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元 Yuan · 散曲 Sanqu song

天净沙·春

Clear Sky Over the Sand: Spring

白朴

Bai Pu

写景scenery description 春景spring scenery

春山暖日和风，阑干楼阁帘栊，杨柳秋千院中。
啼莺舞燕，小桥流水飞红。

Warm sun, gentle breeze on spring hills,
Balconies, railings, curtains and windowsills.
Willows and swing in the courtyard still.
Orioles sing, swallows dance,
Bridge, flowing water, flying petals enhance.

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Meaning

The poem depicts a spring courtyard scene: distant spring hills, warm sun, gentle breeze; mid-ground railings, pavilions, curtains; foreground willows and swing; closing with singing orioles, dancing swallows, small bridge, flowing water, and fleeting red petals.

春山明丽，暖日融融，和风轻拂；阑干、楼阁、帘栊错落，杨柳依依的院落里秋千轻荡。黄莺啼鸣，燕子飞舞，小桥之下流水潺潺，片片落红随波飞逝。

Appreciation

The song uses a 'listed brocade' technique, juxtaposing twelve spring images without connectives, creating a bright and harmonious scene. The final lines blend motion with stillness, evoking joy and a hint of spring's transience.

【白话串讲】白朴写春天：春山暖日，杨柳秋千，啼莺舞燕，小桥流水飞红。同是“天净沙”，马致远写的是萧瑟的秋，白朴却把春天写得暖融融。【意象与手法】全曲纯用列锦，前三句罗列春山、暖日、和风、阑干、楼阁、帘栊、杨柳、秋千、院中等意象，如展开一幅工笔春景长卷，不施连接而层次井然。后二句「啼莺舞燕」为动物对，「小桥流水飞红」以流水飞红收束，动静结合。语言凝练，色彩明丽，体现白朴「清丽婉约」之格。【情感与主旨】白朴（1226—约1306），字太素，号兰谷，元曲四大家之一，终身不仕，浪迹山水。其〔越调·天净沙〕有春夏秋冬四首，此为其「春」。白朴经历金亡之乱，晚年隐居，其写景小令多于明丽中寓身世之感。【名句点睛】默写易错：「春山暖日和风」之「暖」勿作「缓」；「阑干楼阁帘栊」之「栊」易误作「笼」。考点：①列锦手法的运用与效果；②动静结合、远近相映的构图；③「飞红」一词的炼字之妙。

Background

Bai Pu (1226–1306), one of the Four Great Yuan Dramatists, never took office and roamed landscapes. This is his spring piece among four seasonal songs. It reflects his love for peaceful, scenic life after the fall of Jin.

白朴（1226—约1306），字太素，号兰谷，隩州（今山西河曲）人，元曲四大家之一，与关汉卿、马致远、郑光祖齐名。其父白华为金朝枢密院判官，金亡时白朴年仅八岁，随元好问避乱北迁，由元好问抚养教育，故其虽才华卓绝而终身不仕，浪迹山水，寄情词曲。白朴作〔越调·天净沙〕小令四首，分写春夏秋冬四季，此为其「春」。其一生经历金亡之乱与易代之痛，晚年隐居金陵等地，其写景小令多于明丽中寓身世之感：春日虽好，而繁华易逝；风物虽美，而故国难追。此曲以清丽的笔触写尽春日之明丽，正是白朴「以清丽之笔写沧桑之怀」的一贯作风，也是元散曲中四季写景组曲的著名作品。白朴幼经丧乱，父执元好问携其北渡，教养成人，故其虽生于金末而长于元初，对易代之痛有切身体会；晚年纵情山水诗酒，以词曲自遣，其四季小令正是此种心境的艺术结晶。此春曲写尽春光明媚，然「飞红」二字，已暗藏惜春之意，可见其于欢愉之中终不忘世事沧桑的底色。曲中春山、暖日、秋千、流水诸景，皆江南春日之实景，白朴晚年寓居金陵（今南京），此曲或即江南春色的写照，明丽之中自有一段闲适自在的意趣。

Art

The entire song employs 'listed brocade' (juxtaposition of images), piling up spring images in the first three lines like a delicate scroll painting. The last two lines add dynamic animal and water scenes, achieving balance of movement and stillness. Language is concise, colors bright, embodying Bai Pu's 'elegant and graceful' style.

全曲纯用列锦（意象并置）手法，不施连接词而意象自成画面：前三句「春山暖日和风，阑干楼阁帘栊，杨柳秋千院中」，以九组意象罗列，由远及近、由自然到人居，如展开一幅工笔春景长卷——春山暖日是远景，阑干楼阁是中景，杨柳秋千是近景，层次井然；后二句「啼莺舞燕，小桥流水飞红」忽转动态，以啼、舞两个动词写莺燕之动，以小桥、流水、飞红写春水落花之态，动静结合，使全曲由静入动，春意盎然。曲中意象皆明丽可人，暖日和风、杨柳秋千、小桥流水，无一字言喜而喜气洋溢，语言凝练、色彩明丽，体现白朴「清丽婉约」之格，是元散曲列锦体的代表作。列锦之妙，在以意象的并置代替叙述的连接，读者须以自己的联想补足意象间的空白：春山与暖日、和风并置，则春山之青翠、日光之温煦、风之轻柔自可意会；阑干与楼阁、帘栊并置，则庭院之精巧、居处之安雅如在目前。全曲无一句说春好，而春之好尽在眼前，这正是列锦体以少总多、以实写虚的艺术魅力。

Allusions

'Swing' (秋千) was a common spring game for women in Tang and Song poetry (e.g., Ouyang Xiu, Su Shi). 'Flowing water and flying red' alludes to 'flowing water and falling petals' conveying the lament of spring passing.

「秋千」为唐宋春日女子游戏之具，唐宋诗词屡以秋千写春闺春兴，如欧阳修「秋千院落重帘暮，寂寥春色知谁主」、苏轼「墙里秋千墙外道，墙外行人，墙里佳人笑」，皆以秋千写春日庭院之生活气息，此曲「杨柳秋千院中」承其意而更见明快。「小桥流水」意象源于江南水乡图式，唐宋诗词常见（如「小桥流水人家」），此处与「飞红」组合，化用「流水落花春去也」之意，于明丽中暗藏春逝之叹。「飞红」即落花，唐人韩偓「惜春连日醉昏昏，醒后衣裳见酒痕……细水浮花归别涧」一类写落花流水，为此句所本。全曲用典化于常语，不着痕迹，正见元曲以俗为雅的特点。全曲看似全用白描，实则处处有古典的影子：杨柳秋千是唐宋词中的常景，小桥流水是江南的典型图式，飞红落花是惜春的习见意象，曲家将它们重新组合，便生出新的韵味；元曲以俗为雅的精神，正在于化用古典而不露痕迹，使寻常景物皆成诗意。

Commentary

Ming critic Zhu Quan praised Bai Pu's ci as 'like a roc soaring into the sky'. Modern critics say his four 'Tianjingsha' songs 'paint with words, bright as Zhan Ziqian's Spring Outing scroll', and this spring one is especially clear and graceful.

明人朱权《太和正音谱》评白朴之词「如鹏抟九霄」，又谓其「风骨磊磈，词源滂沛」，推为元曲大家。近人论其〔天净沙〕四首「以画入曲，明丽如展子虔《春游图》」，此春曲尤见清婉。白朴此曲与马致远《天净沙·秋思》同用天净沙曲牌、同为列锦体，而一写春之明丽、一写秋之萧瑟，一暖一冷，对照鲜明，可见同一曲牌、同一手法可以表现截然不同的情调。此曲以其意象之清新、构图之精妙、语言之凝练，成为元散曲写景小令的典范之作，也体现白朴虽遭易代之痛而于山水间寻求慰藉、以清丽之笔写美好春光的艺术追求。此曲与白朴《天净沙·秋》《天净沙·冬》诸作并观，可见其以同曲牌写四季时，对意象、色调、节奏的精心调配；其清丽明快的风格，在元曲本色当行的总体面貌中别具一格，与马致远的苍凉、关汉卿的泼辣形成对照，是研究元散曲风格多样性的重要文本。其以春景写闲适之怀，尤见元人曲家于山水间安顿身心的精神取向。

Prosody

Form Yuan Sanqu (Yuediao · Tianjingsha)散曲小令（越调·天净沙）

Rhyme Wind (feng), window (long), in (zhong), red (hong) — Eastern Bell rhyme风、栊、中、红（押东钟韵）

Tone pattern Five lines all use juxtaposition; first three lines form a triplet of parallel images五句皆列锦句，前三句为鼎足对（意象并置）

Reading note Part of Bai Pu's four seasonal songs; bright, joyful, pioneering the 'listed brocade' style.〔天净沙〕为越调曲牌，小令五句，句式三、三、三、四、六（或五句长短错落），此曲作「六、六、六、四、六」式，前三句各以三组双音节名词并列，构成鼎足对，意象密而不乱；后二句转为「四、六」句式，一写莺燕之动、一写流水飞红之景，收束明快。韵押东钟韵，风、栊、中、红四韵字响亮开阔，与春日的明丽气象相谐。全曲以列锦为骨，不著一动词而春景自呈，正合元曲「以俗为雅、以意为工」的审美追求。白朴此曲与其《天净沙·秋》（孤村落日残霞，轻烟老树寒鸦）同为列锦体的名篇，一写春一写秋，同曲牌而异情调，可见白朴驾驭曲牌、变化手法的功力，亦为后世散曲写景立下典范。

Line by line

春山暖日和风

Spring hills, warm sun, gentle breeze: juxtaposition of three images, conveying mildness and brightness.

春山青翠，暖日融融，和风轻柔。

Spring hills fresh, the sun warm, the wind gentle.

起句并列三组意象，以「暖」「和」炼字写出春日的温和明丽：春山是视觉之景，暖日是触觉之光，和风是触觉之风，三者并置，色、光、风俱全，境界开阔而春意融融。三组意象不加连接词而浑然一体，正是列锦手法的妙处——以意象的并置代替叙述，让读者在联想中自行完成画面的组合，开篇即以最经济的笔墨勾勒出春日的整体氛围，为全曲定下明丽欢快的基调。

The opening sets three images side by side, crafting the gentle brightness of spring through 'warm' and 'gentle': spring hills the sight, warm sun the touch of light, gentle breeze the touch of wind, the three set together, color, light, and wind complete, the realm open and spring warm. Three images without conjunction, yet whole — the genius of listed imagery: juxtaposition replacing narrative, letting the reader complete the picture in imagination, opening with the most economical brush on spring's whole air, fixing the song's bright, cheerful tone.

阑干楼阁帘栊

Balconies, railings, curtains and windowsills: depicts human dwellings with elegance and tranquility.

栏杆、楼阁、帘窗。

Railings, pavilion towers, curtained windows.

承上写人居之境：由春山远景转入楼阁中景，阑干、楼阁、帘栊三组意象并置如画，静中见雅，透出生活的安适。三词皆是庭院建筑的组成部分，以部分代整体，见出春日庭院之精致；帘栊暗示楼中有人，阑干暗示凭栏可望，虽未写人而人的活动已在画外，为下文「秋千院中」的院中生活作了铺垫。此句由自然之景转入人居之景，画面由开阔转精微，是列锦长卷的中段。

The answering line writes the human dwelling: from the far spring hills to the mid-ground of towers, balustrades, towers, and lattice-windows set like a painting, elegance within stillness, the ease of life. The three words are parts of a courtyard's architecture, part standing for whole, showing the refinement of the spring courtyard; the lattice-windows hint someone in the tower, the balustrade a gaze from the rail, the person unwritten yet his activity beyond the painting, priming the courtyard life of 'swing in the yard' below. The line turns from natural scenery to human dwelling, the picture from open to fine, the middle stretch of the listed scroll.

杨柳秋千院中

Willows and swing in the courtyard: brings life to the scene, moving from far to near.

杨柳依依，秋千置于院中。

Willows swaying; the swing in the courtyard.

以院中杨柳秋千写春日生趣，由远及近，画面渐入人家：杨柳依依写春柳之柔美，秋千静置写庭院之安闲，一自然一人文，相映成趣。秋千本为春日女子游戏之具，虽未写人荡秋千，而秋千在院，春兴自在——读者自能想见春日庭院里秋千轻荡、笑语盈盈的场景。此句是全曲由景及人的枢纽，以物之静写人之乐，含蓄而有韵味，为后二句的动景出场蓄势。

This line writes the spring liveliness through the willows and swing of the yard, from far to near, the picture entering the home: willow branches soft and tender; the swing at rest writing the courtyard's ease, one natural one human, answering each other. The swing is the spring game of girls; though none writes the girl swinging, the swing in the yard is spring's own liveliness — the reader imagines the lightly moving swing, the laughter, in the spring courtyard. This line is the song's hinge from scenery to person, writing human joy through the thing's stillness, reserved and resonant, charging the moving scenery of the last two lines.

啼莺舞燕，小桥流水飞红。

Orioles sing, swallows dance; small bridge, flowing water, flying red petals: dynamic ending animates the still scene, forming a lively spring picture.

黄莺啼啭，燕子飞舞；小桥之下流水潺潺，片片落红随波飞逝。

Orioles warbling, swallows darting; a small bridge, flowing water, flying red petals.

末二句以动态收束，全曲由静入动，春意达到高潮：「啼」「舞」两字写莺燕之啼舞，声色并作；「小桥流水」是江南水乡的典型构图，宁静明丽；「飞红」以「飞」写落花飞舞之态，化静为动，使春景鲜活灵动。全句一动一静、一上一下（莺燕在天，流水在地），画面立体而富有生机。唯「飞红」二字于明丽中暗含春逝之叹，使全曲在欢快之外平添一丝淡淡的惜春之意，余韵轻快而绵长。

The last two lines close in motion, the song turning from still to moving, spring at its height: the words 'warbling' and 'dancing' the birds' song and flight, sound and sight together; 'a small bridge, flowing water' the typical composition of the southern water country, quiet and bright; 'flying petals' writes, through 'flying,' the falling blossoms' dance, turning still to motion, making the spring scene live. The whole line, one moving one still, one above one below (orioles and swallows in the sky, flowing water on the ground), the picture stereoscopic and alive. Only 'flying petals,' within the brightness, darkly holds the sigh of spring's passing, adding to the song's cheer a faint thread of spring-regret, the aftertone light and long.

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Word focus

暖、和 Refine the abstract spring warmth into tangible temperature and touch, one for heat, one for gentleness. 「春山暖日和风」之「暖」「和」二字，炼字写出春日温煦，一暖一和，将抽象的春意化为可感的温度与触感：暖日写阳光之温，和风写春风之柔，色光风三觉并至，春日的舒适惬意扑面而来。二字皆极寻常，而置于「春山」与「日」「风」之间，便觉春意融融、通体舒泰，是元曲以俗语写春景、于平淡中见功力的一笔，也为全曲定下明丽欢快的基调。

飞红 'Flying red' uses the verb 'fly' to depict falling petals as dynamic, making the scene vivid and lively. 「小桥流水飞红」之「飞红」，以「飞」写落花飞舞之态，化静为动，使春景鲜活灵动，余韵轻快。红本为色彩，此处借代落花；飞字赋予落花以动态——花随风舞、随水飘逝，画面立刻生动起来。飞红既写春之绚烂（红），又写春之将逝（飞落），明丽中暗含惜春之意，一词而兼两义，是全曲的炼字眼目，也是白朴「于明丽中寓身世之感」的细微注脚。