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高阳台

High Terrace (On Falling Plums)

吴文英

Wu Wenying

宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾。
古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环。
南楼不恨吹横笛,恨晓风、千里关山。
半飘零,庭上黄昏,月冷阑干。
寿阳空理愁鸾。
问谁调玉髓,暗补香瘢。
细雨归鸿,孤山无限春寒。
离魂难倩招清些,梦缟衣、解佩溪边。
最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆。

Carved traces of palace rouge, the fallen shadow of immortal cloud, in a wild unmanned bay of water.
On the ancient stone, buried fragrance; golden sands, the interlaced collarbone chain.
The south tower does not resent the crosswise flute; it resents the dawn wind over a thousand li of mountain passes.
Half fallen and drifting — at dusk in the courtyard, the moon cold on the railing.
Princess Shouyang in vain tends her sorrowful phoenix [mirror].
Who will blend the jade marrow, secretly mending the fragrant scar?
Fine rain, homing geese; Lonely Hill holds limitless spring chill.
The parted soul cannot be called back, for all the pure “some” of the Chu summons; in dreams — white silk robes, unclasped pendants by the stream.
Most grieving of all — crying birds in the clear sunlight, green round [fruit] beneath the leaves.
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Meaning

Written as an ode on falling plum blossoms, this lyric turns the plum’s decay into a layered elegy. Petals become rouge traces and cloud shadows scattered in a deserted bay; the fallen flower is buried, mourned, and dreamt of; and the poem closes on new green plums beneath the leaves — fresh life that makes the loss of spring more painful. Beneath the flower imagery runs a second current of longing for a departed person.

宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾。古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环。南楼不恨吹横笛,恨晓风、千里关山。半飘零,庭上黄昏,月冷阑干。寿阳空理愁鸾。问谁调玉髓,暗补香瘢。细雨归鸿,孤山无限春寒。离魂难倩招清些,梦缟衣、解佩溪边。最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆。

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] Plum petals fall like carved rouge and fading cloud-shadow into a deserted riverside bay. Some are buried by old stones like a fragrant corpse. The poet does not blame the flute’s “Plum Blossom Fall” melody; he blames the dawn wind that carried the blossoms (and the traveler) across a thousand li of passes. At dusk the moon is cold on the courtyard railing. Princess Shouyang — whose plum-blossom forehead makeup began the plum’s long romance with beauty — tends her mirror in vain; no one can mend the fragrant scar. In fine rain homing geese cross Lonely Hill’s endless spring chill. The soul cannot be summoned; in dreams a white-robed goddess looses her pendants by the stream. Worst of all, on a bright morning the birds cry over green plums already forming beneath the leaves. [Structure] The upper stanza follows the plum’s fall through space — the wild bay, the stone, the flute, the courtyard; the lower stanza follows it through allusion and dream, ending on the new fruit. [Imagery] The poem is a museum of plum-blossom lore: palace rouge, immortal cloud, golden sand, the collarbone chain, the forehead blossom, the Chu summons, the river goddess — each allusion a facet of one gem. [Emotion and Theme] Grief is refracted through objects rather than spoken; the falling plum is at once flower, beauty, and the dead. [Key Lines] “Most grieving of all — crying birds in the clear sunlight, green round fruit beneath the leaves” ends the poem on renewal that feels like loss.

【白话串讲】 吴文英写《高阳台》:“宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾”——“南楼不恨吹横笛,恨晓风、千里关山”——“半飘零,庭上黄昏,月冷阑干”——他写落花——半飘零,庭上黄昏。 【意象与手法】 “宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾”以宫粉仙云写落梅之凄美;“古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环”以埋香写梅之消逝;“南楼不恨吹横笛,恨晓风、千里关山”以晓风关山写恨;结以“半飘零,庭上黄昏,月冷阑干”以黄昏月冷写飘零。意象幽深、用典绵密。 【情感与主旨】 吴文英咏落梅之作,以落梅的飘零写人事的沧桑与身世之感,意象幽深,是梦窗词中咏物寄情的代表。 【名句点睛】 常考“宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾”以宫粉仙云写落梅;“半飘零,庭上黄昏,月冷阑干”以黄昏月冷写飘零。

Background

Wu Wenying (c. 1200–c. 1260), courtesy name Junte, hao Mengchuang, was a native of Siming (modern Ningbo, Zhejiang). The founding master of the “Mengchuang school,” he wrote lyrics of extraordinary density — “dense and ornate, deeply subtle” — in which allusion does the work of statement. He never held high office, living as a guest-retainer among officials and gentry. This lyric on falling plums is among his most celebrated; tradition also reads it as an elegy for a deceased beloved, so that the plum’s fall veils a private grief, and its cascade of allusions becomes a machinery of mourning.

《高阳台》为南宋词人吴文英所作词。吴文英(约1200—约1260),字君特,号梦窗,四明(今浙江宁波)人,南宋词人,词风密丽深婉,为「梦窗词」之宗。此词咏落梅,为咏物之作。词中「宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾」写宫粉雕痕;「古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环」写古石埋香;「南楼不恨吹横笛,恨晓风、千里关山」写恨晓风;「半飘零,庭上黄昏,月冷阑干」写半飘零;「寿阳空理愁鸾。问谁调玉髓,暗补香瘢」写寿阳愁鸾;「细雨归鸿,孤山无限春寒」写孤山春寒;「离魂难倩招清些,梦缟衣、解佩溪边」写离魂难招;「最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆」写叶底青圆。吴文英此词以咏落梅、叶底青圆写其惜梅之情,含蓄深婉,是吴文英词中的名篇。此篇《高阳台》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。

Art

Wu Wenying’s method is superposition: he never touches the plum directly but piles around it the whole cultural history of the flower, so that emotion is generated by the collision of allusions. The opening triad maps the fall in three registers — the cosmetic (“palace rouge”), the mythic (“immortal cloud”), the geographical (“wild unmanned bay”) — and the very next couplet converts the fallen petals into a burial (“ancient stone buries the fragrance”) and a relic (“golden sands, the collarbone chain,” from the legend of the Bodhisattva whose bones stayed locked together after death). The emotional pivot is grammatical: “does not resent... it resents” — the flute is innocent, the wind guilty — a displacement of blame that is pure lyric wit. The lower stanza escalates from princess to goddess to dream, and the final image does what Chinese critics call “ending on scenery”: the crying birds and green plums let new life accuse the poet’s stasis. Every clause is compressed, indirect, and resonant — the Mengchuang signature.

此词艺术上以「含蓄深婉、密丽以情」见长。全词上片写宫粉雕痕与古石埋香,下片写寿阳愁鸾与叶底青圆。上片「宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾」写宫粉雕痕:宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾;「古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环」写古石埋香:古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环;「南楼不恨吹横笛,恨晓风、千里关山」写恨晓风:南楼不恨吹横笛,恨晓风、千里关山;「半飘零,庭上黄昏,月冷阑干」写半飘零:半飘零,庭上黄昏,月冷阑干。下片「寿阳空理愁鸾。问谁调玉髓,暗补香瘢」写寿阳愁鸾:寿阳空理愁鸾,问谁调玉髓,暗补香瘢;「细雨归鸿,孤山无限春寒」写孤山春寒:细雨归鸿,孤山无限春寒;「离魂难倩招清些,梦缟衣、解佩溪边」写离魂难招:离魂难倩招清些,梦缟衣、解佩溪边;「最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆」写叶底青圆:最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆。全词含蓄深婉,密丽以情,是吴文英词中的名篇。

Allusions

“Palace rouge” and “carved traces” present the petals as makeup worn and flaking; “immortal cloud” lifts them into myth. “Golden sands, the collarbone chain” alludes to the Bodhisattva of the interlaced collarbones, whose flesh melted away into a chain of golden bones — here the fallen plum becomes sacred remains. The “south tower” flute plays the old yuefu melody “Plum Blossom Fall”; “a thousand li of mountain passes” recalls Wang Wei’s Yangguan farewell and the ancient road out to the west. Princess Shouyang is the emperor’s daughter on whose forehead a plum blossom rested and left the five-petal pattern that became court makeup; “jade marrow” and “fragrant scar” extend that story into an attempt to repair her wounded beauty. “Homing geese” and “Lonely Hill” invoke Lin Bu’s plum groves beside West Lake, the classic habitat of the flower. “Parted soul... pure ‘some’” borrows the summons of the Chu ci, where every line ends in the particle some. “White silk robes, unclasped pendants” is the river goddess of the Han, who gave her girdle pendants to Zheng Jiaofu — a dream apparition of the beloved, beautiful and unreachable.

词中「宫粉雕痕」「仙云堕影」「无人野水荒湾」「古石埋香」「金沙锁骨连环」「南楼吹横笛」「恨晓风千里关山」「半飘零」「庭上黄昏」「月冷阑干」「寿阳空理愁鸾」「调玉髓暗补香瘢」「细雨归鸿」「孤山无限春寒」「离魂难倩招清些」「梦缟衣解佩溪边」「啼鸟晴明」「叶底青圆」等语,皆含典故故实。「宫粉雕痕」写宫粉雕痕;「仙云堕影」写仙云堕影;「无人野水荒湾」写无人野水荒湾;「古石埋香」写古石埋香;「金沙锁骨连环」用锁骨菩萨之典(锁骨为菩萨化骨,喻梅落如锁骨),写金沙锁骨连环;「南楼吹横笛」用南朝乐府《梅花落》横笛之典(笛曲《梅花落》写梅花),写南楼吹横笛;「恨晓风千里关山」写恨晓风千里关山;「半飘零」写半飘零;「庭上黄昏」写庭上黄昏;「月冷阑干」写月冷阑干;「寿阳空理愁鸾」用寿阳公主梅花妆之典(寿阳公主梅花落额上成妆),写寿阳愁鸾;「调玉髓暗补香瘢」写调玉髓暗补香瘢;「细雨归鸿」写细雨归鸿;「孤山无限春寒」写孤山无限春寒(孤山为林逋植梅处);「离魂难倩招清些」用《楚辞》招魂之意,写离魂难招;「梦缟衣解佩溪边」用江妃解佩之典(《列仙传》江妃二女解佩),写梦缟衣解佩溪边;「啼鸟晴明」写啼鸟晴明;「叶底青圆」写叶底青圆。词人以梅花落、寿阳妆、江妃解佩、孤山植梅等典入词,不着痕迹,而把咏落梅之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。

Commentary

The poem’s deepest strangeness is its movement: nothing in it moves forward; everything dissolves. Petals fall, are buried, are mourned, are summoned, are dreamt — and the beloved never arrives. The late-Song critic would call this “dense and subtle”; the modern reader might call it grief rendered as archaeology, every layer an artifact of loss. What lifts the poem above ingenious display is the ending. After so much ornament, “crying birds in the clear sunlight, green round fruit beneath the leaves” is almost plain — and it lands like a slap: the plum has already borne fruit, the year has already turned, and the mourner has not moved. Wu Wenying’s art throughout is to make the reader feel, as the plum-blossom lore makes the poet feel, that beauty’s death is never a private event but the end of a whole cultural spring.

这首《高阳台》,是吴文英写咏物落梅之作,写宫粉雕痕、古石埋香、叶底青圆之情,含蓄深婉。上片写宫粉雕痕与古石埋香:「宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾」——宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾。写宫粉雕痕:宫粉雕痕、仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾——宫粉雕痕、仙云堕影、无人野水荒湾;「古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环」——古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环(用锁骨菩萨之典)。写古石埋香:古石埋香、金沙锁骨连环——古石埋香、金沙锁骨;「南楼不恨吹横笛,恨晓风、千里关山」——南楼不恨吹横笛(用梅花落之典),恨晓风、千里关山。写恨晓风:南楼不恨吹横笛、恨晓风千里关山——不恨横笛、恨晓风关山;「半飘零,庭上黄昏,月冷阑干」——半飘零,庭上黄昏,月冷阑干。写半飘零:半飘零、庭上黄昏,月冷阑干——半飘零、庭上黄昏、月冷阑干。下片写寿阳愁鸾与叶底青圆:「寿阳空理愁鸾。问谁调玉髓,暗补香瘢」——寿阳空理愁鸾(用寿阳梅花妆之典),问谁调玉髓,暗补香瘢。写寿阳愁鸾:寿阳空理愁鸾、问谁调玉髓,暗补香瘢——寿阳愁鸾、谁补香瘢;「细雨归鸿,孤山无限春寒」——细雨归鸿,孤山无限春寒。写孤山春寒:细雨归鸿、孤山无限春寒(孤山为林逋植梅处)——细雨归鸿、孤山春寒;「离魂难倩招清些,梦缟衣、解佩溪边」——离魂难倩招清些(用招魂之意),梦缟衣、解佩溪边(用江妃解佩之典)。写离魂难招:离魂难倩招清些、梦缟衣解佩溪边——离魂难招、梦缟衣解佩;「最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆」——最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆。写叶底青圆:最愁人、啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆——最愁人、叶底青圆。这「最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆」,是全词之结:以叶底青圆写梅落而结子。全词含蓄深婉,密丽以情,正是吴文英词中的名篇。

Prosody

Form Ci (song-lyric) to the tune “Gao Yang Tai” (High Terrace), a slow double-stanza pattern of one hundred characters; both stanzas rhyme on level tones.词(高阳台,双调)
Rhyme The rhymes fall on wan, huan, shan, gan, luan, ban, han, bian, yuan (wan “bay,” huan “ring,” shan “pass,” gan “railing,” luan “phoenix,” ban “scar,” han “chill,” bian “side,” yuan “round”), a level, even flow whose cold resonance matches the fallen-plum elegy.此词为《高阳台》调,双调一百字,上片下片各十句。押平声韵:「湾」「环」「山」「干」「鸾」「瘢」「寒」「边」「圆」押删先部韵。词体依词谱而定,句式长短错落,音节随情起伏,正与写咏物落梅的含蓄深婉相称,也见其以长调写咏物的自然。
Tone pattern The meter alternates four-character leads with longer lines: “gong fen diao hen, xian yun duo ying, wu ren ye shui huang wan” unfolds three slow images, while “ban piao ling, ting shang huang hun, yue leng lan gan” contracts into a breathless, falling rhythm — the syntax itself imitates drifting petals.句式上,上片「宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾」写宫粉雕痕,音节苍凉;「古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环」写古石埋香,音节密丽;「南楼不恨吹横笛,恨晓风、千里关山」写恨晓风,音节顿挫;「半飘零,庭上黄昏,月冷阑干」写半飘零,音节低回;下片「寿阳空理愁鸾。问谁调玉髓,暗补香瘢」写寿阳愁鸾,音节婉转;「细雨归鸿,孤山无限春寒」写孤山春寒,音节清冷;「离魂难倩招清些,梦缟衣、解佩溪边」写离魂难招,音节绵长;「最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆」写叶底青圆,音节低回。全词音节随情起伏,由苍凉而密丽、由顿挫而绵长,正合长调「铺叙」之妙,读来如咏落梅、叶底青圆之音,含蓄而动人。
Reading note Gao Yang Tai is a long, slow melody suited to “spreading narration” (puxu), and Wu Wenying uses its length to stack allusion upon allusion, so that the music’s unhurried pace lets each image reverberate before the next arrives. The level rhymes give the whole poem the hushed, suspended quality of a vigil beside a grave.此词为《高阳台》调,是吴文英写咏物落梅之作,也是其词中的名篇。全词的艺术特色在于「含蓄深婉、密丽以情」:上片「宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾」写宫粉雕痕、「古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环」写古石埋香、「南楼不恨吹横笛,恨晓风、千里关山」写恨晓风、「半飘零,庭上黄昏,月冷阑干」写半飘零;下片「寿阳空理愁鸾。问谁调玉髓,暗补香瘢」写寿阳愁鸾、「细雨归鸿,孤山无限春寒」写孤山春寒、「离魂难倩招清些,梦缟衣、解佩溪边」写离魂难招、「最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆」写叶底青圆。全词含蓄深婉,密丽以情。尤为精妙者,是「寿阳空理愁鸾」用寿阳公主梅花妆之典;而「叶底青圆」以梅子写惜,正是吴文英词「密丽深婉」的典范,为历代词选所常收。

Line by line

宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾。

Carved traces of palace rouge, the fallen shadow of immortal cloud, in a wild unmanned bay of water.

宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾。

Palace-pink traces carven away; fairy-cloud shadows fallen; the wild waters and the desolate bay, with no soul.

首三句写宫粉雕痕,起笔即见其梅。「宫粉雕痕」写宫粉雕痕,「宫粉」写宫中之粉、「雕痕」写雕落之痕;「仙云堕影」写仙云堕影,「仙云」写如仙云、「堕影」写坠落之影;「无人野水荒湾」写无人野水荒湾,「无人」写无人、「野水荒湾」写野水荒湾。三句一写宫粉雕痕、一写仙云堕影、一写无人野水荒湾,以宫粉雕痕写梅粉凋落、以仙云堕影写梅影坠落、以野水荒湾写其境之荒,写尽宫粉雕痕、仙云堕影、无人野水荒湾之情。以梅起兴,含蓄而苍凉,是「以梅起兴」的妙笔。

The opening three phrases write the palace-pink traces, the plum rising with the first stroke. Palace-pink traces carven away: the palace-pink the palace rouge, the carven traces the fallen marks; fairy-cloud shadows fallen: the fairy cloud the cloudlike, the fallen shadow the dropped image; the wild waters and the desolate bay, with no soul: the no-soul the emptiness, the wild-water-desolate-bay the barren shore. Three phrases, the pink's falling and the cloud's dropping and the shore's emptiness — the plum's pink fallen, the plum's shadow dropped, the place's desolation. Rising on the plum, restrained and desolate, the pointed brush.

古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环。

On the ancient stone, buried fragrance; golden sands, the interlaced collarbone chain.

古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环。

Ancient stones bury the fragrance; golden sand, the linked bones of the saint.

此二句写古石埋香,是全词写梅落之态的关键。「古石埋香」写古石埋香,「古石」写古石、「埋香」写埋没香气;「金沙锁骨连环」写金沙锁骨连环,用锁骨菩萨之典写金沙锁骨连环。两句一写古石埋香、一写金沙锁骨连环,以古石埋香写梅落埋香、以金沙锁骨连环写梅落如锁骨,写尽古石埋香、金沙锁骨连环之情。以典写梅,含蓄而深婉,是「以典写梅」的点睛之笔。

The two phrases write the ancient stones burying the fragrance, the key of the ci's fallen plum. Ancient stones bury the fragrance: the ancient stone the old rock, the bury-fragrance the buried scent; golden sand, the linked bones of the saint uses the holy-bones bodhisattva allusion for the golden sand and the linked bones. Two phrases, the old stones burying the plum's scent and the plum fallen like the saint's bones — the plum's fall buried, the plum's fall like the sacred bones. Writing the plum through allusion, restrained and deep, the pointed stroke.

南楼不恨吹横笛,恨晓风、千里关山。

The south tower does not resent the crosswise flute; it resents the dawn wind across a thousand li of mountain passes.

南楼不恨吹横笛,恨晓风、千里关山。

At the south tower I grieve not the transverse flute; I grieve the dawn wind over the thousand-li passes.

此二句写恨晓风,是全词以笛写梅的关键。「南楼不恨吹横笛」写南楼不恨吹横笛,用梅花落之典写南楼吹横笛;「恨晓风、千里关山」写恨晓风千里关山,「恨」写怨恨、「晓风千里关山」写晓风中千里关山。两句一写南楼不恨吹横笛、一写恨晓风千里关山,以不恨横笛写笛不惹恨、以恨晓风千里关山写恨在关山,写尽南楼不恨吹横笛、恨晓风千里关山之情。以笛写恨,含蓄而深婉,是「以笛写恨」的点睛之笔。

The two phrases write the grief at the dawn wind, the key of the ci's flute writing the plum. At the south tower I grieve not the transverse flute uses the Plum-Falling allusion for the south tower flute; I grieve the dawn wind over the thousand-li passes: the grieve the resentment, the dawn-wind-thousand-li-passes the passes in the morning wind. Two phrases, not-grieving-the-flute and grieving-the-dawn-wind passes — the flute not the grief, the passes the grief. Writing grief through the flute, restrained and deep, the pointed stroke.

寿阳空理愁鸾。

Princess Shouyang in vain tends her sorrowful phoenix [mirror].

寿阳空理愁鸾。

The Shouyang princess idly arranges the grieving phoenix.

此句写寿阳空理愁鸾,是全词以妆写梅的关键。「寿阳空理愁鸾」写寿阳空理愁鸾,用寿阳梅花妆之典写寿阳空理愁鸾。一句以「寿阳」用寿阳公主梅花妆之典、「空理愁鸾」写空自理着愁鸾,写尽寿阳空理愁鸾之情。以典写梅,含蓄而深婉,是「以典写梅」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。

The line writes the Shouyang princess idly arranging the grieving phoenix, the key of the ci's dressing writing the plum. The Shouyang princess idly arranges the grieving phoenix: the Shouyang uses the Princess Shouyang plum-flower makeup allusion, the idly-arranging-the-grieving-phoenix the vain arranging of the grieving mirror. One line writes the princess through the allusion, and the idly arranging through the vain care — the Shouyang princess idly tending the grieving phoenix. Writing the plum through allusion, restrained and deep, the pointed stroke. The few words carry a deep meaning, the pointed stroke of the ci.

最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆。

Most grieving of all — crying birds in the clear sunlight, and green round [fruit] beneath the leaves.

最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆。

What grieves the most: the singing birds in the clear sky, and under the leaves, the green round plums.

尾三句写叶底青圆,是全词立意的落点。「最愁人」写最愁人,「最愁」写最令人愁、「人」写人;「啼鸟晴明」写啼鸟晴明,「啼鸟」写啼鸟、「晴明」写晴明;「叶底青圆」写叶底青圆,「叶底」写叶底、「青圆」写青圆之梅子。三句一写最愁人、一写啼鸟晴明、一写叶底青圆,以最愁人写愁之极、以啼鸟晴明写鸟啼晴日、以叶底青圆写梅落结子,写尽最愁人、啼鸟晴明、叶底青圆之情。以梅子写惜,含蓄而深挚,是全词最动人处,也是「以梅子写惜」的点睛之笔。

The closing three phrases write the green round plums under the leaves, the landing point of the ci's intention. What grieves the most: the grieving-most the most sorrowful; the singing birds in the clear sky: the singing birds the calling birds, the clear sky the fair weather; under the leaves, the green round plums: the under-leaves beneath the foliage, the green-round the green round plums. Three phrases, the grief's extreme and the birds in the clear sky and the green round plums — the grief's height, the birds in the sunny sky, the plums set after the blossoms fall. Writing regret through the plum fruit, restrained and deep, the most moving place of the ci, the pointed stroke.

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雕 Diao (carved): literally carved, but sounding like diao-luo (to fade and fall); the “carved traces” of palace rouge are the plum petals’ falling marks — one word fuses the flower’s beauty with its decay. 「雕」字写宫粉雕痕,是写梅粉凋落的关键。「宫粉雕痕」着一「雕」,写凋落——着一「雕」字,写宫粉之雕痕,见梅之落。一字写尽雕痕之落,是「以一字写梅」的妙笔。「雕」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
埋 Mai (buried): to bury — the ancient stone buries the fallen plum’s fragrance, turning the flower’s decay into a burial and deepening the elegiac stillness. 「埋」字写古石埋香,是写梅香埋没的关键。「古石埋香」着一「埋」,写埋没——着一「埋」字,写古石埋香,见其香之没。一字写尽埋香之态,是「以一字写梅」的点睛之词。「埋」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
恨 Hen (resent): to resent; here sorrow is precisely aimed — not at the flute’s melody but at the dawn wind that carries the petals (and the traveler) away, a displacement of blame that is pure lyric wit. 「恨」字写恨晓风,是写晓风之恨的关键。「恨晓风、千里关山」着一「恨」,写怨恨——着一「恨」字,写恨晓风中千里关山,见其恨之深。一字写尽恨晓风之慨,是「以一字写恨」的点睛之词。「恨」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
青圆 Green and round: the small green plums beneath the leaves; the plum has already fallen and borne fruit, so new life stands beside decay and sharpens the grief over lost spring. 「青圆」写叶底青圆,是写梅落结子的关键。「叶底青圆」着一「青圆」,写青圆——着一「青圆」,写叶底青圆之梅子,见其结子之实。两字写尽青圆之梅子,是「以词写梅」的点睛之词。「青圆」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。

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山园小梅 Little Plum Trees of the Mountain Garden 林逋 · 同写咏梅清雅、以梅寄情,一写疏影横斜水清浅暗香浮动月黄昏、一写宫粉雕痕仙云堕影,皆于咏梅之中见寄情 Both are plum-blossom odes charged with feeling — Lin Bu writes the living bloom’s elegance, Wu Wenying mourns the fallen petal.

Lin Bu’s “sparse shadows slant across clear shallows, hidden fragrance floats in the moonlit dusk” is the Song dynasty’s most famous praise of the plum in flower; Wu Wenying’s “carved traces of palace rouge, fallen shadow of immortal cloud” mourns the same flower as it falls. One is pure aesthetic delight; the other dense sorrow — the two poles of Song plum-blossom writing.

林逋《山园小梅》「疏影横斜水清浅,暗香浮动月黄昏」,写梅之清雅,是宋诗咏物的绝唱;吴文英《高阳台》则以「宫粉雕痕,仙云堕影,无人野水荒湾」「古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环」写宫粉雕痕、古石埋香。两词同写咏梅清雅、以梅寄情:一写疏影横斜水清浅暗香浮动月黄昏、以疏影暗香写梅,一写宫粉雕痕仙云堕影、以雕痕堕影写落梅;一为林逋之清逸、一为吴文英之密丽,并读正可见宋代写「咏梅寄情」的两种笔法,皆于咏梅之中见寄情。

卜算子·咏梅 Bu Suan Zi: Ode to the Plum Blossom 陆游 · 同写咏梅寄情、孤寂零落,一写零落成泥碾作尘只有香如故、一写古石埋香金沙锁骨连环,皆于梅落之中见孤寂 Both write the fallen plum as self-portrait — Lu You standing firm (“only the fragrance as of old”), Wu Wenying buried and dreamt of.

Lu You’s “scattered into mud, ground to dust — only the fragrance as of old” makes the fallen plum a badge of integrity; Wu Wenying’s “ancient stone buries the fragrance, golden sands, the collarbone chain” makes it a burial rite. Lu You’s plum dies defiant; Wu Wenying’s dies beautiful and mourned — solitary nobility versus ornate grief.

陆游《卜算子·咏梅》「零落成泥碾作尘,只有香如故」,写梅落而香如故,是宋词咏梅的名篇;吴文英《高阳台》则以「古石埋香,金沙锁骨连环」「最愁人,啼鸟晴明,叶底青圆」写古石埋香、叶底青圆。两词同写咏梅寄情、孤寂零落:一写零落成泥碾作尘只有香如故、以香如故写梅,一写古石埋香金沙锁骨连环、以埋香写落梅;一为陆游之孤高、一为吴文英之密丽,并读正可见宋词写「咏梅孤寂」的两种笔法,皆于梅落之中见孤寂。