惜」写得既有童趣（如小孩珍藏彩纸）又有深情（纸将化为思念之舟），为下文「叠成一只一只很小的船儿」的郑重其事作了铺垫，是「一字立骨」的妙笔。
一只一只 One after another; the reduplication writes the boats' multitude — every saved sheet folded into a boat, longing accumulating line by line; paired with 'small,' the smaller and more numerous, the heavier the longing conveyed — a classic 'small-seeing-great' device. 「叠成一只一只很小的船儿」中的「一只一只」是全诗数量与情感的双重叠加。叠词「一只一只」写纸船之繁多——诗人把不肯妄弃的每一张纸都叠成船，一只接一只，如思念之绵延不绝、层层累积；同时「一只一只」以小写大：船是极小的，数量是极多的，越小越多的对照中，思念的「重量」被悄悄托出——船越多，说明留存的纸越多，留存的纸越多，说明「不肯妄弃」的珍惜越深。叠词在声调上亦造成绵密的节奏，如数点思念之声。与「很小」相配，「一只一只很小」六个字，把「以小见大」的艺术发挥到极致：船越小，越衬出思念之重、越见出抛船之执，是冰心炼字炼意的典范。
抛下 To toss down; the only verb, writing longing's stubbornness and helplessness — not solemnly 'placing' but casually 'tossing,' yet precisely this casualness contrasts the deep feeling: she knows the boats will sink yet tosses them one by one, the light act hiding the deepest sorrow. 「从舟上抛下在海里」中的「抛下」是全诗唯一的动词，写尽思念的执拗与无助。「抛」字见动作之随意——不是郑重「放下」，也不是「放入」，而是随手「抛下」，仿佛这些纸船不过是寻常玩具；然而正是这种「随意」的动作，反衬出思念的深沉：诗人明知纸船入海即沉、漂不到母亲身边，却仍一只一只地抛，仿佛抛出的不是纸船，而是积压的思念。「下」字写方向之向下——纸船离手，坠落海面，如思念无处安放、只能沉没。「抛下」的轻与思念的重形成巨大反差：动作越轻，心事越重，童趣之下藏着最深的悲悯，是「以轻写重」的典范笔法。

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纸船·寄母亲 Paper Boats: To Mother 冰心 · 同诗异题，本为全篇之起兴 Same poem, different title — this excerpt is its opening.

'Paper Boats: To Mother' is the complete version of 'Paper Boats'; the full poem continues 'Mother, if in your dream you see a tiny white boat, do not wonder that it strays into your dream... it is your dearest daughter's, folded with tears, beseeching it across ten thousand waters and thousand mountains to carry her love and sorrow home,' stating the 'to mother' theme; this excerpt takes only the opening, writing the acts of 'folding' and 'tossing.' Read together: the excerpt is the 'evocation' — the cherishing of 'not willing to carelessly cast away' and 'always keeping — keeping' prepares the feeling for the later 'folded with tears' boats; the 'one small after another' boats are exactly the boats 'carrying love and sorrow.' Alone, the excerpt shows only childlike play and cherishing; with the whole, one sees the tears of longing and the depth of motherly love — the two versions read together are the complete path to understanding Bing Xin's 'motherly-love theme.'

「纸船·寄母亲」是《纸船》的完整版本，全诗续写「母亲，倘若你梦中看见一只很小的白船儿，不要惊讶它无端入梦……这是你至爱的女儿含着泪叠的，万水千山求它载着她的爱和悲哀归去」，点明「寄母亲」的题旨；本版本节选开头，仅写「叠船」「抛船」的动作。合观可知：节选部分是「起兴」——「不肯妄弃一张纸」「总是留着——留着」的珍惜，正是为后文「含着泪叠的」纸船所作的情感铺垫；「一只一只很小」的船，正是「载着爱和悲哀」的船。单看节选，只见童趣与珍惜；合观全诗，方见思念之泪与母爱之深，两本互参是理解冰心「母爱主题」的完整途径。

 寄小读者·通讯一 Letters to Young Readers: Communiqué No. 1 冰心 · 同写赴美途中的思亲，诗文互为映照 Both write homesickness on the America voyage — poem and prose reflecting each other.

'Letters to Young Readers: Communiqué No. 1' was written on Bing Xin's America voyage, recounting the sea journey in prose, likewise revealing longing for mother and praise of 'motherly love' and 'childlike heart'; 'Paper Boats' writes the same scene in verse, condensing longing into the act of 'folding paper boats.' One prose, one poem; one expansive, one condensed: the prose exhausts the journey's sights and mood-swings, the poem takes only the instant of 'folding' and 'tossing'; the prose's feeling is outgoing, the poem's inward. Read together they show Bing Xin's 'motherly-love theme' in two genres and her unique aesthetic of 'writing deep feeling through childlike heart.'

《寄小读者·通讯一》写于冰心赴美途中，以散文笔法记述海上航程，同样流露出对母亲的思念与对「母爱」「童心」的礼赞；《纸船》以诗笔写同一情境，把思念凝于「叠纸船」这一动作。两篇一散文一诗歌，一铺叙一凝练：散文写尽旅途见闻与心绪起伏，诗歌只取「叠船」「抛船」一瞬；散文情感外放，诗歌情感内敛。合观可见冰心「母爱主题」在散文与诗歌两种文体中的不同表现，亦见其「以童心写深情」的独特美学。

 乡愁·余光中 Nostalgia: Yu Guangzhong 余光中 · 同以「物象寄托乡思」的两岸名作 Both landmark works using objects to lodge homesickness.

Yu Guangzhong's 'Nostalgia' uses four images — 'stamp,' 'boat ticket,' 'grave,' 'strait' — to write nostalgia across four life stages, its repeated 'I am on this side, mother on that side' chanting three times; Bing Xin's 'Paper Boats' uses the single image of 'paper boat' to write longing on the America voyage, its 'keeping — keeping' repetition lingering. Both lodge homesickness in objects and use repetition for feeling; the difference is in the layers of emotion: 'Nostalgia' expands from personal to national homesickness, deep and broad; 'Paper Boats' focuses on motherly love and childlike heart, pure in feeling. One writes life through four images, one writes one feeling through one object; Yu is grave and arrested, Bing Xin clear and gentle. Read together they show the 'nostalgia' motif in new poetry expanding from 'personal thought' to 'state-and-home thought,' and the different lyric styles of poets across the strait.

余光中《乡愁》以「邮票」「船票」「坟墓」「海峡」四个意象，写人生四阶段的乡愁，「我在这头，母亲在那头」的复沓结构一唱三叹；冰心《纸船》以「纸船」一个意象，写赴美途中的思亲，「留着——留着」的复沓缠绵往复。两诗同以「物象寄托乡思」、同用「复沓传情」，差别在情思的层次：《乡愁》由个人乡愁扩展到民族乡愁，内涵深广；《纸船》专注母爱与童心，情感纯净。一以四象写人生，一以一物写一情；余光中沉郁顿挫，冰心清纯温婉。并读可见「乡愁」母题在新诗中从「个人之思」到「家国之思」的展开，亦见两岸诗人不同的抒情风格。