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唐 Tang · 诗 Poem

观猎

The Hunt

王维

Wang Wei

边塞frontier 狩猎hunting

风劲角弓鸣,将军猎渭城。
草枯鹰眼疾,雪尽马蹄轻。
忽过新丰市,还归细柳营。
回看射雕处,千里暮云平。

The wind blows strong, the horn-bow twangs;
The general hunts at Weicheng.
Grass withered, the hawk's eye is sharp;
Snow melted, the horse's hoofs are light.
Suddenly past Xinfeng Market,
Then back to Xiliu Camp.
Turning to look at the place where the eagle was shot,
Thousands of miles of evening clouds lie flat.
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Meaning

The poem describes a general's winter hunt: the sound of the bow in the wind, the swift hunting with hawk and horse, a rapid return to camp, and a final panoramic view of the vast plain.

风势劲猛,角弓鸣响,将军在渭城射猎。草木枯黄,猎鹰目光锐利;积雪化尽,马蹄轻快驰骋。转眼已过新丰市,又回到了细柳营。回头遥望射雕之处,千里暮云一片平展。

Appreciation

The poem opens with sound before sight, uses concise language to depict swiftness, and ends with a broad scene, reflecting the heroic spirit of the Tang frontier.

【白话串讲】 王维写将军打猎:风劲弓鸣,草枯鹰疾,雪尽马蹄轻。忽过新丰,还归细柳,回看射雕处,千里暮云平。一场围猎,写得比电影还快、还帅。 【意象与手法】 章法跌宕:首联声先夺人,颔联以景写技,颈联写驰归之速,尾联远景收束。善用动词与形容词 【情感与主旨】 此诗一作《猎骑》,约作于王维早年(开元间)任监察御史或此前游历关中时。唐代尚武,狩猎为将帅常事,亦含讲武之意 【名句点睛】 此诗为唐王维之作,精要赏析详见下方深度赏析。

Background

The poem was likely written during Wang Wei's early years as an official in Chang'an. It depicts a general hunting near the capital, using historical place names like Xiliu Camp to imply military discipline and the vigor of the High Tang.

王维《观猎》,一作《猎骑》,约作于开元年间王维早年在长安任职或游历关中之时,具体年份无确证。唐代尚武,帝王将帅秋冬之际常行田猎,以为讲武之礼,兼示国威;长安近郊的渭城(秦之咸阳,汉改渭城,在今陕西咸阳东)、新丰(今陕西临潼东北)一带,正是当时射猎的常经之地。此诗所写,即是一位将军在渭城打猎、驰骋关中的情景。诗中「细柳营」用汉代周亚夫屯军细柳(今陕西咸阳西南)、军令严明的典故,暗赞将军治军有方;「射雕」用北齐名将斛律光勇武善射、人称「落雕都督」的故实,暗写将军射术之精。王维早年亦尝赴边塞(开元二十五年使至凉州),于骑射、边事并不陌生,故能写得如此真切传神。此诗以「观」字领起,通篇写旁观将军出猎、驰归的过程,是王维早期豪迈雄健一面的代表作,与其晚年冲淡的山水田园诗判然有别。关于此诗的写作时间,一说在开元末年王维官监察御史期间,一说在其使边之前,然无论何说,皆属其盛年作品,其雄健之气与《少年行》《陇西行》等早岁之作一脉相通。王维早年亦尝使边(开元二十五年出使凉州),于塞上骑射、军旅之事亲历目睹,故其写猎,非仅想象之辞,而有实感为据,此诗的真切传神,正源于此。此诗以「观」为题,通篇写旁观之猎,而将军之英武自在言外。

Art

The structure is dynamic: opening with sound, then action, return, and a panoramic conclusion. Verbs and adjectives like 'blows', 'sharp', 'light', 'suddenly' are precisely chosen to convey speed and power.

此诗章法跌宕,层层推进,被沈德潜推为「神完气足」之作。首联「风劲角弓鸣,将军猎渭城」声先夺人:劲风之中,角弓鸣响,将军出猎渭城,未写人而先闻其声,「鸣」字写弓弦与劲风相激,声势俱壮,起笔即有雷霆之势。颔联「草枯鹰眼疾,雪尽马蹄轻」以景写技:草枯则猎物毕露,鹰眼更显锐利;雪尽则道路无阻,马蹄愈见轻快,「疾」「轻」二字,一写鹰之猛,一写马之健,亦暗写将军射猎之精熟。颈联「忽过新丰市,还归细柳营」写驰归之速:一「忽」字,写猎罢归程的迅疾,转瞬已过新丰、还归细柳,风驰电掣,快意淋漓。尾联「回看射雕处,千里暮云平」以远景收束:将军回望方才射雕之处,唯见千里暮云,平铺天际,余韵悠长,含蓄不尽。全诗先声后景、先动后静,一气流转而首尾呼应。就章法言,首联点「出猎」,颔联写「猎中」,颈联写「猎归」,尾联写「猎后回望」,四联一线贯穿,环环相扣,是唐代狩猎诗中的绝唱。此诗通篇无一字正面写将军的形貌,而将军的英武,全从弓鸣、鹰疾、马轻、驰速、回望之中侧笔烘出,是「不写之写」的极高手法,深得咏人诗「遗貌取神」之旨。此诗与王维同题的边塞之作,皆以「以景写技」「以动写人」见长,而此诗更以「回看」一折,收束得含蓄悠远。此诗以「观」领起,通篇从旁观者眼中写来,而猎场的气象、将军的神采,皆在言外,是「借景写人」的上乘笔法。

Allusions

'Xiliu Camp' refers to the strict military camp of Zhou Yafu (Han Dynasty), implying the general's disciplined command. 'Shooting an eagle' alludes to the legendary archery of General Hulü Guang (Northern Qi), highlighting the general's skill.

此诗用典精切,皆与军旅、骑射相关。「细柳营」典出《史记·绛侯周勃世家》——汉文帝时,周亚夫屯军细柳,军纪严明,文帝劳军亦不得擅入,后世遂以「细柳营」代指军纪严整的军营;王维以「还归细柳营」写将军猎罢归营,暗以周亚夫相比,赞其治军之严、名将之风。「射雕」典出《北齐书·斛律光传》——北齐名将斛律光善射,尝射落云中大雕,人称「落雕都督」;「回看射雕处」暗用此典,写将军射术之精,一笔双关,既实写射猎,又暗赞其勇。「角弓」为饰以兽角的硬弓,语本《诗经·小雅·角弓》「骍骍角弓」,是古典诗歌中咏弓射的传统意象。「新丰」为汉高祖刘邦为慰其父思乡之情,仿故乡丰邑所建的新城,故址在长安附近,是关中交通要冲。全诗以军旅典故与关中地名交织,写实而不失典雅,愈见将军身份之尊与射猎气象之壮。「渭城」即咸阳故地,其名令人联想到王维自己的《送元二使安西》「渭城朝雨浥轻尘」,一写离别、一写射猎,同以渭城为地,而情味迥异,亦可相参。「新丰」「细柳」二地名,一为汉高祖思乡所建,一为周亚夫屯军之处,王维并用以写猎归之速,地理之典与军旅之典交织,愈见其博。「角弓」之咏,又暗承《诗经·小雅·角弓》「骍骍角弓」的讽喻传统,而王维移以写猎,取其字面而翻出新意。凡此诸典,皆暗赞将军之勇武与治军之严,一笔双关而含蓄有骨力。

Commentary

Critics praise its structure, wording, and rhythm as exemplary. Ming commentator Gu Lin said: 'The chapter, sentence, and word methods all reach perfection—rare even in High Tang poetry.'

此诗为王维早期五律名篇,历代评价极高。清人沈德潜《唐诗别裁集》评此诗「神完气足,章法、句法、字法俱臻绝顶,盛唐诗中亦不多见」,将其推为盛唐五律的极致之作。明人顾璘评此诗「首尾相应,笔力雄健」,亦赞其章法之严。清人方东树《昭昧詹言》论此诗,尤赏「草枯鹰眼疾,雪尽马蹄轻」一联,谓其「以景写技,字字传神」。此诗在传播史上,常与卢纶《塞下曲》「平明寻白羽,没在石棱中」等狩猎、边塞之作并提,被视为唐代尚武精神的文学写照。「回看射雕处,千里暮云平」二句,以其开阔苍茫的意境,成为后世咏猎诗竞相仿效的范本。此诗也向读者展示了王维诗风的另一面——他不只是「诗中有画」的山水禅僧,早年亦能写出如此雄健豪迈、气吞万里的边塞猎歌,其诗才的多元与博大,于此可见一斑。此诗与《少年行》《陇西行》等同为王维早年豪放之作的代表,后世论王维,多以「诗佛」目之,而此数诗则提醒读者,王维早年亦曾有「一剑曾当百万师」式的豪情,其诗风的多元,不可一以概之。此诗还以「射雕」「细柳」诸典,暗写将军之勇武与治军之严,一笔双关,含蓄而有骨力,是咏猎诗中用典的高境。此诗与《少年行》《陇西行》并为王维早年豪放之作,明人王世贞《艺苑卮言》论王维,亦尝举此类诗以证其「不尽禅寂」的一面。

Prosody

Form five-character regulated verse五言律诗
Rhyme ming, cheng, qing, ying, ping (lower level 8th geng rhyme)平水韵下平八庚韵,押「鸣」「城」「轻」「营」「平」五韵,首句入韵
Tone pattern Middle two couplets are parallel: 'grass withered' vs 'snow melted', 'hawk's eye sharp' vs 'horse's hoofs light'; 'suddenly past Xinfeng' vs 'return to Xiliu'此诗为平起首句入韵的五律。风劲角弓鸣(平仄仄平平),将军猎渭城(平平仄仄平),草枯鹰眼疾(仄平平仄仄),雪尽马蹄轻(仄仄仄平平),忽过新丰市(仄仄平平仄),还归细柳营(平平仄仄平),回看射雕处(平平仄平仄,为特拗句),千里暮云平(平仄仄平平)。
Reading note The first half depicts the hunt in momentum, the second half the return in leisure, showing the heroic frontier spirit of the High Tang.此诗为五言律诗,平起首句入韵,押下平八庚韵,韵脚「鸣」「城」「轻」「营」「平」同部相押,一韵到底。「庚」韵音色清亮有力,读来有雄健铿锵之感,正合狩猎的壮阔气势。就平仄论,此诗通篇粘对工稳,是五律正格;唯第七句「回看射雕处」为平平仄平仄,是五言常见的特拗句式,于声律无碍,反使末联的余韵更为悠长。中二联对仗极工——颔联「草枯」对「雪尽」、「鹰眼」对「马蹄」、「疾」对「轻」,时令、物象、状态字字相对;颈联「忽过」对「还归」、「新丰市」对「细柳营」,动作与地名两两相配。首句「风劲角弓鸣」以「鸣」字开篇,声先夺人;末句「千里暮云平」以「平」字收束,余韵绵长,一鸣一平,首尾呼应,声律之妙与章法之妙相得益彰。沈德潜评此诗「神完气足」,其声律的精严正是这「神完气足」的根基。全诗以庚韵的清亮,写狩猎的雄健,声调铿锵、一气流转,正是沈德潜所谓「神完气足」在声律上的表现。

Line by line

风劲角弓鸣

The wind is strong, the horn-bow twangs. This opening uses sound before sight, creating a dynamic start.

风势劲猛,角弓鸣响

The wind is fierce, the horn bow twanging.

首句以「风劲」领起,写劲风之中角弓鸣响,未写人而先闻其声,是「先声夺人」的起笔。「鸣」字尤妙:弓弦为劲风所激,发出鸣响,风愈劲而弓愈鸣,风声与弦声交作,声势俱壮。此句不直写将军之勇,而借风劲、弓鸣渲染出猎的紧张气氛,为下句「将军猎渭城」蓄势。以声写势、以景写人,五字之中,猎场的气氛、将军的气概已呼之欲出,是五律起笔的典范。此句与末句「千里暮云平」一以声起、一以景结,首尾的动静对比,正是全诗章法的精要。

The opening line leads with 'fierce wind': in the strong wind the horn bow twangs, sound heard before the man appears, a 'voice that seizes first'. The word 'twang' is fine — the string vibrates in the gale, wind and bow sounding together, the hunt's tension set before 'the general hunts by Weicheng'. Writing power through sound and the man through scene, five words bring the hunting ground and the general's bearing to life.

草枯鹰眼疾

Grass withered, the hawk's eye is sharp. 'Sharp' emphasizes the hawk's keen sight.

草木枯黄,猎鹰目光锐利

Grass withered, the hawk's eye sharp.

「疾」字写鹰眼之锐,是此句的关节。草枯之后,猎物无所遮蔽,鹰隼的锐利目光便愈发显出其「疾」——迅捷而锋利。此句不直写鹰,而写「草枯」的背景,再以「鹰眼疾」点出鹰的英姿,是以景衬物、以物写人。鹰眼之疾,实亦暗写将军射猎之精——非精于射者,不能有此「疾」鹰。「草枯」与「鹰眼疾」之间,藏着一层因果:正是秋深草枯,方显鹰眼之锐,秋猎的时令与鹰犬的矫健,皆由此五字写出,是全诗「以景写技」笔法的典型。此句以「回看」收束,是全诗由动入静、由实入虚的转折。

The word 'sharp' is the crux, writing the hawk's piercing eye. When the grass withers, the quarry has no cover, and the falcon's sight shows all the keener — swift and cutting. The line does not write the hawk directly but the background of withered grass, then 'the hawk's eye sharp' to point up the bird; scene sets off object, object sets off man. The hawk's sharpness secretly figures the general's own marksmanship. Between 'withered grass' and 'sharp eye' lies cause: only when autumn deepens and grass dries does the hawk's sight show.

雪尽马蹄轻

Snow melted, the horse's hooves are light. 'Light' conveys swiftness.

积雪化尽,马蹄轻快驰骋

Snow gone, the horse's hoofs light.

「轻」字写马蹄之疾,与上句「疾」字对举,一鹰一马,同写猎骑的矫健。雪尽之后,道路无泥泞之阻,马蹄驰骋便愈见轻快,「轻」字既写马行之速,又写骑者之得心应手。此句与「草枯鹰眼疾」相对,上句写天空的鹰,下句写地上的马,一高一低、一飞一驰,构成猎场的立体画面。而「雪尽」与「草枯」又同点时令(冬末春初),前后呼应。颔联以「疾」「轻」二字写尽鹰马之精、猎骑之健,是「以景写技」的典范,历来为论者所称。此联以「疾」「轻」二字写尽猎鹰之锐、骏马之健,是全诗「以景写技」的精华。

The word 'light' writes the horse's speed, set against 'sharp' above, hawk and horse alike showing the rider's vigor. Once the snow is gone, the road is free of mud, and the hoofs gallop light — the word names both the horse's speed and the rider's easy mastery. It pairs with 'grass withered, the hawk's eye sharp': above the sky's hawk, below the ground's horse, high and low, flying and galloping, a three-dimensional hunting scene; 'snow gone' and 'grass withered' both mark the season.

回看射雕处

Looking back at the place where the eagle was shot. Shows lingering excitement.

回头遥望射雕之处

He turns to gaze back at the place where he shot the eagle.

「回看」一转,写将军猎罢归营之际,回头遥望方才射雕之处。这一个「回看」的动作,既见将军对此次射猎的踌躇自得,又为末句「千里暮云平」的苍茫远景作铺垫。「射雕处」暗用斛律光落雕之典,既实写射猎之所,又暗赞将军射术之精,一语双关。由驰归的迅疾,到「回看」的从容,节奏由动转静,情绪由扬转敛,为全诗的收束埋下伏笔。此句承上启下,是全诗由「猎」入「余韵」的转折点,也是全诗含蓄不尽的生发处。此联以「疾」「轻」二字点出鹰马之神,是「以景写技」的精华。

'Turns to gaze back' — as the general returns, he looks back to where he shot the eagle. The gesture shows his satisfaction with the hunt and sets up the vast closing 'a thousand li of evening clouds level'. The 'place where he shot the eagle' secretly alludes to Helü Guang's downing of the eagle, at once the real spot and a quiet praise of the general's marksmanship, one word two meanings. From the gallop home to the 'gazing back' calm, rhythm turns from movement to stillness, preparing the poem's lingering close.

Study

Word focus

疾 sharp, swift – describes the hawk's keen eyes 「疾」字写鹰眼之锐,是颔联的一字之骨。疾有迅疾、锐利二义,用于鹰眼,兼状其目光之锐与反应之速。草枯之后,猎物毕现,鹰眼之「疾」便格外显眼。此字不直写鹰之猛,而以「疾」字点其眼神,以一目之神传全鹰之态,是写物的「遗貌取神」之笔。更妙的是,「疾」字还暗写射猎之精——鹰眼既疾,则猎者之神亦在其中。与下句「轻」字相对,一疾一轻,鹰与马的神骏俱出,王维炼字之精,于此可见。后世论此诗字法,「疾」「轻」「忽」三字常被并提为点睛之笔。
轻 light, quick – describes the horse's speed 「轻」字写马蹄之快,与「疾」字对举。雪尽之后,道路干爽,马蹄驰骋轻快,「轻」字既写马行之迅疾,又写骑者控驭之自如,更暗含一种痛快淋漓的意气。此字看似写马,实则写人——唯骑术精绝者,方能人马合一、如履平地,故「马蹄轻」实是「骑者轻」的移情之笔。以「轻」状马,化沉重为轻灵,把狩猎归途的迅疾与畅快写得跃然纸上,是王维以一字传神、以景写人的典范。「疾」「轻」二字,一鹰一马,一空中一地面,共同撑起了颔联的矫健画面。
忽 suddenly – indicates rapid movement 「忽」字写猎罢驰归之速,是颈联的点睛之笔。出猎之地与细柳营之间,隔着新丰市等数处,诗人以一个「忽」字,写将军转瞬即过新丰、还归细柳,风驰电掣、快意淋漓。「忽」字既写马行之疾,又写归心之切,更暗含猎罢的畅快与得意——唯有兴致高昂,方觉归程如飞。此字与尾联「回看」的动作相对,一疾一缓、一放一收,节奏的跌宕全赖此一字。以「忽」写迅疾,不露痕迹而神采飞扬,是王维炼字的又一佳例,也是颈联「驰归之速」得以传神的关键。

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