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唐 Tang · 诗 Poem

哥舒歌

Song of Geshu

西鄙人

Xibiren (the man of the western border)

边塞frontier 唐诗Tang poetry 西鄙人Xibiren (the man of the western border) 五言绝句five-character quatrain

北斗七星高,哥舒夜带刀。
至今窥牧马,不敢过临洮。

The seven stars of the Dipper ride high,
Geshu by night wears his blade at his side.
To this day the grazing horses only peer and spy,
Daring not to cross beyond Lintao.
Listen

Meaning

The folk quatrain praises General Geshu Han, whose nightly vigil keeps the Tartar herds from crossing Lintao. It builds his awe through the enemy's own timidity.

北斗七星高高挂在天上,哥舒翰将军夜半还随身带着刀。直到如今,吐蕃的牧马只敢远远窥探,再不敢越过临洮一步。

Appreciation

In four lines the poem builds a general's legend by showing what the enemy does, not what he does: the Dipper high, Geshu with his blade, and the grazing herds that only 'peek' and dare not cross. The folk tone is blunt and cheerful, the awe delivered sideways through the foe's fear. Short as it is, it carries the confidence of a border people who sleep safe because one man stays armed.

【白话串讲】 “北斗七星高,哥舒夜带刀”——西鄙人写哥舒翰:夜里带着刀。“至今窥牧马,不敢过临洮”——敌人只敢远远窥探,不敢过临洮。一首民歌,写一个守边将领的威风。 【意象与手法】以“北斗高”起兴,以“夜带刀”写将帅英武,末二句以敌之畏缩反衬其威名。 【情感与主旨】歌颂哥舒翰守边之功,表达百姓对良将的信赖与对边境安宁的欣慰。 【名句点睛】“至今窥牧马,不敢过临洮”——以敌不敢犯,写尽戍边之威。

Background

The 'man of the western border' is a folk author; the poem praises Geshu Han's guarding of Longyou and his awe over the Tibetans.

《哥舒歌》为唐代西鄙人(西部边民)所作,是写哥舒翰夜带刀、边地安宁的民歌。西鄙人,唐代西部边地之人,姓名不详。此诗:北斗七星高,哥舒夜带刀。至今窥牧马,不敢过临洮。全诗写哥舒翰夜带刀、边地安宁,是唐代民歌的名篇。

Art

A forceful short piece, building the general's awe through the enemy's timidity, a sidewise lift.

《哥舒歌》艺术上以边地之夜的描摹与哥舒威名的豪壮见长。全诗四句:首写北斗哥舒——“北斗七星高,哥舒夜带刀”用北斗之典写北斗七星高、哥舒夜带刀;末写不敢过临洮——“至今窥牧马,不敢过临洮”用窥牧马临洮之典写至今窥牧马、不敢过临洮。全诗以边地之夜写哥舒威名,正是西鄙人歌豪壮的笔法。

Allusions

'Geshu' refers to Geshu Han, a famous Tang general, known to all rather than a literary reference.

《哥舒歌》用典在“北斗”“哥舒夜带刀”“窥牧马”“临洮”。“北斗”用北斗之典(北斗七星);“哥舒夜带刀”写哥舒翰夜带刀;“窥牧马”用窥牧马之典(胡人窥边);“临洮”写临洮(边城)。全诗以这些意象写哥舒翰夜带刀、边地安宁,用典自然而豪壮自见,正是西鄙人歌的笔法。

Commentary

This poem spread with the folk 'the seven stars of the Dipper ride high,' bearing the air of folk song.

《哥舒歌》是西鄙人歌的名篇,也是唐诗中写边将威名的代表作。此诗写哥舒翰夜带刀、边地安宁,向为论者称道。论者多赏其边地之夜的描摹与哥舒威名的豪壮——“北斗七星高,哥舒夜带刀”用北斗之典写北斗七星高、哥舒夜带刀,豪壮之极;“至今窥牧马,不敢过临洮”用窥牧马临洮之典写至今窥牧马、不敢过临洮,更见其威。西鄙人此歌为河西陇右民歌,正是其代表——以边地之夜写哥舒威名,正是其豪壮的笔法。

Prosody

Form Five-character quatrain五言绝句
Rhyme Dao, tao (level-tone hao rhyme).《哥舒歌》为五言绝句,四句,押平声韵。此诗用韵:高、刀(豪部),洮(豪部),一韵到底,音节豪壮。
Tone pattern Oblique-onset level-ending五言绝句以音节豪壮、情致雄迈见长。此诗写哥舒翰夜带刀、边地安宁,音节豪壮而雄迈。全诗以五言贯底,声调与边将的内容相合,是西鄙人歌中豪壮的一路。
Reading note Lines two and four rhyme in level-tone hao; short and forceful, with a folk-song flavor.《哥舒歌》为唐代西鄙人所作,是写哥舒翰夜带刀、边地安宁的民歌。此诗以“北斗七星高,哥舒夜带刀”写边地之夜,以“至今窥牧马,不敢过临洮”写哥舒威名。写哥舒翰夜带刀、边地安宁,是唐代民歌的名篇。

Line by line

北斗七星高,哥舒夜带刀。

The seven Northern Dipper stars hang high; Geshua carries his blade by night.

北斗七星高,哥舒夜带刀。

The seven stars of the Northern Dipper hang high; by night, Geshua wears his saber.

首用北斗之典写北斗七星高、哥舒夜带刀,是全诗写边地之夜的起点。“北斗七星高”用北斗之典写北斗七星高——“北斗七星高”用北斗七星之典写北斗七星高悬——北斗七星高;“哥舒夜带刀”写哥舒夜带刀——“哥舒夜带刀”写哥舒翰夜中带刀——哥舒夜带刀。二句写北斗七星高、哥舒夜带刀:北斗七星高,哥舒夜带刀。以“北斗七星高”用北斗之典写北斗高悬、边夜寂静,以“哥舒夜带刀”写哥舒带刀、夜巡之威,正是西鄙人歌写边地之夜的起点——北斗高悬,哥舒带刀。

The opening uses the Northern Dipper allusion, writing the seven stars high and Geshua carrying his blade by night, the starting point for the border night. The seven Northern Dipper stars hang high uses the Dipper to write the border night's silence. By night, Geshua wears his saber: Geshua Han patrolling by night, blade at his side. One line writes the high Dipper and the quiet night, the other the blade and the night patrol's awe - the border song's starting point for the western border: the Dipper high, the blade at the waist, the night safe.

至今窥牧马,不敢过临洮。

To this day, they peer at our grazing horses, yet dare not cross Lintao.

至今窥牧马,不敢过临洮。

Even now they only dare peer at our grazing horses; they do not dare cross Lintao.

末用窥牧马临洮之典写至今窥牧马、不敢过临洮,是全诗写哥舒威名的归结。“至今窥牧马”用窥牧马之典写至今窥牧马——“至今窥牧马”用胡人窥边之典写至今胡人只敢窥伺牧马——至今窥牧马;“不敢过临洮”写不敢过临洮——“不敢过临洮”写不敢越过临洮——不敢过临洮。二句写至今窥牧马、不敢过临洮:至今窥牧马,不敢过临洮。以“至今窥牧马”用窥牧马之典写胡骑只敢窥伺、牧马观望,以“不敢过临洮”写不敢越临洮、边地安宁,正是西鄙人歌写哥舒威名的归结——窥牧不敢,不敢过临洮。

The closing uses the grazing-horse allusion, writing that they still only peer at grazing horses and dare not cross Lintao, the resolution of Geshua's terror. To this day, they only dare peer at our grazing horses adapts the allusion of the Hu cavalry raiding for grazing: to this day the Hu only dare watch and graze. They do not dare cross Lintao: not daring to pass beyond Lintao. One line writes the cavalry's watching and waiting, the other their not crossing, the border at peace - the western border song's resolution of Geshua's fame: peering to graze, yet not daring to cross Lintao.

Study

Word focus

北斗 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. “北斗七星高”之“北斗”,用北斗七星之典写北斗,是全诗写边夜之景的典故词。“北斗”用北斗七星之典——北斗七星高悬。这一词写星之明:不是寻常之星,而北斗;不是可状之景,而七星高挂。以“北斗七星高”写北斗高悬、边夜寂静,正是西鄙人歌写边地之夜的起点。
哥舒 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. “哥舒夜带刀”之“哥舒”,写哥舒翰(唐代名将),是全诗写边将之威的关键词。“哥舒”写哥舒翰将军——哥舒翰夜中带刀。这一词写将之威:不是寻常之将,而哥舒;不是可状之人,而威震西陲。以“北斗七星高,哥舒夜带刀”写哥舒带刀、夜巡之威,正是西鄙人歌写边地之夜的笔法。
窥牧马 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. “至今窥牧马”之“窥牧马”,用胡人窥边牧马之典写窥牧马,是全诗写胡骑观望的典故词。“窥牧马”写窥伺牧马(胡人牧马窥边)——至今胡人只敢窥伺牧马。这一词写窥之怯:不是直犯之骑,而窥牧马;不是可状之势,而暗中观望。以“至今窥牧马”用窥牧马之典写胡骑只敢窥伺、牧马观望,正是西鄙人歌写哥舒威名的笔法。
临洮 A key expression in the poem. Read it as an image, mood, or grammar point in context. “不敢过临洮”之“临洮”,写临洮(边城),是全诗写边地之界的归结词。“临洮”写临洮城(今甘肃临洮)——不敢越过临洮。这一词写城之固:不是寻常之城,而临洮;不是可状之地,而边塞要城。以“至今窥牧马,不敢过临洮”写不敢越临洮、边地安宁,正是西鄙人歌写哥舒威名的归结。

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