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将赴成都草堂途中有作先寄严郑公五首其四

On the Way to My Chengdu Thatched Cottage, First Sent to Lord Zheng of Yan: Fourth of Five Poems

杜甫

Du Fu

常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍。
新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿。
生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹。
三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难。

For long I have grieved that the crumbling sand ruins the rail of my herb bed,
and that from the river balustrade the wind-driven torrents fall.
I hate that the young pines do not shoot up a thousand feet;
the evil bamboo should all be cut down — ten thousand stalks.
My very living must rely on the old man of the Yellow Pavilion;
my withered face I would entrust to the purple-gold elixir.
Three years of wandering have left me nothing but skin and bone —
I truly believe the roads of the world are hard to travel.
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Meaning

Written on the road back to his long-abandoned thatched cottage outside Chengdu and sent ahead to his patron Yan Wu, this poem moves from the garden's decay — sand collapsing into the herb-bed rail, rapids falling past the river balustrade — to a burst of moral passion: the young pines should grow a thousand feet, and every stalk of harmful bamboo should be cut down. Du Fu then admits plainly that his livelihood depends on his powerful friend, and closes with the confession that three years of flight and famine have wasted him to skin and bone, and that the roads of the world are truly hard.

常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍。新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿。生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹。三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难。

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] Writing to his patron Yan Wu on the road back to his thatched cottage, Du Fu first mourns the garden's ruin — the crumbling sand has carried away the herb-bed rail, and wind-driven rapids fall past the river balustrade. He then declares his passions: he hates that the young pines he planted are not taller, and he would cut down every stalk of the harmful bamboo. Admitting that his living depends on the 'old man of the Yellow Pavilion,' he would trust his withered face even to alchemy. Three years of wandering have left him skin and bone, and he ends with the ballad-title confession that the roads of the world are hard. [Structure] The eight lines move in four steps — ruin of the garden, moral indignation, personal dependence, and final reflection — each couplet turning the feeling a stage deeper, the way a private letter becomes a poem about a whole broken age. [Imagery] The famous couplet about the new pines and the evil bamboo symbolizes love and hatred: the pines stand for all that is fresh, upright and hopeful (the young shoots he planted at the cottage), the bamboo for all that chokes and spreads. Read as allegory, the lines sum up Du Fu's view of a world after rebellion in which good things grow too slowly and bad things too fast. [Feeling] The poem's weight lies in its honesty: grief, anger, gratitude and resignation are all admitted plainly, which is exactly what later critics meant by Du Fu's 'heavy and sombre' style.

【白话串讲】 杜甫写《将赴成都草堂途中有作先寄严郑公五首其四》:“常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍”——“新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿”——“生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹”——“三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难”——他寄严武——新松恨不高千尺。 【意象与手法】 “常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍”写药栏沙崩;“新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿”以新松恶竹写爱憎;“生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹”写生理凭黄阁老;结以“三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难”写行路难。沉郁咏志。 【情感与主旨】 杜甫寄严武之作,写草堂荒废与“新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿”的鲜明爱憎,以“信有人间行路难”写奔走的艰辛,是杜甫七律中的名篇。 【名句点睛】 常考“新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿”以新松恶竹写爱憎;“三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难”写行路难。

Background

Du Fu (712-770), courtesy name Zimei, known as the Old Man of Shaoling, was born in Gong County (today in Henan) and is traditionally ranked as China's greatest 'poet-historian.' After the An Lushan Rebellion (755-763) he spent years in exile and poverty, and in 760, with the help of Yan Wu, then governor of Chengdu, he built his famous Thatched Cottage by the Wanhua Brook outside the city. When fresh upheavals forced him to wander again, Yan Wu was once more appointed to Chengdu; on the road back to the cottage Du Fu wrote this poem and four others to send ahead to his old friend and patron. The work thus stands at the meeting point of private gratitude and public sorrow: garden, friendship and the hardships of a lifetime of travel in a broken age.

《将赴成都草堂途中有作先寄严郑公五首其四》为唐代诗人杜甫所作诗。杜甫(712—770),字子美,号少陵野老,巩县人,唐代诗人。此诗写感怀咏志,为寄严郑公之作。诗中「常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍」写常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍;「新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿」写新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿;「生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹」写生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹;「三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难」写三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难。杜甫此诗以感怀咏志、信有人间行路难写其咏志之情,沉郁咏志,是杜甫诗中的名篇。此篇《将赴成都草堂途中有作先寄严郑公五首其四》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。

Art

The poem's craft rests on four supports. First, the regulated form: eight lines in four couplets, the middle two strictly parallel — 'new pines / evil bamboo' against 'a thousand feet / ten thousand stalks,' 'my living / my withered face' against 'Yellow Pavilion / purple-gold elixir' — so that moral fury and personal gratitude are set in matching grammatical frames. Second, symbolism: the pines and the bamboo are not merely garden plants but the good that grows too slowly and the evil that spreads too fast, a reading that has made the couplet proverbial. Third, tonal variety: the poem's sound sinks at the ruined rail, rises sharp on the 'thousand feet' and 'ten thousand stalks,' and falls again into the slow confession of the closing couplet. Fourth, the ending: by borrowing the ballad title 'Hard Is the Road' as his final phrase, Du Fu turns a private letter into a general statement about life, giving the strictest verse form the ring of the oldest song tradition.

此诗艺术上以「沉郁咏志、以松写情」见长。全诗共八句四联,由常苦沙崩损药栏而新松恨不高千尺而生理祗凭黄阁老。起「常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍」写常苦沙崩损药栏:常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍;「新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿」写新松恨不高千尺:新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿;「生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹」写生理祗凭黄阁老:生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹;结「三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难」写信有人间行路难:三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难。全诗以松写情,由常苦沙崩损药栏而信有人间行路难,沉郁咏志,是杜甫诗中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。

Allusions

Three allusions carry the poem's weight. 'The old man of the Yellow Pavilion' refers to Yan Wu: in Han times the chancellor's office was hung with yellow curtains, so 'Yellow Pavilion' became a metonym for the premiership, and the phrase is at once a respectful title for the poet's powerful friend and a plain admission of dependence. 'Purple-gold elixir' is the Taoist drug of immortality; to entrust his 'withered face' to it is to grasp even at alchemy for relief from age and exhaustion — half serious, half despairing joke. The closing 'the roads of the world are hard' echoes the old ballad title Xing Lu Nan ('Hard Is the Road'), whose tradition runs from the Han singers' 'running east and west' to Li Bai's 'the road is hard — harder than climbing the blue sky'; Du Fu turns the public title into his private confession, so that a letter to a friend ends in the voice of every wanderer.

诗中「常苦沙崩损药栏也从江槛落风湍」「新松恨不高千尺恶竹应须斩万竿」「生理祗凭黄阁老衰颜欲付紫金丹」「三年奔走空皮骨信有人间行路难」等语,皆含典故故实。「常苦沙崩损药栏也从江槛落风湍」写常苦沙崩损药栏也从江槛落风湍;「新松恨不高千尺恶竹应须斩万竿」写新松恨不高千尺恶竹应须斩万竿;「生理祗凭黄阁老衰颜欲付紫金丹」用黄阁老之典(黄阁老写宰相),写生理祗凭黄阁老衰颜欲付紫金丹;「三年奔走空皮骨信有人间行路难」用行路难之典(行路难写乐府题),写三年奔走空皮骨信有人间行路难。诗人用黄阁老、行路难之典入诗,不着痕迹,而把感怀咏志之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。

Commentary

This is the poem Du Fu sent ahead to Yan Wu, and it has always been read as a letter of gratitude that does not disguise exhaustion. Critics have especially prized the pine-and-bamboo couplet: it became proverbial as a statement of moral indignation, quoted whenever one wished to say that good must be made to grow fast and evil cut down at the root. Qing and later scholars placed it among Du Fu's finest regulated couplets, and the final line, borrowing the ballad title 'Hard Is the Road,' has been admired as the perfect marriage of the popular song tradition to the strictest poetic form. For later readers the poem is also a document of the scholar's predicament after the rebellion: a great poet reduced to asking his friend for his living, and turning the asking into art.

这首《将赴成都草堂途中有作先寄严郑公五首其四》,是杜甫写感怀咏志之作,写常苦沙崩损药栏、新松恨不高千尺、生理祗凭黄阁老、信有人间行路难之情,沉郁咏志。起「常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍」——常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍。写常苦沙崩损药栏:常苦沙崩损药栏、也从江槛落风湍——损药栏、落风湍;「新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿」——新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿。写新松恨不高千尺:新松恨不高千尺、恶竹应须斩万竿——高千尺、斩万竿;「生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹」——生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹。写生理祗凭黄阁老:生理祗凭黄阁老、衰颜欲付紫金丹——黄阁老、紫金丹;结「三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难」——三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难。写信有人间行路难:三年奔走空皮骨、信有人间行路难——空皮骨、行路难。这「三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难」,是全诗之结:以信有人间行路难写其咏志。全诗沉郁咏志,以松写情,正是杜甫诗中的名篇。

Prosody

Form Seven-character regulated verse (qi-yan lü shi): eight lines in four couplets诗(七言律诗)
Rhyme The poem rhymes on tuan, gan, dan and nan, all belonging to the level-tone 'han' rhyme group of Middle Chinese; the rhyme is low and muffled, matching the poem's sombre, weighty mood. The second and third couplets are strictly parallel in grammar and sense.此诗为七言律诗,共八句四联。押韵:「湍」「竿」「丹」「难」押寒部韵。平仄相间,对仗工整,正与写感怀咏志的沉郁咏志相称,也见其以律诗写咏志的凝练。
Tone pattern The meter follows the standard seven-character regulated pattern with alternating level and oblique tones. The first couplet sinks heavily on the ruined rail and roaring rapids, the second rises sharp and high on the pines and the bamboo to be felled, the third is drawn out and weary in the plea to the patron, and the fourth closes low and slow on the hard road, so the tonal contour follows the poem's movement from grief through indignation to resignation.句式上,「常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍」写常苦沙崩损药栏,音节沉郁;「新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿」写新松恨不高千尺,音节高亢;「生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹」写生理祗凭黄阁老,音节悠长;结「三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难」写信有人间行路难,音节沉郁。全诗音节随情起伏,由沉郁而高亢、由悠长而沉郁,正合律诗「凝练」之妙,读来如感怀咏志、信有人间行路难之音,沉郁而动人。
Reading note As a mature example of Du Fu's late regulated verse, the poem shows his ideal of 'heavy and sombre' expression. Within eight lines it moves from garden ruin to moral passion, from personal dependence to a general truth about life's hardship; every couplet is bound by careful parallelism, and the final line lifts a ballad title into a personal confession, giving the strictest of forms the ring of the oldest songs.此诗为七言律诗,是杜甫写感怀咏志之作,也是其诗中的名篇。全诗的艺术特色在于「沉郁咏志、以松写情」:「常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍」写常苦沙崩损药栏、「新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿」写新松恨不高千尺、「生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹」写生理祗凭黄阁老、「三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难」写信有人间行路难。全诗沉郁咏志,以松写情。尤为精妙者,是「生理祗凭黄阁老」用黄阁老之典;而「信有人间行路难」用行路难之典,正是杜甫诗「沉郁咏志」的典范,为历代选本所常收。《将赴成都草堂途中有作先寄严郑公五首其四》一诗之所以读来声情并茂,正在于诗人以声韵配合情思、以节奏烘托意境,音节之长短、平仄之起伏,皆与诗意相为表里,此亦可见中国古典诗歌声律之美与匠心之工。

Line by line

常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍。

For long I have grieved that the crumbling sand ruins the rail of my herb bed, and that from the river balustrade the wind-driven torrents fall.

常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍。

I have often grieved the sandbanks caving and harming the herb fence, and the river balustrades collapsing into the wind-whipped torrent.

起句写常苦沙崩损药栏,起笔即见其药栏。「常苦沙崩损药栏」写常苦沙崩损药栏,「常苦沙崩」写常苦沙崩、「损药栏」写损药栏;「也从江槛落风湍」写也从江槛落风湍,「也从江槛」写也从江槛、「落风湍」写落风湍。一句写常苦沙崩损药栏也从江槛落风湍,以常苦沙崩损药栏写损药栏、以也从江槛落风湍写落风湍,写尽常苦沙崩损药栏、也从江槛落风湍之情。以栏起兴,沉郁而咏志,是「以栏起兴」的妙笔。

The opening line writes grief over the sandbanks caving and harming the herb fence, the start. It rises through the fence, somber and declarative, the start of the poem's resolve.

新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿。

I hate that the young pines do not shoot up a thousand feet; the evil bamboo should all be cut down — ten thousand stalks.

新松恨不高千尺,恶竹应须斩万竿。

The young pines, I wish they grew a thousand feet; the evil bamboo, I would cut down ten thousand stems.

此句写新松恨不高千尺,是全诗写新松之态的关键。「新松恨不高千尺」写新松恨不高千尺,「新松恨不」写新松恨不、「高千尺」写高千尺;「恶竹应须斩万竿」写恶竹应须斩万竿,「恶竹应须」写恶竹应须、「斩万竿」写斩万竿。一句写新松恨不高千尺恶竹应须斩万竿,以新松恨不高千尺写高千尺、以恶竹应须斩万竿写斩万竿,写尽新松恨不高千尺、恶竹应须斩万竿之情。以松写志,沉郁而咏志,是「以松写志」的点睛之笔。

This line writes the young pines that he wishes grew a thousand feet, the evil bamboo that should be cut down by the ten thousand; through the pine it writes the will — nurturing the good, rooting out the bad, the key image of the poem.

生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹。

My very living must rely on the old man of the Yellow Pavilion; my withered face I would entrust to the purple-gold elixir.

生理祗凭黄阁老,衰颜欲付紫金丹。

My livelihood rests only on the gray-haired minister; my aging face I would commit to the purple-gold elixir.

此句写生理祗凭黄阁老,是全诗写黄阁老之态的关键。「生理祗凭黄阁老」用黄阁老之典写生理祗凭黄阁老,「生理祗凭」写生理祗凭、「黄阁老」写黄阁老;「衰颜欲付紫金丹」写衰颜欲付紫金丹,「衰颜欲付」写衰颜欲付、「紫金丹」写紫金丹。一句写生理祗凭黄阁老衰颜欲付紫金丹,以生理祗凭黄阁老写黄阁老、以衰颜欲付紫金丹写紫金丹,写尽生理祗凭黄阁老、衰颜欲付紫金丹之情。以老写情,沉郁而咏志,是「以老写情」的点睛之笔。

This line writes that his livelihood rests only on the gray-haired minister, his aging face committed to the purple-gold elixir; through the old man it writes the dependence and the weariness, the emotional crux.

三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难。

Three years of wandering have left me nothing but skin and bone; I truly believe the roads of the world are hard to travel.

三年奔走空皮骨,信有人间行路难。

Three years of rushing about have left me skin and bones; now I believe the road of this world is hard.

结句写信有人间行路难,是全诗立意的落点。「三年奔走空皮骨」写三年奔走空皮骨,「三年奔走」写三年奔走、「空皮骨」写空皮骨;「信有人间行路难」用行路难之典写信有人间行路难,「信有」写信有、「人间行路难」写人间行路难。一句写三年奔走空皮骨信有人间行路难,以三年奔走空皮骨写空皮骨、以信有人间行路难写行路难,写尽三年奔走空皮骨、信有人间行路难之情。以难写情,沉郁而咏志,是全诗最动人处,也是「以难写情」的点睛之笔。

The closing line writes that three years of rushing about have left him skin and bones, and now he believes the road of this world is hard; through the hardship it lands the feeling, the poem's most moving point — the physical and spiritual exhaustion of years of wandering.

Study

Word focus

药栏 The railing or hedge around a herb bed; Du Fu grew medicinal herbs at his thatched cottage, so the 'herb-bed rail' stands for the ruined garden itself and all the years of care it represents. 「药栏」写常苦沙崩损药栏,是写药栏之态的关键。「常苦沙崩损药栏」着一「药栏」,写药栏——着一「药栏」,写常苦沙崩损药栏,见其栏之药。两字写尽药栏之态,是「以词写栏」的妙笔。「药栏」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
新松 The young pines Du Fu had planted at his Chengdu cottage; 'new' stresses their recent growth, and they symbolize all that is fresh, upright and hopeful — the good that should be made to grow fast. 「新松」写新松恨不高千尺,是写新松之态的关键。「新松恨不高千尺」着一「新松」,写新松——着一「新松」,写新松恨不高千尺,见其松之新。两字写尽新松之态,是「以词写松」的点睛之词。「新松」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
黄阁 'Yellow Pavilion' — in Han times the chancellor's office was hung with yellow curtains, so the term became a metonym for the premiership; here it refers to Yan Wu, Du Fu's patron, then governor of Chengdu. 「黄阁」写生理祗凭黄阁老,是写黄阁之态的关键。「生理祗凭黄阁老」着一「黄阁」,写黄阁——着一「黄阁」,写生理祗凭黄阁老,见其阁之黄。两字写尽黄阁之态,是「以词写阁」的点睛之词。「黄阁」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
行路 'Traveling the road' — echoing the old ballad title Xing Lu Nan ('Hard Is the Road') and hinting at the difficulty of making one's way and holding a place in the world. 「行路」写信有人间行路难,是写行路之态的关键。「信有人间行路难」着一「行路」,写行路——着一「行路」,写信有人间行路难,见其路之行。两字写尽行路之态,是「以词写路」的点睛之词。「行路」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。

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水调歌头·明月几时有 Prelude to Water Melody: When Will the Moon Be Bright? 苏轼 · 同写咏志感怀、沉郁旷达,一写人有悲欢离合、一写常苦沙崩损药栏也从江槛落风湍,皆于咏志之中见沉郁 Both meditate on fate and aspiration with sombre yet magnanimous feeling — Su Shi on 'men have sorrow and joy, parting and reunion,' Du Fu on his ruined herb bed and the hard road.

Su Shi's 'Prelude to Water Melody' rises through 'men have sorrow and joy, parting and reunion; the moon has its dark and clear, its waxing and waning — such things have been hard to perfect since of old' to a consoling breadth. Du Fu's poem, far from consoled, answers with the ruined herb bed and 'I truly believe the roads of the world are hard.' Read together they show two faces of Chinese lyric ambition: Su Shi's magnanimous consolation and Du Fu's weighty sorrow.

苏轼《水调歌头·明月几时有》「人有悲欢离合,月有阴晴圆缺,此事古难全」,写咏志感怀、沉郁旷达,是宋词长调的名篇;杜甫《将赴成都草堂途中有作先寄严郑公五首其四》则以「常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍」「信有人间行路难」写落风湍、行路难。两诗同写咏志感怀、沉郁旷达:一写人有悲欢离合、以悲欢写离合,一写常苦沙崩损药栏也从江槛落风湍、以药栏写咏志;一为苏轼之旷达、一为杜甫之沉郁,并读正可见诗写「咏志感怀」的两种笔法,皆于咏志之中见沉郁。

八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天 Eight Tones of Ganzhou: On the Drizzling Evening Rain over the River Sky 柳永 · 同写江槛凝望、沉郁清丽,一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、一写常苦沙崩损药栏也从江槛落风湍,皆于江槛之中见凝望 Both gaze from a river railing into vast distance — Liu Yong over autumn rain and the great river, Du Fu over his ruined river balustrade.

Liu Yong opens 'on the drizzling evening rain over the river sky, one washing of the clear autumn' and looks toward home; Du Fu, from his 'river balustrade' at Chengdu, looks back over three years of wandering. The two poets share the motif of leaning on a river railing in sorrow, yet Liu Yong's gaze is soft and romantic while Du Fu's is heavy with moral passion.

柳永《八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天》「对潇潇暮雨洒江天,一番洗清秋」,写江槛凝望、沉郁清丽,是宋词写羁旅的名篇;杜甫《将赴成都草堂途中有作先寄严郑公五首其四》则以「常苦沙崩损药栏,也从江槛落风湍」「新松恨不高千尺」写落风湍、高千尺。两诗同写江槛凝望、沉郁清丽:一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、以暮雨写清秋,一写常苦沙崩损药栏也从江槛落风湍、以药栏写咏志;一为柳永之清丽、一为杜甫之沉郁,并读正可见诗写「江槛凝望」的两种笔法,皆于江槛之中见凝望。