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霜月

Frost and Moon

李商隐

Li Shangyin

写景scenery 月moon 咏物Object poem

霜月初闻征雁已无蝉，百尺楼高水接天。
青女素娥俱耐冷，月中霜里斗婵娟。

I first hear the travelling geese, the cicadas already gone;
a hundred-foot tower, the water joining the sky.
The Frost Maiden and the Moon Goddess both can bear the cold,
and in the moon and the frost they vie in beauty.

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Meaning

I have just heard the call of the southward geese, and the cicadas are already silent; atop a hundred-foot tower, autumn water meets the long sky. The Frost Maiden and the Moon Goddess both can bear the cold, and in the moonlight and the frost they contend in loveliness.

刚听到南飞大雁的鸣声，蝉声已经消失；百尺高楼之上，秋水与长天相接。青女与嫦娥都耐得住清冷，在月光与霜华里争比谁更美。

Appreciation

The opening line, 'I first hear the travelling geese, the cicadas already gone', writes the passing of the season by sound: the geese come and the cicadas vanish, and in a single night autumn is deep. The second line, 'a hundred-foot tower, the water joining the sky', opens the space, the tower high against the sky, water and sky one, a broad and clear, cold realm. The last two strike out afresh, personifying the 'Frost Maiden' (goddess of frost) and the 'Moon Goddess' (the lady of the moon), saying the two goddesses can both bear the cold and 'in the moon and the frost they vie in beauty'—figure used for the thing, writing frost and moon as having feeling and a contest. The imagining is marvellous, the choice of words fine, the word 'vie' especially alive; the whole is cold and bright, clear and empty.

【白话串讲】 “初闻征雁已无蝉，百尺楼高水接天”——李商隐写秋夜霜月。“青女素娥俱耐冷，月中霜里斗婵娟”——霜神和嫦娥都不怕冷，在月中霜里比美。他把秋夜的冷，写成了仙女的较量。【意象与手法】起句「初闻征雁已无蝉」以听觉写节候推移，雁来蝉去，一夜秋深；次句「百尺楼高水接天」拓开空间，楼高接天、水天一色，境界廓大而清寒。后两句别出心裁，将「青女」（司霜之神）与「素娥」（嫦娥）拟人，言二神俱耐清冷，于「月中霜里斗婵娟」，以神写物，把霜与月写得有情有竞，想象奇丽，「斗」字尤活。【情感与主旨】此诗约作于李商隐在梓州幕或长安时期，当为秋夜登楼感怀之作，于清寒景物中寄寓诗人高洁自守、不随流俗的情怀。【名句点睛】考点重在拟人手法与神话运用：常问后两句运用了什么修辞、有何效果；「青女」「素娥」的典故与「斗」字的表达效果；李商隐咏物七绝的寄托。

Background

The poem was probably written in Li Shangyin's years at Zizhou in his staff headquarters or at Chang'an; its exact date is hard to fix, but it is a piece of feeling written on an autumn night from a tower. Titled 'Frost and Moon', it writes the clear, cold scene of the first frost—the geese come and the cicadas are gone, water and sky one colour—and blends in the myths of the Frost Maiden (goddess of frost) and the Moon Goddess (the lady of the moon), lodging in the scene the poet's keep of himself, pure and aloof, not following the common stream. Many of Li Shangyin's seven-character quatrains lodge feeling in the thing, and this piece too uses the cold brightness of frost and moon to write a lonely, lofty realm.

此诗约作于李商隐在梓州幕或长安时期，具体年代难确考，当为秋夜登楼感怀之作。题曰「霜月」，写初霜之夜雁来蝉逝、水天一色的清寒景象，并融入青女（霜神）、嫦娥（月神）的神话，于景物中寄寓诗人高洁自守、不随流俗的情怀。李商隐一生仕途蹭蹬，身处牛李党争的夹缝，屡遭排挤，然其人格孤高，不肯同流合污，故其咏物诗多托物寓怀：咏蝉则写「本以高难饱，徒劳恨费声」，咏霜月则写二神耐冷斗艳。此诗正是这种心态的结晶——霜与月皆清冷之物，而诗人偏赏其清冷，且以二神争艳写其光彩，正见其于孤高中自得、于清冷中自赏的心境。全诗以神写物、化静为动，是义山七绝中别具一格的清空奇丽之作。李商隐早年丧父，家境清寒，屡试不第，入仕后又陷于牛李党争，一生抑郁不得志，故其咏物之作多托物寓怀。此诗写霜月之清冷，而赏其耐冷斗艳，正见其孤高自守、不随流俗的品格——冷者自赏其冷，正如才者自赏其才，于清寒之中见其傲骨。又商隐晚年漂泊巴蜀、寄人篱下，秋夜登楼，霜月如画，其心中孤高与身世之感，皆借此清冷之景而发，故全诗虽不言愁，而清冷之气逼人，正是「不著一字，尽得风流」的体现。

Art

The opening line, 'I first hear the travelling geese, the cicadas already gone', writes the passing of the season by sound: the geese come and the cicadas vanish, and in a single night autumn is deep; the second line, 'a hundred-foot tower, the water joining the sky', opens the space, the tower high against the sky, water and sky one, a broad and clear, cold realm. The last two strike out afresh, personifying the Frost Maiden and the Moon Goddess, saying the two goddesses can both bear the cold and in the moon and the frost vie in beauty—figure used for the thing, writing frost and moon as having feeling and a contest. The imagining is marvellous, the choice of words fine, the word 'vie' especially alive; the whole is cold and bright, clear and empty.

起句「初闻征雁已无蝉」以听觉写节候推移：雁来蝉去，一夜秋深，不写秋色而秋意自见，是「以声写秋」的妙笔；次句「百尺楼高水接天」拓开空间：楼高接天、水天一色，境界廓大而清寒，为后文的神话想象铺下高远的舞台。后两句别出心裁，将「青女」（司霜之神）与「素娥」（嫦娥）拟人，言二神俱耐清冷，于「月中霜里斗婵娟」——以神写物，把霜与月写得有情有竞，化静为动、化物为人，想象奇丽，炼字精工，「斗」字尤活，将二神争艳的娇憨写得如在目前。全诗先实后虚、由景入神，前半清空写实，后半奇丽想象，虚实相生，冷艳清空，是义山七绝「寄托深而措辞婉」与「想象奇而造语新」的完美结合，于李贺奇诡、杜牧俊爽之外别立一格。又此诗之结构亦见匠心：前两句由听觉（征雁、蝉声）而视觉（楼高、水天），一写节候之推移，一写空间之阔大，为后两句的神话想象搭好时空舞台；后两句由实入虚，以青女素娥之争艳写霜月之精神，虚实相生，由景入神。四句之中，先抑后扬，先实后虚，层层递进，而「俱耐冷」「斗婵娟」之拟人，又使清冷之景顿生灵动之气，冷艳而不死寂，正是义山咏物七绝「以神写形」的独得之境，为咏物诗开拓了新境。

Allusions

The two allusions of the poem both come from myth. 'The Frost Maiden' is found in the 'Astronomical Treatise' of the Huainanzi: 'in the third month of autumn the Frost Maiden appears, to send down frost and snow'—she is the goddess who rules frost and snow. 'The Moon Goddess' is the lady of the moon, Chang'e, who stole the elixir and fled to the moon. 'Beauty' (chanjuan) originally described a graceful bearing, already used by Song Yu in the 'Nine Songs', here meaning both the moonlight and a fair form. Li Shangyin personifies the two natural things, frost and moon, as goddesses who contend in beauty, turning the still into the moving and the thing into the person; he uses allusion without being bound by it, and shows his skill—though he 'spreads allusions like an otter its catch'—of transforming reference into living wonder.

诗中两典皆出神话。「青女」见《淮南子·天文训》：「至秋三月，青女乃出，以降霜雪。」高诱注谓青女乃主霜雪之女神，故诗中用以代指霜；「素娥」即嫦娥，《淮南子·览冥训》载后羿之妻窃不死之药奔月，故世人以素娥代指月，一名「月娥」。「婵娟」本形容姿态美好，宋玉《登徒子好色赋》「体貌娴丽，所授者均，皎若明月舒其光」，屈原《九歌》「恐嫦娥之婵娟」已见端倪，此处兼指月色与容姿。李商隐将霜、月二自然物人格化为争美之神，化静为动、化物为人，用典而不泥，足见其「獭祭鱼」用事而能运化入妙的本领——两个神话人物信手拈来，不待注解而诗意自明，且为全诗注入奇丽的想象色彩，是咏物诗「不即不离」的典范。又「素娥」即嫦娥，奔月之典本出《淮南子·览冥训》「羿请不死之药于西王母，姮娥窃以奔月」，后世以嫦娥为月之代称，李商隐《嫦娥》诗「嫦娥应悔偷灵药，碧海青天夜夜心」即借以自伤；此诗以素娥与青女并置，二神皆主清冷，正与诗人清冷自守之心相合。又「婵娟」一词，本形容女子姿态美好，出自屈原《九歌》「恐美人之迟暮」一类的楚辞传统，此处兼指月色清丽，一字而月、人、神三者并摄，炼字之精，可见一斑。

Commentary

Feng Hao of the Qing, in his 'Annotation to the Collected Poems of Yu Xi Sheng', remarks: 'Borrowing the Frost Maiden and Moon Goddess to vie in beauty, he writes the victory of frost and moon—truly a divine brush.' Shen Deqian said that 'Yishan's seven-character quatrains lodge deeply and phrase gently, and this piece is especially clear and empty'. The modern scholar Liu Xuekai calls it 'myth used for the colours of nature, cold and bright to the bone'. Critics of every age have prized its power to turn an ordinary autumn scene into a realm of myth, standing apart from Li He's strangeness and Du Mu's briskness in a distinct, clear and empty manner.

清冯浩《玉溪生诗集笺注》评此诗：「借青女素娥斗婵娟，写霜月之胜，的是神笔。」沈德潜《说诗晬语》谓义山七绝「寄托深而措辞婉」，此篇尤清空。近人刘学锴《李商隐诗歌集解》称其「以神话写物色，冷艳入骨」，又谓「斗」字写尽二神之娇憨竞美。历代论者多赏其能将寻常秋景点化成神话境界：霜月本是人人习见的清寒之景，一经义山点化，便成二神争艳的奇观，化平淡为奇崛，此正是诗人的点铁成金之手。与李贺《金铜仙人辞汉歌》之奇诡、杜牧《山行》之俊爽相较，义山此诗独得清空之致，为唐人咏物七绝中「以神写物」的极致，后世咏霜咏月之作，鲜有出其右者。历代咏霜咏月之诗，多写其清冷孤寂，如杜甫「露从今夜白，月是故乡明」写霜月而思乡，苏轼「月出于东山之上」写月而怀古；义山此诗独以神话争艳写霜月，别开生面，遂为咏物诗「以神写形」之极致。近人论义山诗，谓其「以美丽之象喻沉痛之情」，此诗霜月之冷艳，正含其孤高之怀抱。又此诗与《嫦娥》并读，一写霜月之争艳，一写嫦娥之悔恨，可见义山于神话意象之偏爱，亦见其咏物诗寄托之深，为晚唐咏物诗之精品。

Prosody

Form Seven-character quatrain七言绝句

Rhyme Ping-shui rhyme, lower-level one xian group (gone, sky, beauty)蝉、天、娟，押平水韵下平一先韵，首句入韵。

Tone pattern First line entering the rhyme, level onset and level close平起平收，首句入韵，三句一韵，平仄大体合律，音节清朗。

Reading note A objective-rhapsody seven-character quatrain of Li Shangyin's, using myth to write the cold, bright beauty of frost and moon, clear, empty and marvellous.此诗为七言绝句，押平水韵下平一先韵（蝉、天、娟），首句「蝉」字入韵，平起平收式，一韵到底，韵脚清亮悠长，正合秋夜清寒之境的声情。平仄上，全诗大体合律：「初闻征雁已无蝉」为平平仄仄仄平平，「百尺楼高水接天」为仄仄平平仄仄平，「青女素娥俱耐冷」为仄仄平平平仄仄，「月中霜里斗婵娟」为仄平仄仄仄平平，平仄相间，读来清朗悦耳。章法上，前两句写实，以听觉写节候、以视觉写空间，一纵一横；后两句写虚，以神话写霜月，化静为动。虚实相生，由景入神，四句二十八字层层推进，无一闲笔。此诗声律之清、炼字之工、想象之奇浑然一体，为李商隐咏物七绝中「以神写物」的典范，其清空奇丽的风格，于七绝一体中别开生面，历来选家皆收此作，视为义山七绝的清新一格。

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初闻征雁已无蝉

I first hear the travelling geese, the cicadas already gone.

刚听到南飞大雁的鸣声，蝉声已经消失。

Just as I hear the departing geese, the cicadas are already gone.

起句以听觉写节候之变，是全诗「立秋」的关钥。「征雁」指南飞的大雁，雁鸣秋至；「无蝉」写蝉声已绝，蝉鸣夏尽。二者对举，「初闻」与「已无」相照，写出节候推移的迅速——仿佛才听到第一声雁鸣，蝉声便已断绝，一夜之间，秋深如此。此句妙在以声写秋而不着一「秋」字：雁来蝉去，皆闻之于耳，秋意由听觉浸入，比直接写「秋深」含蓄得多。以有声写无声，以动写静，音节上「初闻」「已无」顿挫有致，为全诗定下清寒的基调，也为次句的高楼远眺、后两句的神话想象铺垫了节候背景。

The opening line writes the season's change through hearing, the key of the poem's 'autumn begins'. 'The departing geese' the geese flying south, the goose's cry and the autumn's coming; 'the cicadas are already gone' the cicada sound ceased, the cicada's song and the summer's end. The two set against each other, 'just as I hear' and 'already gone' answering, writing the season's rapid turn — as if the first goose cry is heard, and the cicadas already silent, and overnight the autumn deepened so. The beauty is writing autumn through sound without one word 'autumn': the geese come and the cicadas go, all heard by the ear, the autumn mood entering through hearing, far more restrained than a plain 'the autumn is deep'. Writing the soundless through sound, the still through motion; in tone 'just as I hear' and 'already gone' turn with rhythm, tuning the poem's cold, clear keynote, and laying the season's groundwork for the later high tower's distant view and the mythic imagination of the last two lines.

百尺楼高水接天

A hundred-foot tower, the water joining the sky.

百尺高楼之上，秋水与长天相接。

On the hundred-foot tower, the water meets the sky.

此句拓开空间，由听觉转入视觉，由近景转入远景。「百尺楼高」写楼之巍峨，登高望远，视野顿开；「水接天」写秋水与长天相接，水天一色，浩渺无涯。百尺之高与无涯之水相映，境界廓大而清寒：秋夜登楼，四顾苍茫，唯见水光与天色融为一体，冷气袭人。此句是后文的「舞台」——正因楼高，方见水天相接的清旷；正因清寒，方引出青女素娥耐冷斗艳的想象。以一「接」字写水天相接，炼字精当，境界全出。前句以声写时，此句以景写空，一纵一横，为全诗搭建起清寒阔大的时空框架。

This line opens the space, turning from hearing to sight, from the near view to the far. 'The hundred-foot tower' the tower's height, climbing high and gazing far, the view suddenly opened; 'the water meets the sky' the autumn water joining the long sky, water and sky one color, vast and boundless. The hundred-foot height and the boundless water set off, the realm vast and cold: the autumn night climbing the tower, the four sides vast, only the water's glow and the sky's color fused, the cold air striking. This line is the 'stage' of what follows: precisely because the tower is high, the water-sky meeting can be seen; precisely because the cold, the imagination of the Frost and Moon goddesses enduring the cold and vying in beauty is brought out. The one word 'meets' writes the water-sky joining, the word-craft exact, the realm complete. The line above writes time through sound, this line writes space through scene, one vertical one horizontal, building the poem's cold, vast space-time frame.

青女素娥俱耐冷，月中霜里斗婵娟

The Frost Maiden and the Moon Goddess both can bear the cold, and in the moon and the frost they vie in beauty.

青女与嫦娥都耐得住清冷，在月光与霜华里争比谁更美。

The Frost Goddess and the Moon Goddess both endure the cold; in moonlight and frost they vie in beauty.

后两句是全诗的神来之笔，以神话写物色。「青女」为司霜之神，「素娥」即嫦娥，二神一主霜、一主月，正与题面相合；「俱耐冷」写二神皆耐得住清寒，将霜月之冷艳人格化——冷不是可畏的，而是可赏、可争的；「月中霜里斗婵娟」写二神在月光霜华里争比容姿，一个「斗」字化静为动、化物为人，将霜月写得多情而娇憨，仿佛两个绝代佳人，在清冷的夜色中各展其美。此二句不写霜月之形，而写霜月之神，以想象补足写实，冷艳清空，奇丽绝伦，是咏物诗「不即不离、以神写形」的至高境界，令人读之觉霜月扑面、寒光满纸。

The last two lines are the poem's divine stroke, writing the things of nature through myth. 'The Frost Goddess' the goddess in charge of frost, 'the Moon Goddess' i.e. Chang'e, the two goddesses one of frost one of moon, fitting the title; 'both endure the cold' writing that both goddesses bear the clear cold, personifying the frost-moon's cold beauty — the cold is not to be feared, but to be admired and vied for; 'in moonlight and frost they vie in beauty' writing the two goddesses vying in grace within the moonlight and frost, the one word 'vie' turning still to motion, the thing to person, writing the frost-moon as loving and coy, as if two peerless beauties, each showing her beauty in the cold night. These two lines write not the frost-moon's form but its spirit, filling the real with imagination, cold-beauty, clear and empty, strange and exquisite, the highest realm of the flower-portrait verse's 'neither too close nor too far, writing the spirit through the form', the reader feeling the frost and moon on the face, the cold light on the page.

Study

Word focus

斗 'Vie' in 'they vie in beauty' means to contend; it writes the two goddesses of frost and moon as having feeling and a contest, turning the still into the moving, with life in the cold and bright. 「月中霜里斗婵娟」之「斗」字，是全诗的诗眼，亦是炼字的典范。「斗」本谓争竞、比试，此处写青女与素娥在月光霜华里争比容姿，将霜、月二种自然物写得有情有竞、娇憨可爱。此字之妙有三：一是化静为动，霜月本是静景，着一「斗」字，顿时活泼生动，如二美竞妆，各不相让；二是以动写神，不写霜月之形貌，而写其争妍斗艳之神采，冷艳中见生气，清寒中见热烈；三是反衬立意，愈是清冷之境，愈显争艳之趣，冷与热、静与动相反相成，境界全出。一字之用，使全诗由写实跃入想象，由平淡化为奇丽，故冯浩评为「神笔」，刘学锴谓其「冷艳入骨」。

俱 'Both' in 'both can bear the cold' means 'each, both'; it stresses that Frost Maiden and Moon Goddess alike endure the clear cold, heightening the stern, lofty purity of the frost-and-moon night. 「青女素娥俱耐冷」之「俱」字，训都、皆，是全句的枢纽。「俱耐冷」写青女、素娥二位女神都耐得住清寒，一字总括，将霜神与月神并提：主霜者耐冷，固其本分；主月者耐冷，亦见其高。此字之妙在于以「都」字写出二神共有的品格——清冷是高洁的象征，耐冷即是耐得住寂寞、守得住清高，正合诗人自况之意。若单写一神，则情味减半；着一「俱」字，则二神并立，同以清冷为美、以耐冷为荣，为下句「斗婵娟」的争艳作了铺垫——正因为都耐冷，方有资格在霜月之中一较高下。一字之设，上承二神，下启一斗，结构上的妙用不可忽视。

接 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. 「百尺楼高水接天」之「接」字，写秋水与长天相接之状，是此句炼字的点睛之笔。秋夜登楼，极目远眺，水光与天色连成一片，难分彼此，此一「接」字，将水天相接的视觉真实与空阔浩渺的空间感一并写出。「接」字之妙在于：一是以动写静，水本静流，天本静悬，而一「接」字使二者发生关系，仿佛天与水的对话，境界顿活；二是以近写远，百尺楼高是近景，水接天是远景，一近一远，空间层次分明；三是为全诗定调，水天相接的清旷之景，正是青女素娥斗艳的舞台背景，一「接」字为后文的神话想象作了空间铺垫。

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