元 Yuan · 曲 Qu song
岳鄂王墓
The Tomb of the Duke of E
鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危。
南渡君臣轻社稷,中原父老望旌旗。
英雄已死嗟何及,天下中分遂不支。
莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲。
In autumn waste the stone beasts stand high.
The court that fled south treated the state as light,
While the old men of the Central Plains looked toward the banners.
The hero is dead, and one can only sigh too late;
The realm was halved, and so the balance could not hold.
Do not sing this song beside the West Lake;
The water's light and the hills' colour are more than grief can bear.
Meaning
Zhao Mengfu visited the tomb of Yue Fei, posthumously Duke of E, beside the West Lake and wrote this regulated poem. In eight lines he moves from the desolate graveyard to a historical verdict: as the Southern Song court had fled south and treated the state lightly, the people of the north still watched for the returning army. The hero is dead, and nothing can be done; the realm was divided and could no longer stand. He closes by forbidding the song at the lake, because the scenery itself is already more than grief can carry. The poem is read as restrained self-justification as much as judgement.
鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危。南渡君臣轻社稷,中原父老望旌旗。英雄已死嗟何及,天下中分遂不支。莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲。
Appreciation
【Plain Paraphrase】Grass covers the Duke of E's grave; the stone beasts stand high in the autumn waste. The court that crossed to the south held the state in cheap esteem while the fathers of the Central Plains looked toward the army's banners. The hero is already dead and the regret is useless; with the realm halved, the balance could not be kept. And so: do not sing this song by the West Lake - the water's light and the hills' colour are more than sorrow can bear.
【Structure】Four couplets, each with a fixed job - the scene, the verdict, the consequence, the restraint - so the poem contracts from the public into the private.
【Imagery】Grass, stone beasts, banners, the halved realm, water and hills: grief is always kept just outside the frame.
【白话串讲】 赵孟頫写《岳鄂王墓》:“鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危”——“南渡君臣轻社稷,中原父老望旌旗”——“英雄已死嗟何及,天下中分遂不支”——“莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲”——他凭吊岳鄂王墓——水光山色不胜悲。 【意象与手法】 “鄂王墓上草离离、秋日荒凉石兽危”写鄂王墓草;“南渡君臣轻社稷、中原父老望旌旗”写南渡君臣轻社稷;“英雄已死嗟何及、天下中分遂不支”写英雄已死嗟何及;结以“莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲”写水光山色不胜悲。慷慨悲凉。 【情感与主旨】 赵孟頫凭吊岳鄂王墓之作,写南渡君臣轻社稷与英雄已死嗟何及的悲愤,是咏史怀古的名篇。 【名句点睛】 常考“鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危”写墓草离离;“南渡君臣轻社稷,中原父老望旌旗”写南渡之耻。
Background
Zhao Mengfu (1254-1322), courtesy name Ziang, was from Wuxing (present-day Huzhou, Zhejiang) and descended from the imperial house of the Southern Song; he entered Yuan service after the conquest, a decision critics have never forgotten. He became the leading calligrapher and painter of his age, reviving the classical models of the jin and tang in what is still called the Zhao style. 'The Tomb of the Duke of E', written on a visit to Yue Fei's tomb at the foot of the West Lake hills, is among the most famous of his poems and is praised for its even, compressed verse.
《岳鄂王墓》为元代书画家、文学家赵孟頫所作诗。赵孟頫(1254—1322),字子昂,号松雪道人,吴兴(今浙江湖州)人,元代书画家、文学家。此诗写咏史怀古,为岳鄂王墓之作。诗中「鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危」写鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危;「南渡君臣轻社稷,中原父老望旌旗」写南渡君臣轻社稷,中原父老望旌旗;「英雄已死嗟何及,天下中分遂不支」写英雄已死嗟何及,天下中分遂不支;「莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲」写莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲。赵孟頫此诗以咏史怀古、水光山色不胜悲写其怀古之情,慷慨悲凉,是赵孟頫诗中的名篇。此篇《岳鄂王墓》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。此篇《岳鄂王墓》在历代选本中多被收录,其艺术价值与流传之广,正可见此诗在同类题材中的重要地位。诗人以匠心独运之笔写寻常之情事,遂使此作历千载而犹有生气,为后人所称赏不绝。
Art
The poem is a regulated verse of eight lines, and its structure is that of the memorial visit: scene, judgement, consequence, restraint. The first couplet is purely pictorial; the second supplies the historical verdict in the same four-part shape, so the court that fled answers the grave on the hill and the fathers of the north answer the stone beasts. The third moves from blame to loss, and the last couplet refuses to add a song. What is left out is the poem's art: no culprit, no date, no personal feeling - and that restraint is where the grief is put.
此诗艺术上以「慷慨悲凉、以史写情」见长。全诗共四联八句,由鄂王墓上草离离、南渡君臣轻社稷而英雄已死嗟何及、莫向西湖歌此曲。首联「鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危」写鄂王墓上草离离:鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危;颔联「南渡君臣轻社稷,中原父老望旌旗」写南渡君臣轻社稷:南渡君臣轻社稷,中原父老望旌旗;颈联「英雄已死嗟何及,天下中分遂不支」写英雄已死嗟何及:英雄已死嗟何及,天下中分遂不支;尾联「莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲」写水光山色不胜悲:莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲。全诗以史写情,由鄂王墓上草离离而水光山色不胜悲,慷慨悲凉,是赵孟頫诗中的名篇。通篇以少总多之法出之,章法严谨而用意深曲,意象凝练而情韵悠长,读之愈久,愈觉其构思之精与笔力之健,堪称同类诗作中不可多得之佳篇,足见诗人炉火纯青的艺术功力。
Allusions
The Duke of E is Yue Fei's posthumous title, granted after his rehabilitation; his death in 1142 and the subsequent treaty left the Song and Jin divided along the Huai, which is the halving of the realm in the third couplet. "Crossing to the south" refers to the court's flight south across the Yangtze in 1127 and carries the weight of that decision in a single word. "The old men of the Central Plains look toward the banners" gives the northern people's expectation of a restored frontier army, which the court never attempted. The allusions give the poem its public dimension.
诗中「鄂王墓上草离离秋日荒凉石兽危」「南渡君臣轻社稷中原父老望旌旗」「英雄已死嗟何及天下中分遂不支」「莫向西湖歌此曲水光山色不胜悲」等语,皆含典故故实。「鄂王墓上草离离秋日荒凉石兽危」写鄂王墓上草离离秋日荒凉石兽危;「南渡君臣轻社稷中原父老望旌旗」用南渡之典,写南渡君臣轻社稷中原父老望旌旗;「英雄已死嗟何及天下中分遂不支」写英雄已死嗟何及天下中分遂不支;「莫向西湖歌此曲水光山色不胜悲」写莫向西湖歌此曲水光山色不胜悲。诗人以南渡、旌旗等语入诗,不着痕迹,而把咏史怀古之情写得慷慨淋漓,是善于熔铸典故的体现。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。此等用典之法,熔铸古今而不着痕迹,既不炫博以示学,亦不拘泥于旧解,正见诗人学养之深与运思之巧。读者于此等处尤当细心玩味,方能领会其言外之旨与味外之味。
Commentary
The poem has been read since the Yuan as an expression of loyalty toward the Southern Song from inside the conqueror's camp, and modern anthologies reproduce it as a model of the memorial poem on history. Its formal quality - even, unhurried, free of loose phrasing - is what its readers return to; the closing couplet in particular is admired for turning grief into a prohibition. Because Zhao's own career was open to criticism, some readers also see the poem as an oblique statement of his position: censure of the southern court, but no renewed allegiance.
这首《岳鄂王墓》,是赵孟頫写咏史怀古之作,写鄂王墓上草离离、南渡君臣轻社稷、英雄已死嗟何及、水光山色不胜悲之情,慷慨悲凉。首联「鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危」——鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危。写鄂王墓上草离离:鄂王墓上草离离、秋日荒凉石兽危——墓上草离离、荒凉石兽危;颔联「南渡君臣轻社稷,中原父老望旌旗」——南渡君臣轻社稷(用南渡之典),中原父老望旌旗。写南渡君臣轻社稷:南渡君臣轻社稷、中原父老望旌旗——君臣轻社稷、父老望旌旗;颈联「英雄已死嗟何及,天下中分遂不支」——英雄已死嗟何及,天下中分遂不支。写英雄已死嗟何及:英雄已死嗟何及、天下中分遂不支——已死嗟何及、中分遂不支;尾联「莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲」——莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲。写水光山色不胜悲:莫向西湖歌此曲、水光山色不胜悲——莫歌此曲、不胜悲。这「莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲」,是全诗之结:以水光山色不胜悲写其怀古。全诗慷慨悲凉,以史写情,正是赵孟頫诗中的名篇。
Prosody
Line by line
鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危。
Grass lies thick on the grave of the Duke of E, / In autumn waste the stone beasts stand high.
鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危。
Tall grasses grow on the Tomb of Prince E; in the desolate autumn sun the stone beasts stand grim.
首联写鄂王墓上草离离,起笔即见其悲。「鄂王墓上草离离」写鄂王墓上草离离,「鄂王墓上」写鄂王墓上、「草离离」写草离离;「秋日荒凉石兽危」写秋日荒凉石兽危,「秋日荒凉」写秋日荒凉、「石兽危」写石兽危。两句一写鄂王墓上草离离、一写秋日荒凉石兽危,以鄂王墓上草离离写墓上草、以秋日荒凉石兽危写荒凉石兽,写尽鄂王墓上草离离、秋日荒凉石兽危之情。以景起兴,慷慨而悲凉,是「以景起兴」的妙笔。
The opening couplet writes the tomb, the grief at once. 'Tall grasses grow on the Tomb of Prince E' — the grasses running wild on Yue Fei's tomb; 'in the desolate autumn sun the stone beasts stand grim' — the stone animals standing sentinel in the bleak autumn light. The poem opens in scenery, impassioned and desolate — a fine springboard.
南渡君臣轻社稷,中原父老望旌旗。
The court that fled south treated the state as light, / While the old men of the Central Plains looked toward the banners.
南渡君臣轻社稷,中原父老望旌旗。
The ministers and sovereign who fled south took the state lightly; the elders of the Central Plains gaze toward the royal banners.
此二句写南渡君臣轻社稷,是全诗写史实的关键。「南渡君臣轻社稷」用南渡之典写南渡君臣轻社稷,「南渡君臣」写南渡君臣、「轻社稷」写轻社稷;「中原父老望旌旗」写中原父老望旌旗,「中原父老」写中原父老、「望旌旗」写望旌旗。两句一写南渡君臣轻社稷、一写中原父老望旌旗,以南渡君臣轻社稷写君臣轻社稷、以中原父老望旌旗写父老望旌旗,写尽南渡君臣轻社稷、中原父老望旌旗之情。以史写情,慷慨而悲凉,是「以史写情」的点睛之笔。
These two lines write the historical fact, the key of the poem. 'The court that crossed the river made light of the realm' — the Southern Song court's abandoning of the north; 'the elders of the Central Plains still watch for the banners' — the northern people's longing for the army's return. History writing feeling, impassioned and desolate — the telling stroke.
英雄已死嗟何及,天下中分遂不支。
The hero is dead, and one can only sigh too late; / The realm was halved, and so the balance could not hold.
英雄已死嗟何及,天下中分遂不支。
The hero is dead, and alas, what avail? The empire, divided in two halves, could not hold.
此二句写英雄已死嗟何及,是全诗写英雄之悲的关键。「英雄已死嗟何及」写英雄已死嗟何及,「英雄已死」写英雄已死、「嗟何及」写嗟何及;「天下中分遂不支」写天下中分遂不支,「天下中分」写天下中分、「遂不支」写遂不支。两句一写英雄已死嗟何及、一写天下中分遂不支,以英雄已死嗟何及写已死何及、以天下中分遂不支写中分不支,写尽英雄已死嗟何及、天下中分遂不支之情。以悲写史,慷慨而悲凉,是「以悲写史」的点睛之笔。
These two lines write the hero's grief, the poem's key. 'The hero is dead; what use the lament?' — Yue Fei slain, the regret beyond remedy; 'the realm, split in two, could not stand' — the divided south, beyond recovery. Grief writing history, impassioned and desolate — the telling stroke.
莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲。
Do not sing this song beside the West Lake; / The water's light and the hills' colour are more than grief can bear.
莫向西湖歌此曲,水光山色不胜悲。
Sing not this song by West Lake; the water's sheen and the hills' hues cannot bear so much grief.
尾联写水光山色不胜悲,是全诗立意的落点。「莫向西湖歌此曲」写莫向西湖歌此曲,「莫向西湖」写莫向西湖、「歌此曲」写歌此曲;「水光山色不胜悲」写水光山色不胜悲,「水光山色」写水光山色、「不胜悲」写不胜悲。两句一写莫向西湖歌此曲、一写水光山色不胜悲,以莫向西湖歌此曲写莫歌此曲、以水光山色不胜悲写不胜悲,写尽莫向西湖歌此曲、水光山色不胜悲之情。以悲写景,慷慨而悲凉,是全诗最动人处,也是「以悲写景」的点睛之笔。
The tail couplet lands the poem's meaning. 'Do not sing this song by West Lake' — forbid the singing; 'the water's light and the hills' color cannot bear the grief' — the very scenery overwhelmed. Grief writing scenery, impassioned and desolate — the poem's most moving point, its finishing stroke.
Study
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Related Reading
Su Shi's 'Tune: Prelude to the Water Melody', with "I would ride the wind home, yet fear the jade terraces, too high to bear the cold", rises toward the immortal and then chooses the human world; Zhao Mengfu's memorial looks at a hero and stays on the ground. The two poems share a classical poise about loss - neither loses control - and differ in that Su Shi's comfort is cosmological while Zhao's is a moral judgment. Both are models of the regulated lyric summit.
苏轼《水调歌头·明月几时有》「我欲乘风归去,又恐琼楼玉宇,高处不胜寒」,写登临怀古、旷达豪迈,是宋词长调的名篇;赵孟頫《岳鄂王墓》则以「英雄已死嗟何及,天下中分遂不支」「鄂王墓上草离离,秋日荒凉石兽危」写英雄已死、墓上草离离。两诗同写登临怀古、慷慨豪迈:一写我欲乘风归去、以乘风写超然,一写英雄已死嗟何及天下中分遂不支、以英雄写怀古;一为苏轼之超然、一为赵孟頫之悲凉,并读正可见诗写「登临怀古」的两种笔法,皆于怀古之中见豪迈。
八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天 Eight Beats of a Gaodie - Over the Silent Pool the Rain Descends on a Sky-wide Scene 柳永 · 同写登临感时、悲慨难胜,一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、一写水光山色不胜悲,皆于登临之中见悲慨 Both write of standing in a scene that exceeds what the speaker can carry - Liu Yong in rain-washed autumn, Zhao Mengfu by the water and hills of the West Lake - and both let the landscape answer rather than console.Liu Yong's 'Eight Beats of a Gaodie' ends on a figure unable to bear the sight of his own tears on an evening sky; Zhao Mengfu's 'The Tomb of the Duke of E' closes with "the water's light and the hills' colour are more than grief can bear", the same idea in four characters. The two share the conviction that scenery is not neutral. One looks up at a sky the size of a complaint, the other down at a lake that has already heard the song too often.
柳永《八声甘州·对潇潇暮雨洒江天》「对潇潇暮雨洒江天,一番洗清秋」,写登临感时、羁旅悲慨,是宋词写羁旅的名篇;赵孟頫《岳鄂王墓》则以「水光山色不胜悲」「南渡君臣轻社稷,中原父老望旌旗」写水光山色不胜悲、父老望旌旗。两诗同写登临感时、悲慨难胜:一写对潇潇暮雨洒江天、以暮雨写清秋,一写水光山色不胜悲、以山色写悲慨;一为柳永之清丽、一为赵孟頫之悲凉,并读正可见诗写「登临悲慨」的两种笔法,皆于登临之中见悲慨。