唐 Tang · 诗 Poem
南陵道中
On the Road at Nanling
南陵水面漫悠悠,风紧云轻欲变秋。
正是客心孤回处,谁家红袖凭江楼。
the wind sharpens, the clouds thin — autumn is on the turn.
Just where the traveler's heart sinks loneliest,
whose lady in red sleeves leans on the river tower?
Meaning
Traveling past Nanling in early autumn, the poet watches the broad river drift lazily by while a keener wind and thinning clouds announce the season's change. It is precisely at this moment — when a wanderer's loneliness turns back on itself — that he glimpses a woman in red sleeves leaning on a river tower, and the bright image only deepens his sense of solitude.
南陵的水面漫悠悠,风紧云轻,将要变秋。正是客心孤回之处,谁家红袖,凭倚着江楼。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] The first couplet paints the river at Nanling: water stretching out 'slow and long,' the wind tightening, the clouds thinning — the world on the verge of autumn. The second couplet turns inward: just as the traveler's heart is at its most desolate, he catches sight of a woman in red sleeves leaning on a river tower.
[Structure] A perfect quatrain of scene turning to feeling: two lines of landscape, two of the heart, the pivot being the word 'just' — the exact coincidence of outer season and inner mood. The poem ends on a question ('whose...?') rather than a statement, leaving the feeling suspended and unclaimed.
[Imagery] The key contrast is color and warmth: the pale, wide, cooling river against the sudden red of the sleeves on the tower. Du Mu, the master of 'writing sorrow through bright scenes,' lets the red sleeves — someone with a tower to lean from, someone to wait for — stand in pointed opposition to the traveler who has nowhere to return to. The unnamed lady becomes the measure of everything the wanderer lacks.
【白话串讲】 杜牧写《南陵道中》:“南陵水面漫悠悠,风紧云轻欲变秋”——“正是客心孤回处,谁家红袖凭江楼”——正是他乡愁最重时,看见谁家的女子倚在江楼——他写旅途中。 【意象与手法】 此诗是杜牧写羁旅思乡的名篇,写南陵道中的秋景与客心的孤回,是杜牧七绝中的名篇。前两句写景:「南陵水面漫悠悠,风紧云轻欲变秋」写南陵水面的悠悠与风紧云轻的秋意。后两句写情:「正是客心孤回处,谁家红袖凭江楼」写客心的孤回与红袖凭楼的对照,是千古名句。全诗以秋景写客愁,以红袖写孤回的对照,含蓄隽永,是杜牧「以景写情」的典范。 【情感与主旨】 此诗约作于唐文宗开成三年(838)前后,时杜牧由宣州赴京或由京返宣州,途经南陵(今安徽南陵),写下此诗。杜牧一生宦游各地,羁旅乡愁是其诗中常见的主题,此诗即写其南陵道中的秋景与客心。诗中「南陵水面漫悠悠」写南陵水面的悠悠——那水面漫延悠长,写尽秋江的浩渺;「风紧云轻欲变秋」写秋意的来临——风紧云轻,正是秋将到来的征兆,那「欲变秋」写尽季节的变换与客中的敏感;「正是客心孤回处」写客心的孤回——正是客居他乡、心境孤回之时,「孤回」写尽羁旅的孤独与远离故乡的怅惘;「谁家红袖凭江楼」写红袖凭楼的对照——那江楼之上,谁家的红袖女子正凭栏远望?那「红袖凭楼」的明丽,与「客心孤回」的惆怅对照——江楼上的红袖(或是在等待归人,或是在凭栏望景),反衬出客子的孤独。全诗以「红袖凭江楼」作结,那江楼红袖的明丽,正是客心孤回的反衬——别人尚有红袖可望、有人可等,客子却独对秋江,孤回无依,以景写情、含蓄隽永,是杜牧「以景写愁」的名篇。 【名句点睛】 常考“南陵水面漫悠悠,风紧云轻欲变秋”写秋意初起;“正是客心孤回处,谁家红袖凭江楼”以红袖凭楼反衬客愁之孤,是千古名句。
Background
Du Mu (803–852) was the most celebrated poet of the late Tang, and his official life was a wandering one: secretary in the Yangzhou prefectural staff (833), investigating censor in the capital (835), judicial officer in Xuanzhou (837). Around 838, traveling between Xuanzhou and the capital, he passed through Nanling (modern Nanling county, Anhui) and wrote this quatrain. Homesickness and the loneliness of official travel are recurring themes in his work ('Lodging on a Journey,' 'Early Departure from Shang Mountain'); this poem is the most polished of them, capturing in twenty-eight characters the late-Tang sensibility — refined, wistful, and exquisitely restrained.
此诗约作于唐文宗开成三年(838)前后,是杜牧写羁旅思乡的七绝名篇。杜牧一生宦游:大和七年(833)入扬州幕,大和九年(835)入京为监察御史,开成二年(837)任宣州团练判官,开成三年转官赴京(或往返于宣州、长安之间),途经南陵(今安徽南陵,在宣州与京洛之间),写下此诗。诗中「南陵水面漫悠悠」写南陵的秋江——「漫悠悠」写水面漫延悠长(「漫」写水势之广,「悠悠」写水势之长),那秋江浩渺,正是羁旅的背景;「风紧云轻欲变秋」写秋意的来临——「风紧」写秋风之紧,「云轻」写秋云之薄,「欲变秋」写秋将到来——那风紧云轻的天象,正是秋的预兆,客中人对季节的变换格外敏感,那「欲变秋」写尽客中的清愁;「正是客心孤回处」写客心的孤回——「正是」写此时此地的恰好,「客心孤回」写客居他乡、心境孤回(「孤回」写孤独与远离,令人想到「孤回」的「迥」写远离故乡的遥远),那「正是客心孤回处」写尽羁旅的孤独;「谁家红袖凭江楼」写红袖凭楼的对照——「谁家」写不知是谁家的女子,「红袖」写江楼上凭栏的红袖女子(「红袖」代指女子,令人想到「红袖添香」与「红袖招」的意象),「凭江楼」写其凭栏远望——那江楼上的红袖,或是在等待归人、或是在凭栏望景,那明丽的红袖,正是客心孤回的反衬。全诗以「红袖凭江楼」的明丽作结,写尽客心的孤回——别人尚有红袖可望、有人可等,客子却独对秋江,孤回无依,以景写情、含蓄隽永,是杜牧羁旅诗中的名篇。
Art
The poem's artistry is in its economy of means. First, the couplet structure — scene, then feeling — with a seamless pivot: the phrase 'autumn on the turn' projects the poet's own unsettled state onto the weather. Second, the reduplicative 'slow and long' stretches the water, and with it the traveler's road, into a single drawn-out sound; the sentence literally cannot be hurried. Third, the 'red sleeves' device — using a bright, warm, human detail to reflect a cold, lonely heart, the technique critics call 'writing grief with a happy scene.' Fourth, the closing question: by asking 'whose house?' rather than describing the lady, Du Mu keeps the image unclaimed and mysterious, and smuggles the traveler's own question — 'and where is my home?' — inside it. Four moves, twenty-eight characters, endless aftertaste.
此诗的艺术特色可从四个层面解析。其一,由景入情的构思。全诗前两句写景(南陵水面、风紧云轻),后两句写情(客心孤回、红袖凭楼),由景入情、层层推进——那「漫悠悠」的秋江、「欲变秋」的天象,正是客心孤回的背景;那「红袖凭江楼」的明丽,正是客心孤回的反衬。其二,以「漫悠悠」「欲变秋」写客愁。「南陵水面漫悠悠」以「漫悠悠」写水面的悠长,暗含羁旅的漫长;「风紧云轻欲变秋」以「欲变秋」写秋意的来临,暗含客中对季节的敏感,那「漫悠悠」「欲变秋」写尽客中的清愁。其三,以「红袖」反衬孤回。「谁家红袖凭江楼」以「红袖凭楼」的明丽反衬「客心孤回」的孤独——那江楼上的红袖,或是在等待归人、或是在凭栏望景,那明丽的红袖与孤回的客心对照,正是「以乐景写哀情」的笔法。其四,以问写情的含蓄。「谁家红袖凭江楼」以「谁家」的问句作结——那江楼上的红袖是谁家的女子?她为何凭楼?这一问,既写红袖的明丽,也暗含客子的孤独——别人尚有红袖可望,客子却独对秋江,以问写情、余味无穷。四重手法层层推进,使此诗成为杜牧「以景写情」的羁旅名篇。
Allusions
The poem draws quietly on the whole homesickness tradition. 'Slow and long' echoes the 'youyou' of the Book of Songs ('O vast heavens') and of Cao Pi's 'Dark, dark the heavens' — a word always freighted with distance and longing. 'Autumn on the turn' belongs to the line of autumn-sadness imagery from the Songs of Chu ('Dongting waves, the leaves come down') to Cao Pi's 'The autumn wind is sad, the weather cold.' 'Traveler's heart' is a stock of the exile tradition, from 'the traveler's heart grieves when autumn comes' to Wang Wei's 'Alone, a stranger in a strange land.' The 'red sleeves' and the lady-on-the-tower motif recall Wang Changling's young wife who 'mounts the painted tower in spring dress' and Wen Tingyun's 'leaning alone on the river tower' — the entire tower tradition, here observed from the outside by a male traveler, the one perspective the tradition had not yet used.
此诗的意象与用语深植于羁旅与思乡的传统。「南陵水面漫悠悠」写南陵的秋江——「南陵」是地名(今安徽南陵),「漫悠悠」写水面漫延悠长,令人想到《诗经》「悠悠苍天」的「悠悠」与「所谓伊人,在水一方」的水意象,那「悠悠」的水面,暗含羁旅的漫长与思念的悠远;「风紧云轻欲变秋」写秋意的来临——「风紧」写秋风之紧,「云轻」写秋云之薄,令人想到「秋风萧瑟天气凉」(曹丕《燕歌行》)的秋意与「洞庭波兮木叶下」(《楚辞》)的秋景,那「欲变秋」写尽客中对季节的敏感。「正是客心孤回处」写客心的孤回——「客心」写客居之心(令人想到「客心悲易秋」与「独在异乡为异客」的羁旅传统),「孤回」写孤独与远离(「迥」写遥远),那「孤回」写尽羁旅的孤独与对故乡的遥远之感。「谁家红袖凭江楼」写红袖凭楼——「红袖」代指女子(令人想到「红袖添香夜读书」的意象与「红酥手,黄縢酒」的红袖意象),「凭江楼」写其凭栏远望(令人想到「闺中少妇不知愁,春日凝妆上翠楼」(王昌龄《闺怨》)的凭楼意象与「独倚望江楼」(温庭筠)的倚楼传统),那「谁家」的问句,令人想到「谁家玉笛暗飞声」(李白)的「谁家」用法与「不知谁家子」的怅惘。那江楼红袖的明丽,与客心孤回的惆怅对照,正是「以乐景写哀情」的笔法,令人想到「商女不知亡国恨,隔江犹唱后庭花」(杜牧《泊秦淮》)的对照笔法。全诗化用《诗经》《楚辞》、乐府与闺怨诗的传统,以秋景写客愁、以红袖反衬孤回,正是杜牧「以景写情」的本领。
Commentary
The poem has been prized since the Song dynasty as the finest of Du Mu's travel quatrains. Critics single out 'Just where the traveler's heart sinks loneliest, whose lady in red sleeves leans on the river tower' — its 'happy scene for sorrow' technique considered the purest example of Du Mu's 'handsome and crisp' style. In literary history the poem stands as a late-Tang refinement of the travel lyric: where High Tang travelers wrote broadly (Li Bai's 'The road to Shu is harder than climbing the sky'), the late Tang writes interiorly. For modern readers, the quatrain is an ideal entry into the 'scene carries feeling' tradition — twenty-eight characters in which an anonymous red sleeve can hold a millennium of solitude.
此诗历来被推为杜牧羁旅诗中的名篇,也是「正是客心孤回处,谁家红袖凭江楼」这一名句的出处。历代论者对此诗评价较高:论者多指出此诗以南陵秋江写客心的孤回,以红袖凭楼写反衬,是杜牧「以景写情」的佳作。在文学史上,此诗的特殊价值在于:它以二十八字的小诗,写出了羁旅的孤独与思乡的惆怅——那「漫悠悠」的秋江、「欲变秋」的天象,写尽客中的清愁;那「客心孤回」的直写,写尽羁旅的孤独;而那「谁家红袖凭江楼」的红袖,更是以明丽反衬孤回——别人尚有红袖可望、有人可等,客子却独对秋江,孤回无依,那「谁家」的问句,写尽客子的怅惘与羡慕。这种「以乐景写哀情」的笔法,正是杜牧写景写情的高明处:他不直写「我孤独」,而以江楼红袖的明丽对照写之,让读者在明丽的景色中体会到深处的孤寂。此诗与杜牧的其他羁旅诗(如《旅宿》《商山早行》)一样,都是借景写怀,写其宦游四方的孤独与思乡。对于今日读者,此诗是理解杜牧羁旅生涯与思乡心绪的窗口,也是感受中国诗歌「以景写情」传统的典范——那悠悠的南陵水、孤回的客心、凭江楼的红袖,穿越千年,仍在诉说着一个宦游者「美景良辰无人共」的孤独。
Prosody
Line by line
南陵水面漫悠悠,风紧云轻欲变秋。
The waters of Nanling drift on, slow and long; the wind sharpens, the clouds thin — autumn is on the turn.
南陵的水面漫悠悠,风紧云轻,将要变秋。
The water at Nanling stretches on and on; the wind freshens, the clouds thin, and autumn is about to come.
这两句是写秋景的名句,以「漫悠悠」写水面的悠长,以「欲变秋」写秋意的来临,景中含情。「南陵水面漫悠悠」写秋江的浩渺——南陵的水面漫延悠长,「漫」写水势之广、「悠悠」写水势之长,那「漫悠悠」的水面,写尽秋江的浩渺,也暗含羁旅的漫长——那悠悠的江水,正如客子漫长的旅途;「风紧云轻欲变秋」写秋意的来临——风紧云轻,正是秋将到来的征兆,「风紧」写秋风之紧、「云轻」写秋云之薄,「欲变秋」写那季节的变换——风紧云轻的天象,正是秋的预兆,而那「欲变秋」写尽客中对季节的敏感——羁旅之人,对秋意格外敏感,那「欲变秋」暗含客中的清愁。这两句的深意在于:它以「漫悠悠」与「欲变秋」写尽羁旅的背景与客愁的源头——那悠悠的江水,是客子漫长的旅途;那将变的秋意,是客中清愁的预兆;水悠悠而人不归,秋欲变而客更愁,正是「正是客心孤回处」的铺垫。以「漫悠悠」写悠长、以「欲变秋」写秋意,正是杜牧「以景写情」的含蓄笔法。
These two lines are a famous autumn scene, the 'on and on' writing the long water, the 'about to come' the approach of autumn, feeling within the scene. 'The water at Nanling stretches on and on' the autumn river's vastness — the water stretching out and on, 'stretches' the breadth, 'on and on' the length, the long water writing the river's vastness and secretly the length of the journey — the slow river, like the traveler's slow road. 'The wind freshens, the clouds thin, and autumn is about to come' the season's approach — the wind rising, the clouds thinning, the very sign of autumn's coming, 'wind freshens' the tightening autumn wind, 'clouds thin' the thin autumn clouds, 'about to come' the turning of the season; and 'about to' writes the traveler's sensitivity to the season — the man abroad is extra sensitive to the coming autumn, and the 'about to' secretly holds the traveler's quiet grief. The depth: the 'on and on' and the 'about to' write the setting of the journey and the source of the traveler's sorrow — the slow water, the long road; the coming autumn, the coming grief; the water flows and the man does not return, the autumn turns and the grief grows, the groundwork for 'just when the traveler's heart turns lone and far'. Writing the long through 'on and on', the autumn through 'about to come', Du Mu's restrained brush of scene for feeling.
正是客心孤回处,谁家红袖凭江楼。
Just where the traveler's heart sinks loneliest, whose lady in red sleeves leans on the river tower?
正是客心孤回之处,谁家红袖,凭倚着江楼。
Just when the traveler's heart turns lone and far, whose red sleeves lean on the riverside tower?
这两句是全诗的点睛之笔,也是千古名句,以「客心孤回」直写羁旅的孤独,以「红袖凭江楼」写反衬的对照,含蓄隽永。「正是客心孤回处」写客心的孤独——正是客居他乡、心境孤回之时,「正是」写此时此地的恰好,「客心孤回」直写羁旅的孤独与远离故乡的怅惘——那「孤回」写尽客子的孤独与遥远之感;「谁家红袖凭江楼」写红袖的对照——那江楼之上,谁家的红袖女子正凭栏远望?「谁家」写不知是谁家的女子,「红袖」代指凭楼的女子,「凭江楼」写其凭栏远望——那江楼上的红袖,或是在等待归人、或是在凭栏望景,那明丽的红袖,正是客心孤回的反衬。这两句的深意在于:它以「红袖凭江楼」的明丽反衬「客心孤回」的孤独——那江楼上的红袖,尚有人在等待、有景可凭;客子却独对秋江,孤回无依;「谁家」的问句,更暗含客子的怅惘——别人的红袖有人可等,我的归人又在何方?以「孤回」直写孤独、以「红袖」反衬对照,正是杜牧「以乐景写哀情」的笔法,也让这两句成为写羁旅孤独的千古名句。
This couplet is the eye of the poem, and a famous line through the ages, the 'lone and far' direct for the traveler's solitude, the 'red sleeves at the tower' the contrasting foil, restrained and lasting. 'Just when the traveler's heart turns lone and far' the heart's solitude — precisely when, far from home, the heart turns lone; 'just when' the exactness of this time and place, 'lone and far' the direct writing of the journey's loneliness and the far from home, 'lone and far' writing to the full the traveler's solitude and distance. 'Whose red sleeves lean on the riverside tower?' the red sleeves' contrast — up on the riverside tower, whose woman in red leans on the rail and gazes? 'Whose' the unknown house, 'red sleeves' the metonymy for the woman at the tower, 'lean on the riverside tower' her leaning and gazing — the woman in red, perhaps waiting for a homecomer, perhaps watching the view; the bright red sleeves, the foil to the traveler's lone and far. The depth: the bright red sleeves leaning on the tower, the foil to the 'lone and far' — the woman in red still has someone to wait for, a scene to lean on; the traveler, alone before the autumn river, has neither; the question 'whose' secretly holds the traveler's wistfulness — others' red sleeves have someone to wait for, and where is my homecomer? Writing the loneliness direct through 'lone and far', setting it off through 'red sleeves', Du Mu's method of 'writing grief through a joyous scene', the reason these two lines became a famous line of the journey's solitude.
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Related Reading
In Lüsu, 'The inn has no good companion; gazing long, I fall silent by myself,' Du Mu writes the loneliness of the traveler's inn through 'cold lamp' and 'lone goose.' Here he writes the loneliness of the river journey through 'slow and long' water and 'red sleeves on the tower.' Read together they show the two classic settings of late-Tang travel sorrow — the inn and the riverbank.
《旅宿》「旅馆无良伴,凝情自悄然」写客馆中的孤独与思乡,以「寒灯思旧事,断雁警愁眠」写寒灯断雁的愁绪,是杜牧羁旅诗的名篇。此诗《南陵道中》则「正是客心孤回处,谁家红袖凭江楼」,写南陵江行的客愁与红袖的对照,是杜牧羁旅诗的另一名篇。同为写羁旅,一写「旅馆」的客馆(旅宿),一写「南陵」的江行(南陵道中);一以「寒灯断雁」写愁,一以「红袖凭楼」写对照。两诗对读,可见杜牧写羁旅的两种情境——客馆的孤寂与江行的怅惘。
商山早行 Early Departure from Shang Mountain (Shangshan Zaoxing) 温庭筠 · 同为羁旅名篇,一写早行一写江行 Two masterpieces of travel — one of an early start, one of a river journeyWen Tingyun's 'Cockcrow, moon over the thatched inn; footprints on the plank bridge, frost' captures the traveler's early start in a cold, hard-lit gallery of images. Du Mu's 'slow and long' water and 'red sleeves' tower capture the river journey in a softer, lonelier register. One is the clarity of frost and moonlight, the other the wistfulness of a long river — two poles of Tang travel poetry.
温庭筠《商山早行》「鸡声茅店月,人迹板桥霜」以「鸡声茅店月」写早行的景象,以「客行悲故乡」写羁旅的乡愁,是唐人羁旅诗的名篇。杜牧《南陵道中》则「南陵水面漫悠悠」「正是客心孤回处」,以南陵秋江写羁旅的客愁,以「红袖凭江楼」写对照,是唐人羁旅诗的名篇。同为写羁旅,温庭筠写「早行」的霜月(商山早行),杜牧写「江行」的秋水(南陵道中);一写「板桥霜」的清冷,一写「红袖凭楼」的对照。两诗对读,可见唐人羁旅诗的两种意境——温庭筠的清冷与杜牧的明丽对照。
闺怨 A Young Wife's Grievance (Guiyuan) 王昌龄 · 同为红袖凭楼,一写思妇一写客子 The same 'lady on the tower' — one written from inside her heart, one from the traveler's eyesWang Changling writes the tower from within: 'In her chamber a young wife who doesn't know sorrow... she regrets teaching her husband to seek rank afar' — the lady's own grievance. Du Mu writes it from without: 'whose lady in red sleeves leans on the river tower' — the lady as a bright image that wounds the passing traveler. One writes the watcher's heart, the other the watcher's wound; together they map the two perspectives of the 'tower' motif in Tang poetry.
王昌龄《闺怨》「闺中少妇不知愁,春日凝妆上翠楼」写少妇凭楼望春、悔教夫婿觅封侯的闺怨,是唐人写「红袖凭楼」的名篇。杜牧《南陵道中》则「谁家红袖凭江楼」,以客子的视角写江楼红袖的凭栏,是唐人写「红袖凭楼」的另一名篇。同为「红袖凭楼」,王昌龄写少妇的「闺怨」(凝妆上翠楼),杜牧写客子的「孤回」(谁家红袖凭江楼);一写凭楼人的思夫,一写看楼人的思归。两诗对读,可见「红袖凭楼」意象在唐诗中的两种视角——思妇的视角与客子的视角,一写闺中人的怨、一写行路人的愁。