宋 Song · 词 Ci lyric
少年游·离多最是
Wandering While Young: Partings Are the Most
离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢。
浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中。
可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重。
细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同。
The waters flowing east and west
In the end understand the two meetings.
The shallow feeling in the end is like
The moving clouds without fixity —
Yet they still reach into the dream-soul.
Pitiable is the human intention,
Thinner than the clouds and the water —
The good meetings are even harder to repeat.
Think carefully: of all the past
Heart-breaking places,
None is the same as this one.
Meaning
A lyric of the partings and the shallow feeling, written by Yan Jidao. Partings are the most: the waters flowing east and west — the streams that part — in the end understand the two meetings, for the waters can meet again. The shallow feeling is like the moving clouds without fixity — yet the clouds still reach into the dream-soul. Pitiable is the human intention, thinner than the clouds and the water — the good meetings are even harder to repeat. And the close: think carefully, of all the past heart-breaking places, none is the same as this one. The lyric is the meditation on the partings: the waters that meet again, the clouds that reach the dream, and the human intention thinner than both.
离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢。浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中。可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重。细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] Partings are the most — the waters flowing east and west in the end understand the two meetings. The shallow feeling in the end is like the moving clouds without fixity — yet they still reach into the dream-soul. Pitiable is the human intention, thinner than the clouds and the water — the good meetings are even harder to repeat. Think carefully: of all the past heart-breaking places, none is the same as this one. [Structure and Thought] The lyric moves through the three comparisons — the waters that can meet again, the clouds that reach the dream, the human intention thinner than both — to the close's assertion that this parting is beyond all the past heart-breaks. [Key Technique] The poem's art is the progression of the comparisons: the waters and the clouds are set against the human feeling, each comparison making the parting deeper, until the close declares this one the deepest of all. [Emotional Tone] Tender, melancholy, and precise: the lyric is the meditation on the partings, the shallow feeling and the hard repetition measured against the waters and the clouds.
【白话串讲】 晏几道写《少年游·离多最是》:“离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢”——“浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中”——“可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重”——“细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同”——他写离别——离多最是。 【意象与手法】 “离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢”以流水喻离别终会相逢;“浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中”以行云喻浅情;“可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重”写人意之薄;结以“细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同”写此番断肠尤甚。以物喻情、深婉动人。 【情感与主旨】 晏几道写离别之词,以流水、行云为喻写离多会少、人意之薄,结以“不与者番同”写此番离别尤苦,体现晏几道词婉约深婉的风格。 【名句点睛】 常考“离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢”以流水喻离别;“可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重”以云水写人意之薄。
Background
Yan Jidao (c. 1038–c. 1110), the son of the prime minister Yan Shu, was the most tender of the Northern Song lyricists, famous for his lyrics of the love and the parting, the memory and the dream. This 'Wandering While Young' lyric is a meditation on the partings, comparing the human feeling with the waters and the clouds. The lyric shows Yan Jidao's characteristic precision: the comparisons are exact, and the feeling is measured with the utmost delicacy.
《少年游·离多最是》为宋代词人晏几道所作词。晏几道(1038—1110),字叔原,号小山,抚州临川(今江西进贤)人,北宋词人,晏殊之子。此词写抒情离愁,为咏离愁之作。词中「离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢」写离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢;「浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中」写浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中;「可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重」写可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重;「细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同」写细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同。晏几道此词以抒情离愁、不与者番同写其离愁之情,深婉动人,是晏几道词中的名篇。此篇《少年游·离多最是》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《少年游·离多最是》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。
Art
The lyric's art is the art of the exact comparison. The waters flowing east and west in the end understand the two meetings — the streams that part can meet again, unlike the parted lovers. The shallow feeling is like the moving clouds without fixity — yet the clouds still reach into the dream-soul, unlike the feeling that does not. Pitiable is the human intention, thinner than the clouds and the water — the good meetings are even harder to repeat. And the close gathers the whole: think carefully, of all the past heart-breaking places, none is the same as this one. Each comparison is exact, and the progression deepens the parting until the final assertion of the unique heart-break.
此词艺术上以「深婉动人、以水写情」见长。全词共八句,由离多最是而浅情终似而可怜人意。起「离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢」写离多最是:离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢;「浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中」写浅情终似:浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中;「可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重」写可怜人意:可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重;结「细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同」写不与者番同:细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同。全词以水写情,由离多最是而不与者番同,深婉动人,是晏几道词中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。
Allusions
The lyric carries no learned allusion; its art is the plain comparison. 'The waters flowing east and west' (dongxi liushui) are the streams parting in their courses; 'the moving clouds without fixity' (xingyun wuding) are the clouds that drift; 'the dream-soul' (menghun) is the soul that reaches the beloved in the dream; and 'the good meetings' (jiahui) are the happy reunions, harder to repeat than the clouds' return to the dream.
词中「离多最是东西流水终解两相逢」「浅情终似行云无定犹到梦魂中」「可怜人意薄于云水佳会更难重」「细想从来断肠多处不与者番同」等语,皆含典故故实。「离多最是东西流水终解两相逢」用流水之典(流水东西写离分),写离多最是东西流水终解两相逢;「浅情终似行云无定犹到梦魂中」用行云之典(行云无定写飘忽),写浅情终似行云无定犹到梦魂中;「可怜人意薄于云水佳会更难重」写可怜人意薄于云水佳会更难重;「细想从来断肠多处不与者番同」写细想从来断肠多处不与者番同。词人以流水、行云之典入词,不着痕迹,而把抒情离愁之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。
Commentary
This lyric is one of Yan Jidao's most precise meditations on the parting, quoted for the exactness of its comparisons. The waters that can meet again, the clouds that reach the dream, and the human intention thinner than both — the progression is among the most admired in the short lyric. Critics praise the lyric's delicacy: the feeling measured against the waters and the clouds, and declared beyond all the past heart-breaks.
这首《少年游·离多最是》,是晏几道写抒情离愁之作,写离多最是、浅情终似、可怜人意、不与者番同之情,深婉动人。起「离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢」——离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢。写离多最是:离多最是、东西流水、终解两相逢——离多、流水、两相逢;「浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中」——浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中。写浅情终似:浅情终似、行云无定、犹到梦魂中——浅情、行云、梦魂中;「可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重」——可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重。写可怜人意:可怜人意、薄于云水、佳会更难重——人意、云水、难重;结「细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同」——细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同。写不与者番同:细想从来、断肠多处、不与者番同——断肠、者番同。这「细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同」,是全词之结:以不与者番同写其离愁。全词深婉动人,以水写情,正是晏几道词中的名篇。综观全诗,情真、景切、理深,三者浑融无迹,故能于短短数语之中寄无限深意,令人百读不厌。其含蓄蕴藉之处,正是中国古典诗歌以少总多、言有尽而意无穷的美学精神的生动体现。
Prosody
Line by line
离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢。
Partings are the most — the waters flowing east and west in the end understand the two meetings.
离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢。
The greatest parting grief, like the east-west flowing water, and yet it knows to meet again.
起句写离多最是,起笔即见其离。「离多最是」写离多最是,「离多」写离多、「最是」写最是;「东西流水,终解两相逢」用流水之典写东西流水,终解两相逢,「东西流水」写东西流水、「终解两相逢」写终解两相逢。一句写离多最是东西流水终解两相逢,以离多最是写离多、以终解两相逢写两相逢,写尽离多最是、东西流水,终解两相逢之情。以水起兴,深婉而动人,是「以水起兴」的妙笔。
The opening writes the parting-grief-the-greatest, the parting present at the first stroke. The parting grief the greatest writes the parting grief and the the-most; the east-west flowing water, and yet it knows to meet again uses the flowing-water allusion, the east-west water and the knowing-meeting. One line, the parting-grief through the parting grief, the mutual meeting through the knowing-meeting, exhausting the parting grief and the water's meeting. Rising on water, graceful and moving, a wondrous brush of rising-on-water.
浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中。
The shallow feeling in the end is like the moving clouds without fixity — yet they still reach into the dream-soul.
浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中。
The shallow feeling, after all, is like the drifting cloud, unsettled; yet it still comes to my dreaming soul.
此句写浅情终似,是全词写浅情之态的关键。「浅情终似」写浅情终似,「浅情」写浅情、「终似」写终似;「行云无定,犹到梦魂中」用行云之典写行云无定,犹到梦魂中,「行云无定」写行云无定、「犹到梦魂中」写犹到梦魂中。一句写浅情终似行云无定犹到梦魂中,以浅情终似写浅情、以犹到梦魂中写梦魂中,写尽浅情终似、行云无定,犹到梦魂中之情。以云写情,深婉而动人,是「以云写情」的点睛之笔。
This line writes the shallow feeling's after-all, the ci's shallow-feeling-state key. The shallow feeling, after all, is like writes the shallow feeling and the after-all-like; the drifting cloud, unsettled, yet it still comes to my dreaming soul uses the drifting-cloud allusion, the unsettled cloud and the still-coming-to-the-dream. One line, the shallow feeling through the shallow feeling, the dream-soul through the still-coming, exhausting the shallow feeling and the cloud's coming to the dream. Writing feeling through cloud, graceful and moving, a telling stroke of feeling-through-cloud.
可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重。
Pitiable is the human intention, thinner than the clouds and the water — the good meetings are even harder to repeat.
可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重。
Pity the human heart, thinner than the cloud and water; the fair meeting is harder to repeat.
此句写可怜人意,是全词写人意之态的关键。「可怜人意」写可怜人意,「可怜」写可怜、「人意」写人意;「薄于云水,佳会更难重」写薄于云水,佳会更难重,「薄于云水」写薄于云水、「佳会更难重」写佳会更难重。一句写可怜人意薄于云水佳会更难重,以可怜人意写人意、以佳会更难重写难重,写尽可怜人意、薄于云水,佳会更难重之情。以云写情,深婉而动人,是「以云写情」的点睛之笔。
This line writes the pity-the-human-heart, the ci's human-feeling-state key. Pity the human heart writes the pity and the human heart; thinner than the cloud and water, the fair meeting is harder to repeat writes the thinner-than-cloud-and-water and the hard-to-repeat. One line, the human feeling through the human heart, the hard-to-repeat through the harder, exhausting the pity and the harder meeting. Writing feeling through cloud, graceful and moving, a telling stroke of feeling-through-cloud.
细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同。
Think carefully: of all the past heart-breaking places, none is the same as this one.
细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同。
Thinking it through, all the past gut-breaking times are not like this one.
结句写细想从来,是全词立意的落点。「细想从来」写细想从来,「细想」写细想、「从来」写从来;「断肠多处,不与者番同」写断肠多处,不与者番同,「断肠多处」写断肠多处、「不与者番同」写不与者番同。一句写细想从来断肠多处不与者番同,以细想从来写从来、以不与者番同写者番同,写尽细想从来、断肠多处,不与者番同之情。以肠写情,深婉而动人,是全词最动人处,也是「以肠写情」的点睛之笔。
The close writes the thinking-it-through, the landing of the ci's theme. Thinking it through writes the careful thought and the ever-since; all the past gut-breaking times are not like this one writes the many-gut-breaking and the not-like-this-time. One line, the ever-since through the careful thought, the this-time's-sameness through the not-like, exhausting the thought and the unlike times. Writing feeling through the gut, graceful and moving, the ci's most moving place.
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Related Reading
Su Shi's 'Prelude to Water Melody' — 'people have joys and sorrows, partings and reunions' — resolves the parting in the philosophical necessity; Yan Jidao's lyric is the tender version — the waters and the clouds measured against the feeling, and this parting declared beyond all the past.
苏轼《水调歌头·明月几时有》「人有悲欢离合,月有阴晴圆缺,此事古难全」,写离思感怀、深婉旷达,是宋词长调的名篇;晏几道《少年游·离多最是》则以「离多最是,东西流水,终解两相逢」「浅情终似,行云无定,犹到梦魂中」写东西流水、犹到梦魂中。两词同写离思感怀、深婉旷达:一写人有悲欢离合、以悲欢写离合,一写离多最是东西流水终解两相逢、以流水写离愁;一为苏轼之旷达、一为晏几道之深婉,并读正可见词写「离思感怀」的两种笔法,皆于离思之中见深婉。
八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天 Eight Beats of Ganzhou: Facing the Evening Rain That Spatters the Long River 柳永 · 同写江上离思、深婉凝望,一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、一写可怜人意薄于云水佳会更难重,皆于江上之中见离思 Both are the Song lyrics of the parting's depth — Liu Yong's evening rain and the rail, Yan Jidao's waters and clouds measured.Liu Yong's 'Eight Beats of Ganzhou' is the long lyric of the parting's desolation; Yan Jidao's short lyric is the precise version — the partings measured against the waters that meet again and the clouds that reach the dream, and this one placed beyond all.
柳永《八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天》「对潇潇暮雨洒江天,一番洗清秋」,写江上离思、深婉凝望,是宋词写羁旅的名篇;晏几道《少年游·离多最是》则以「可怜人意,薄于云水,佳会更难重」「细想从来,断肠多处,不与者番同」写薄于云水、断肠多处。两词同写江上离思、深婉凝望:一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、以暮雨写清秋,一写可怜人意薄于云水佳会更难重、以云水写离愁;一为柳永之清丽、一为晏几道之深婉,并读正可见词写「江上离思」的两种笔法,皆于江上之中见离思。