清 Qing · 诗 Poem
西郊落花歌
Song of the Falling Flowers in the Western Suburbs
西郊落花天下奇，古人但赋伤春诗。
西郊车马一朝尽，定庵先生沽酒来赏之。
先生探春人不觉，先生送春人又嗤。
呼朋亦得三四子，出城失色神皆痴。
如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡；
如八万四千天女洗脸罢，齐向此地倾胭脂。
奇龙怪凤爱漂泊，琴高之鲤何反欲上天为？
玉皇宫中空若洗，三十六界无一青蛾眉。
又如先生平生之忧患，恍惚怪诞百出难穷期。
先生读书尽三藏，最喜维摩卷里多清词。
又闻净土落花深四寸，冥目观想尤神驰。
西方净国未可到，下笔绮语何漓漓。
安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时。
In one morning the carriages and horses of the western outskirts are all gone, and there comes Mr. Ding'an to buy wine and enjoy them.
The master went out to seek the spring and no one noticed; the master comes to send the spring off and men only jeer.
He gathers three or four friends as well, and as they leave the city their faces change and their spirits turn to wonder.
Like the Qiantang tide surging by night, like the battle of Kunyang scattering at dawn;
like eighty-four thousand heavenly maidens who have finished washing their faces, all tipping rouge over this one spot.
Strange dragons and phoenixes love to drift; why should the carp of Qin Gao wish to mount to heaven instead?
The palace of the Jade Emperor is empty as though washed clean, and in the thirty-six realms there is not one dark eyebrow left.
Again it is like the poet's own lifelong sorrows and trials — bewildering, monstrous, a hundred shapes beyond reckoning.
The master has read through the whole Tripitaka and takes the most delight in the clear words of the Vimalakirti sutra.
He has heard too that in the Pure Land the fallen flowers lie four inches deep, and with eyes closed his mind strays there in spirit.
The western land of purity cannot yet be reached; why then do the flowery words of his brush run on so freely?
Would that the trees had inexhaustible blossoms yet to rain down, new and fair — that three hundred and sixty days, every one of them, might be a season of falling flowers.
Meaning
Gong Zizhen goes out to the western outskirts of his city to watch the peach and plum petals come down, and refuses the traditional posture of the lament for spring. Where his predecessors wrote of loneliness and loss, he finds spectacle, humour and even ecstasy, comparing the shower to a tidal surge and a day of battle, and closes with a wish that the trees might bloom inexhaustibly so that falling flowers might be the constant condition of the year. The poem is at once a piece of praise of dissolution and a prayer for endless renewal, and it transforms a stock subject into an occasion for龚 self-mockery, Buddhist imagination and romantic strangeness.
西郊落花天下奇，古人但赋伤春诗。西郊车马一朝尽，定庵先生沽酒来赏之。先生探春人不觉，先生送春人又嗤。呼朋亦得三四子，出城失色神皆痴。如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡；如八万四千天女洗脸罢，齐向此地倾胭脂。奇龙怪凤爱漂泊，琴高之鲤何反欲上天为？玉皇宫中空若洗，三十六界无一青蛾眉。又如先生平生之忧患，恍惚怪诞百出难穷期。先生读书尽三藏，最喜维摩卷里多清词。又闻净土落花深四寸，冥目观想尤神驰。西方净国未可到，下笔绮语何漓漓。安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] The first couplet sets up the reversal: fallen flowers are a wonder of the age, yet the ancients could only write of the sorrow of spring. The middle of the poem places the poet himself at the scene — drunken, mocked by the crowd, and yet unable to stop looking. [Structure] The verse moves in waves: marvel, self-mockery, then a long central simile-sequence in which the petals are compared to a tide, a battle, a company of washer-maidens, a pile of golden steles, and finally the poet's own sorrows. The number and variety of the similes themselves enact the excess the poem celebrates. [Imagery] The petals never appear as a quiet drift; they are always an event with magnitude — 澎湃, 披靡, 倾胭脂, 神驰 — so that the eye is swept rather than caressed. The Buddhistregister (三藏, 维摩, 净土, 三十六界) lifts the private spectacle into a vision of a buddha-field in ruin, and the closing wish turns the whole ruin into a perpetual feast. The tone and tonal extravagance are one and the same here: Gong's voice is recognisably his own because no one else could reconcile grief for a falling petal with a joke at the poet's own expense.
【白话串讲】 龚自珍写《西郊落花歌》：“西郊落花天下奇，古人但赋伤春诗”——“如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡”——他写西郊落花的壮观——如钱塘潮夜澎湃。 【意象与手法】 “西郊落花天下奇，古人但赋伤春诗”以反衬立论；“如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡”以潮涌战酣写落花之壮观；结以“安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时”以奇想写愿长见落花。意象瑰奇、气势磅礴。 【情感与主旨】 咏落花而一反伤春旧调，以壮阔笔法写落花之奇美，寄寓对生命盛放与凋零的独特感悟，体现龚自珍诗奇崛浪漫的风格。 【名句点睛】 常考“如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡”以潮涌战酣写落花壮观；“三百六十日长是落花时”以长是落花时写愿常见落花。
Background
Gong Zizhen (1792–1841), courtesy name Seren, so Ding'an, was from Renhe in Zhejiang — a thinker, statesman, calligrapher and one of the most original poets of the Qing. He lived in the decades when the empire's prosperity was turning into decline, and his writing is full of an uneasy energy that looks forward to the crisis not far off. This poem belongs with his famous drinking and wandering verses of the late 1810s and 1820s, composed after his dismissal from the Hanlin academy and during years of personal bereavement and political disenchantment. Falling blossoms were therefore not merely an aesthetic occasion for him; the poem was written, as his biographers note, on one of his great drinking outings, and the '先生' who marvels at the spectacle is the poet himself, seen from the outside.
《西郊落花歌》为清代诗人龚自珍所作诗。龚自珍（1792—1841），字璱人，号定盦，浙江仁和人，清代思想家、诗人、文学家。此诗写咏物落花，为咏西郊落花之作。诗中「西郊落花天下奇，古人但赋伤春诗」写西郊落花天下奇，古人但赋伤春诗；「如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡」写如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡；「先生读书尽三藏，最喜维摩卷里多清词」写先生读书尽三藏，最喜维摩卷里多清词；「安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时」写安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时。龚自珍此诗以咏物落花、三百六十日长是落花时写其落花之情，瑰奇咏物，是龚自珍诗中的名篇。此篇《西郊落花歌》在历代选本中多被收录，其艺术价值与流传之广，正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事，遂使此作历千载而犹有生气，为后人所称赏不绝。
Art
The poem is built on the tactic of denying the expected and prizing the strange. It opens by overturning the convention it invokes ('the ancients only wrote poems deploring the loss of spring') and then sustains that posture through eleven further lines. Its dominant device is the loaded simile: each 如 introduces a picture drawn from a different domain — nature, war, mythology, court literature, personal biography — and the accumulation of them replaces description. The second half turns imageless for a moment ('the master reads the whole Tripitaka') and then plunges back into vision, so the poem swells rather than develops. Gong also uses the second person and the conversational 'why?' to keep the reader inside his excitement: 'why should the carp of Qin Gao wish to mount to heaven?' is not a question but a comic deflection of his own tears. The last line breaks the syntax of desire with a rhetorical question and leaves the wish unresolved.
此诗艺术上以「瑰奇咏物、以落花写情」见长。全诗由西郊落花天下奇而如钱塘潮夜澎湃而先生读书尽三藏。起「西郊落花天下奇，古人但赋伤春诗」写西郊落花天下奇：西郊落花天下奇，古人但赋伤春诗；「如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡」写如钱塘潮夜澎湃：如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡；「先生读书尽三藏，最喜维摩卷里多清词」写先生读书尽三藏：先生读书尽三藏，最喜维摩卷里多清词；结「安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时」写三百六十日长是落花时：安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时。全诗以落花写情，由西郊落花天下奇而三百六十日长是落花时，瑰奇咏物，是龚自珍诗中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之，章法严谨而用意深曲，意象凝练而情韵悠长，读之愈久，愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健，堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇，足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。
Allusions
Several of the poem's pictures are classical. 钱塘潮, the tide of Qiantang, is the standard image of overwhelming force. 昆阳战 refers to the battle of Kunyang in AD 23, where the Xin ruler's army was routed by the early Hu; 披靡 (scattering) carries the whole memory of that collapse. 琴高之鲤's 琴高 is the Immortal Qin Gao, said to ride a carp back into the water; the joke is that even a fish longs for heaven while the poet is content to stay among falling petals. 维摩 points to the Vimalakirti sutra, one of Gong's favourite scriptures, whose 'clear words' supply a style of pure, unadorned writing. 三藏 means the whole Buddhist canon. 净土 and 三十六界 are the Pure Land and the thirty-six heavens, and the four-inch depth of blossoms in the Pure Land is a visionary imagen drawn from Buddhist texts on the western paradise.
诗中「西郊落花天下奇古人但赋伤春诗」「如钱塘潮夜澎湃如昆阳战晨披靡」「先生读书尽三藏最喜维摩卷里多清词」「安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者三百六十日长是落花时」等语，皆含典故故实。「西郊落花天下奇古人但赋伤春诗」用伤春之典（伤春写惜春），写西郊落花天下奇古人但赋伤春诗；「如钱塘潮夜澎湃如昆阳战晨披靡」用钱塘潮、昆阳战之典（钱塘潮写潮涌，昆阳战写战阵），写如钱塘潮夜澎湃如昆阳战晨披靡；「先生读书尽三藏最喜维摩卷里多清词」用维摩之典（维摩写维摩诘经），写先生读书尽三藏最喜维摩卷里多清词；「安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者三百六十日长是落花时」写安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者三百六十日长是落花时。诗人用伤春、钱塘潮、昆阳战、维摩之典入诗，不着痕迹，而把咏物落花之情写得真切可感，是善于熔铸典故的体现。
Commentary
This is among the most anthologised of Gong Zizhen's long poems and is often quoted for its opening and its close. Critics have long observed that the poem's strangeness is not mere decoration: by making the fall of the flowers splendid rather than pitiful, Gong preempts the elegies of his predecessors and asserts a personal myth of decline in which the poet is the last witness of a beauty that no one else sees. Later readers, facing the Opium War that followed within two decades, were quick to hear the 'lifelong sorrows' of the central line as an omen. The poem has been praised for its '瑰奇' (strangeness and grandeur) and is frequently cited as the clearest instance of Gong's fusion of Buddhist imagery with romantic extravagance.
这首《西郊落花歌》，是龚自珍写咏物落花之作，写西郊落花天下奇、如钱塘潮夜澎湃、先生读书尽三藏、三百六十日长是落花时之情，瑰奇咏物。起「西郊落花天下奇，古人但赋伤春诗」——西郊落花天下奇，古人但赋伤春诗。写西郊落花天下奇：西郊落花天下奇、古人但赋伤春诗——天下奇、伤春诗；「如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡」——如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡。写如钱塘潮夜澎湃：如钱塘潮夜澎湃、如昆阳战晨披靡——夜澎湃、晨披靡；「先生读书尽三藏，最喜维摩卷里多清词」——先生读书尽三藏，最喜维摩卷里多清词。写先生读书尽三藏：先生读书尽三藏、最喜维摩卷里多清词——尽三藏、多清词；结「安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时」——安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时。写三百六十日长是落花时：安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者、三百六十日长是落花时——不尽之花、长是落花时。这「安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时」，是全诗之结：以三百六十日长是落花时写其落花。全诗瑰奇咏物，以落花写情，正是龚自珍诗中的名篇。
Prosody
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西郊落花天下奇，古人但赋伤春诗。
The falling flowers of the western outskirts are a marvel under heaven; the ancients only wrote poems deploring the loss of spring.
西郊落花天下奇，古人但赋伤春诗。
The fallen blossoms of the western suburbs are a wonder under heaven; the ancients only wrote poems grieving the spring.
起句写西郊落花天下奇，起笔即见其落花。「西郊落花天下奇」写西郊落花天下奇，「西郊落花」写西郊落花、「天下奇」写天下奇；「古人但赋伤春诗」用伤春之典写古人但赋伤春诗，「古人但赋」写古人但赋、「伤春诗」写伤春诗。一句写西郊落花天下奇古人但赋伤春诗，以西郊落花天下奇写天下奇、以古人但赋伤春诗写伤春诗，写尽西郊落花天下奇、古人但赋伤春诗之情。以花起兴，瑰奇而咏物，是「以花起兴」的妙笔。
The opening writes the fallen blossoms of the western suburbs are a wonder under heaven, the blossoms visible from the first stroke. The fallen blossoms of the western suburbs are a wonder under heaven writes the western suburbs' fallen flowers, the wonder under heaven. The ancients only wrote poems grieving the spring uses the allusion to grieving the spring, writes the ancients composing only spring-grief verse. One line: the western suburbs' blossoms a wonder, the ancients' spring-grief poems. Writing the wonder under heaven of the western blossoms, writing the ancients' spring-grief verse, exhausting the suburban wonder and the grief-verse. Raising on the flower, marvelous and ode-like, the fine brush of raising feeling through the flower.
如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡；
Like the Qiantang tide surging by night, like the battle of Kunyang scattering at dawn;
如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡；
Like the Qiantang tide roaring by night, like the Kunyang rout collapsing by dawn;
此句写如钱塘潮夜澎湃，是全诗写钱塘潮之态的关键。「如钱塘潮夜澎湃」用钱塘潮之典写如钱塘潮夜澎湃，「如钱塘潮」写如钱塘潮、「夜澎湃」写夜澎湃；「如昆阳战晨披靡」用昆阳战之典写如昆阳战晨披靡，「如昆阳战」写如昆阳战、「晨披靡」写晨披靡。一句写如钱塘潮夜澎湃如昆阳战晨披靡，以如钱塘潮夜澎湃写夜澎湃、以如昆阳战晨披靡写晨披靡，写尽如钱塘潮夜澎湃、如昆阳战晨披靡之情。以潮写花，瑰奇而咏物，是「以潮写花」的点睛之笔。
The line writes like the Qiantang tide roaring by night, the key to the poem's manner of the Qiantang tide. Like the Qiantang tide roaring by night uses the allusion to the Qiantang bore, writes the night roaring. Like the Kunyang rout collapsing by dawn uses the allusion to the battle of Kunyang, writes the dawn rout. One line: like the Qiantang tide roaring by night, like the Kunyang rout collapsing by dawn. Writing the night roaring of the Qiantang bore, writing the dawn rout of Kunyang, exhausting the tide's night roar and the battle's dawn rout. Writing the flower through the tide, marvelous and ode-like, the pointed brush of writing the flower through the tide.
先生读书尽三藏，最喜维摩卷里多清词。
The master has read through the whole Tripitaka and takes the most delight in the clear words of the Vimalakirti sutra.
先生读书尽三藏，最喜维摩卷里多清词。
The Master reads through the Tripitaka; he loves most the many pure words in the Vimalakirti scroll.
此句写先生读书尽三藏，是全诗写读书之态的关键。「先生读书尽三藏」写先生读书尽三藏，「先生读书」写先生读书、「尽三藏」写尽三藏；「最喜维摩卷里多清词」用维摩之典写最喜维摩卷里多清词，「最喜维摩」写最喜维摩、「卷里多清词」写卷里多清词。一句写先生读书尽三藏最喜维摩卷里多清词，以先生读书尽三藏写尽三藏、以最喜维摩卷里多清词写多清词，写尽先生读书尽三藏、最喜维摩卷里多清词之情。以经写情，瑰奇而咏物，是「以经写情」的点睛之笔。
The line writes the Master reading through the Tripitaka, the key to the poem's manner of reading. The Master reads through the Tripitaka writes the Master reading through the three collections. He loves most the many pure words in the Vimalakirti scroll uses the allusion to Vimalakirti, writes loving most the pure words of the scroll. One line: the Master reading through the Tripitaka, loving most the Vimalakirti's pure words. Writing the reading through the Tripitaka, writing the many pure words of the scroll, exhausting the through-reading and the pure words. Writing feeling through the scripture, marvelous and ode-like, the pointed brush of writing feeling through the scripture.
安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时。
Would that the trees had inexhaustible blossoms yet to rain down, new and fair — that three hundred and sixty days, every one of them, might be a season of falling flowers.
安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时。
How may the trees have endless blossoms, ever freshly rained and fair, so that the three hundred and sixty days are always the hour of falling flowers?
结句写三百六十日长是落花时，是全诗立意的落点。「安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者」写安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，「安得树有」写安得树有、「不尽之花更雨新好者」写不尽之花更雨新好者；「三百六十日长是落花时」写三百六十日长是落花时，「三百六十日」写三百六十日、「长是落花时」写长是落花时。一句写安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者三百六十日长是落花时，以安得树有不尽之花写不尽之花、以三百六十日长是落花时写落花时，写尽安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者、三百六十日长是落花时之情。以愿写情，瑰奇而咏物，是全诗最动人处，也是「以愿写情」的点睛之笔。
The closing writes the three hundred and sixty days always the hour of falling flowers, the landing point of the poem's intent. How may the trees have endless blossoms, ever freshly rained and fair writes the endless blossoms, ever freshly rained and fair. The three hundred and sixty days are always the hour of falling flowers writes the three hundred and sixty days, always the hour of fallen blossoms. One line: may the trees have endless blossoms ever freshly rained, the three hundred and sixty days always the hour of falling flowers. Writing the endless blossoms of the trees, writing the always-falling of the three hundred and sixty days, exhausting the endless rained-fresh blossoms and the everlasting fall-time. Writing feeling through the wish, marvelous and ode-like, the most moving passage of the poem, and the pointed brush of writing feeling through the wish.
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Su Shi's 'Shui Diao Ge Tou', asking 'when will the moon be bright', goes on to say that men have their partings and the moon its waxing and waning, 'which has been so since of old'. Gong Zizhen, in the persona of Mr. Dingan buying wine, ends with a wish that the trees might never stop raining blossoms. The two share the view that loss and renewal are one, but the temperaments differ: Su Shi accepts the alternation with philosophy, Gong refuses it with appetite. One is the great Song voice of acceptance, the other the great Qing voice of strangeness.
苏轼《水调歌头·明月几时有》「人有悲欢离合，月有阴晴圆缺，此事古难全」，写落花感怀、瑰奇旷达，是宋词长调的名篇；龚自珍《西郊落花歌》则以「安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者，三百六十日长是落花时」「如钱塘潮夜澎湃」写落花时、夜澎湃。两诗同写落花感怀、瑰奇旷达：一写人有悲欢离合、以悲欢写离合，一写安得树有不尽之花更雨新好者、以落花写咏物；一为苏轼之旷达、一为龚自珍之瑰奇，并读正可见诗写「落花感怀」的两种笔法，皆于落花之中见瑰奇。
八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天 Ba Sheng Gan Zhou · Over the Drizzling Rain Fells the Sky 柳永 · 同写落红凝望、瑰奇清丽，一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、一写如钱塘潮夜澎湃如昆阳战晨披靡，皆于落红之中见凝望 Both linger over fallen red and gaze upward, the one at 'the drizzling rain drenches sky and earth', the one at the petals like a tide — both find their wonder in what has fallenLiu Yong's 'Ba Sheng Gan Zhou' opens 'The rain beats on the western sky, and washes one clear autumn', and goes on to describe the red that has faded with age. Gong Zizhen's poem shares its subject — the fallen red seen from a height — but replaces Liu's elegiac scanning of a ruined garden with a crowded, hallucinatory vision of the petals themselves. The shared affinity is for the fall as an event one watches rather than a grief one confesses; the divergence is that Liu's voice is that of a weary traveller while Gong's is that of a drunk insisting on his own delight.
柳永《八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天》「对潇潇暮雨洒江天，一番洗清秋」，写落红凝望、瑰奇清丽，是宋词写羁旅的名篇；龚自珍《西郊落花歌》则以「如钱塘潮夜澎湃，如昆阳战晨披靡」「西郊落花天下奇」写晨披靡、天下奇。两诗同写落红凝望、瑰奇清丽：一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、以暮雨写清秋，一写如钱塘潮夜澎湃如昆阳战晨披靡、以潮写落花；一为柳永之清丽、一为龚自珍之瑰奇，并读正可见诗写「落红凝望」的两种笔法，皆于落红之中见凝望。