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郡斋雨中与诸文士燕集

A Banquet in the Prefectural Study on a Rainy Day with Literary Scholars

韦应物

Wei Yingwu

兵卫森画戟,宴寝凝清香。
海上风雨至,逍遥池阁凉。
烦疴近消散,嘉宾复满堂。
自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康。
理会是非遣,性达形迹忘。
鲜肥属时禁,蔬果幸见尝。
俯饮一杯酒,仰聆金玉章。
神欢体自轻,意欲凌风翔。
吴中盛文史,群彦今汪洋。
方知大藩地,岂曰财赋疆。

Guards stand thick with painted halberds; a pure fragrance lingers in the banquet hall.
Wind and rain sweep in from the sea, and the free-roaming pools and pavilions turn cool.
My sickly vexations have lately dispersed; honored guests once more fill the hall.
I am ashamed to dwell in such splendor, not having seen my people live in peace.
Comprehend right and wrong and let them go; with a nature at ease, all trace of self is forgotten.
Rich meats fall under the seasonal ban; I am fortunate to taste vegetables and fruit.
I bow my head to drink a cup of wine, and look up to listen to chapters of gold and jade.
My spirit rejoices and my body grows light; I long to soar upon the wind.
Wu is rich in letters and history; today its gathering of talents is an ocean.
Now I know this great border province — can it be called a mere land of revenue?
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Meaning

Written while Wei Yingwu was prefect of Suzhou, this poem records a banquet held on a rainy day in his official residence with the scholars of the district. It moves from the cool, fragrant scene of the gathering, through a sudden confession that he has not yet seen his people prosper, to a toast of the region's literary glory. Its theme joins cultured pleasure with official conscience: the joy of wine and verse is deepened, not spoiled, by a Confucian sense of responsibility toward the common people.

兵卫森然,画戟陈列;宴寝之中,凝着清香。海上风雨到来,逍遥池阁之间一片清凉。烦闷的疾病近来消散,嘉宾又满坐一堂。自惭居处之尊崇,未能见到百姓的安康。理会了是非便自遣,性情旷达则形迹皆忘。鲜肥之味属时禁,蔬果有幸得品尝。俯饮一杯酒,仰聆金玉般的华章。神欢体自轻,意欲凌风飞翔。吴中之地文风鼎盛,群彦如今如汪洋。方知这大藩之地,岂只是财赋之疆。

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] The poem opens with the prefect's residence: guards with painted halberds, a hall steeped in fragrance. Rain and wind arrive from the sea, cooling the pools and pavilions; the poet's ailments disperse, and guests fill the room. But amid the pleasure he turns inward, ashamed of his own comfort while the people's welfare remains unseen. With the ease of one who has seen through right and wrong, he shares the simple fare of vegetables and fruit, drinking a cup while the guests' poems — precious as gold and jade — are read aloud. Light with joy, he ends by praising Wu's literary abundance and declaring that this great province is more than a treasury of taxes. [Structure] The twenty lines unfold in three movements: the first six set the scene, the middle eight turn from pleasure to self-examination and back to delight, the last six rise to praise of the region's culture, so that joy and conscience reflect each other. [Imagery] 'Wind and rain sweep in from the sea' gives the banquet its cool freshness, while 'chapters of gold and jade' and 'an ocean' of talents lift the room from mere feasting to a celebration of letters. The single line of self-examination is what gives the poem its moral weight: a feast that knows the poor are not yet at peace is no longer a commonplace merrymaking.

【白话串讲】 韦应物写《郡斋雨中与诸文士燕集》:“兵卫森画戟,宴寝凝清香”——“海上风雨至,逍遥池阁凉”——“自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康”——“俯饮一杯酒,仰聆金玉章”——他雨中宴集——自惭居处崇。 【意象与手法】 “兵卫森画戟,宴寝凝清香”写郡斋之气象;“海上风雨至,逍遥池阁凉”写雨中宴集之清兴;“自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康”写居官自省;结以“吴中盛文史”“方知大藩地”赞美吴中文风。于宴集中见雅趣,于雅趣中寓自省。 【情感与主旨】 韦应物任苏州刺史时于郡斋雨中与文士燕集之作,写宴集之乐与居官自省,是唐人宴集诗中的名篇。 【名句点睛】 常考“兵卫森画戟,宴寝凝清香”写郡斋气象;“自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康”写居官自省。

Background

Wei Yingwu (c. 737–c. 792) was a mid-Tang poet from Chang'an who served as prefect of Chuzhou, Jiangzhou, and finally Suzhou, where he was known as 'Wei of Suzhou.' This poem was written during his Suzhou years, when he gathered the local literati in the prefectural study (junzhai) on a rainy day; 'yanji' means a convivial banquet. The mid-Tang court still prized such gatherings of officials and scholars, and Wei — famed for governing with integrity and caring about the people's hardships — used the occasion not only for elegance but for self-reflection. The poem was widely anthologized in later centuries and remains a model of the 'benevolent and refined' manner that characterizes his verse.

《郡斋雨中与诸文士燕集》为中唐诗人韦应物所作五言古诗。韦应物(约737—约792),京兆长安人,中唐著名诗人,历任滁州、江州、苏州刺史,世称韦苏州。此诗作于其任苏州刺史时。郡斋即刺史的官署,「燕集」即宴集,指宴饮聚会。诗中「兵卫森画戟,宴寝凝清香」写郡斋之气象;「海上风雨至,逍遥池阁凉」写雨中宴集之清兴;「烦疴近消散,嘉宾复满堂」写其病愈宴客;「自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康」写居官自省;「理会是非遣,性达形迹忘」写其旷达之怀;「俯饮一杯酒,仰聆金玉章」写宴集之乐;「吴中盛文史,群彦今汪洋」赞吴中文风。韦应物为官清廉,关心民瘼,此诗于郡斋雨中宴集之际,既写宴集之乐与吴中文风之盛,又以「自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康」自省,见其仁政爱民之心,是唐人宴集诗中的名篇,也是韦应物「仁厚清雅」诗风的典型体现。此篇《郡斋雨中与诸文士燕集》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。

Art

The poem's craft rests on 'elaborate description in which refined pleasure and self-examination reflect each other.' Its twenty five-character lines divide into three parts: the opening six lines paint the rainy-day scene (guards and halberds, fragrant hall, sea-borne rain, cool pavilions, guests filling the room); the middle eight turn inward (ashamed of splendor unseen by the people's peace, freed of right and wrong, sharing plain vegetables and fruit, drinking while listening to precious verse); the closing six soar again (a body light with joy, Wu's ocean of talent, the great province more than a source of revenue). This rise-and-fall rhythm — scene, conscience, delight, praise — keeps the poem from becoming either mere merrymaking or moralizing. The diction is deliberately plain, and the tonal movement follows the sense rather than strict regulation, as befits ancient-style verse.

此诗艺术上以「铺陈写景、雅趣自省相映」见长。全诗二十句,前六句写郡斋雨中宴集之景,中八句写自省与旷达之怀,后六句写宴集之乐与赞吴中文风。首六句「兵卫森画戟,宴寝凝清香。海上风雨至,逍遥池阁凉。烦疴近消散,嘉宾复满堂」写郡斋雨中宴集之景:兵卫森然画戟陈列,宴寝凝着清香;海上风雨到来,池阁一片清凉;烦疴消散,嘉宾满堂。中八句「自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康。理会是非遣,性达形迹忘。鲜肥属时禁,蔬果幸见尝。俯饮一杯酒,仰聆金玉章」写自省与宴集之乐:自惭居崇,未睹民康;理会是非、性达形迹;鲜肥时禁,蔬果见尝;俯饮一杯酒,仰聆金玉章。后六句「神欢体自轻,意欲凌风翔。吴中盛文史,群彦今汪洋。方知大藩地,岂曰财赋疆」写宴集之乐与赞吴中文风:神欢体轻,意欲凌风;吴中文史盛,群彦汪洋;方知大藩地,岂止财赋疆。全诗由宴集之景而自省、由自省而宴乐、由宴乐而赞文风,铺陈写景,雅趣与自省相映,是唐人宴集诗中的名篇。

Allusions

Several phrases carry classical resonance. 'Chapters of gold and jade' (jinyu zhang) echoes the Book of Songs, which praises a gentleman 'as gold, as tin, as sceptre, as gem'; later usage applied gold and jade to precious writing, so the poet looks up to his guests' poems as treasures. 'Ocean' (wangyang) comes from the Zhuangzi's 'Autumn Floods' — 'vast and boundless, following one's own bent' — and became a set phrase for the boundlessness of literary talent, here describing the assembled scholars of Wu. 'Great border province' (dafan) refers to a major regional commandery such as Suzhou, the great prefecture of the lower Yangtze. 'Rich meats fall under the seasonal ban' alludes to the Tang government's periodic prohibitions on slaughtering and eating meat, explaining why the banquet table holds only vegetables and fruit.

诗中「金玉章」「大藩」「汪洋」等语,皆含典故与故实。「金玉章」以金玉喻文章之美,《诗经》「如金如锡,如圭如璧」以金玉喻德美,后世以「金玉」喻文辞之贵重,「仰聆金玉章」写仰聆文士们金玉般的诗文;「大藩」指大的藩镇州郡,苏州为江南大郡,故称大藩;「汪洋」喻文才之浩瀚,语出《庄子·秋水》「汪洋自恣以适己」,后世以「汪洋」写文章才思之浩瀚,「群彦今汪洋」写群贤文思之浩瀚。此外,「鲜肥属时禁」写鲜肥之味属时令之禁,唐制有禁屠、禁食肉之时,见其宴集蔬果之俭。诗人以金玉章、汪洋等典入诗,不着痕迹,而把宴集之乐与吴中文风之盛写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。

Commentary

Critics have long treasured this poem as a masterpiece of the Tang banquet poem, valued for joining elegant pleasure to official conscience. Commentators single out 'I am ashamed to dwell in such splendor, not having seen my people live in peace' as the poem's heart: in the midst of a scholars' feast the prefect confesses that his own comfort shames him while the people remain unprovided for. This line is taken as the signature of Wei Yingwu's 'benevolent and refined' style and of his reputation as an upright, people-caring official. Later anthologists also praised the closing praise of Wu's literary culture, reading 'now I know this great border province — can it be called a mere land of revenue?' as a civilized rebuke to the view of the rich south as a mere tax base. The poem's sustained single rhyme and unhurried, plain diction are seen as perfectly matched to its mood of cultured ease under conscience.

这首《郡斋雨中与诸文士燕集》,是韦应物任苏州刺史时,于郡斋雨中宴集文士之作,写宴集之乐与自省之思,雅趣与仁心相映。开篇写郡斋雨中宴集之景:「兵卫森画戟,宴寝凝清香」——兵卫森然,画戟陈列;宴寝之中,凝着清香,写郡斋之肃然与清香,气象不凡;「海上风雨至,逍遥池阁凉」——海上风雨到来,逍遥池阁之间一片清凉,写雨中宴集之清兴,风雨添兴,池阁生凉;「烦疴近消散,嘉宾复满堂」——烦闷的疾病近来消散,嘉宾又满坐一堂,病愈宴客,兴致正好。中段写自省与旷达之怀:「自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康」——自惭居处之尊崇,未能见到百姓的安康。这是全诗最见仁心处:身为苏州刺史,居郡斋之崇,而自惭未能使百姓安康,居官自省,仁政爱民之心跃然纸上。此句一出,使全诗的宴集之乐平添一分深沉。「理会是非遣,性达形迹忘」——理会了是非便自遣,性情旷达则形迹皆忘,写其通达之怀;「鲜肥属时禁,蔬果幸见尝」——鲜肥之味属时禁,蔬果有幸得品尝,写宴集之俭;「俯饮一杯酒,仰聆金玉章」——俯饮一杯酒,仰聆金玉般的华章,写宴集之乐,一俯一仰,尽得其趣。末段写宴集之乐与赞吴中文风:「神欢体自轻,意欲凌风飞翔」——神欢体轻,意欲凌风飞翔,写宴集欢愉之极;「吴中盛文史,群彦今汪洋」——吴中之地文风鼎盛,群彦如今如汪洋,赞吴中文士之盛;「方知大藩地,岂曰财赋疆」——方知这大藩之地,岂只是财赋之疆,吴中不只富庶,更是文史之邦。全诗由宴集之景而自省、由自省而宴乐、由宴乐而赞文风,铺陈写景,雅趣与自省相映,正是韦应物「仁厚清雅」诗风的体现,也是唐人宴集诗中的名篇。

Prosody

Form Five-character ancient-style verse (wugu, guti shi) of twenty lines; not a regulated poem, so tonal antithesis is not strictly observed.五言古诗(古体,非近体律诗)
Rhyme A single rhyme runs through the whole poem on the level-tone yang group: 'xiang, liang, tang' in the first section, 'kang, wang, chang, zhang' in the middle, and 'xiang, yang, jiang' at the end all rhyme together. The broad, sustained rhyme gives the poem an open, ringing cadence suited to cultured ease.全诗为五言古诗,押平声韵,韵脚「香」「凉」「堂」(阳部)、「康」「忘」「尝」「章」(阳部)、「翔」「洋」「疆」(阳部)一韵到底,用韵宽稳。古体诗不拘平仄对仗,而以意运笔,此诗以「香」「凉」「堂」「康」「忘」「尝」「章」「翔」「洋」「疆」等字一韵到底,音节清扬开阔,正与宴集雅兴与赞文风之盛相称,也见其作古体以畅写宴集之情的用心。
Tone pattern As ancient-style verse the lines follow the sense rather than fixed tonal patterns: the opening couplet on guards and fragrance is stately and calm, the sea-borne rain couplet is cool and clear, the self-examination couplets sink and slow, the drinking couplet is light, and the closing praise is expansive and sonorous, so the music rises and falls with the mood.句式上,首六句「兵卫森画戟,宴寝凝清香」写郡斋气象,音节庄雅;「海上风雨至,逍遥池阁凉」写雨中清兴,音节清畅;「烦疴近消散,嘉宾复满堂」写嘉宾满堂,音节欢快;中八句「自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康」写自省,音节深沉;「理会是非遣,性达形迹忘」写旷达,音节疏朗;「俯饮一杯酒,仰聆金玉章」写宴乐,音节轻快;后六句「神欢体自轻,意欲凌风翔」写欢愉,音节飞扬;「吴中盛文史,群彦今汪洋」写赞文风,音节开阔;「方知大藩地,岂曰财赋疆」以反问作结,音节响亮。全诗音节随情起伏,由庄雅而清畅、由深沉而轻快、由飞扬而响亮,正合古体诗「以意运笔」之体,读来如郡斋雨中群贤宴集之音,雅逸而欢畅。
Reading note This is the celebrated banquet poem of Wei Yingwu's Suzhou years, prized for joining refined pleasure to self-examination. Its art lies in 'elaborate description in which elegance and conscience reflect each other': scene, self-examination, delight, and praise succeed one another so that the feast gains moral weight without losing its ease. The line 'I am ashamed to dwell in such splendor, not having seen my people live in peace' is the moral pivot of the whole poem and the clearest proof of Wei's 'benevolent and refined' style, while 'chapters of gold and jade' and 'an ocean' of talents carry the praise of Wu's literary culture.此诗为五言古诗,是唐人宴集诗中的名篇,也是韦应物「仁厚清雅」诗风的典型体现。全诗的艺术特色在于「铺陈写景、雅趣自省相映」:首段「兵卫森画戟,宴寝凝清香」「海上风雨至,逍遥池阁凉」写郡斋雨中宴集之景;中段「自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康」写居官自省,「理会是非遣,性达形迹忘」写旷达之怀,「俯饮一杯酒,仰聆金玉章」写宴集之乐;末段「吴中盛文史,群彦今汪洋」「方知大藩地,岂曰财赋疆」赞吴中文风。全诗由宴集之景而自省、由自省而宴乐、由宴乐而赞文风,铺陈写景,雅趣与自省相映。尤为动人者,是「自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康」二句,于宴集欢愉之际自省未睹民康,见其仁政爱民之心;而「俯饮一杯酒,仰聆金玉章」写宴集之乐,「吴中盛文史,群彦今汪洋」赞吴中文风,正是韦应物「于雅趣中见仁心」的典范,为历代选本所常收。

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兵卫森画戟,宴寝凝清香。

Guards stand thick with painted halberds; a pure fragrance lingers in the banquet hall.

兵卫森然,画戟陈列;宴寝之中,凝着清香。

Guards stand thick with painted halberds; in the banqueting hall, a pure fragrance lingers.

首二句写郡斋之气象,起笔即见不凡。「兵卫森画戟」写兵卫森然、画戟陈列,「兵卫」写郡斋之护卫,「森画戟」写画戟森然排列,见刺史官署之威严肃穆;「宴寝凝清香」写宴寝之中凝着清香,「宴寝」写宴集之所,「凝清香」写清香凝结不散,见宴寝之雅致。两句一写其威、一写其雅,兵卫森然与清香凝结相对,写出郡斋雨中宴集既肃然又雅致的气象,为全诗定下了庄雅清逸的基调。

The first two lines write the air of the county lodge, extraordinary at the start. 'Guards stand thick with painted halberds' the sentries and the ranked ceremonial halberds, showing the dignity of the governor's office; 'in the banqueting hall, a pure fragrance lingers' the banquet hall's lingering pure scent, showing its refinement. One line its majesty, one its elegance, the thick guards against the lingering fragrance, writing the banquet in the rain as at once solemn and refined, tuning the poem's solemn, clear, easy tone.

海上风雨至,逍遥池阁凉。

Wind and rain sweep in from the sea, and the free-roaming pools and pavilions turn cool.

海上风雨到来,逍遥池阁之间一片清凉。

Wind and rain come from the sea; the poolside pavilions are cool at ease.

此二句写雨中宴集之清兴,是全诗最见意境处。「海上风雨至」写海上风雨到来,「海上」指吴地近海,风雨自海上来,「风雨至」写风雨之来,雨丝风片,为宴集添了几分清凉;「逍遥池阁凉」写逍遥池阁之间一片清凉,「逍遥」写宴集者之逍遥自在,「池阁凉」写风雨过后池阁之清凉。两句一写风雨之来、一写池阁之凉,以风雨写清兴,把雨中宴集写得既逍遥又清凉,风雅之趣尽在其中,是「以景写兴」的妙笔。

These two lines write the clear delight of the rainy banquet, the most atmospheric place. 'Wind and rain come from the sea' — 'the sea' means Wu's coastal region, the rain from the sea, the threads of rain adding coolness to the feast; 'the poolside pavilions are cool at ease' — the ease of the banqueters, the cool pavilions after the rain. One line the rain's coming, one the pavilions' cool, writing the feast as both at ease and cool, the elegance all within, the art of 'writing delight through scene'.

自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康。

I am ashamed to dwell in such splendor, not having seen my people live in peace.

自惭居处之尊崇,未能见到百姓的安康。

I am ashamed of my lofty station; I have not seen the people at peace.

此二句写居官自省,是全诗最见仁心处。「自惭居处崇」写自惭居处之尊崇,「居处崇」写其身为刺史、居官署之尊崇显赫,「自惭」见其对这尊崇的不安;「未睹斯民康」写未能见到百姓的安康,「未睹民康」写其未能使百姓安康,自省其治绩。两句一写居崇之惭、一写未睹民康之愧,把刺史的仁政爱民之心与居官自省之德写得真切深沉。在宴集欢愉之际,诗人却能自省未睹民康,正是韦应物为官清廉、关心民瘼的体现,此句一出,使全诗的宴集之乐平添一分深沉,是「于欢乐中见仁心」的典范之笔。

These two lines write the official's self-examination, the most humane place. 'I am ashamed of my lofty station' — the governor's exalted office, 'ashamed' his unease in that eminence; 'I have not seen the people at peace' — his regret that he has not brought the people peace, examining his governance. One line the shame of the high station, one the regret for the people's unrest, writing the governor's humane care and self-scrutiny, true and deep. Amid the banquet's joy, the poet can yet examine the people's unrest, the mark of Wei Yingwu's clean office and care for the people; this line adds a depth to the feast's delight, the model stroke of 'seeing humanity within joy'.

吴中盛文史,群彦今汪洋。

Wu is rich in letters and history; today its gathering of talents is an ocean.

吴中之地文风鼎盛,群彦如今如汪洋。

Wu has a flourishing literary tradition; our many scholars now are vast as the sea.

此二句赞吴中文风之盛,是全诗赞美之情的落点。「吴中盛文史」写吴中之地文风鼎盛,「吴中」指苏州一带,自古为江南文华之地,「盛文史」写其文风之盛;「群彦今汪洋」写群彦如今如汪洋,「群彦」指座中众多文士才彦,「汪洋」用《庄子》「汪洋自恣」之语,喻其文思才学之浩瀚。两句一写吴中史之盛、一写群彦才之汪洋,赞吴中文风与座中文士,既是对这场宴集文士们的推许,也是对这一江南文华之地的礼赞,为下文「方知大藩地,岂曰财赋疆」作铺垫,是全文赞美之情的高潮。

These two lines praise the flourishing letters of Wu, the landing of the poem's admiration. 'Wu has a flourishing literary tradition' — Wu, the Suzhou region, the cultured south since old times, 'flourishing' its literary splendor; 'our many scholars now are vast as the sea' — the gathered scholars at the feast, 'vast as the sea' using Zhuangzi's phrase for the ocean's boundlessness, a metaphor for their vast learning. One line the region's letters, one the scholars' gifts, praising both the culture of Wu and the men at the feast, preparing 'now I know the great province is no mere land of taxes' below, the peak of the poem's admiration.

方知大藩地,岂曰财赋疆。

Now I know this great border province — can it be called a mere land of revenue?

方知这大藩之地,岂只是财赋之疆。

Now I know the great province is no mere land of taxes.

尾二句以反问收束,赞吴中不仅是财赋之地,更是文华之邦。「方知大藩地」写方知这大藩之地,「大藩」指苏州这一江南大郡,「方知」见其今日宴集方深知之;「岂曰财赋疆」以反问写岂只是财赋之疆,「财赋疆」指以财赋著称之地,吴中素以富庶著称,「岂曰」以反问否定——吴中岂只是财赋之疆,更是文史鼎盛之邦。两句以反问作结,把对吴中的礼赞推向高潮,也见诗人对这片土地文风昌盛的自得与推许。以反问收束,含蓄有力,是全文赞美之情的归结,也是「以问作结」的妙笔。

The last two lines close in a counter-question, praising Wu as no mere land of taxes but a kingdom of letters. 'Now I know the great province is no mere land of taxes' — 'the great province' the great commandery of Suzhou, 'now I know' his deep realization at today's feast; 'is no mere land of taxes' the question — Wu is famous for wealth, yet the question denies that reputation: it is not only a land of taxes, but a realm of flourishing letters. Closing in the question, pushing the praise of Wu to its peak, showing the poet's pride and admiration for this land's culture. The question's close, restrained and forceful, the landing of the admiration, the art of 'closing in question'.

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Word focus

凝 To linger and congeal (ning): the pure fragrance 'settles' in the banquet hall instead of scattering; the verb gives the invisible scent a tangible stillness, marking the hall's refinement and quiet at the poem's outset. 「凝」字写清香凝结不散,是写郡斋雅致的关键。「宴寝凝清香」着一「凝」,写清香凝结于宴寝之中、久久不散——着一「凝」字,使无形的清香有了质感,仿佛凝聚可感,也见宴寝之雅致幽静。一字写尽郡斋雨中宴集既雅且静的氛围,是首联写景的点睛之笔。「凝」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
逍遥 Free and unhurried (xiaoyao): wandering at ease among the pools and pavilions, with a faint echo of Zhuangzi's 'free and easy wandering'; it captures both the guests' leisure and the cool, rain-washed mood of the gathering. 「逍遥」写出池阁间悠然自在之态,是写雨中宴集清兴的关键。「逍遥池阁凉」着一「逍遥」,写宴集者于池阁之间逍遥自在、无拘无束,也暗含庄子逍遥之游的意味。着一「逍遥」,写尽雨中宴集的清兴与宴集者的悠然,是「以一字写兴」的妙笔。「逍遥」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
惭 Ashamed (can): the key word of the poem's moral turn — the prefect is ashamed of his own splendid lodging while the people's welfare is unseen; one character carries the Confucian conscience that deepens the whole feast. 「惭」字写居官自省之愧,是全诗最见仁心的词。「自惭居处崇」着一「惭」,写对居处尊崇的不安与惭愧——身为刺史,居官署之崇,而未能使百姓安康,故自惭。着一「惭」字,把刺史的仁政爱民之心与自省之德写得真切深沉,是「于欢乐中见仁心」的关键词,也是全诗情感的转折点。「惭」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
汪洋 Ocean-like (wangyang): from Zhuangzi's 'vast and boundless, following one's own bent,' it describes the boundlessness of the assembled scholars' talent, an ocean of letters that raises the banquet into a celebration of Wu's culture. 「汪洋」喻群彦文思之浩瀚,是赞吴中文风的关键。「群彦今汪洋」着一「汪洋」,用《庄子》「汪洋自恣」之语,写座中众文士才思学识之浩瀚如海。着一「汪洋」,以水之浩瀚喻才之浩瀚,写尽吴中文士之盛,为「岂曰财赋疆」的反问作了铺垫,是全文赞美之情的关键词。「汪洋」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。

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凉州馆中与诸判官夜集 Night Gathering at the Liangzhou Inn with the Judges 岑参 · 同写与诸友宴集,一写边塞夜集之豪纵、一写郡斋雨中燕集之雅逸,可见唐人宴集诗豪放与清雅两种情调 Both poems depict a gathering with friends over wine; one shows the bold, unrestrained merriment of a frontier night feast, the other the refined elegance of a rainy-day banquet in a prefectural study — together revealing the bold and the refined modes of Tang banquet poetry.

Cen Shen's 'Night Gathering at the Liangzhou Inn with the Judges' ('The curved moon hangs over the city wall, lighting all Liangzhou'; 'How often in life can one laugh heartily — when we meet over wine, we must drink till we fall') pours out frontier abandon, representing the bold mode of Tang banquet verse. Wei Yingwu's poem, by contrast, paints the prefectural residence with 'guards thick with painted halberds, a pure fragrance in the banquet hall' and the elegant pleasure of 'bowing to drink a cup of wine, looking up to hear chapters of gold and jade,' with the self-examination 'I am ashamed to dwell in such splendor, not having seen my people live in peace.' Read together, the two poems show the two registers of Tang banquet poetry — Cen Shen's heroic boldness and Wei Yingwu's limpid refinement.

岑参《凉州馆中与诸判官夜集》「弯弯月出挂城头,城头月出照凉州」,写边塞凉州馆中与诸判官夜集,「一生大笑能几回,斗酒相逢须醉倒」写尽豪纵之欢,是唐人宴集诗豪放一路;韦应物《郡斋雨中与诸文士燕集》则以「兵卫森画戟,宴寝凝清香」写郡斋之雅,「俯饮一杯酒,仰聆金玉章」写宴集之雅逸,「自惭居处崇,未睹斯民康」写居官自省。两诗同写与诸友宴集:一写边塞夜集之豪纵、以斗酒大笑写其豪,一写郡斋雨中燕集之雅逸、以诗文清香写其雅;一为岑参之雄放、一为韦应物之清雅,并读正可见唐人宴集诗「豪放」与「清雅」两种情调的对照。

江乡故人偶集客舍 Chance Meeting with Old Friends from Home in a Lodging House 戴叔伦 · 同写客中与故人聚宴,一写江乡客舍偶集之悲喜、一写郡斋雨中燕集之雅兴,可见宴集诗客愁与雅兴两种情怀 Both poems describe meeting friends over wine while away from home; one captures the mingled grief and joy of a chance gathering in a riverside inn, the other the refined pleasure of a rainy-day banquet — the two moods of traveler's sorrow and refined delight in Tang banquet poetry.

Dai Shulun's 'Chance Meeting with Old Friends from Home in a Lodging House' ('Autumn's moon is full again; tenfold dark the city towers at night') tells of old friends meeting by chance in a lodging house, with 'this reunion south of the Yangtze — I doubt it is not a meeting in a dream' capturing the bittersweet joy of travelers. Wei Yingwu's poem instead writes 'wind and rain sweep in from the sea, and the pools and pavilions turn cool' and praises 'Wu is rich in letters and history; its gathering of talents is an ocean.' Read together, one writes the mingled grief and joy of a chance inn gathering, the other the refined ease of a prefectural banquet — the two moods of traveler's sorrow and cultured delight in Tang banquet verse.

戴叔伦《江乡故人偶集客舍》「天秋月又满,城阙夜千重」,写江乡客舍与故人偶集,「还作江南会,翻疑梦里逢」写客中相逢之悲喜,是唐人宴集诗写客愁一路;韦应物《郡斋雨中与诸文士燕集》则以「海上风雨至,逍遥池阁凉」写雨中清兴,「吴中盛文史,群彦今汪洋」赞吴中文风,是宴集诗写雅兴一路。两诗同写与故人聚宴:一写客舍偶集之悲喜、疑是梦里逢,一写郡斋燕集之雅逸、赞群彦文风;一为客愁之深、一为雅兴之逸,并读正可见唐人宴集诗「客愁」与「雅兴」两种情怀的对照。