唐 Tang · 诗 Poem
新丰折臂翁
The Old Man of Xinfeng with the Broken Arm
新丰老翁八十八,头鬓眉须皆似雪。
玄孙扶向店前行,左臂凭肩右臂折。
问翁臂折来几年,兼问致折何因缘。
翁云贯属新丰县,生逢圣代无征战。
惯听棃园歌管声,不识旗枪与弓箭。
无何天宝大征兵,户有三丁点一丁。
点得驱将何处去,五月万里云南行。
闻道云南有泸水,椒花落时瘴烟起。
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新丰老翁八十八,头鬓眉须皆似雪。
玄孙扶向店前行,左臂凭肩右臂折。
问翁臂折来几年,兼问致折何因缘。
翁云贯属新丰县,生逢圣代无征战。
惯听棃园歌管声,不识旗枪与弓箭。
无何天宝大征兵,户有三丁点一丁。
点得驱将何处去,五月万里云南行。
闻道云南有泸水,椒花落时瘴烟起。
大军徒涉水如汤,未过十人二三死。
村南村北哭声哀,儿别爷娘夫别妻。
皆云前后征蛮者,千万人行无一回。
是时翁年二十四,兵部牒中有名字。
夜深不敢使人知,偷将大石搥折臂。
张弓簸旗俱不堪,从兹始免征云南。
骨碎筋伤非不苦,且图拣退归乡土。
此臂折来六十年,一肢虽废一身全。
至今风雨阴寒夜,直到天明痛不眠。
痛不眠,终不悔,且喜老身今独在。
不然当时泸水头,身死魂孤骨不收。
应作云南望乡鬼,万人冢上哭呦呦。
老人言,君听取。
君不闻开元宰相宋开府,不赏边功防黩武。
又不闻天宝宰相杨国忠,欲求恩幸立边功。
边功未立生人怨,请问新丰折臂翁。
His hair and brows and beard all white as snow.
His great-grandson helps him to the inn's front door;
His left arm rests on the boy's shoulder, his right arm is broken.
I ask him how many years the arm has been broken,
And ask what cause and chance broke it so.
The old man says: 'My family has always been of Xinfeng county;
I was born in a sage reign with no wars at all,
Used only to the songs and strings of the Pear Garden,
And never knew a pennon, a spear, or a bow.
Then, all at once, in the Tianbao years, a great levy was raised —
Where a household had three grown men, one was conscripted.
The man chosen was driven — to what place?
In the fifth month, ten thousand li, on the march to Yunnan.
I heard that Yunnan has a river, the Lu,
And when the pepper-flowers fall, the miasma rises;
The great army waded the water hot as soup,
And of every ten who crossed, two or three died.
North of the village and south, the wailing was mournful,
Sons parting from fathers, husbands from wives;
And all said of those sent before to fight the Man,
Of ten thousand who went, not one came back.
That year I was twenty-four,
And my name was written in the Board of War's register.
In the deep night, afraid that anyone should know,
I secretly smashed my arm with a great stone.
I could no longer draw a bow or raise a flag,
And from that time on I was exempt from the Yunnan march.
Bones broken and sinews torn — of course it hurt,
But I was picked out and sent back to my native soil.
This arm has been broken now for sixty years —
One limb is useless, but the whole body is whole.
Even today, on windy, rainy, dark and cold nights,
The pain keeps me awake until the dawn.
Pain that keeps me sleepless — yet I never regret,
And I am glad that this old body still survives alone.
For had I not, I would have lain at the head of the Lu,
A dead soul, a lonely ghost with no one to bury my bones,
And become a homesick ghost of Yunnan,
Wailing on the mound of ten thousand dead.
Old man, your words I take to heart.
Have you not heard of Minister Song of Kaiyuan,
Who refused to reward frontier deeds, to guard against militarism?
And have you not heard of the Tianbao Minister Yang Guozhong,
Who sought imperial favor by winning frontier merit?
Before the frontier merit was won, the people's hatred was born —
Ask the old man of Xinfeng with the broken arm.'
Meaning
A satirical narrative poem of Bai Juyi, told by an eighty-eight-year-old man of Xinfeng who broke his own arm as a young man to escape conscription for the disastrous campaigns against Yunnan. The old man recounts how, at twenty-four, when the Tianbao court levied every third man for the march to Yunnan — where the hot Lu River and its miasma killed two or three of every ten — he secretly smashed his arm with a stone, was discharged, and has lived sixty years with a crippled limb but a whole body, in pain on every stormy night, yet without a trace of regret. The poem closes by contrasting the two ministers: Song Jing of Kaiyuan, who refused frontier glory to prevent militarism, and Yang Guozhong of Tianbao, who courted favor through war and brought the people's hatred. The broken arm is at once a horror and a triumph: the mutilation that saved a life.
新丰县的老翁八十八岁,头鬓眉须都白得像雪。玄孙扶着他到店前来,左臂搭在肩上,右臂已经折断。问他手臂折断几年了,又问他折断的缘由。老翁说我家世代属新丰县,生逢圣明之世没有征战。惯听梨园的歌舞管弦之声,不认识旗枪与弓箭。没料到天宝年间大举征兵,户有三丁便点一丁。点中的被驱赶到哪里去,五月里远行万里去云南。听说云南有泸水,椒花落时瘴烟升起。大军徒步涉水,水热如汤,没过去十人就有二三人死。村南村北哭声悲哀,儿别爷娘、夫别妻子。都说前后征讨蛮夷的人,千万人行没有一人回来。这时老翁二十四岁,兵部的文书上有名字。深夜里不敢让人知道,偷偷用大石槌折了手臂。张弓挥旗都不行了,从此才免于征讨云南。骨碎筋伤不是不苦,只图被拣汰退回乡土。这臂折断六十年,一肢虽废但一身保全。至今风雨阴寒之夜,痛到天明不能入眠。痛到不能入眠,终究不后悔,还庆幸老身今天独自健在。不然的话当年在泸水边,身死魂孤骨头无人收。应该成为云南望乡的鬼,在万人冢上啼哭哀哀。老人说的话,请您听取。您没听说开元宰相宋开府,不赏边功以防穷兵黩武。又没听说天宝宰相杨国忠,想求恩宠而树立边功。边功未立先惹生民怨恨,请问新丰的折臂老翁。
Appreciation
[Plain Paraphrase] The old man of Xinfeng, eighty-eight, hair and brows like snow, is helped to the inn by his great-grandson; his left arm leans on the boy, his right arm hangs broken. Asked how long ago and why, he tells the whole story: born in a peaceful reign, he knew only music until the Tianbao levy took every third man for the Yunnan march, where the hot Lu River and its miasma killed most who crossed; at twenty-four, rather than go to die, he smashed his arm with a stone in the night, was discharged, and has lived sixty years crippled but alive, sleepless with pain on wet and cold nights — and never once sorry, since the alternative was to die a lonely ghost by the Lu, wailing on the mound of the ten thousand dead. The poem ends with the old man's pointed question: Minister Song would not buy glory with war; Minister Yang Guozhong would — ask the broken-armed man which policy was right. [Structure and Thought] The poem is a framed narrative: the poet's question opens it, the old man's long speech is the body, and the poet's closing address to the reader, with the two ministers, seals the argument. [Key Technique] Bai Juyi's art is the art of the plain voice: the old man speaks in simple, homespun lines, and the horror accumulates through details — the fifth month, the hot river, two or three dead of ten, the night-time smashing of the arm, the sixty years of pain. The satire is never shouted; the old man's matter-of-fact 'I never regret' is more damning than any denunciation. [Emotional Tone] Grief-stricken and indignant beneath a surface of plain speech: the poem is a protest against militarism and conscription, and a memorial to the common man who mutilated himself to live.
【白话串讲】 白居易写《新丰折臂翁》:“新丰老翁八十八,头鬓眉须皆似雪”——“左臂凭肩右臂折”。问他手臂怎么折的,他说当年征兵,他“夜深不敢使人知,偷将大石捶折臂”——自己砸断手臂逃避兵役。“此臂折来六十年,一肢虽废一身全”——他躲过了战争,却躲不过自己的悲伤——“君不闻开元宰相宋开府,不赏边功防黩武”。 【意象与手法】 此诗是白居易《新乐府》五十首之一,借新丰折臂翁自折其臂以避兵役的故事,讽刺穷兵黩武的征战,是白居易讽喻诗中最著名的叙事诗之一。全诗以「问翁」领起,引出老翁的自述:从「生逢圣代无征战」的太平,写到「天宝大征兵」的兵役;从「户有三丁点一丁」的征兵,写到「五月万里云南行」的远征;从「大军徒涉水如汤」的艰险,写到「千万人行无一回」的惨状;从「偷将大石搥折臂」的自残,写到「此臂折来六十年」的后半生;最后以「君不闻」的对比作结——开元宰相宋璟「不赏边功防黩武」,天宝宰相杨国忠「欲求恩幸立边功」,点明讽喻的主旨。全诗以老翁的自述写战争的残酷,以「折臂」的悲剧写反战的主题,是白居易「一吟悲一事」的典范。 【情感与主旨】 此诗约作于唐宪宗元和四年(809),是白居易《新乐府》五十首之一。白居易在《新乐府》自序中言此诗「戒边功也」——警戒穷兵黩武、邀功边陲的行为。此诗借一个八十八岁的新丰折臂翁之口,讲述其六十年前(天宝年间)为避征讨云南的兵役,夜半自折手臂的惨剧:他二十四岁被点入兵册,深知征云南「千万人行无一回」的惨状,遂「偷将大石搥折臂」,从此「张弓簸旗俱不堪」「从兹始免征云南」;此后六十年,虽「骨碎筋伤」「风雨阴寒夜,直到天明痛不眠」,却「终不悔」——因为「一肢虽废一身全」,比起那些死在云南的征人,他至少保全了性命。全诗以「折臂」的荒诞悲剧写战争的残酷:一个好好的青年,宁愿自折手臂、终身残废,也不愿去当兵——这不是个人的懦弱,而是战争的惨状逼出来的选择。诗中「大军徒涉水如汤,未过十人二三死」「村南村北哭声哀,儿别爷娘夫别妻」「千万人行无一回」写战争的惨状,「君不闻开元宰相宋开府,不赏边功防黩武」以开元宰相宋璟的「不赏边功」与天宝宰相杨国忠的「欲求恩幸立边功」对比,点明「戒边功」的主旨。此诗是白居易讽喻诗中最沉痛的反战名篇,也是理解中唐边患与白居易「戒边功」主张的核心作品。 【名句点睛】 常考“夜深不敢使人知,偷将大石捶折臂”写自残避役的惨剧;“千万人行无一回”写远征之惨,是讽喻的高潮。
Background
This poem belongs to Bai Juyi's New Music Bureau (Xin Yuefu) series, his great program of social criticism written in the early 810s and announced in his 'Letter to Yuan Zhen.' Its occasion is the conscription of the Tianbao era (742–756) for the repeated campaigns against Nanzhao in Yunnan, ordered under the aegis of the chief minister Yang Guozhong; tens of thousands of troops perished from miasma and heat in the Lu River valley. Bai Juyi sets against Yang Guozhong the earlier minister Song Jing, who under Kaiyuan had refused to reward frontier adventure precisely to prevent exactly this kind of militarism. The poem is one of the most famous of the New Music Bureau pieces, prized as much for its narrative power as for its political courage.
此诗约作于唐宪宗元和四年(809),是白居易《新乐府》五十首之一。白居易在《新乐府》自序中言此诗「戒边功也」——警戒穷兵黩武、邀功边陲的行为。此诗以八十八岁新丰(今陕西临潼东北)老翁的自述,回顾天宝年间征讨南诏(云南)的历史:天宝年间,唐玄宗好大喜功,云南太守张虔陀、剑南节度使鲜于仲通等多次攻伐南诏,宰相杨国忠为邀功请赏,更于天宝十载(751)至十三载(754)三次大举征讨南诏,征兵数十万,多葬身于泸水(金沙江)瘴疠之地,「士卒死者几二十万」。白居易以「折臂翁」的故事写这段历史:老翁二十四岁被点入兵册,深知征云南「千万人行无一回」的惨状,遂夜半「偷将大石搥折臂」,自残以避兵役;六十年后,他虽终身残废、风雨之夜痛不能眠,却「终不悔」——「一肢虽废一身全」,比起那些死在泸水边的征人,他保全了性命。诗中「大军徒涉水如汤,未过十人二三死」写泸水之险与士卒之死,「村南村北哭声哀,儿别爷娘夫别妻」写征役的惨状,「千万人行无一回」写征南诏的惨烈;末段以「开元宰相宋开府(宋璟),不赏边功防黩武」与「天宝宰相杨国忠,欲求恩幸立边功」对比——宋璟为相时不赏边功、防穷兵黩武,杨国忠却为求恩幸而发动征南诏之战,造成生民涂炭。白居易以此讽喻当朝(元和年间藩镇割据、边患频仍),警戒「戒边功」。此诗是白居易反战讽喻的巅峰,也是理解唐代征南诏历史与白居易「戒边功」主张的核心作品。
Art
The poem's art is the art of the ballad voice raised to social criticism. The narrative is carried entirely by the old man's speech, which moves with the naturalness of a man telling his story to a stranger at an inn: the peaceful youth, the sudden levy, the horror stories of the Lu River, the desperate night of self-mutilation, the sixty years of pain, and the refusal to regret. Bai Juyi's famous plainness is here a strategic choice: the language of the common man gives the poem its authority, and the accumulation of concrete facts — the fifth month, the hot water like soup, two or three dead of ten, the stone in the night — makes the indictment of the war unanswerable. The close, with the two ministers and the rhetorical question, lifts the personal story into national history without ever leaving the old man's voice.
此诗的艺术特色可从四个层面解析。其一,以故事写讽喻的构思。全诗以一个八十八岁折臂老翁的自述,讲述其六十年前为避兵役自折手臂的故事——不直接议论战争,而以「折臂」的荒诞悲剧写战争的残酷,故事性强、感染力深,是白居易「新乐府」「以事讽喻」的典范。其二,倒叙的结构。全诗以「问翁臂折来几年,兼问致折何因缘」领起,以设问引出老翁的自述,从「生逢圣代无征战」的太平,到「天宝大征兵」的兵役,到「偷将大石搥折臂」的自残,到「此臂折来六十年」的后半生,层层倒叙、引人入胜。其三,对比的运用。全诗多处运用对比:太平与征战(圣代无征战与天宝大征兵)、征人的死与折臂翁的生(千万人行无一回与一肢虽废一身全)、开元与天宝(宋璟不赏边功与杨国忠欲求恩幸),以对比写战争的残酷与讽喻的主旨。其四,以老人言收束的深意。末段「老人言,君听取」以老人之言作结,以「君不闻开元宰相宋开府,不赏边功防黩武」「又不闻天宝宰相杨国忠,欲求恩幸立边功」的对比,点明「戒边功」的主旨——「请问新丰折臂翁」的反问,让读者在老人的故事中体会战争的残酷与「戒边功」的警示。四重手法层层推进,使此诗成为白居易讽喻诗中最著名的反战名篇。
Allusions
The 'Pear Garden' (Liyuan) was the imperial music academy founded by Emperor Xuanzong, so named because the musicians practiced in a pear garden; to have heard only its songs is to have known only the peace of the early Tianbao years. The 'Lu River' is the river in Yunnan whose miasmal heat destroyed the expeditionary armies; the 'mound of ten thousand dead' refers to the mass graves of the soldiers who perished there. Song Jing and Yang Guozhong are historical ministers: Song, the upright Kaiyuan chancellor who refused to reward a frontier victory to discourage military adventurism, and Yang, the Tianbao favorite whose pursuit of frontier glory through war against Nanzhao cost the lives of tens of thousands. 'The Minister is like a father' — the poem's final question asks the reader to weigh these two policies by the fate of the broken-armed man.
此诗的意象与典故深植于乐府与历史传统。「新丰折臂翁」的「新丰」是京畿之地(今陕西临潼东北),令人想到汉高祖为慰太上皇乡思而建新丰的典故(事见《史记》);「折臂翁」的自残避役,令人想到《左传》「昔者吾先君献公……骊姬之乱」中自残避难的先例与历代「自残避役」的记载。「生逢圣代无征战」写开元盛世的太平,「圣代」写圣明之世,令人想到杜甫「忆昔开元全盛日」写开元盛世的繁华;「惯听棃园歌管声」写其听惯梨园(玄宗设梨园教坊)的歌舞,「不识旗枪与弓箭」写其不识兵戈,写太平年间的和平生活。「无何天宝大征兵,户有三丁点一丁」写天宝年间的征兵——「天宝」是玄宗年号,「户有三丁点一丁」写按户抽丁的征兵制,令人想到杜甫《兵车行》「县官急索租,租税从何出」写征役与《石壕吏》写抓丁的惨状;「五月万里云南行」写远征云南——云南即南诏,天宝年间唐与南诏多次交战(天宝十载鲜于仲通征南诏大败,十三载李宓征南诏全军覆没),「五月万里」写远征之远与时节之恶(五月正是南方瘴疠最盛之时)。「闻道云南有泸水,椒花落时瘴烟起」写泸水(金沙江)之险——泸水多瘴疠,古人视为畏途(《后汉书》「泸水出牦牛徼外」),「椒花落时」写瘴烟最盛之时(花椒花落时瘴气最重);「大军徒涉水如汤,未过十人二三死」写徒涉泸水之惨——水热如汤(泸水有温泉),士卒涉水多死。「村南村北哭声哀,儿别爷娘夫别妻」写征役的惨状,令人想到《诗经》「昔我往矣,杨柳依依」的征人离别与杜甫「牵衣顿足拦道哭,哭声直上干云霄」的送别惨状;「千万人行无一回」写征南诏之惨烈(史载天宝征南诏死者近二十万)。「偷将大石搥折臂」写自残避役——「偷将」写其夜半偷偷行事,「搥折臂」写其自折手臂,令人想到「自残避役」的历史记载;「张弓簸旗俱不堪,从兹始免征云南」写其残废后免于征役。「此臂折来六十年」写六十年光阴,「一肢虽废一身全」写其以残废保全性命,令人想到《庄子》「支离疏」的寓言(支离疏形体残废,反得终其天年);「至今风雨阴寒夜,直到天明痛不眠」写其残臂的旧伤——风雨阴寒之夜疼痛难忍,写其终生的痛苦。「万人冢上哭呦呦」写征人死后的惨状——万人冢(南诏战场上的万人坑),「哭呦呦」写孤鬼的啼哭。「君不闻开元宰相宋开府,不赏边功防黩武」用宋璟之典——宋璟开元年间为相,执掌国政时「不赏边功」,防止穷兵黩武(事见《新唐书·宋璟传》);「又不闻天宝宰相杨国忠,欲求恩幸立边功」用杨国忠之典——杨国忠天宝年间为相,为求恩宠而发动征南诏之战(事见《资治通鉴》),「欲求恩幸立边功」写其为邀功而开边衅,与宋璟的「不赏边功」形成对比。全诗化用《诗经》《左传》《庄子》与唐史的传统,以故事写反战、以对比写讽喻,正是白居易「新乐府」讽喻的本领。
Commentary
This poem is one of the masterpieces of Bai Juyi's New Music Bureau series and one of the most powerful anti-war poems in the language. Its famous device — the old man who mutilated himself to escape conscription and counts it a blessing — has been admired for a millennium as the perfect fusion of pathos and satire. Critics note how the poem refuses every easy consolation: the old man is alive but crippled, glad but in daily pain, and his 'never regret' is at once heartbreaking and a damning commentary on the war that made self-mutilation rational.
此诗历来被推为白居易《新乐府》中最著名的反战名篇,也是中国文学史上写「反战」最沉痛的作品之一。历代论者对此诗评价极高:清人沈德潜评此诗「以折臂之痛,写征戍之惨,字字血泪」,近人更指出此诗借折臂翁的自述,写出了天宝年间征南诏的惨烈历史,是白居易「戒边功」主张的文学呈现。在文学史上,此诗的特殊价值在于:它以「自折手臂避兵役」的荒诞悲剧,写出了战争的残酷——一个好好的青年,宁愿自残终身、忍受六十年病痛,也不愿去当兵,这不是个人的懦弱,而是战争惨状逼出来的选择;而那「千万人行无一回」的征南诏史实,「村南村北哭声哀」的送别惨状,更写尽了穷兵黩武的罪恶。诗中「大军徒涉水如汤,未过十人二三死」「千万人行无一回」诸句写战争的惨状,「君不闻开元宰相宋开府,不赏边功防黩武」「又不闻天宝宰相杨国忠,欲求恩幸立边功」以两相对比点明「戒边功」的主旨,都是千古名句。此诗与杜甫《兵车行》《石壕吏》同为反战名篇,但杜甫写「送行」的惨状(「牵衣顿足拦道哭」),白居易写「避役」的悲剧(「偷将大石搥折臂」),角度不同而反战的精神相通。对于今日读者,此诗是理解唐代征南诏历史与白居易反战精神的窗口,也是感受中国文学「反战」传统的典范——那自折手臂的老人、啼哭呦呦的万人冢,穿越千年,仍在为所有战争中的小民发声。
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村南村北哭声哀,儿别爷娘夫别妻。
North of the village and south, the wailing was mournful — sons parting from fathers, husbands from wives.
村南村北哭声悲哀,儿别爷娘、夫别妻子。
South and north of the village, the cries are bitter: sons part from parents, husbands from wives.
这两句是写征役惨状的名句,也是千古名句,以「哭声哀」「儿别爷娘夫别妻」写征役造成的生离死别,字字血泪。「村南村北哭声哀」写哭声之遍——村南村北,到处都是悲哀的哭声,「村南村北」写哭声的弥漫——不是一家一户的哭声,而是整个村庄、整个乡里的哭声,「哭声哀」写哭声的悲哀,那哀声四起,正是征兵令下后无数家庭生离死别的写照;「儿别爷娘夫别妻」写离别之惨——儿子告别爷娘,丈夫告别妻子,「儿别爷娘」写亲子之别,「夫别妻」写夫妻之别,两句写尽征兵造成的家庭破碎——被征者此去「千万人行无一回」,这离别便是永别。这两句的深意在于:它没有写战场上的厮杀,而是写出发前的离别——正是这「村南村北」的哭声、「儿别爷娘夫别妻」的惨别,写出了战争对普通百姓最直接的伤害:不是战士的牺牲,而是无数家庭的破碎;而那「哭声哀」的村庄,正是「千万人行无一回」的前奏。以「哭声」写惨状、以「别」写永别,正是白居易「以民为本」的本领,也让这两句成为写征役惨状的名句,令人想到杜甫「牵衣顿足拦道哭,哭声直上干云霄」。
These two lines are the famous couplet on the conscription's tragedy, also an immortal line, using bitter weeping and sons parting from parents, husbands from wives to write life-parting and death-separation, every character blood and tears. South and north of the village, the cries are bitter writes the weeping's spread - south and north of the village, everywhere bitter weeping; south and north writes the crying's diffusion - not one household's, but the whole village's, the whole township's; bitter writes the cries' grief, lament rising on all sides, precisely the portrait of countless families torn apart after the conscription order. Sons part from parents, husbands from wives writes the parting's tragedy - sons taking leave of father and mother, husbands of wives; son-parents the parent-child parting, husband-wife the spousal parting; the two lines exhaust the family wreckage of conscription - the conscripted going ten thousand men, not one returns, and this parting is forever. The lines' deep meaning: it does not write battlefield slaughter but the parting before departure - precisely these village-wide cries, these tragic partings, writing the war's most direct injury to common people: not the soldiers' sacrifice, but the wreckage of countless families; and the village of bitter weeping is the prelude to ten thousand men, not one returning. Using weeping to write the tragedy, parting to write the forever farewell - precisely Bai Juyi's people-rooted craft, making these lines the famous couplet on conscription, recalling Du Fu's clutching clothes, stamping feet, blocking the road, cries straight up to the clouds.
此臂折来六十年,一肢虽废一身全。
This arm has been broken now for sixty years — one limb is useless, but the whole body is whole.
这臂折断六十年,一肢虽废但一身保全。
This arm has been broken sixty years; though one limb is useless, the whole body is spared.
这两句是写折臂翁命运的转折之笔,也是千古名句,以「一肢虽废一身全」写其以残废保全性命的惨剧,意味深长。「此臂折来六十年」写折臂之久——这手臂折断已经六十年了,「六十年」写其残废之久——从二十四岁自折手臂,到八十八岁,整整六十年,那残臂伴了他一生;「一肢虽废一身全」写其选择的结果——一条手臂虽废了,但一身性命保全了,「一肢」对「一身」、「虽废」对「全」,写尽其中的惨痛与庆幸——惨痛的是终身残废,庆幸的是保全了性命。这两句的深意在于:它以「折臂」的悲剧写出了战争的残酷——一个青年宁愿自残终身,也不愿去当兵,这本身就是对战争的控诉;而那「一肢虽废一身全」的「庆幸」,更是最深的悲哀——在「千万人行无一回」的战争中,保全性命竟然要靠自残来换取,这是何等的惨剧。这两句既是老翁对自己一生的总结,也是对战争的无声控诉——「一肢虽废」是他主动的选择,「一身全」是他唯一的安慰,而那「六十年」的残废与病痛,正是战争强加给他的一生。以「一肢」对「一身」、以「废」写「全」,正是白居易炼字的功力,也让这两句成为反战诗中最沉痛的名句。
These two lines are the turning stroke of the broken-arm old man's fate, also an immortal line, using though one limb is useless, the whole body is spared to write the tragedy of preserving life through maiming, meaning deep. This arm has been broken sixty years writes the duration of the break - this arm broken already sixty years; sixty years the duration of the maiming - from maiming himself at twenty-four to eighty-eight, a full sixty years, the broken arm his companion all his life. Though one limb is useless, the whole body is spared writes the choice's result - one arm useless, yet life preserved; one limb against one body, though useless against spared, exhausting the pain and relief within: pain of lifelong maiming, relief of life preserved. The lines' deep meaning: using the broken arm's tragedy to write the war's cruelty - a young man preferring to maim himself for life rather than serve; this itself is the accusation against war. And the relief of though one limb is useless, the whole body is spared is the deepest grief - in a war of ten thousand men, not one returning, preserving life must be bought through self-maiming; what tragedy that is. These two lines are at once the old man's summary of his life and the wordless accusation against war: though one limb is useless was his chosen act, the whole body spared his only comfort; and the sixty years of maiming and pain are the life the war imposed on him. One limb against one body, useless writing spared - precisely Bai Juyi's refining diction, making these lines the most painful couplet in anti-war poetry.
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Related Reading
Du Fu's 'Chariot Song' — 'the chariots rumble, the horses neigh' — is the supreme Tang outcry against the conscription; Bai Juyi's 'Old Man of Xinfeng' is the later, narrative version — the survivor's testimony of the same levy.
杜甫《兵车行》「牵衣顿足拦道哭,哭声直上干云霄」「信知生男恶,反是生女好」写征夫送行与征役的惨状,是杜甫反战诗的名篇。白居易《新丰折臂翁》则「偷将大石搥折臂」「一肢虽废一身全」,写老翁自残避役的悲剧,是白居易反战诗的名篇。同为反战,杜甫写「送行」的惨状(牵衣顿足拦道哭),白居易写「避役」的悲剧(偷将大石搥折臂);一写「生男恶」的民怨,一写「戒边功」的讽喻。两诗对读,可见盛唐与中唐反战诗的两种笔法,也可见「反战」精神在唐诗中的传承——杜甫的沉痛与白居易的讽喻,都是对穷兵黩武的控诉。
石壕吏 The Officer of Shihao 杜甫 · 同为征役之苦,一写老妪一写折臂翁 Both are the poems of the conscription's cruelty — the officer seizing the old, the levy driving the young to Yunnan.Du Fu's 'Officer of Shihao' presses the old woman into service by night; Bai Juyi's 'Old Man of Xinfeng' tells how the young were driven to the miasma of Yunnan. Both are the pity of the conscription, one in the war's present, one in its memory.
杜甫《石壕吏》「老妪力虽衰,请从吏夜归」「天明登前途,独与老翁别」写老妪自请服役的悲剧,是杜甫「三吏三别」中写征役的名篇。白居易《新丰折臂翁》则「偷将大石搥折臂」「一肢虽废一身全」,写折臂翁自残避役的悲剧,是白居易讽喻诗中写征役的名篇。同为写征役之苦,杜甫写老妪「自请从吏」的牺牲(石壕吏),白居易写折臂翁「自折手臂」的避役(新丰折臂翁);一以老妪的牺牲写征役的残酷,一以自残的悲剧写征役的惨状。两诗对读,可见杜甫与白居易写征役的不同角度,也可见「以民为本」精神在两位诗人笔下的相通。
长恨歌 The Song of Everlasting Sorrow 白居易 · 同为白居易写天宝,一写爱情一写兵祸 Both are Bai Juyi's long narrative poems — the song of the imperial romance, the tale of the broken arm.Bai Juyi's 'Song of Everlasting Sorrow' narrates the romance of the emperor and his beloved; 'The Old Man of Xinfeng' narrates the ordinary man's survival of the war. The two show the range of Bai Juyi's narrative art — the grand tragedy and the plain testimony.
《长恨歌》「汉皇重色思倾国」写唐玄宗与杨贵妃的爱情悲剧,以「渔阳鼙鼓动地来」写安史之乱的爆发,是白居易写天宝年间的鸿篇。此诗《新丰折臂翁》则「无何天宝大征兵,户有三丁点一丁」,写天宝年间征南诏的兵祸,以折臂翁的悲剧讽喻「戒边功」,是白居易写天宝年间的讽喻名篇。同为白居易写天宝年间,一写「重色」引发的爱情悲剧(长恨歌),一写「黩武」造成的征役惨剧(新丰折臂翁);一写杨贵妃的爱情,一写折臂翁的悲剧。两诗对读,可见白居易对天宝盛世的全面反思——那盛世的背后,既有爱情的悲剧,也有兵祸的惨状。