唐 Tang · 诗 Poem
和晋陵陆丞早春游望
Matching Lu, the Assistant Magistrate of Jinling, on His Early Spring Outing
独有宦游人,偏惊物候新。
云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春。
淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹。
忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾。
morning clouds and glow rise from the sea at dawn, and plum and willow carry spring across the river.
The gentle air urges the orioles on; the clear light turns the green duckweed.
Suddenly I hear you sing the old tune: my thoughts of home would wet my kerchief.
Meaning
A wandering official greets the new spring with a start: dawn clouds over the sea, plum and willow crossing the river, orioles urged by the warm air, duckweed greening in the light. The season's beauty intensifies rather than cures his homesickness, and when his friend sings the old poem, tears wet his kerchief. Du Shenyan's five-character regulated verse is a landmark in the maturing of the form.
独有宦游人,偏惊物候新。云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春。淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹。忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] Only one who travels in office is startled anew by each shift of the seasons. Dawn clouds and rosy light rise from the sea; plum and willow carry spring across the river. The mild air hurries the orioles to sing; the clear sunlight turns the duckweed green. Then I suddenly hear you singing your old poem, and my longing for home is enough to soak my kerchief. [Structure] The poem moves from thesis, only the wanderer startles at the seasons, through three couplets of spring scenery to the emotional release of the closing couplet: the classic regulated-verse arc. [Imagery] Clouds and glow rising from the sea and plum and willow crossing the river are among the most famous lines in early Tang poetry; spring is given motion and scale, as if the season itself were traveling south. The scenery is not decorative but the very force that startles the wanderer.
【白话串讲】 杜审言写《和晋陵陆丞早春游望》:“独有宦游人,偏惊物候新”——“云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春”——“淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹”——“忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾”——他写早春游望——云霞出海曙。 【意象与手法】 “独有宦游人,偏惊物候新”写宦游惊物候;“云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春”写云霞梅柳;“淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹”写淑气晴光;结以“忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾”写归思沾巾。清丽警策。 【情感与主旨】 杜审言和晋陵陆丞早春游望之作,写宦游见早春物候之新而触发归思,以“云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春”写春景之壮,是五律中的名篇。 【名句点睛】 常考“独有宦游人,偏惊物候新”写宦游惊物候;“云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春”写春景之壮。
Background
Du Shenyan (ca. 645-708), courtesy name Bijian, was an early Tang poet and the grandfather of Du Fu. He held various posts in the regions, and this poem answers a poem by Lu, the assistant magistrate of Jinling, on an early spring outing. Early Tang regulated verse was still perfecting its tonal and syntactic discipline; Du Shenyan was one of its masters, and this poem is routinely cited as one of the first fully mature five-character regulated verses. Its opening line, about the wanderer in office being startled anew by the turning seasons, set a precedent for the whole theme of the official-traveler's sensitivity to the seasons.
《和晋陵陆丞早春游望》为唐代诗人杜审言所作诗。杜审言(约645—约708),字必简,祖籍襄阳,迁居巩县(今河南巩义),初唐诗人,杜甫之祖父。此诗写景羁旅,为和晋陵陆丞早春游望之作。诗中「独有宦游人,偏惊物候新」写独有宦游人,偏惊物候新;「云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春」写云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春;「淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹」写淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹;「忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾」写忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾。杜审言此诗以写景羁旅、归思欲沾巾写其羁旅之情,清丽警策,是杜审言诗中的名篇。此篇《和晋陵陆丞早春游望》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《和晋陵陆丞早春游望》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。
Art
The poem's craft lies in its verbs. Rise sends the dawn clouds out of the sea; cross carries spring over the river on the backs of plum and willow; urge makes the mild air a herder of orioles; turn makes the sunlight a painter greening the duckweed. Every natural force is given agency, so spring itself becomes the actor, and the wanderer, passive before this seasonal movement, is startled. The regulated form is handled with total ease: the three middle couplets are strictly parallel, yet the diction never feels mechanical because each image is a complete little scene. The closing couplet pivots from panorama to private feeling with the suddenness of the word suddenly.
此诗艺术上以「清丽警策、以景写情」见长。全诗共八句四联,由独有宦游人而云霞出海曙而淑气催黄鸟。起「独有宦游人,偏惊物候新」写独有宦游人:独有宦游人,偏惊物候新;「云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春」写云霞出海曙:云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春;「淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹」写淑气催黄鸟:淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹;结「忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾」写归思欲沾巾:忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾。全诗以景写情,由独有宦游人而归思欲沾巾,清丽警策,是杜审言诗中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。
Allusions
The poem's references are few but weighty. The wanderer in office names the condition of the traveling official, a stock but deeply felt figure in Tang poetry. The turning seasons refers to the twenty-four solar terms and seasonal signs whose change is felt most sharply by those far from home. The yellow oriole is spring's standard bird and the green duckweed its standard water plant, the conventional vocabulary of early spring, here refreshed by active verbs. The old tune is the friend's poem in the old style, heard as a melody, and wetting the kerchief alludes to the classical expression of grief for home so deep it soaks one's sleeve. The opening phrase about being startled by the turning seasons became so famous that later poets echo it whenever they write the official-traveler's spring.
诗中「独有宦游人偏惊物候新」「云霞出海曙梅柳渡江春」「淑气催黄鸟晴光转绿苹」「忽闻歌古调归思欲沾巾」等语,皆含典故故实。「独有宦游人偏惊物候新」写独有宦游人偏惊物候新;「云霞出海曙梅柳渡江春」写云霞出海曙梅柳渡江春;「淑气催黄鸟晴光转绿苹」用黄鸟之典(黄鸟即黄莺,鸣于春),写淑气催黄鸟晴光转绿苹;「忽闻歌古调归思欲沾巾」写忽闻歌古调归思欲沾巾。诗人以黄鸟等语入诗,不着痕迹,而把写景羁旅之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。
Commentary
This poem is one of the canonical works of early Tang regulated verse, and its second couplet, morning clouds and glow rising from the sea with plum and willow carrying spring across the river, has been quoted for thirteen centuries as the supreme image of spring's arrival. Critics have noted how the poem matures the regulated form: the parallelism is exact but alive, and the emotional arc from startlement at the seasons to thoughts of home wetting the kerchief gives the form a psychological completeness it had not previously achieved. Du Shenyan's fame rests substantially on this poem; as Du Fu's grandfather, he also stands at the head of the great Du poetic lineage. The opening line in particular established the wanderer in office startled by the seasons as a permanent theme of Chinese poetry.
这首《和晋陵陆丞早春游望》,是杜审言写写景羁旅之作,写独有宦游人、云霞出海曙、淑气催黄鸟、归思欲沾巾之情,清丽警策。起「独有宦游人,偏惊物候新」——独有宦游人,偏惊物候新。写独有宦游人:独有宦游人、偏惊物候新——宦游人、物候新;「云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春」——云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春。写云霞出海曙:云霞出海曙、梅柳渡江春——出海曙、渡江春;「淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹」——淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹。写淑气催黄鸟:淑气催黄鸟、晴光转绿苹——催黄鸟、转绿苹;结「忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾」——忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾。写归思欲沾巾:忽闻歌古调、归思欲沾巾——歌古调、欲沾巾。这「忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾」,是全诗之结:以归思欲沾巾写其羁旅。全诗清丽警策,以景写情,正是杜审言诗中的名篇。综观全诗,情真、景切、理深,三者浑融无迹,故能于短短数语之中寄无限深意,令人百读不厌。其含蓄蕴藉之处,正是中国古典诗歌以少总多、言有尽而意无穷的美学精神的生动体现。
Prosody
Line by line
独有宦游人,偏惊物候新。
Only the wanderer in office is startled anew by the turning seasons.
独有宦游人,偏惊物候新。
Only the traveling official is startled by the first change of the season.
起句写独有宦游人,起笔即见其游。「独有宦游人」写独有宦游人,「独有」写独有、「宦游人」写宦游人;「偏惊物候新」写偏惊物候新,「偏惊」写偏惊、「物候新」写物候新。一句写独有宦游人偏惊物候新,以独有宦游人写宦游人、以偏惊物候新写物候新,写尽独有宦游人、偏惊物候新之情。以游起兴,清丽而警策,是「以游起兴」的妙笔。
The opening line writes that only the traveling official is startled by the new season; rising through the journey, it is fresh and pointed, the start of the poem.
云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春。
Morning clouds and glow rise from the sea at dawn; plum and willow carry spring across the river.
云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春。
Cloud and dawn rise from the sea; plum and willow carry spring across the river.
此句写云霞出海曙,是全诗写云霞之态的关键。「云霞出海曙」写云霞出海曙,「云霞」写云霞、「出海曙」写出海曙;「梅柳渡江春」写梅柳渡江春,「梅柳」写梅柳、「渡江春」写渡江春。一句写云霞出海曙梅柳渡江春,以云霞出海曙写出海曙、以梅柳渡江春写渡江春,写尽云霞出海曙、梅柳渡江春之情。以霞写景,清丽而警策,是「以霞写景」的点睛之笔。
This line writes clouds and dawn rising from the sea, plum and willow carrying spring across the river; through the dawn it writes the early-spring scene, the key image of the poem.
淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹。
The gentle air urges the orioles on; the clear light turns the green duckweed.
淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹。
The mild air urges the orioles; the clear light turns the duckweed green.
此句写淑气催黄鸟,是全诗写淑气之态的关键。「淑气催黄鸟」用黄鸟之典写淑气催黄鸟,「淑气」写淑气、「催黄鸟」写催黄鸟;「晴光转绿苹」写晴光转绿苹,「晴光」写晴光、「转绿苹」写转绿苹。一句写淑气催黄鸟晴光转绿苹,以淑气催黄鸟写催黄鸟、以晴光转绿苹写转绿苹,写尽淑气催黄鸟、晴光转绿苹之情。以鸟写景,清丽而警策,是「以鸟写景」的点睛之笔。
This line writes the mild air urging the orioles, the clear light turning the duckweed green; through the oriole it writes spring's urging presence, the key scenic stroke.
忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾。
Suddenly I hear you sing the old tune: my thoughts of home would wet my kerchief.
忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾。
Suddenly I hear an ancient strain, and homesickness wets my kerchief.
结句写忽闻歌古调,是全诗立意的落点。「忽闻歌古调」写忽闻歌古调,「忽闻」写忽闻、「歌古调」写歌古调;「归思欲沾巾」写归思欲沾巾,「归思」写归思、「欲沾巾」写欲沾巾。一句写忽闻歌古调归思欲沾巾,以忽闻歌古调写歌古调、以归思欲沾巾写欲沾巾,写尽忽闻歌古调、归思欲沾巾之情。以归写情,清丽而警策,是全诗最动人处,也是「以归写情」的点睛之笔。
The closing line writes that suddenly hearing the ancient tune, homesickness nearly wets the kerchief; ending on the homeward longing, it is the poem's landing — the poet, startled by spring, overcome by a song of old.
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Du Shenyan's wanderer is startled by spring's signs on earth, clouds, plum and willow, orioles, and weeps for home; Su Shi, roused by the mid-autumn moon, longs to fly to the heavens and is consoled by philosophy. Both poems begin with a season's sudden beauty and end in longing for another realm, one for home and one for the moon palace.
苏轼《水调歌头·明月几时有》「我欲乘风归去,又恐琼楼玉宇,高处不胜寒」,写早春感怀、清丽旷达,是宋词长调的名篇;杜审言《和晋陵陆丞早春游望》则以「独有宦游人,偏惊物候新」「云霞出海曙,梅柳渡江春」写宦游人、出海曙。两诗同写早春感怀、清丽旷达:一写我欲乘风归去、以乘风写超然,一写独有宦游人偏惊物候新、以物候写早春;一为苏轼之旷达、一为杜审言之清丽,并读正可见诗写「早春感怀」的两种笔法,皆于早春之中见清丽。
八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天 Eight Beats of Ganzhou: Facing the Evening Rain Sweeping the River Sky 柳永 · 同写春望羁旅、清丽凝望,一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、一写淑气催黄鸟晴光转绿苹,皆于春望之中见羁旅 Two spring gazes: the early Tang official's fresh panorama and the Song traveler's autumn vista.Du Shenyan greets early spring with clouds and glow rising from the sea, the season arriving with motion and hope before the turn to tears; Liu Yong faces late autumn rain across the river, the season already steeped in sorrow. Read together, they bookend the traveler's year: spring's startling beauty and autumn's washing grief.
柳永《八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天》「对潇潇暮雨洒江天,一番洗清秋」,写春望羁旅、清丽凝望,是宋词写羁旅的名篇;杜审言《和晋陵陆丞早春游望》则以「淑气催黄鸟,晴光转绿苹」「忽闻歌古调,归思欲沾巾」写催黄鸟、欲沾巾。两诗同写春望羁旅、清丽凝望:一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、以暮雨写清秋,一写淑气催黄鸟晴光转绿苹、以黄鸟写早春;一为柳永之清丽、一为杜审言之警策,并读正可见诗写「春望羁旅」的两种笔法,皆于春望之中见羁旅。