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时运

Shi Yun (The Course of the Seasons)

陶渊明

Tao Yuanming

迈迈时运,穆穆良朝。
袭我春服,薄言东郊。
山涤余霭,宇暧微霄。
有风自南,翼彼新苗。
洋洋平泽,乃漱乃濯。
邈邈遐景,载欣载瞩。
称心而言,人亦易足。
挥兹一觞,陶然自乐。
延目中流,悠想清沂。
童冠齐业,闲咏以归。
我爱其静,寤寐交挥。
但恨殊世,邈不可追。
斯晨斯夕,言息其庐。
花药分列,林竹翳如。
清琴横床,浊酒半壶。
黄唐莫逮,慨独在余。

The course of the seasons moves on, and a noble morning is at hand.
I put on my spring clothes and wester out to the eastern suburb.
The hills wash off their last wreaths of cloud, In the sky a faint thread of mist.
A wind comes from the south, and cradles the new shoots like wings.

The level marshes stretch wide, and there I rinse my mouth and wash my hands.
Surprising vistas lie far off, and I look and am content.
Speak what is in your heart — a man is easily satisfied.
I raise this one cup of wine and am glad past words.

I lengthen my eyes to the midstream, and think far off of the clear Yi river.
The boys and the caps are done for the day, and idly we sing our way home.
I love that quiet; waking and sleeping it holds me entirely.
Only I regret that those are a different age, untouchably far away.

At dawn and at dusk I rest beneath my eaves.
Flowers and herbs stand in their rows, the woodland and bamboo grow shady.
An unstrung qin lies across the bed, half a pot of pale wine.
The golden age of Huang and Tang is beyond my reach, and the lone sigh is mine alone.
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Meaning

Tao Yuanming's 'Shi Yun' records a spring outing to the eastern outskirts in four four-character stanzas: the morning, the wind warming the new shoots, the bathing and drinking by the marsh, the boys singing homeward from the Yi river, and finally the evening at home with a half-full cup. Joy is genuine but is immediately set beside a wish that the peaceful age of the ancient sage-kings could be recovered, so the poem moves from outward delight to a quiet, solitary regret that no amount of scenery can answer.

迈迈时运,穆穆良朝。袭我春服,薄言东郊。山涤余霭,宇暧微霄。有风自南,翼彼新苗。洋洋平泽,乃漱乃濯。邈邈遐景,载欣载瞩。称心而言,人亦易足。挥兹一觞,陶然自乐。延目中流,悠想清沂。童冠齐业,闲咏以归。我爱其静,寤寐交挥。但恨殊世,邈不可追。斯晨斯夕,言息其庐。花药分列,林竹翳如。清琴横床,浊酒半壶。黄唐莫逮,慨独在余。

Appreciation

[Plain Paraphrase] In four stanzas he describes a spring excursion — putting on spring clothes, walking to the east suburb, bathing at the marsh, singing home with the young, and returning to his cottage to sit with a half-empty pot. [Structure] The poem is built on paired antitheses: mountain and sky above, water and earth below; youth and the distant age of sages; the company of the outing and the solitary poet at the close. [Imagery] Two images dominate. The new shoots warmed by a southern wind carry the promise of the season, while the clear river of the third stanza carries the golden age: the same water, present and unattainable. [Language] Almost every word is a common noun or verb — hill, cloud, wind,苗, marsh, wine, qin — and the effects come from placing them rather than decorating them. The 'lone sigh' at the end is not a grief in the ordinary sense but the price of a sensibility that cannot help comparing its own age with an imagined better one.

【白话串讲】 陶渊明写《时运》:“迈迈时运,穆穆良朝”——“袭我春服,薄言东郊”——“山涤余霭,宇暧微霄”——“有风自南,翼彼新苗”——他写时运——有风自南,翼彼新苗。 【意象与手法】 “迈迈时运、穆穆良朝”写迈迈时运;“袭我春服、薄言东郊”写袭我春服;“山涤余霭、宇暧微霄”写山涤余霭;“洋洋平泽、乃漱乃濯”写洋洋平泽;结以“清琴横床,浊酒半壶。黄唐莫逮,慨独在余”写慨独在余。旷达超逸。 【情感与主旨】 陶渊明写田园之作,写春游东郊、有风自南翼彼新苗的田园之乐,是陶渊明田园诗中的名篇。 【名句点睛】 常考“迈迈时运,穆穆良朝”写时运良朝;“有风自南,翼彼新苗”写春郊新苗。

Background

Tao Yuanming (c. 365–427) lived the last decades of the Eastern Jin as a partly retired landowner who had twice abandoned office to return to his fields. 'Shi Yun' is traditionally dated to about 407, when he was away from home on official or traveling business and wrote of returning to a settled life in the south. The poem echoes the Confucian classic 'The Analects', in which the sage Confucius and his companions bathe in a river and sing their way home in the spring, and it is often read as Tao's statement that the retirement he chose was a moral admission rather than an escape.

《时运》为东晋诗人陶渊明所作诗。陶渊明(约365—427),一名潜,字元亮,私谥靖节,浔阳柴桑(今江西九江)人,东晋诗人,田园诗派的开创者。此诗写田园写景,为春游之作。诗中「迈迈时运,穆穆良朝」写迈迈时运,穆穆良朝;「袭我春服,薄言东郊」写袭我春服,薄言东郊;「山涤余霭,宇暧微霄」写山涤余霭,宇暧微霄;「洋洋平泽,乃漱乃濯」写洋洋平泽,乃漱乃濯;「清琴横床,浊酒半壶。黄唐莫逮,慨独在余」写清琴横床,浊酒半壶,黄唐莫逮,慨独在余。陶渊明此诗以田园写景、慨独在余写其田园之情,旷达超逸,是陶渊明诗中的名篇。此篇《时运》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《时运》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。

Art

The poem's major device is the nearly invisible quotation: the line about bathing and the boys singing home reworks an episode from the 'Analects' without naming it, so that literary memory and lived experience appear to be the same event. Its four-character metre, inherited from the earliest Book of Odes, gives the verse an unusually slow, public,仪式 rhythm, and Tao keeps the vocabulary level so the effect is of speech rather than song. The structural pivot is the third stanza: after two stanzas of outward activity the poet looks inward, and the 'boys and caps... singing home' become a figure for the simple human good he has already attained, which makes the final regret of a lost golden age intelligible as gratitude rather than complaint.

此诗艺术上以「旷达超逸、以景写情」见长。全诗共四章三十二句,由迈迈时运而山涤余霭而洋洋平泽。起「迈迈时运,穆穆良朝」写迈迈时运:迈迈时运,穆穆良朝;「袭我春服,薄言东郊」写袭我春服:袭我春服,薄言东郊;「山涤余霭,宇暧微霄」写山涤余霭:山涤余霭,宇暧微霄;「洋洋平泽,乃漱乃濯」写洋洋平泽:洋洋平泽,乃漱乃濯;结「清琴横床,浊酒半壶。黄唐莫逮,慨独在余」写慨独在余:清琴横床,浊酒半壶,黄唐莫逮,慨独在余。全诗以景写情,由迈迈时运而慨独在余,旷达超逸,是陶渊明诗中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。

Allusions

Two classical references carry the poem. 'Qing Yi' (清沂, the clear Yi river) recalls the passage in the 'Analects' where Confucius says, 'I wish I could make merited men wash their mind in the Yi river,' linking bathing to moral cleansing. 'Huang Tang' — the golden age of the yellow emperor Xuanyuan and King Tang of Shang — is the standard shorthand for an ideal past of upright government, and 'mo dai' (莫逮, cannot be reached) states that the age is gone rather than that the poet wishes to live in it. 'Tong guan qi ye' (童冠齐业, the boys and their caps having completed their studies) borrows the Confucian scene of the disciples gathered under the myrtle tree, and here supplies the serenity of ordinary life against which the poet's sigh registers.

诗中「迈迈时运穆穆良朝」「袭我春服薄言东郊」「山涤余霭宇暧微霄」「有风自南翼彼新苗」「洋洋平泽乃漱乃濯」「邈邈遐景载欣载瞩」「称心而言人亦易足」「挥兹一觞陶然自乐」「延目中流悠想清沂」「童冠齐业闲咏以归」「我爱其静寤寐交挥」「但恨殊世邈不可追」「斯晨斯夕言息其庐」「花药分列林竹翳如」「清琴横床浊酒半壶」「黄唐莫逮慨独在余」等语,皆含典故故实。「迈迈时运穆穆良朝」写迈迈时运穆穆良朝;「袭我春服薄言东郊」写袭我春服薄言东郊;「山涤余霭宇暧微霄」写山涤余霭宇暧微霄;「有风自南翼彼新苗」写有风自南翼彼新苗;「洋洋平泽乃漱乃濯」写洋洋平泽乃漱乃濯;「延目中流悠想清沂」用清沂之典(沂为孔子浴乎沂之地),写延目中流悠想清沂;「童冠齐业闲咏以归」写童冠齐业闲咏以归;「我爱其静寤寐交挥」写我爱其静寤寐交挥;「但恨殊世邈不可追」写但恨殊世邈不可追;「斯晨斯夕言息其庐」写斯晨斯夕言息其庐;「花药分列林竹翳如」写花药分列林竹翳如;「清琴横床浊酒半壶」写清琴横床浊酒半壶;「黄唐莫逮慨独在余」用黄唐之典(黄唐写黄帝唐尧),写黄唐莫逮慨独在余。诗人以清沂、黄唐等典入诗,不着痕迹,而把田园写景之情写得真切可感,是善于熔铸典故的体现。

Commentary

Commentators have long disputed whether the closing sigh is ambitious or humble. Su Zhe thought it expressed the frustration of a man who cannot doze his way back to the age of Fang and Hua; the-modern reader more often hears a quiet admission that imagining a perfect age is itself a form of happiness. The poem is valued chiefly as evidence of the range of Tao's style — where 'Returning to Field Life' is dense with agrarian detail, 'Shi Yun' is airy, almost ceremonial, and shows that his simplicity could be raised without effort into grandeur.

这首《时运》,是陶渊明写田园写景之作,写迈迈时运、山涤余霭、洋洋平泽、陶然自乐、慨独在余之情,旷达超逸。起「迈迈时运,穆穆良朝」——迈迈时运,穆穆良朝。写迈迈时运:迈迈时运、穆穆良朝——时运、良朝;「袭我春服,薄言东郊」——袭我春服,薄言东郊。写袭我春服:袭我春服、薄言东郊——春服、东郊;「山涤余霭,宇暧微霄」——山涤余霭,宇暧微霄。写山涤余霭:山涤余霭、宇暧微霄——涤余霭、暧微霄;「洋洋平泽,乃漱乃濯」——洋洋平泽,乃漱乃濯。写洋洋平泽:洋洋平泽、乃漱乃濯——平泽、漱濯;「清琴横床,浊酒半壶。黄唐莫逮,慨独在余」——清琴横床,浊酒半壶,黄唐莫逮(用黄唐之典),慨独在余。写慨独在余:清琴横床、浊酒半壶、黄唐莫逮、慨独在余——琴床酒壶、黄唐莫逮、慨独在余。这「黄唐莫逮,慨独在余」,是全诗之结:以慨独在余写其田园。全诗旷达超逸,以景写情,正是陶渊明诗中的名篇。综观全诗,情真、景切、理深,三者浑融无迹,故能于短短数语之中寄无限深意,令人百读不厌。其含蓄蕴藉之处,正是中国古典诗歌以少总多、言有尽而意无穷的美学精神的生动体现。

Prosody

Form Shi (four-character ancient verse)诗(四言古诗)
Rhyme Four stanzas of eight four-character lines. The rhyme scheme changes with each stanza: chao/jiao/xiao/miao in Stanza I (morning, suburb, mist, shoots); zhuo/zhu/zu/le in Stanza II (to rinse, to look, enough, to rejoice); yi/gui/hui/zhui in Stanza III (the Yi river, to return, to stir, to follow); and lu/ru/hu/yu in Stanza IV (my cottage, shady, pot, mine). The scheme is thus a chain of short, self-contained quatrains rather than one continuing run of rhyme.此诗为四言古诗,共四章三十二句。押韵:「朝」「郊」「霄」「苗」押萧部韵;「濯」「瞩」「足」「乐」押屋部韵;「沂」「归」「挥」「追」押微支部韵;「庐」「如」「壶」「余」押鱼部韵。诗体依四言古诗而定,句式整齐,音节随情起伏,正与写田园写景的旷达超逸相称,也见其以四言写田园的古雅。
Tone pattern Four-character lines are cut into two equal halves of two syllables each, so the default cadence is a slow trochaic march: 'MAI— MAI— shi— yun'. Because there are no Ottawa fixed tones, the poem is governed by syntax and by the natural stress of the words; the effect is unfailingly grave, closer to chant than to song. The stanza on the wine is the loosest, since 'Hui ci yi shang, tao ran zi le' adds two syllables inside the line, and the extra beat is exactly where the gladness breaks the formal stride.句式上,「迈迈时运,穆穆良朝」写迈迈时运,音节舒缓;「山涤余霭,宇暧微霄」写山涤余霭,音节清丽;「洋洋平泽,乃漱乃濯」写洋洋平泽,音节明快;「清琴横床,浊酒半壶」写清琴横床,音节闲适;结「黄唐莫逮,慨独在余」写慨独在余,音节悠长。全诗音节随情起伏,由舒缓而清丽、由明快而闲适、由闲适而悠长,正合四言「古雅」之妙,读来如田园写景、慨独在余之音,旷达而动人。
Reading note Choosing four-character verse is itself a statement: the form belongs to the 'Book of Odes' and the earliest Mao-style verse, and by adopting it Tao deliberately places a spring outing in the company of the high archaic tradition. The result is a poem that sounds older than its subject, which is why the final mention of the ancient golden age arrives without jarring. When reading aloud, the even, unhurried beat is essential — haste would destroy the composure the entire poem is trying to describe.此诗为四言古诗,是陶渊明写田园写景之作,也是其诗中的名篇。全诗的艺术特色在于「旷达超逸、以景写情」:「迈迈时运,穆穆良朝」写迈迈时运、「山涤余霭,宇暧微霄」写山涤余霭、「洋洋平泽,乃漱乃濯」写洋洋平泽、「清琴横床,浊酒半壶」写清琴横床、「黄唐莫逮,慨独在余」写慨独在余。全诗旷达超逸,以景写情。尤为精妙者,是「延目中流,悠想清沂」用清沂之典;而「黄唐莫逮,慨独在余」用黄唐之典,正是陶渊明诗「旷达超逸」的典范,为历代选本所常收。《时运》一诗之所以读来声情并茂,正在于诗人以声韵配合情思、以节奏烘托意境,音节之长短、平仄之起伏,皆与诗意相为表里,此亦可见中国古典诗歌声律之美与匠心之工。

Line by line

迈迈时运,穆穆良朝。

The course of the seasons moves on, and a noble morning is at hand.

迈迈时运,穆穆良朝。

Time rolls on and on; serene and fair is this morning.

首二句写迈迈时运,起笔即见其景。「迈迈时运」写迈迈时运,「迈迈」写迈迈、「时运」写时运;「穆穆良朝」写穆穆良朝,「穆穆」写穆穆、「良朝」写良朝。两句一写迈迈时运、一写穆穆良朝,以迈迈时运写时运、以穆穆良朝写良朝,写尽迈迈时运、穆穆良朝之情。以时起兴,旷达而超逸,是「以时起兴」的妙笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。

The opening two lines write time rolling on, the scenery present from the start. Time-rolls-on-and-on writes the seasons' rolling. Serene-and-fair-is-this-morning writes the fair morning. One line for time's rolling, one for the fair morning. Starting with time, open and transcendent - the fine stroke of time bi-xing. The line exhausts deep meaning in few words, feeling and rhythm both fine, exactly the poem's finishing stroke. Hidden waves between words, winding meaning in the plain; one should savor it repeatedly to grasp its essence.

山涤余霭,宇暧微霄。

The hills wash off their last wreaths of cloud; in the sky a faint thread of mist.

山涤余霭,宇暧微霄。

Mountains washed of lingering mist; the sky dim with faint clouds.

此二句写山涤余霭,是全诗写春山之态的关键。「山涤余霭」写山涤余霭,「山涤」写山涤、「余霭」写余霭;「宇暧微霄」写宇暧微霄,「宇暧」写宇暧、「微霄」写微霄。两句一写山涤余霭、一写宇暧微霄,以山涤余霭写涤余霭、以宇暧微霄写微霄,写尽山涤余霭、宇暧微霄之情。以山写景,旷达而超逸,是「以山写景」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。

These two lines write mountains washed of mist, the key to the poem's spring-mountain state. Mountains-washed-of-lingering-mist writes the wash of mist. The-sky-dim-with-faint-clouds writes the faint clouds. One line for the mountain wash, one for the sky's dimness. Using mountain for scenery, open and transcendent - the finishing stroke of mountain-scenery. The line exhausts deep meaning in few words, feeling and rhythm both fine, exactly the poem's finishing stroke.

洋洋平泽,乃漱乃濯。

The level marshes stretch wide, and there I rinse my mouth and wash my hands.

洋洋平泽,乃漱乃濯。

The broad marsh waters, I rinse my mouth, I bathe.

此二句写洋洋平泽,是全诗写平泽之态的关键。「洋洋平泽」写洋洋平泽,「洋洋」写洋洋、「平泽」写平泽;「乃漱乃濯」写乃漱乃濯,「乃漱」写乃漱、「乃濯」写乃濯。两句一写洋洋平泽、一写乃漱乃濯,以洋洋平泽写平泽、以乃漱乃濯写漱濯,写尽洋洋平泽、乃漱乃濯之情。以水写景,旷达而超逸,是「以水写景」的点睛之笔。此句以寥寥数语写尽深意,情韵兼胜,正是全诗点睛之笔。其于字句之间暗藏波澜,于平易之中寄寓曲折,尤当反复涵泳,方能得其三昧。

These two lines write the broad marsh, the key to the poem's marsh state. The-broad-marsh-waters writes the broad marsh. I-rinse-my-mouth-I-bathe writes rinse and bathe. One line for the broad marsh, one for the rinse-bathe. Using water for scenery, open and transcendent - the finishing stroke of water-scenery. The line exhausts deep meaning in few words, feeling and rhythm both fine, exactly the poem's finishing stroke.

清琴横床,浊酒半壶。

An unstrung qin lies across the bed, and half a pot of pale wine.

清琴横床,浊酒半壶。

The clear qin lies across the bed; half a pot of cloudy wine.

此二句写清琴横床,是全诗写琴酒之态的关键。「清琴横床」写清琴横床,「清琴」写清琴、「横床」写横床;「浊酒半壶」写浊酒半壶,「浊酒」写浊酒、「半壶」写半壶。两句一写清琴横床、一写浊酒半壶,以清琴横床写琴横床、以浊酒半壶写酒半壶,写尽清琴横床、浊酒半壶之情。以琴写情,旷达而超逸,是「以琴写情」的点睛之笔。

These two lines write the clear qin across the bed, the key to the poem's qin-wine state. The-clear-qin-lies-across-the-bed writes the qin across the bed. Half-a-pot-of-cloudy-wine writes half a pot. One line for the qin across the bed, one for half a pot of wine. Using qin for feeling, open and transcendent - the finishing stroke of qin-feeling.

黄唐莫逮,慨独在余。

The golden age of Huang and Tang cannot be reached, and the lone sigh is mine alone.

黄唐莫逮,慨独在余。

The age of Huang and Tang is beyond reach; the sigh is mine alone.

结句写慨独在余,是全诗立意的落点。「黄唐莫逮」用黄唐之典写黄唐莫逮,「黄唐」写黄唐、「莫逮」写莫逮;「慨独在余」写慨独在余,「慨独」写慨独、「在余」写在余。两句一写黄唐莫逮、一写慨独在余,以黄唐莫逮写莫逮、以慨独在余写在余,写尽黄唐莫逮、慨独在余之情。以慨写情,旷达而超逸,是全诗最动人处,也是「以慨写情」的点睛之笔。

The closing line writes the sigh is mine alone, the poem's thought landing. The-age-of-Huang-and-Tang-is-beyond-reach uses the Huang-Tang allusion. The-sigh-is-mine-alone writes the lone sigh. One line for the unreachable age, one for the lone sigh. Using sigh for feeling, open and transcendent - the poem's most moving place, the finishing stroke of sigh-feeling.

Study

Word focus

时运 'Shiyun,' the course of the seasons — the turn of time in its largest sense, and the reason the poem is titled rather than left untitled. It means both 'the season' and 'one's fortune', so the opening line already lets a personal circumstance be read as a cosmic one. Tao's use of it is calm and factual; he does not demand that fortune be kind. 「时运」写迈迈时运,是写时运之态的关键。「迈迈时运」着一「时运」,写时运——着一「时运」,写迈迈时运,见其运之时。两字写尽时运之态,是「以词写运」的妙笔。「时运」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
良朝 'Liang chao,' a good, fine morning: the word chosen not for brilliance but for decency, so that the season's welcome is a matter of moral atmosphere rather than weather. In contrast with later poets who praise spring for its color, Tao's adjective does the work of a judgment, and the plainness of the phrase prepares the plainness of the life he is describing. 「良朝」写穆穆良朝,是写良朝之态的关键。「穆穆良朝」着一「良朝」,写良朝——着一「良朝」,写穆穆良朝,见其朝之良。两字写尽良朝之态,是「以词写朝」的点睛之词。「良朝」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
新苗 'Xin miao,' the new shoots: contemporary growth, barely distinguishable from the grass. The image matters because it is the only living thing in the poem that is moving forward, and it is precisely what the southern wind 'cradles' — the poet's gladness is placed in a small process of growth rather than in any sensation of his own. 「新苗」写有风自南,翼彼新苗,是写新苗之态的关键。「翼彼新苗」着一「新苗」,写新苗——着一「新苗」,写翼彼新苗,见其苗之新。两字写尽新苗之态,是「以词写苗」的点睛之词。「新苗」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。
浊酒 'Zhuo jiu,' unstrained or coarse wine: liquor left cloudy because it has been only lightly or not at all filtered. It is the drink of the poor and of the retired, and pairing it with an unstrung qin (the string broken, so the instrument cannot properly sound) makes the poet's poverty and his contentment the same condition rather than two. 「浊酒」写浊酒半壶,是写浊酒之态的关键。「浊酒半壶」着一「浊酒」,写浊酒——着一「浊酒」,写浊酒半壶,见其酒之浊。两字写尽浊酒之态,是「以词写酒」的点睛之词。「浊酒」一字之用而全篇生色,与诗中情韵相为表里,正见诗人炼字之精与匠心之独运。读者于此等处若细细体会,自能领会其于平淡之中见功力、于寻常处见神奇之妙。

Related Reading

山园小梅 Xiao Shan (Small Garden of Mount Shan) — The Plum Blossom 林逋 · 同写田园清雅、超然物外,一写疏影横斜水清浅暗香浮动月黄昏、一写清琴横床浊酒半壶,皆于田园之中见超然 Both create a miniature world of quiet beauty and then suspend it in a frame where the beholder alone is present; Lin Bu's plum is the object of admiration, Tao's wine and qin the instruments of a self-sufficient life.

Lin Bu, having renounced office to live as a recluse on Mount Shan, wrote twenty miniatures of his plum garden, of which 'Spare shadow slanting over the clear shallow water' and 'Dim fragrance drifting in the moonlit dusk' became the classic couplet. Tao's 'Shi Yun' shares his preference for an unhurried garden existence, but where Lin Bu's poems are almost entirely objective — the poet is the observer of a lovely thing — Tao's subject is the state of his own heart, and it is that interiority which allows the sigh of the distant golden age to appear. The two also differ in style: Lin Bu's versio is attended with deliberate refinement, Tao's with studied plainness.

林逋《山园小梅》「疏影横斜水清浅,暗香浮动月黄昏」,写梅之清雅、田园之趣,是宋诗咏物的绝唱;陶渊明《时运》则以「清琴横床,浊酒半壶」「山涤余霭,宇暧微霄」写琴床酒壶、山涤余霭。两诗同写田园清雅、超然物外:一写疏影横斜水清浅暗香浮动月黄昏、以梅写清雅,一写清琴横床浊酒半壶、以琴酒写田园;一为林逋之清逸、一为陶渊明之旷达,并读正可见诗写「田园清雅」的两种笔法,皆于田园之中见超然。

浣溪沙·一曲新词酒一杯 Xian Xi Sha (Tune: 'Silk-Washing Stream'): 'A Tune of New Song and a Cup of Wine' 晏殊 · 同写感怀惜时、无可奈何,一写无可奈何花落去、一写迈迈时运穆穆良朝,皆于感怀之中见惜时 Both begin from a cup of wine in a lovely place and move toward an awareness of time passing; Yan Shu's regret is for what has gone and returns in another form, Tao's for an age that can never return at all.

Yan Shu's famous little tune gives the two best-known lines of the genre: 'Sorrow for the flowers' passing seems useless, and the swallows that I thought I knew come back again.' Their logic is that loss and renewal are alternating and therefore tolerable. Tao's poem refuses that consolation: the seasons do move on, but there is no swallows' return for the golden age he names, and the sigh he leaves at the end is notduckresolved in the next stanza. Read together, the two show what Chinese poetry does with the same observation of spring — one accepting cycle, one stubbornly out-of-phase time.

晏殊《浣溪沙·一曲新词酒一杯》「无可奈何花落去,似曾相识燕归来」,写感怀惜时,是宋词小令的名篇;陶渊明《时运》则以「迈迈时运,穆穆良朝」「但恨殊世,邈不可追」写迈迈时运、邈不可追。两诗同写感怀惜时、无可奈何:一写无可奈何花落去、以花落燕归写惜时,一写迈迈时运穆穆良朝、以时运写惜时;一为晏殊之温润、一为陶渊明之旷达,并读正可见诗写「感怀惜时」的两种笔法,皆于感怀之中见惜时。