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采莲曲

Gathering Lotus

王昌龄

Wang Changling

写景scenery description 田园pastoral

荷叶罗裙一色裁,芙蓉向脸两边开。
乱入池中看不见,闻歌始觉有人来。

The lotus leaves and her skirt are cut from the same green,
Lotus blooms turn toward her face on either side.
She mingles into the pond and is no longer seen,
Till a song is heard, revealing someone inside.
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Meaning

A lotus-picking girl's skirt matches the lotus leaves in color, and her face reflects the lotus flowers. When she enters the pond, she becomes indistinguishable from the plants, and only her song reveals her presence.

采莲少女的罗裙与荷叶仿佛同一块绿绢裁成,脸庞与荷花相互映照,在两侧绽开。她们混杂进入莲池便难以分辨,直到听见歌声才发觉有人到来。

Appreciation

This poem by Wang Changling captures the beauty of young girls at work, blending human figures with nature. The first two lines show the harmony between the girl's attire and the lotus; the last two lines create suspense with 'not seen' then 'song heard', forming a vivid picture. The style is fresh and bright, typical of High Tang quatrains.

【白话串讲】 “荷叶罗裙一色裁,芙蓉向脸两边开”——王昌龄写采莲女:荷叶和罗裙一个颜色,荷花在脸两边开。“乱入池中看不见,闻歌始觉有人来”——她混进荷塘看不见,听到歌声才知道有人。人面荷花,美到分不清。 【意象与手法】 本诗最妙在‘人景合一’的构思。首句‘荷叶罗裙一色裁’以‘一色裁’将少女绿裙与田田荷叶浑为一色 【情感与主旨】 《采莲曲》为六朝以来流行乐府题,写采莲女子情态 【名句点睛】 中高考常取‘荷叶罗裙一色裁,芙蓉向脸两边开’及后两句的构思设题。考点一:手法,以景写人、人景合一

Background

The title 'Cai Lian Qu' was a popular yuefu theme since the Six Dynasties. Wang Changling wrote two versions; this one dates from his stay in Jiangnan. The poet captures the moment when the girls merge with the lotus pond—their skirts like leaves, faces like flowers, with songs emerging from the greenery. It inherits the tradition of Emperor Wu of Liang's work but is more concise.

《采莲曲》为唐代王昌龄所作,是写采莲女之美的七绝。王昌龄(698—757),字少伯,京兆万年人,唐代诗人,有“七绝圣手”之称。此诗:荷叶罗裙一色裁,芙蓉向脸两边开。乱入池中看不见,闻歌始觉有人来。全诗写采莲女与荷叶荷花融为一体,是王昌龄诗的名篇。

Art

The poem's genius is the fusion of person and scenery. 'Cut from the same green' blends skirt and leaves; 'lotus' puns on flower and face. The last two lines shift from visual invisibility to auditory revelation, never directly describing the girl but using lotus and song to evoke her, creating a dynamic, ethereal picture.

《采莲曲》艺术上以人花交融的写法与含蓄的妙趣见长。全诗四句,层层写来:前二句写人花一色——“荷叶罗裙一色裁,芙蓉向脸两边开”写罗裙似荷叶、人面如芙蓉;后二句写乱入池中——“乱入池中看不见,闻歌始觉有人来”写采莲女入池不见、闻歌始觉。全诗以人花交融写采莲女之美,正是王昌龄诗含蓄的笔法。

Allusions

The title originates from Southern Dynasties yuefu. 'Lotus' (furong) is a traditional metaphor for a beautiful face, seen in Cao Zhi's works. 'Green skirt' and 'song' are common Six Dynasties imagery. Wang transforms the erotic original into a fresh working scene.

《采莲曲》用典少而意象自明。“罗裙”写采莲女之裙;“芙蓉”写荷花(亦喻人面);“乱入池中看不见”写采莲女与荷叶荷花融为一体。全诗以这些意象写采莲女之美,不用深典而妙趣自见,正是王昌龄诗以景写人的笔法。

Commentary

Ming critic Hu Yinglin praised Wang's quatrains as rivaling Li Bai's. This poem exemplifies his fresh, elegant style. Shen Deqian said it paints the lotus girl without redundancy. The blending of human and flower became a model for later lotus poetry.

《采莲曲》是王昌龄诗的名篇,也是唐代写采莲女的代表作。此诗写采莲女与荷叶荷花融为一体,向为论者称道。论者多赏其人与花交融的写法——“荷叶罗裙一色裁,芙蓉向脸两边开”写罗裙似荷叶、人面如芙蓉,人花一体;“乱入池中看不见,闻歌始觉有人来”写采莲女入池不见、闻歌始觉,更见妙趣。王昌龄有“七绝圣手”之称,此诗正是其代表——以人花交融写采莲女之美,正是其含蓄的风格。

Prosody

Form seven-character quatrain七言绝句
Rhyme Pingshui rhyme: Shangping Ten Hui (cai, kai, lai)《采莲曲》为七言绝句,四句,押平声韵。此诗用韵:裁、开、来(灰部),一韵到底,音节轻快。
Tone pattern first line rhymes, level tone pattern七言绝句以音节轻快、情致含蓄见长。此诗写采莲女之美,音节轻快而含蓄。全诗以七言贯底,声调与采莲之景的内容相合,是王昌龄诗中含蓄轻快的一路。
Reading note Four lines, 28 characters, a fresh quatrain blending person and scenery.《采莲曲》为唐代王昌龄所作,是写采莲女之美的七绝。此诗以“荷叶罗裙一色裁,芙蓉向脸两边开”写人花一色,以“乱入池中看不见,闻歌始觉有人来”写采莲女隐入荷塘、闻歌始觉。以人花交融写采莲女之美,正是王昌龄诗的名篇。

Line by line

荷叶罗裙一色裁,芙蓉向脸两边开。

The lotus leaves and her skirt are cut from one color; the hibiscus flowers bloom on either side of her face.

荷叶与罗裙如同一色裁成,荷花向着脸颊两边开放。

The lotus leaves and her silk skirt are cut from one color; the hibiscus blooms on either side of her face.

前二句写人花一色,是全诗写采莲女之美的起点。“荷叶罗裙一色裁”写罗裙似荷叶——“荷叶罗裙”写荷叶与罗裙,“一色裁”写如同一色裁成——荷叶罗裙,一色裁成;“芙蓉向脸两边开”写人面如芙蓉——“芙蓉向脸”写荷花向着脸颊,“两边开”写两边开放——芙蓉向脸,两边开。二句写人花一色:荷叶罗裙一色裁,芙蓉向脸两边开。以“荷叶罗裙一色裁”写罗裙与荷叶同色,以“芙蓉向脸两边开”写人面如荷花、花开两边,正是王昌龄诗写采莲女与荷叶荷花融为一体、人花不辨的笔法——裙似荷叶,面如芙蓉。

The first two lines write the woman and flowers of one color, the starting point of the whole's writing the lotus-picker's beauty. The lotus leaves and her silk skirt are cut from one color writes the skirt like the lotus leaf; the hibiscus blooms on either side of her face writes the face like the hibiscus. The two lines write the woman and flowers of one color: skirt and leaf of one hue, face and flower blooming on both sides, exactly Wang Changling's brush of fusing the lotus-picker with the leaves and flowers, the woman and the blooms undistinguishable - the skirt like the leaf, the face like the hibiscus.

乱入池中看不见,闻歌始觉有人来。

Mixed in the pool, she cannot be seen; only hearing the song do we know someone comes.

(她)乱入池中便看不见,听到歌声才觉得有人来。

Mixed into the pool, she is invisible; only hearing the song do we know someone is coming.

末二句写乱入池中,是全诗含蓄妙趣的归结。“乱入池中看不见”写入池不见——“乱入池中”写(采莲女)乱入池中,“看不见”写看不见——乱入池中看不见;“闻歌始觉有人来”写闻歌始觉——“闻歌”写听到歌声,“始觉有人来”写才觉得有人来——闻歌始觉有人来。二句写乱入池中:乱入池中看不见,闻歌始觉有人来。以“乱入池中看不见”写采莲女与荷叶荷花融为一体、不可分辨,以“闻歌始觉有人来”写闻歌方知有人,正是王昌龄诗写采莲女之美、含蓄不露的归结——人花不辨,闻歌始觉。

The last two lines write mixed into the pool, the landing of the whole's reserved delight. Mixed into the pool, she is invisible writes that, mingled among the leaves, she cannot be told apart; only hearing the song do we know someone is coming writes the song revealing her presence. The two lines write the mingling in the pool: invisible among the leaves, the song first showing the person. Writing the picker fused with the lotus leaves and flowers, undistinguishable, and writing the song's first revealing her, exactly Wang Changling's reserved conclusion to the picker's beauty - woman and flower undistinguishable, the song first making us know someone comes.

Study

Word focus

一色裁 cut from one color—skillful diction blending skirt and leaves “荷叶罗裙一色裁”之“一色裁”,写如同一色裁成,是全诗写人花交融的关键词。“一色”写同一颜色,“裁”写裁剪——荷叶与罗裙如同一色裁成。这一词写罗裙与荷叶之同:不是相似之色,而一色;不是可辨之衣,而同色裁成。以“荷叶罗裙一色裁”写人衣与荷叶同色,正是王昌龄诗写采莲女融入荷塘的笔法。
芙蓉向脸 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. “芙蓉向脸两边开”之“芙蓉向脸”,写荷花向着脸颊开放,是全诗写人面如花的关键词。“芙蓉”写荷花,“向脸”写向着脸颊——荷花向着脸颊两边开放。这一词写人花相映:不是花在远处,而芙蓉向脸;不是可分之景,而花向人面。以“芙蓉向脸两边开”写人面如芙蓉、花向人面开,正是王昌龄诗写采莲女之美、人花相映的笔法。
乱入 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. “乱入池中看不见”之“乱入”,写自然而然地进入、混杂其间,是全诗写采莲女隐入荷塘的关键词。“乱入”写混杂进入——(她)乱入池中便看不见。这一词写采莲女入池之态:不是有意之入,而乱入;不是可寻之行,而混入荷塘。以“乱入池中看不见”写采莲女隐入荷叶荷花之间,正是王昌龄诗写人花不辨的笔法。
闻歌始觉 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. “闻歌始觉有人来”之“闻歌始觉”,写听到歌声才察觉,是全诗含蓄妙趣的归结词。“闻歌”写听到歌声,“始觉”写才察觉——听到歌声才觉得有人来。这一词写察觉之迟:不是看见方知,而闻歌始觉;不是先见其人,而闻声后觉。以“闻歌始觉有人来”写采莲女隐于荷塘、闻歌始觉,正是王昌龄诗写含蓄妙趣的归结——人花不辨,闻歌始知。

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