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卜算子·燕子

Song of Divination: Swallows

蒋春霖

Jiang Chunlin

咏物On Objects 感怀Reflections

燕子不曾来,小院阴阴雨。
一角阑干聚落花,此是春归处。
弹泪别东风,把酒浇飞絮。
化了浮萍也是愁,莫向天涯去。

Swallows never come, the small yard is gloomy with rain.
At a corner of the railing, fallen petals gather; this is where spring returns.
I flick tears to bid the east wind farewell, pour wine on flying willow down.
Even if they turn into duckweed, it's still grief — don't go to the world's end.
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Meaning

A lonely scene: no swallows, rainy yard, fallen petals. The poet bids farewell to spring and its remnants, expressing that even transformed, sorrow remains. He warns the willow fluff not to drift away, embodying his own rootless melancholy.

燕子总也不曾飞来,小院里阴雨凄凄。栏杆一角堆积着落花,这里便是春天归去的地方。弹着泪滴辞别东风,举起酒杯浇奠飞絮。即便化作浮萍也还是愁,可莫要飘向那天涯去。

Appreciation

This poem by Jiang Chunlin, a Qing dynasty poet who lived a drifting life, uses the departure of spring to convey personal sorrow. The imagery is cold and lonely: rain, fallen flowers, willow catkins, duckweed. The concluding line is especially poignant, showing that sorrow is inescapable.

【白话串讲】 “燕子不曾来,小院阴阴雨”——蒋春霖写:燕子没来,小院阴雨。“弹泪别东风,把酒浇飞絮”——他哭着送别春风。“化了浮萍也是愁,莫向天涯去”——就算化作浮萍,也是愁。 【意象与手法】 全词以「燕子」「阴雨」「落花」「飞絮」「浮萍」五组意象串起「春去人愁」的抒情主线,意象清冷而寄托深重。上片以燕子之缺席写人之孤寂,「阴阴」叠字染出凄黯氛围;「一角阑干聚落花,此是春归处」化虚为实,将「春归」坐实为落花堆积的一角,构思精细。下片「弹泪别东风,把酒浇飞絮」,以泪别春、以酒奠絮,将送春写得如奠故人,痴绝哀绝;结句「化了浮萍也是愁,莫向天涯去」以浮萍喻飘零,又进一层言「化了也还是愁」,痴语中见深哀。章法上片写景、下片言情,情景相生;语言白描不事雕琢,而深情自见。 【情感与主旨】 蒋春霖,咸丰间曾官两淮盐大使,后弃官漂泊,穷愁潦倒,词集名《水云楼词》,谭献推为「咸丰词坛第一」。此词借「无燕之春」写身世飘零之悲:燕子不来是无人相顾的孤寂,春归何处是美好时光的消逝,飞絮浮萍是自身漂泊的写照。词人将身世之悲物化于春景之中,愈是写春之无情,愈见人之多情;「莫向天涯去」的叮嘱,实是自怜自伤的痴语。全词于咏物中寄慨,于写景中寓悲,愁深而语婉,是「以我观物,故物皆著我之色彩」的典范。 【名句点睛】 常考「化了浮萍也是愁,莫向天涯去」的深意:浮萍喻身世飘零,而「化了也还是愁」则进一层写出愁之不可解、无可逃,愁已渗入生命存在的每一形态,比文天祥「身世浮沉雨打萍」的比喻更为沉痛。亦常考「燕子不曾来,小院阴阴雨」的起兴手法:以燕子之缺席写人之孤寂,以「阴阴」叠字染凄黯氛围,无燕之春即无伴之人,虚实相生,为全词定调。落花聚于阑干一角、「此是春归处」的化虚为实,亦是鉴赏要点。

Background

Jiang Chunlin (1818-1868) served as a salt official during the Xianfeng era but later resigned and wandered in poverty. His collection is 'Water and Cloud Tower Lyrics.' This poem likely reflects his middle-aged loneliness in Jiangnan. The 'swallows not coming' symbolizes solitude, and the 'return of spring' implies the loss of good times.

蒋春霖(1818—1868),字鹿潭,江苏江阴人,晚清词坛大家,词集名《水云楼词》。其一生以咸丰年间任两淮盐大使(东台富安场盐官)为转折:为奉养双亲、维持家计,奔走于幕府盐场之间,后遭母丧,弃官归隐,漂泊江淮,穷愁潦倒,最终于同治七年(1868)在吴江垂虹桥下投水自尽,年仅五十一岁。谭献《箧中词》推其为「咸丰词坛第一」,与纳兰性德、朱彝尊诸家并称清词大家。此《卜算子·燕子》约作于中年落拓、寄居江南之时。时值清季衰世,太平天国战乱频仍,江南文人多流离失所;蒋春霖早年屡困场屋,科场失意,又值兵燹之祸,家业荡然,故其笔下春景多带寒伧之色。词以「燕子不曾来」起兴:燕子本是春归旧垒的候鸟,今竟不来,实写无人相顾的孤寂,暗喻知音之稀与世情之冷;「春归处」「别东风」则暗喻美好时光与际遇之消逝,是身世之悲的物化表达。全词作于「无燕之春」,正透出词人「有家难归、有春难住」的末世苍凉,其愁非一时之感触,实为半生漂泊与一代衰世交织而成。

Art

The upper stanza contrasts the absence of swallows with the lingering rain, using reduplication 'yinyin' to create a gloomy mood. The line 'a corner of the railing gathers fallen petals' concretizes abstract spring's return. The lower stanza uses dramatic gestures like flicking tears and pouring wine. The final line uses the metaphor of duckweed to emphasize unending sorrow.

上片「燕子不曾来,小院阴阴雨」,以燕子之缺席写人之孤寂,属反面着笔、以无写有:燕来本是寻常春景,偏偏不来,反衬出庭院之冷清与人情之疏淡;「阴阴」叠字染出凄黯氛围,雨声雨色弥漫小院,为全词定下低抑的基调。「一角阑干聚落花,此是春归处」将抽象的「春归」坐实为落花堆积的一角阑干,构思精细——不说春去何处,而说春归于此,以具体可感的物象收束虚无缥缈的时序,是化虚为实的高明笔法;「一角」二字尤见分寸,落花不多,恰见春残之甚。下片「弹泪别东风,把酒浇飞絮」,「弹泪」「浇」字痴绝:以泪别东风,是将东风视为可与之作别之人;把酒浇奠飞絮,是替无主的杨花送葬,将送春写得如奠故人,痴语之中深情自见。「弹泪」与「把酒」对举,一泪一酒,皆以痴情供养无情的春天,愈痴愈哀。结句「化了浮萍也是愁,莫向天涯去」以浮萍喻飘零,又进一层:杨花入水化为浮萍,本已是身世随波之写照,词人却说即便化了浮萍也还是愁,痴语中见深哀——愁已渗透生命之存在本身,无可逃遁;「莫向天涯去」以叮嘱的语气收束,将满腔悲悯倾注于一片飞絮,以小见大。通篇意象清冷,以无燕之春写有恨之人,章法上片写景、下片言情,情景相生,浑然一气。

Allusions

Duckweed (浮萍) traditionally symbolizes drifting life (e.g., Wen Tianxiang's poem). Jiang deepens the trope: even if turned to duckweed, sorrow persists. 'East wind' and 'flying willow down' are conventional images for spring's end, seen in Su Shi's works. No obscure allusions, but common images are renewed with fresh emotion.

「浮萍」本于《尔雅·释草》「萍,蓱也」之训,古诗词中多用以喻身世飘零无依,如文天祥「山河破碎风飘絮,身世浮沉雨打萍」,即以风絮雨萍写国破家亡之痛;蒋词「化了浮萍也是愁」化用此意,以浮萍之随波逐流喻己之漂泊不定,且更进一层——说杨花落入水中化作浮萍,依然是愁,愁之深广已超越形体之变化,「愁」成为贯穿生死去留的宿命,较前人更见沉痛。又「东风」「飞絮」为送春的传统意象:东风一起则春去,飞絮满天则春残,苏轼「送春春去几时回」、秦观「飞絮落花时候一登楼」皆写此意,「弹泪别东风」即是在东风中送别春天,以人别离之情移于时序代谢。「阑干聚落花」暗合晏几道「落花人独立,微雨燕双飞」之句境,而蒋词反其道行之——燕子不来,落花独聚,孤寂更甚,正见其善于点化前人而自成境界。全词不用僻典,不以博学炫人,而以习见意象翻新出奇,将「燕子」「阴雨」「落花」「飞絮」「浮萍」诸物串成一条「春去人愁」的意象链,物物相生、层层递进,凄婉入骨,正合况周颐论词所谓「重、拙、大」中「重」字之旨——以寻常物象承载深重愁情,故能举重若轻。

Commentary

Tan Xian praised Jiang Chunlin as 'first among Xianfeng era ci poets.' Chen Tingzhuo said his style is 'somber and forceful, approaching Zhang Yan.' This poem is known for its deep sorrow expressed through simple imagery. The last line is especially admired for its desperate tone.

谭献《箧中词》评蒋春霖「流别甚正,家数颇大」,推为咸丰一代词坛领袖;陈廷焯《白雨斋词话》称其「沉郁顿挫,逼近玉田(张炎)」,以其词兼得周邦彦之浑厚与张炎之清空;王国维虽不喜清词,亦谓「水云楼词,深得南宋诸家之妙」。此词以白描写深愁,无一字藻饰,而愁情自见,近人唐圭璋以为「鹿潭小令最善寄托」,即此等小令,于咏物中寄身世之悲,于写景中寓家国之痛,不著一字,尽得风流。论者谓其词「于清婉中见沉咽」:清婉者,语言之清丽、意象之明净;沉咽者,情感之深重、声调之低抑,二者相反相成,正是蒋春霖独造之境。结句「莫向天涯去」五字,痴绝哀绝,将一片飞絮视同知己,殷殷叮嘱,痴情之至,哀感之深,足与北宋小令争席——前人论小令每以北宋为宗(晏殊、欧阳修、晏几道),而蒋春霖以清人之笔写末世之愁,于婉约一脉中自开境界,其以小令写大哀的本领,实为晚清词坛之绝响,影响及于清末民初诸家,至今论清词者犹推重之。

Prosody

Form Ci poem (Song of Divination, 44 characters)词·《卜算子》双调四十四字
Rhyme Two oblique rhymes per stanza (yu, chu; xu, qu, from the Yu/Qu rhyme group)上、下片各四句两仄韵(雨、处;絮、去),押御、遇韵,仄声韵低抑凄戾
Tone pattern The pattern alternates 5,5,7,5 syllables with oblique rhymes, suited to plaintive moods词依《卜算子》谱,句式以五、五、七、五相间,上下片同格,仄韵令词音节低抑,宜写幽愁
Reading note Short ci form with mournful tones《卜算子》为双调小令,四十四字,上下片各四句,句式五、五、七、五相间,两仄韵,是宋词中短小规整的令调之一(苏轼、陆游、严蕊皆有传世之作)。蒋春霖此词严守词谱:上片「燕子不曾来,小院阴阴雨。一角阑干聚落花,此是春归处」与下片「弹泪别东风,把酒浇飞絮。化了浮萍也是愁,莫向天涯去」句式全同,两片各押两仄韵,上片韵脚「雨」「处」、下片韵脚「絮」「去」皆属仄声韵部(御、遇韵),仄韵令词音节低抑,宜写幽愁,与词中凄清孤寂之情正相吻合。「卜算子」调名取自卖卜算命之意,苏轼始用此调写「缺月挂疏桐,漏断人初静」的孤寂之境,蒋春霖沿其调而更进一层,以之写无燕之春、飘零之愁,声情与辞情相凑。全词句句仄声字多而促节,如「不曾来」「阴阴雨」「聚落花」「春归处」「别东风」「浇飞絮」「也是愁」「天涯去」,短句促节,仄声铿锵而低回,诵读时自有一种沉咽之感;末句「莫向天涯去」五字连用去声字(莫、向、去)收束,如一声长叹,余音低回不尽,正合「沉郁顿挫」之评。凡此皆见蒋春霖精于音律、以声写情之功,小令虽短,而声情并茂,足为《卜算子》一调之典范。

Line by line

燕子不曾来,小院阴阴雨

Swallows never come; the small yard is gloomy with rain.

燕子总也不曾飞来,小院里阴雨凄凄。

The swallows have never come; over the small courtyard the rain drips, dark and chill.

起句即定全词之调,以燕子之缺席写人之孤寂。「燕子不曾来」五字平白如话,而意味极深:燕子本是春天归来旧垒的常客,是家园与生机的象征,今竟不来,则小院之冷落可知,主人之无伴可知;不说「人不在」,而说「燕不来」,以物之缺席写人之孤寂,是侧面着笔、以无写有。「小院阴阴雨」接写实景,「阴阴」叠字既写天色之晦暗、雨气之弥漫,又暗写心境之郁结,以景染情;「小院」之「小」与「阴阴」之「阴」相配,愈显局促凄凉。两句一虚一实:燕子不来是想象中的缺憾,阴雨满院是眼前的实景,虚实相生,共同营造出无人问津、春意阑珊的孤寂氛围,为全词「春归人愁」的展开埋下伏笔。

The opening line fixes the tone of the whole ci, writing human solitude through the swallows' absence. The swallows have never come: five words as plain as speech, yet deep in meaning; swallows normally return in spring to their old nests, emblems of home and life, and their coming is not, so the desolation of the small courtyard and the loneliness of its master go without saying. It says not the person is gone, but the swallows do not come, writing solitude through absence, the indirect stroke, writing fullness through emptiness. Over the small courtyard the rain drips, dark and chill gives the real scene: the reduplicated dark writes the gloomy sky and the spreading rain, and secretly the clogged mood; the small of the courtyard matches the dark of the rain, the more cramped and bleak. Two lines, one imagined, one real: the swallows' non-arrival is the imagined lack, the rainy courtyard the present scene; real and imagined play together, building the forsaken, spring-ailing atmosphere and preparing the spring-departed, man-sorrowing development.

一角阑干聚落花,此是春归处

At a corner of the railing, fallen flowers gather; this is where spring returns.

栏杆一角堆积着落花,这里便是春天归去的地方。

At one corner of the railing the fallen blossoms have gathered; here, I think, is where spring has gone.

此句将抽象的「春归」坐实为落花堆积的一角阑干,构思精细,是全词炼意之眼。春去本无形迹,词人却指出具体所在——那聚着落花的一角阑干,便是春天归去的地方;不说「春已去」,而说「此是春归处」,仿佛春有来去之踪、可寻可指,以实写虚,使虚无缥缈的时序流转变得触手可及。「一角」二字尤见分寸与匠心:落花不多,正见春残之甚、庭院之荒;若写满院落花,反嫌堆垛。「聚」字亦精,落花不是散落一地,而是被风雨推聚于一角,暗喻繁华凋零后被弃置一隅的命运,与词人身世暗合。「阑干」与「小院」呼应,把读者的视线从天空雨幕收束到庭院一角,由大及小,愁绪也随之凝结;春归之处即愁聚之处,景语至此已全是情语。

The line fixes abstract spring-departure at the railing corner where fallen blossoms have gathered, a finely conceived stroke, the thought's eye of the ci. Spring's going has no trace, yet the poet points to a concrete place: the railing corner heaped with petals is where spring has gone home; it says not spring is gone, but this is where spring has gone, as though spring had tracks to follow, writing the void through the concrete, making the intangible passage of seasons palpable. The word one corner shows exact measure: few petals, precisely because spring is far spent and the court deserted; a courtyard full of blossoms would seem overdone. The word gathered is also fine: the fallen petals are not scattered but driven by wind and rain into one corner, secretly figureing the fate of fallen splendor abandoned to a corner, matching the poet's own lot. The railing echoes the small courtyard, drawing the gaze from the rainy sky to the courtyard corner, large to small, and the grief congeals: where spring has gone, there grief gathers; scene-language here is wholly feeling-language.

弹泪别东风,把酒浇飞絮

I flick tears to bid farewell to the east wind; I pour wine on the flying willow down.

弹着泪滴辞别东风,举起酒杯浇奠飞絮。

I flick away my tears as I take leave of the east wind; I lift the cup and pour a libation to the flying willow catkins.

此句将送春写得如奠故人,痴绝哀绝。「弹泪别东风」把东风视为可以作别之人:东风本是送春而来、又催春而去的自然之风,词人却对它弹泪而别,是将时序代谢当作生离死别来对待,痴情之至;「弹」字写泪之轻落,不用「挥」不用「流」,正见无可奈何的纤细哀婉。「把酒浇飞絮」更奇:飞絮本是无主飘零之物,词人却举杯浇奠,如祭亡友,是替春天、替自己浇一杯送行之酒;「浇」字既写倾酒之态,又暗含祭奠之意,庄重而悲凉。两句对举,「弹泪」对「把酒」、「别」对「浇」,一泪一酒,皆以痴情供养无情的春天,愈痴愈哀。飞絮之飘零即词人之飘零,浇奠飞絮实为浇奠自己,送春亦即自伤,物我一体,深婉动人。

The line writes the seeing-off of spring as though offering libation to an old friend, carried to a pitch of devoted sorrow. I flick away my tears as I take leave of the east wind treats the east wind as a person one can part from: the east wind brings spring and urges it away, yet the poet flicks tears at its parting, treating the turn of the seasons as life and death, infatuation itself. The word flick writes the light falling of tears, neither wave nor stream, precisely the delicate, helpless grief. I lift the cup and pour a libation to the flying willow catkins is stranger still: catkins drift with no master, yet the poet raises the cup in libation as if sacrificing to a dead friend, pouring a farewell cup for spring and for himself; the word pour writes at once the tipping of wine and the meaning of sacrifice, solemn and mournful. The two lines pair, flick tears against lift the cup, take leave against pour, a tear and a cup, both feeding the ruthless spring with devotion; the more devoted, the more mournful. The drifting catkins are the poet's own drifting; pouring the libation to the catkins is pouring it to himself, seeing off spring is self-mourning; object and self are one, deep and moving.

化了浮萍也是愁,莫向天涯去

Even if they turn into duckweed, it's still grief; don't go to the horizon.

即便化作浮萍也还是愁,可莫要飘向那天涯去。

Even turned to duckweed, it is still sorrow; oh, do not drift away to the world's edge.

结句为全词情感的顶点,以浮萍喻飘零,又进一层作痴语,愁之不可解至此。杨花入水化为浮萍本是古人的自然观察(所谓「萍者,杨花所化」),词人借来写身世:飞絮飘向天涯,落入水中化为浮萍,随波逐流,正如自己漂泊江湖、无处安身;而「化了浮萍也是愁」偏要说即便变了形骸、换了身份,依然是愁——愁不因形体之变而消解,已渗入生命存在的每一重形态,无可逃遁,也无从化解,比「身世浮沉雨打萍」的比喻更进一层,直写愁之本体。「莫向天涯去」以叮嘱的口吻收束:明知飞絮必将飘去,却仍殷殷嘱咐它莫往天涯,是把一片无知的飞絮视同知己,痴语中见深哀;「天涯」是飘零的终点,亦是词人自己身世的隐喻,叮嘱飞絮实为怜惜自己。五字收束全词,痴绝哀绝,余韵不尽。

The closing line is the emotional peak of the ci, figureing exile through duckweed, then advancing one step further into a foolish, devoted entreaty, grief beyond resolution. That willow flowers turn to duckweed on entering water was an ancient observation, the duckweed is the willow flower transformed; the poet borrows it for his lot: catkins drift to the world's edge, fall into water, become duckweed, borne on the current, as he drifts through the world with no resting place; yet even turned to duckweed, it is still grief insists that even changed in form, changed in identity, it is still sorrow: grief is not dissolved by change of shape, it has seeped into every form of existence, inescapable and unresolvable, one step beyond the figure of my floating fate like rain-beaten duckweed, writing the very substance of sorrow. Oh, do not drift away to the world's edge closes in a tone of entreaty: knowing the catkins must drift, yet still urging them not to go to the edge of the world, treating a handful of senseless catkins as a confidant, deep grief in a foolish entreaty; the world's edge is the end of drifting, and the figure of the poet's own lot, the entreaty to the catkins is pity for himself. Five words close the ci, foolish and sorrowful to the utmost, endless aftertone.

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Word focus

阴阴 gloomy, dark (reduplication) 「阴阴」是「小院阴阴雨」中的叠字,写雨中庭院晦暗凄冷之状,以景染情,奠定全词孤寂基调。叠字之妙有三:其一,摹状精切,「阴阴」既写天色之阴沉(云低雨密),又写雨气之弥漫(院中处处皆阴),兼写触觉上的湿冷,一字而兼摄视听肤受;其二,以声助情,两字相叠,音节低回绵长,如雨声淅沥不绝,声情与辞情相凑;其三,以景写心,「阴阴」既是眼前实景,又是心境的外化——庭院阴阴,正写词人心中阴云密布、郁结难舒。与「小院」之「小」相配,愈见局促凄凉;与「燕子不曾来」的缺憾相接,更觉无人相伴的冷清。「阴阴」不用「沉沉」「漠漠」等更常见的叠字,正取其轻而绵的质感,恰合小令含蓄蕴藉的体格,是炼字而不见炼痕的典范。
弹泪 to flick away tears 「弹泪」之「弹」字,是「弹泪别东风」中最见功力的动词,写泪之轻落,较「挥泪」「流泪」更显无可奈何的纤细哀婉。「挥」则用力,含决绝之意;「流」则顺势,近于被动;而「弹」字轻巧,如以指轻拂,泪珠应手而落,动作既细且促,正见词人想忍住而又忍不住、终于轻轻弹去的一点泪光——哀而不嚎,悲而不放,是中年人的沉痛,不是少年人的号啕。「弹」还有一层意味:既云「弹」,则泪是「弹落」的,仿佛泪珠成了可弹之物,词人对自己的眼泪亦存一分矜持与自嘲,痴中带苦。与下句「把酒浇飞絮」的「浇」字对举,一弹一浇,动作皆轻皆细,恰与「小院」「一角」等微物相配,全词以小写大、以轻写重,「弹泪」正是这种笔法的枢纽。
聚 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. 「聚」字写落花被风雨推聚于一角,是「一角阑干聚落花」的诗眼。不用「落」「积」「堆」而用「聚」,妙在以动写静、以有主写无主:「落」「积」是自然堆积,近乎静态;「聚」则暗含一股力量——风雨把落花驱赶到一处,落花自己无从选择,只能被动聚拢。这一层被动的意味,正暗合词人身世:如落花之被风雨驱赶,如飞絮之随风飘荡,身不由己。又「聚」与「一角」相配,落花不多而聚于一处,恰见春残之甚、庭院之荒,若写满院堆积反嫌堆垛;聚于一角,反更突出那一点触目的残红。「聚」字还使「此是春归处」有了着落:春之归处,正是落花被聚拢的角落,化虚为实,构思精细。一字之择,既状物之形,又寄人之情,又成章法之枢纽,可谓一字三用。

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咏和宫词 Song of Harmony Palace (清) · 同属清词咏物抒怀一路 Both are Qing ci poems using objects to express personal sorrow

Compare the symbolic use of objects to convey deep emotion.

《咏和宫词》与《卜算子·燕子》同属清词咏物抒怀一路,皆以物象寄身世之悲,可比较其寄托手法之异同。蒋词咏燕子而燕子不来,咏飞絮浮萍而落笔于「愁」,取象皆轻清细小,寄托则深重沉痛,是「以小写大」的典型;《咏和宫词》咏物亦不滞于物,借物之形色寄托家国之思与身世之感。二词相较,蒋词以白描与痴语取胜,不事雕琢而深情自见;咏和宫词则多缘物设色、铺排渲染,寄托较为显豁。合观可见清词咏物一体由「体物」向「写心」演进的轨迹:物象只是媒介,词人之「愁」与「悲」才是归宿;同样以物寄悲,蒋春霖更重内敛含蓄,以不言言之,正见其「沉郁」之宗风。

绮怀 Charming Thoughts 黄景仁 · 同写清中叶文人孤寂落拓之情 Both express the solitude and frustration of Qing dynasty literati

Jiang's poem is cold and clear, while Huang's is ornate; both depict rootlessness.

黄景仁《绮怀》组诗与蒋春霖《卜算子·燕子》同写清中叶文人孤寂落拓之情,一为七律组诗,一为小令,体裁虽异,而「寒士之悲」一脉相通。蒋词清冷:取象皆阴雨、落花、飞絮、浮萍等清寒之物,语言白描,情感内敛,愁在言外;黄诗绮丽:多写「似此星辰非昨夜,为谁风露立中宵」的华美之句,以绮语写苦情,愁在言内而愈显其痴。蒋春霖以清词写末世之愁,黄景仁以艳体写寒士之怀,一沉一放、一敛一丽,恰成清中叶寒士抒怀的双璧。对照二家,可见清词抒情由「缘情绮靡」转向「沉郁清刚」的趋向;而二人皆一生困顿、贫病漂泊,其作品之「愁」皆有真切的身世为底,非无病呻吟,故能感人至深。