宋 Song · 词 Ci lyric
留春令·画屏天畔
To the Tune of Liuchunling: The Painted Screen at the Horizon
画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水。
手拈红笺寄人书,写无限、伤春事。
别浦高楼曾漫倚。
对江南千里。
楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪。
I take up a red letter sheet to send my letter to you, writing of endless sorrow over spring.
By the parting ford's high tower I once leaned idly at length,
facing a thousand miles of the southern land.
Below the tower, in the sound of waters that divide and flow apart, are the tears of that day — the tears I shed leaning from the height.
Meaning
A lyric of longing written in the language of dream and letter. The poet wakes to a dream of the Ten Isles far beyond the painted screen, takes up red paper to write to the one he misses, and then remembers the high tower by the parting ford where he once leaned facing a thousand miles of the south. The poem's discovery is that yesterday's tears are still audible, dissolved into the sound of dividing waters beneath the tower.
画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水。手拈红笺寄人书,写无限、伤春事。别浦高楼曾漫倚。对江南千里。楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] Waking from a dream of the immortal isles, he writes his beloved a letter full of spring sorrow; then memory carries him back to the tower by the parting ford, where he once leaned facing the southern distances; and there, in the noise of waters parting below the tower, he still hears the tears he shed that day. [Structure] The upper stanza is dream and writing (present action), the lower stanza is memory (past action); the two are stitched together by 'that day' and 'now,' past and present sounding at once. The poem moves from the farthest reaches of myth to one sound of water, and the narrowing is the whole design. [Imagery] Distance is the poem's element: a painted screen at the horizon, the Ten Isles, a thousand miles of the south, and finally the sound of dividing water — the widest and the narrowest of images joined by the word 'tears.'
【白话串讲】 晏几道写《留春令·画屏天畔》:“画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水”——“手拈红笺寄人书,写无限、伤春事”——“别浦高楼曾漫倚。对江南千里”——“楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪”——他写伤春——有当日凭高泪。 【意象与手法】 “画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水”写梦境之远;“手拈红笺寄人书,写无限、伤春事”写寄书伤春;“别浦高楼曾漫倚。对江南千里”写凭高忆旧;结以“楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪”以分流水写当日之泪。含蓄婉转、以景写情。 【情感与主旨】 晏几道写怀人伤春之作,写梦中远游、寄书伤春与凭高忆旧,以“当日凭高泪”写思念之深,是晏几道词中婉约深婉的代表。 【名句点睛】 常考“画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水”以十洲云水写梦境之远;“楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪”以分流水写当日之泪。
Background
Yan Jidao (c. 1038-c. 1110), courtesy name Shuyuan and literary name Xiaoshan, was the seventh son of the chancellor Yan Shu — the pair are known as the 'Two Yans' of the Northern Song. From the heights of his father's household he sank into obscurity and poverty, and his lyrics are the record of a man who keeps remembering a vanished world. His collection Xiaoshan Ci became the summit of the small lyric form in the Northern Song; Huang Tingjian praised its 'clear, strong and halting' music, and Feng Xu named him, with Qin Guan, one of 'the true heartbroken men of old.' This lyric, on the tune Liuchunling ('Commanding Spring to Stay'), belongs to his most characteristic vein: dream, letter, memory, and water — the whole machinery of absence.
《留春令·画屏天畔》为北宋词人晏几道所作词。晏几道(1038—1110),字叔原,号小山,临川(今江西抚州)人,晏殊之子,北宋词人,词风婉约,多写离情别恨,与其父晏殊并称「二晏」。此词写怀人伤春。词中「画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水」写梦境之远;「手拈红笺寄人书,写无限、伤春事」写寄书伤春;「别浦高楼曾漫倚。对江南千里」写凭高忆旧;「楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪」写当日凭高之泪。晏几道多写离情,此词以梦回十洲、寄书伤春、凭高忆旧之情写怀人,含蓄婉转,是晏几道词中的名篇,也是其「婉约深婉」词风的典型体现。此篇《留春令·画屏天畔》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《留春令·画屏天畔》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。
Art
The lyric's craft is a controlled narrowing of scale. It opens at the horizon's edge with a painted screen and the Ten Isles of the immortals — the widest frame available to a poet — then shrinks, stanza by stanza, to a sheet of red writing paper, then to a tower by a parting ford, and finally to a sound of water dividing below that tower. The final couplet is the masterpiece of the whole design: 'below the tower, in the sound of waters that divide and flow apart, are the tears of that day.' Water that divides is the oldest Chinese figure for parting (the classic Song of Dividing Waters exists for this purpose), and to place the tears of long ago inside the sound of the present river is to fuse past and present into a single sensation. Nothing is explained; the ear is asked to do the remembering.
此词艺术上以「今昔对照、由梦入情」见长。全词上片写梦境与寄书,下片写凭高忆旧。上片「画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水」写梦境之远:画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水;「手拈红笺寄人书,写无限、伤春事」写寄书伤春:手拈红笺寄人书,写无限、伤春事。下片「别浦高楼曾漫倚。对江南千里」写凭高忆旧:别浦高楼曾漫倚,对江南千里;「楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪」写当日凭高之泪:楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪。全词今昔对照,由梦入情,是晏几道词中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。
Allusions
The 'Ten Isles' are the ten island-paradises of the immortals described in the Account of the Isles Within the Sea, the standard mythological geography of the Taoist otherworld; to wake 'amid the clouds and waters of the Ten Isles' is to say the dream has traveled farther than any earthly road. The 'red letter sheet' (hong jian) is the tinted stationery of intimate correspondence in the Tang and Song — red was the color of private letters between lovers and close friends. The 'parting ford' (bie pu) is the river crossing where farewells were always spoken, and 'waters that divide' (fen liu shui) is an old poetic figure for separation itself: one stream becomes two, like two people going two ways. Behind these stands the whole tradition of the 'poem commanding spring to stay' — the attempt, doomed and moving, to hold a vanishing season and a vanishing person.
词中「画屏天畔」「十洲」「红笺」「别浦」「分流水」等语,皆含典故故实。「画屏天畔」写画屏之上云天相接,暗含梦境之远;「十洲」用《海内十洲记》之典,指祖洲、瀛洲等十洲,为神仙所居之地,「十洲云水」写梦中所至之十洲云水,极写其远;「红笺」指红色笺纸,为传情之信笺;「别浦」指送别之水滨,「别浦高楼曾漫倚」写曾于送别处高楼倚栏;「分流水」用「分流水」之意,写水之分流,暗含分别之意,「楼下分流水声中」写楼下分流之水声。词人以画屏天畔、十洲、红笺、别浦、分流水等意象入词,不着痕迹,而把怀人之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。
Commentary
Among Yan Jidao's lyrics this is the most perfectly distilled. Where his Linjiangxian builds its effect through explicit structure — counting hours, naming the friend — here everything happens through distance and sound: the screen at the horizon, the isles of dream, the thousand miles of the south, and finally the dividing water that carries the poem's only stated emotion, the tears of 'that day.' Later critics treated the closing couplet as the purest example of Yan Jidao's method: never naming the feeling, but placing it where the senses can find it. The tune's title — commanding spring to stay — is itself the poem's quiet confession that the command cannot work.
这首《留春令·画屏天畔》,是晏几道写怀人伤春之作,写梦回十洲、寄书伤春、凭高忆旧之情,含蓄婉转。上片写梦境与寄书:「画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水」——画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水。写梦境之远:画屏之上云天相接,梦回之时依稀仿佛,身在十洲云水之间——以十洲云水写梦中所至之远,正是所怀之人所在之远;「手拈红笺寄人书,写无限、伤春事」——手拈红笺寄人书,写无限、伤春事。写寄书伤春:手拈红笺,寄书予人,写尽无限伤春之事——梦中不能相会,唯以红笺寄书,写尽伤春怀人之情。下片写凭高忆旧:「别浦高楼曾漫倚。对江南千里」——别浦高楼曾漫倚,对江南千里。写凭高忆旧:曾于别浦高楼倚栏,面对江南千里——当年送别,正于此高楼倚栏,面对江南千里;「楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪」——楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪。写当日凭高之泪:楼下分流之水声中,有当日凭高之泪——当年在此凭高送别之泪,犹在水分流之声中。这「楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪」,是全词之结:以分流水之声写当日凭高之泪,今昔对照,含蓄深挚——当年的泪,已融入流水声中。全词今昔对照,由梦入情,正是晏几道「婉约深婉」词风的典型,也是其词中的名篇。
Prosody
Line by line
画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水。
A painted screen at the horizon's edge; waking from the dream, dimly, amid the clouds and waters of the Ten Isles.
画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水。
By the painted screen at heaven's edge, waking from the dream, dimly, the clouds and waters of the Ten Isles.
首三句写梦境之远,起笔即见其远。「画屏天畔」写画屏天畔,「画屏」写屏风,「天畔」写云天相接之处;「梦回依约」写梦回依约,「梦回」写其从梦中醒来,「依约」写其依稀仿佛;「十洲云水」写十洲云水,「十洲」为神仙所居之地,写梦中所至。三句以「天畔」写其远、以「十洲云水」写梦中所至之神仙境界,写尽梦境之远——梦中所至,是那十洲云水之远,正是所怀之人所在之远。以梦写远,含蓄而深挚,是「以梦起兴」的妙笔。
The first three lines write the dream's distance, the distance rising at the first stroke. By the painted screen at heaven's edge writes the painted screen, the screen, the heaven's edge where cloud and sky meet; waking from the dream, dimly writes the waking, the waking from the dream, the dimly the vague; the clouds and waters of the Ten Isles writes the Ten Isles, the dwelling place of the immortals, the dreamed destination. Three lines, the heaven's edge the distance, the Ten Isles' clouds and waters the immortal realm in the dream, exhausting the dream's distance — the dreamed destination, the clouds and waters of the Ten Isles' distance, precisely the distance of the beloved. Writing the distance through the dream, restrained and deep, the wondrous stroke of rising on the dream.
手拈红笺寄人书,写无限、伤春事。
I take up a red letter sheet to send my letter to you, writing of endless sorrow over spring.
手拈红笺寄人书,写无限、伤春事。
Holding the red notepaper, a letter to her, writing endless spring-grief affairs.
此二句写寄书伤春,是全词写情的关键。「手拈红笺寄人书」写手拈红笺寄人书,「手拈」写其手拈笺纸,「红笺」为传情之信笺,「寄人书」写寄书予人;「写无限、伤春事」写写无限伤春事,「无限」写其情之无穷,「伤春事」写其伤春之事。两句一写手拈红笺寄书、一写写尽伤春之事,以「红笺」写其传情、以「无限伤春事」写其情之深,写尽梦中不能相会、唯以红笺寄书之怀人伤春之情。以书写情,含蓄而深挚,是「以书写情」的点睛之笔。
These two lines write the letter-sending and the spring grief, the key of the ci's feeling. Holding the red notepaper, a letter to her writes the hand on the red paper, the hand holding the notepaper, the red paper the feeling-bearing letter, the letter to her the sending to the beloved; writing endless spring-grief affairs writes the infinite spring grief, the infinite the feeling's boundlessness, the spring grief the affairs of the grief. Two lines, one the hand on the red paper and the letter, one the writing of the endless grief, the red paper the feeling-bearing, the endless grief the feeling's depth, exhausting the dream's non-meeting and the red-paper letter's longing for the beloved. Writing feeling through the letter, restrained and deep, the telling stroke of writing feeling through writing.
别浦高楼曾漫倚。
By the parting ford's high tower I once leaned idly at length.
别浦高楼曾漫倚。
By the parting water, in the high tower, I once leaned idly.
此句写凭高忆旧,是全词由今入昔的转折。「别浦高楼曾漫倚」写别浦高楼曾漫倚,「别浦」指送别之水滨,「高楼」写高楼,「曾漫倚」写曾经倚栏。一句以「别浦」写送别之地、以「曾漫倚」写当年倚栏,写其当年曾于送别处之高楼上倚栏——正是当年送别凭高之处。以「曾」写追忆,含蓄而深挚,是「由今入昔」的转折之笔,也是全词今昔对照的枢纽。
This line writes the leaning on the height in memory, the ci's turn from the present to the past. By the parting water, in the high tower, I once leaned idly: the parting water the water's edge of farewell, the high tower the high building, the once leaned the old railing. One line, the parting water the place of farewell, the once leaned the old railing, writing the old leaning at the farewell place's high tower — precisely the old place of the height and the farewell. The word once writes the recollection, restrained and deep, the turning stroke from the present to the past, and the hinge of the ci's now-and-then contrast.
楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪。
Below the tower, in the sound of waters that divide and flow apart, are the tears of that day — the tears I shed leaning from the height.
楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪。
In the sound of the divided water below, there are the tears I shed, gazing from the height, that day.
尾二句写当日凭高之泪,是全词立意的落点。「楼下分流水声中」写楼下分流水声中,「分流水」写分流之水,「水声中」写水流之声;「有当日、凭高泪」写有当日凭高泪,「当日」写当年,「凭高泪」写凭高之泪。两句一写楼下分流水声、一写其中有当日凭高泪,以「分流水声中」写今日所闻、以「当日凭高泪」写当年之泪,写当年送别凭高之泪,已融入今日分流之水声中——当年的泪,犹在流水声中。以声写泪,今昔对照,含蓄深挚,是全词最动人处,也是「以声写情」的点睛之笔。
The last two lines write the tears of that day's height, the landing point of the ci. In the sound of the divided water below writes the divided water's sound, the divided water the branching stream, the water's sound the flowing; there are the tears I shed, gazing from the height, that day writes the that day, the height-gazing tears. Two lines, one the divided water's sound below, one the height-gazing tears within, the divided water's sound the heard today, the height-gazing tears the old tears, writing the old farewell's height-gazing tears, already melted into today's divided water's sound — the old tears, still within the water's sound. Writing tears through sound, the now-and-then contrast, restrained and deep, the most moving place of the ci, the telling stroke of writing feeling through sound.
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Related Reading
'After the dream the tower stands locked high; sober, the curtain hangs low' — the famous opening of Yan Jidao's best-known lyric — describes the moment after a dream reunion, when waking reveals only an empty house; 'the moon of those days is still here, it once shone on the returning colored clouds' places the whole grief in one unchanged moon. Liuchunling begins instead from the dream still lingering ('waking from the dream, dimly') and answers it with action: the red letter, the memory of the tower, the tears inside the dividing water. One lyric looks at the empty house after the dream; the other carries the dream forward into paper and water — two faces of the same homesickness.
晏几道《临江仙·梦后楼台高锁》「梦后楼台高锁,酒醒帘幕低垂」「当时明月在,曾照彩云归」,写梦后酒醒、人去楼空之怀,是晏几道最著名的词;《留春令·画屏天畔》则以「画屏天畔,梦回依约,十洲云水」「楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪」写梦回十洲、凭高忆旧。两词同出晏几道之手、同写梦回忆旧之情:一写梦后楼台高锁、以落花明月写情,一写梦回十洲云水、以分流水声写泪;一为梦后之怀、一为梦回之忆,并读正可见晏几道「婉约深婉」写忆旧的两种情景,皆于梦中见怀人之情。
晏殊·蝶恋花·槛菊愁烟兰泣露 Yan Shu, To the Tune of Dielianhua: The Fence Orchids Sorrow in Mist, the Orchids Weep Like Dew 晏殊 · 同写伤春怀人、凭高望远,一写独上高楼望尽天涯路、一写别浦高楼曾漫倚对江南千里,皆以凭高望远写怀人 Both lyrics climb a high tower to gaze toward the beloved; father and son, one autumnal and broad, the other dreamlike and narrow.Yan Shu — Yan Jidao's father — writes 'last night the west wind withered the green trees; alone I climb the high tower and gaze to the end of the sky's road,' the most famous climb-and-gaze in Song lyric: autumn, distance, and a gaze that sees nothing. Yan Jidao answers with 'by the parting ford's high tower I once leaned idly at length, facing a thousand miles of the southern land,' and then adds what his father left implicit: not only the gaze but the tears, still audible in the water below. The father's lyric widens until the road ends; the son's narrows until only a sound remains — the difference between the Two Yans in a single image.
晏殊《蝶恋花·槛菊愁烟兰泣露》「昨夜西风凋碧树,独上高楼,望尽天涯路」,写秋日离恨、独上高楼望尽天涯,是宋词写离愁的名篇;晏几道《留春令·画屏天畔》则以「别浦高楼曾漫倚。对江南千里」「楼下分流水声中,有当日、凭高泪」写别浦高楼倚栏、对江南千里。两词同写伤春怀人、凭高望远:一写独上高楼望尽天涯路、以望尽写怅,一写别浦高楼对江南千里、以流水声写泪;一为父晏殊之温润、一为子晏几道之深婉,并读正可见「二晏」写凭高望远怀人的传承与不同,皆以凭高望远写怀人。