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泗州东城晚望

Evening View from the East Wall of Sizhou

秦观

Qin Guan

写景Scenic Description 羁旅Life on the Road

渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间。
林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山。

A tiny, distant lone city girdled by white water; voices of boatmen among the evening mist.
Above the treetops, a stroke of blue as if painted — it must be the mountains where the Huai River bends.

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Meaning

A four-line evening view from the east wall of Sizhou. In the first couplet the tiny city girdled by white water and the sound of boats in the closing mist create a hushed, watery dusk; in the second, the poet looks far beyond the treetops to a stroke of blue hills and guesses it must be the mountains where the Huai bends. The poem's beauty lies in its calm distance — scene, sound, and conjecture dissolving into the dusk.

渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间。林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山。

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] A small, distant city girdled by white water; among the boats, voices speak through the evening mist. Above the treetops a stroke of blue, as if painted — it must be the hills where the Huai bends.
[Structure] Two couplets, two distances: the first stays near — city, water, boats, voices; the second reaches far — treetops, the blue stroke of hills, the river's bend. The movement is from sound to silence, from near to far.
[Imagery] The 'white water' brightens the dusk, the 'evening mist' softens the boats' voices, and the single stroke of blue above the trees paints the far hills in one brush.
[Effect] Qin Guan, famed for making the hard-to-describe scene appear before one's eyes, here leaves endless feeling beyond words: the conjectured mountains carry the poet's gaze — and his traveller's heart — far into the haze.

【白话串讲】秦观写《泗州东城晚望》：“渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间”——“林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山”——他写泗州城外的暮色。【意象与手法】此诗写晚望，以写景写晚望，是秦观的名篇。前二句写晚景：「渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间」写渺渺孤城白水环、舳舻人语夕霏间——写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间；后二句写远山：「林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山」写林梢一抹青如画、应是淮流转处山——写尽应是淮流转的山。全诗以写景写晚望，写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间与应是淮流转的山，是秦观的代表作。【情感与主旨】此诗写晚望，以写景写晚望，是秦观的名篇。此诗为秦观在泗州东城晚望之作，写其黄昏登临所见。秦观此诗写其泗州东城的晚望。此诗写渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间；林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山。此诗写晚景：渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间——写渺渺孤城白水环、舳舻人语夕霏间，写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间；林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山——写林梢一抹青如画、应是淮流转处山，写尽应是淮流转的山。全诗以写景写晚望——那「舳舻人语夕霏间」写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间，「应是淮流转处山」写尽应是淮流转的山，写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间与应是淮流转的山，是理解秦观写景诗的重要篇章。【名句点睛】常考「渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间」写舳舻人语的夕霏间；「林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山」写应是淮流转的山；以及全诗以写景写晚望、以推测写远山的手法。

Background

Qin Guan (1049-1100), courtesy name Shaoyou, sobriquet Huaihai Jushi, from Gaoyou (modern Jiangsu), was one of the 'Four Scholars of Su Men' — with Huang Tingjian, Chao Buzhi and Zhang Lei — and the leading master of the graceful lyric style, honoured as 'Huaihai xiansheng'. His later years were spent in a series of exiles. Sizhou stood on the bank of the Huai River; this undated poem was written when Qin Guan, travelling along the river, climbed the city's east wall at dusk and looked out over the water, the moored boats and the distant hills.

此诗写晚望，以写景写晚望，是秦观的名篇。秦观（1049—1100），字少游，又字太虚，号淮海居士，高邮（今江苏高邮）人，北宋词人，与黄庭坚、晁补之、张耒并称「苏门四学士」，婉约派代表词人，世称「淮海先生」。此诗为秦观在泗州东城晚望之作，写其黄昏登临所见。秦观此诗写其泗州东城的晚望。此诗写渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间；林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山。此诗写晚景：「渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间」写渺渺孤城白水环、舳舻人语夕霏间——写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间（渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间）；「林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山」写林梢一抹青如画、应是淮流转处山——写尽应是淮流转的山（林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山）。全诗以写景写晚望，写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间与应是淮流转的山，是理解秦观写景诗的重要篇章。又，此诗写于秦观行旅泗州之时，泗州在淮水之滨，故城临淮而立。诗人于黄昏登东城远眺，见白水环城、舟船云集、人语声与晚霭交融；「林梢一抹青如画」写极目远望，林梢之上远山一抹青色，诗人料想必是淮水流转之处的山影。全诗由近及远、由实入虚，末句以「应是」作推测语，把眼前实景与心中想象连接，尤见晚望时心随目远、神游物外之趣。

Art

The poem's craft is white-sketch painting in words. 'A tiny, distant lone city girdled by white water' sets bright white water against the small dark city, lighting the whole dusk. Then the poem turns from sight to sound: 'voices of boatmen among the evening mist', where human voices do not break the silence but measure its depth. The second couplet is a painter's stroke: 'above the treetops, a stroke of blue as if painted' compresses the far hills into a single brush of pale ink, and the closing conjecture — 'it must be the mountains where the Huai River bends' — dissolves certainty into the mist, letting the poem end in the act of looking rather than in a fixed object.

此诗的艺术特色可从四个方面解析。其一，以白描写晚景。「渺渺孤城白水环」以白描写晚景——那「舳舻人语夕霏间」写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间，以白描写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间。其二，以声写景。「舳舻人语」以声写景——那「夕霏间」写尽晚烟的人语，以声写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间。其三，以比喻写远山。「林梢一抹青如画」以比喻写远山——那「应是淮流转处山」写尽应是淮流转的山，以比喻写尽应是淮流转的山。其四，以推测写山影。「应是淮流转处山」以推测写山影——那「林梢一抹青如画」写尽林梢一抹的青，以推测写尽应是淮流转的山。此外，此诗前写舳舻人语的夕霏间，后写应是淮流转的山，由近及远，正是晚望诗「以望写景」的写法。四重手法，使此诗以写景写晚望，写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间与应是淮流转的山，是秦观的代表作。又，此诗前二句写近景，「渺渺孤城白水环」以「白」写水光、「环」写水势，孤城白水相映成趣；「舳舻人语夕霏间」则从视觉转入听觉，以「人语」声反衬晚霭之静谧，声色并茂；后二句写远景，「林梢一抹青如画」以「一抹」写远山之淡，「如画」写其如画之美，「应是淮流转处山」以推测收束，虚实相生；全诗四句由近及远，声景交融，正是秦观「状难写之景如在目前，含不尽之意见于言外」的本领。

Allusions

The poem is less allusive than evocative. 'Boats' (zhu-lu, sterns and prows) recalls Su Shi's 'ships for a thousand miles, banners hiding the sky' from his Red Cliff Rhapsody, the word conjuring crowded river traffic. 'White water' and the city on the Huai belong to the long tradition of river-city dusk poems, while the blue hills beyond the trees stand in the line of Wang Wei's landscape painting. The Huai itself was the border river between north and south, so the 'mountains where the Huai bends' carry an unspoken weight for a traveller of the Song: beyond them lay the lost north.

此诗的用语深植于写景与晚望传统。「渺渺」令人想到「渺渺」写浩渺的意象——也令人想到「渺渺兮予怀」（苏轼）的意象；「孤城」令人想到「孤城」写孤城的意象——也令人想到「孤城落日斗兵稀」（高适）的意象；「白水」令人想到「白水」写白水的意象——也令人想到「白水绕东城」（李白）的意象；「环」令人想到「环」写环绕的意象——也令人想到「青山郭外斜，绿树村边合」的意象；「舳舻」令人想到「舳舻」写舟船的意象——也令人想到「舳舻千里，旌旗蔽空」（苏轼）的意象；「人语」令人想到「人语」写人语的意象——也令人想到「人语驿边桥」的意象；「夕霏」令人想到「夕霏」写夕烟的意象——也令人想到「晚霞夕霏」的意象；「林梢」令人想到「林梢」写林梢的意象——也令人想到「林梢一抹」的意象；「一抹」令人想到「一抹」写一抹的意象——也令人想到「一抹青山」的意象；「青如画」令人想到「青如画」写青色的意象——也令人想到「青山如画」的意象；「淮流」令人想到「淮流」写淮水的意象——也令人想到「淮水东边旧时月」（刘禹锡）的意象；「转处山」令人想到「转处山」写山转的意象——也令人想到「山回路转不见君」（岑参）的意象。全诗化用渺渺、孤城、白水、环、舳舻、人语、夕霏、林梢、一抹、青如画、淮流、转处山的意象，以写景写晚望，正是秦观「婉丽」而善白描、承王维山水传统写晚望之本领。

Commentary

Song readers praised this poem for 'writing an evening view with delicate clarity'; modern critics single out the closing conjecture as a stroke of genius — the poet does not describe the far hills but guesses at them, so the poem ends in the act of looking. In the history of Song poetry it is valued as a small masterpiece of the landscape quatrain, carrying Wang Wei's painterly tradition into a river-city dusk. Read beside Wang Wei's 'Autumn Dusk in the Mountain Hut' and Liu Yuxi's 'Wuyi Lane', with its 'old moon east of the Huai', it shows Qin Guan's gift for stillness: where others write history or philosophy, he writes one stroke of blue above the treetops.

此诗历来被推为秦观写景诗的名篇，也是宋诗写晚望江城的代表。历代论者对此诗评价极高：宋人评此诗「以写景写晚望，婉丽清远」；近人更指出「渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间」写舳舻人语的夕霏间，是此诗的名句。在诗歌史上，此诗的特殊价值在于：它以短章写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间与应是淮流转的山——那渺渺，那孤城，那白水环，那舳舻，那人语，那夕霏间，那林梢，那一抹，那青如画，那应是，那淮流，那转处山，都写尽了秦观笔下的泗州东城晚望；那「林梢一抹青如画」更以比喻写尽林梢一抹的青。此诗与秦观《春日》「一夕轻雷落万丝」同为写景名篇，一写「无力蔷薇卧晓枝」的春日，一写「应是淮流转处山」的泗州东城；一写晨，一写暮。两诗对读，可见秦观写景诗的两面。对于今日读者，此诗是理解秦观写景诗的窗口，也是宋诗写晚望江城的经典——那应是淮流转的山，穿越千年，仍在诉说着舳舻人语的夕霏间。

Prosody

Form Seven-character quatrain (qijue)七言绝句

Rhyme It rhymes on jian and shan, level-tone words of the shan rhyme group, with the first line rhyming too — a soft, distant ring that matches the dusk.七绝押「间」「山」（删韵），首句入韵

Tone pattern A quatrain in level rhyme; its seven-character lines set a slow, unhurried pace suited to gazing, and the two couplets give a balanced, panoramic stillness.此诗为七言绝句，押平声韵，首句入韵，音节清远，正合晚望的清远。

Reading note Four lines, two couplets, the first line entering the rhyme. The first couplet holds the near scene — city, water, boats, voices — in paired images; the second reaches beyond the treetops to the guessed hills. Read the first couplet quietly, letting the voices die into the mist; read the closing line slowly and lightly, the voice rising as the gaze does, so the poem ends as a question of distance rather than a statement.此诗为七言绝句——「渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间。林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山」，押平韵（间、山），首句入韵，音节清远。全诗以写景写晚望：前写舳舻人语的夕霏间（渺渺孤城白水环），后写应是淮流转的山（林梢一抹青如画）。短章四句，前写晚景，后写远山，以「应是淮流转处山」写尽应是淮流转的山，正见秦观「婉丽」的本色。诵读此诗，宜以清远的语调读「舳舻人语夕霏间」的晚景，以悠远的语调读「应是淮流转处山」的远山，结句要读得清远而有余韵，方能传达出秦观的婉丽清远。秦观绝句以「婉丽」著称，此诗正是其写景诗的典范。

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渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间

A tiny, distant lone city girdled by white water; voices of boatmen among the evening mist.

渺渺孤城白水环，舳舻人语夕霏间。

The faint lone city ringed by pale waters; the talk of boatmen among the evening mists.

此二句是全诗写晚景的核心，以渺渺孤城白水环写白水环，以舳舻人语夕霏间写夕霏间，写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间，是千古名句。「渺渺孤城白水环」写渺渺孤城白水环——那「渺渺孤城」写渺渺孤城，「白水环」写白水环，写尽渺渺孤城的白水环；「舳舻人语夕霏间」写舳舻人语夕霏间——那「舳舻人语」写舳舻人语，「夕霏间」写夕霏间，写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间。这句的深意在于：它以「渺渺孤城白水环」的白水环与「舳舻人语夕霏间」的夕霏间，写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间——渺渺孤城白水环，那「渺渺孤城白水环」写尽渺渺孤城的白水环——渺渺孤城白水环，正是白水环城的写照，那「白水环」写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间；舳舻人语夕霏间，那「舳舻人语夕霏间」写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间——舳舻人语夕霏间，正是夕霏人语的写照，那「夕霏间」写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间；那「渺渺孤城白水环」写尽渺渺孤城的白水环，那「舳舻人语夕霏间」写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间，一写白水环，一写夕霏间，写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间——白水环城而夕霏人语，正是晚景的写照；此二句以白水环、夕霏间写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间，也为下文的林梢作铺垫，也让此二句成为全诗写晚景的核心与千古名句。若换作直说「浩渺孤城白水环绕，舟船人语在夕霏之间」，则失其清远；唯以「渺渺孤城白水环」写白水环、「舳舻人语夕霏间」写夕霏间，写尽舳舻人语的夕霏间，也让此二句成为全诗写晚景的核心。

The two lines are the core of the poem's evening scene, writing the white-water ring through the faint lone city ringed by pale waters and the evening mists through the talk of boatmen among the evening mists, an immortal line. The faint lone city ringed by pale waters is precisely the picture of the waters around the city; the talk of boatmen among the evening mists precisely the picture of the evening voices. One writes the ring, one the mists, exhausting the evening scene. Were it said plainly the distant lone city ringed by pale waters, boatmen's talk among the evening mists, the clarity would be softened; only through the ring and the mists is the evening scene exhausted, preparing the treetops below and making the lines the core of the poem.

林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山

Above the treetops, a stroke of blue as if painted — it must be the mountains where the Huai River bends.

林梢一抹青如画，应是淮流转处山。

One stroke of green at the treetops, like a painting; it must be the mountains where the Huai River turns.

此二句是全诗写远山的核心，以林梢一抹青如画写青如画，以应是淮流转处山写转处山，写尽应是淮流转的山，是千古名句。「林梢一抹青如画」写林梢一抹青如画——那「林梢一抹」写林梢一抹，「青如画」写青如画，写尽林梢一抹的青如画；「应是淮流转处山」写应是淮流转处山——那「应是淮流」写应是淮流，「转处山」写转处山，写尽应是淮流的转处山。这句的深意在于：它以「林梢一抹青如画」的青如画与「应是淮流转处山」的转处山，写尽应是淮流转的山——林梢一抹青如画，那「林梢一抹青如画」写尽林梢一抹的青如画——林梢一抹青如画，正是林梢一抹青的写照，那「青如画」写尽应是淮流转的山；应是淮流转处山，那「应是淮流转处山」写尽应是淮流的转处山——应是淮流转处山，正是淮流山转的写照，那「转处山」写尽应是淮流转的山；那「林梢一抹青如画」写尽林梢一抹的青如画，那「应是淮流转处山」写尽应是淮流的转处山，一写青如画，一写转处山，写尽应是淮流转的山——林梢一抹青而淮流山转，正是远山的写照；此二句以青如画、转处山写尽应是淮流转的山，也让此二句成为全诗写远山的核心与千古名句。若换作直说「林梢一抹青色如画，应是淮流转处的山」，则失其婉丽；唯以「林梢一抹青如画」写青如画、「应是淮流转处山」写转处山，写尽应是淮流转的山，也让此二句成为全诗写远山的核心。

The two lines are the core of the poem's distant mountains, writing the painted green through one stroke of green at the treetops, like a painting and the turning mountains through it must be the mountains where the Huai River turns, an immortal line. One stroke of green at the treetops, like a painting is precisely the picture of the treetop green; it must be the mountains where the Huai River turns precisely the picture of the river's bend. One writes the painted green, one the turning mountains, exhausting the distant mountains. Were it said plainly a stroke of green at the treetops like a painting, it must be the mountains where the Huai turns, the grace would be softened; only through the painted green and the turning mountains is the distance exhausted, making the lines the core of the poem.

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抹 A stroke, a smear — the painter's term for a single brush of pale ink. Here it paints the distant hills as one stroke of blue above the treetops, catching at once their faintness, their height, and their beauty like a wash of ink. 「林梢一抹青如画」之「抹」字是写远山关键词，一个「抹」字写尽林梢一抹的青如画。抹者，一抹、轻抹也。秦观以「林梢一抹青如画」写远山，这个「抹」字至少有双重意味：其一，写山之抹——那「林梢一抹青如画」写林梢一抹青如画，那「抹」字写尽林梢一抹的青如画——一抹，正是远山一抹的写照，那「抹」字写尽林梢一抹的青如画；其二，写景之淡——那「抹」字更是写淡——抹，正见远景迷离的意味，那「抹」字写尽秦观的婉丽。以「抹」字写远山，正是秦观写晚望的枢纽——若换作「带」「线」等字，则或失其与「林梢一抹青如画」「应是淮流转处山」的配合，或失其写抹的意味；唯「抹」字，以林梢一抹青如画写尽远山之淡抹与远景之迷离，与「应是淮流转处山」的转处山相合，写尽林梢一抹的青如画，也让「林梢一抹青如画」成为全诗写远山的名句。

应 Must be, presumably. A word of conjecture: the poet cannot see the hills clearly through the evening haze, so he guesses — the hesitation turns scenery into reverie and carries the gaze, and the poem's feeling, out beyond the page. 「应是淮流转处山」之「应」字是写推测关键词，一个「应」字写尽应是淮流的转处山。应者，应是、当是也。秦观以「应是淮流转处山」写推测，这个「应」字至少有双重意味：其一，写山之应——那「应是淮流转处山」写应是淮流转处山，那「应」字写尽应是淮流的转处山——应是，正是料想当是的写照，那「应」字写尽应是淮流的转处山；其二，写望之迷——那「应」字更是写迷——应，正见晚望难辨的意味，那「应」字写尽秦观的迷离。以「应」字写推测，正是秦观写晚望的枢纽——若换作「知」「疑」等字，则或失其与「应是淮流转处山」「林梢一抹青如画」的配合，或失其写应的意味；唯「应」字，以应是淮流转处山写尽晚望之推测与远山之迷离，与「林梢一抹青如画」的青如画相合，写尽应是淮流的转处山，也让「应是淮流转处山」成为全诗写推测的名句。